Unit 6 Section Ⅶ Writing-（课件PPT+Word教案）【步步高】2024-2025学年高二英语选择性必修第四册教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅶ Writing Space and beyond Unit6 本单元的写作目标是写一篇“太空生活日记”，记录自己在太空中一天的生活场景，让大家对太空生活有一定的了解。在写活动类日记时，可以从活动主题、活动过程及感受等方面进行叙述，也可以以时间变化、地点转换或事件发展为线索组织行文。在具体的写作过程中要注意把太空生活与地球生活进行对比，让大家了解太空生活的奇妙之处，以引起读者的兴趣。 写作指导 1.介绍活动主题 To help us students learn more about...，our school organized a visit to... 为了帮助我们学生更多地了解……，我们学校组织参观了…… To make our...more...，our school organized a visit to... 为了让我们的……更有……，我们学校今天组织参观了…… 常用表达 2.介绍活动过程 In the beginning，we visited...，where... 一开始，我们参观了……，在那里…… During the visit，we got the experience of... 在参观期间，我们体验了…… Then，we visited...which...and all of us felt... 然后，我们参观了……我们所有人都感受到…… As there is no...，life in...can be... 由于没有……，……的生活可能…… 3.体验感受 We had never known that life in...was so...and we further realized that... 我们从未知道……中的生活如此……我们进一步意识到…… Getting out of...，we still felt that...，which made us... 走出……，我们仍然觉得……，这让我们…… The experience helps arouse our enthusiasm for... 这段经历有助于激发我们……的热情。 We all thought the experience...and determined to study hard to make contributions to our country in the future. 我们都认为这次经历……并且决定努力学习，将来为国家做出贡献。 分步演练 假如你是李华，有幸参加了一个太空旅行项目，已经在太空生活了几天。请你用英语写一篇日记，向地球上的朋友们简单介绍一下你在太空中第一天的生活场景，要包括吃饭、锻炼以及睡觉等几个方面。 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 1.确定文体：这是一篇日记，记述过去的某一天所发生的事情； 2.主体时态：以一般过去时为主； 3.主体人称：以第一人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：开门见山，直入主题； 第二段：按时间先后描述这一天发生的事情，注意详略得当； 第三段：发表一下自己的感受以及对太空生活的看法。 _______ _______________ _______________________ _________ ______________________ 第二步　遣词造句 核心词汇 1.地球引力，重力 2.简单的 3.由……组成 4.锻炼 5.保持肌肉强壮 gravity straightforward consist of/be composed of work out keep the muscles strong 连词成句 1.由于没有引力，地球上最简单的日常工作在太空中会非常困难。 ，the most straightforward daily tasks on the Earth can be very difficult in space. 2.起床后，我开始吃早餐。它包括一些面包和一袋果汁。 After getting up，I began to have breakfast.It ______________________ . Because/As there is no gravity consisted of/was composed of some bread and a bag of fruit juice 3.工作了两个小时后，我需要锻炼一段时间来保持肌肉强壮。 After I worked for two hours，I __________________________________ . 4.我把腿系到一个特殊的机器上以便我不会飘走。 I tied my legs to a special machine . 5.在太空生活很困难，但很有趣。我非常喜欢。 .I enjoy it very much. needed to work out for some time to keep my muscles strong so that I wouldn’t float away Living in space is rather difficult but fun 第三步　句式升级 1.用独立主格结构改写句1。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.用非限制性定语从句改写句2。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.用现在分词短语作时间状语改写句3。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ There being no gravity，the most straightforward daily tasks on the Earth can be very difficult in space. After getting up，I began to have breakfast，which consisted of/was composed of some bread and a bag of fruit juice. Having worked for two hours，I needed to work out for some time to keep my muscles strong. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 参考范文 There being no gravity，the most straightforward daily tasks on the Earth can be very difficult in space. The first day was the most difficult.After getting up，I began to have breakfast，which consisted of some bread and a bag of fruit juice.I had to fetch a straw to drink the juice，otherwise it would float around in the spacecraft.Having worked for two hours，I needed to work out for some time to keep my muscles strong.I tied my legs to a special machine so that I wouldn’t float away.When it was time to go to bed，I went into a small cupboard，got into a sleeping bag and tied it to the wall.I think I must look like a big sausage.It is so funny，isn’t it? Living in space is rather difficult but fun. I enjoy it very much. 本课结束 $$ Section Ⅶ　Writing 本单元的写作目标是写一篇“太空生活日记”，记录自己在太空中一天的生活场景，让大家对太空生活有一定的了解。在写活动类日记时，可以从活动主题、活动过程及感受等方面进行叙述，也可以以时间变化、地点转换或事件发展为线索组织行文。在具体的写作过程中要注意把太空生活与地球生活进行对比，让大家了解太空生活的奇妙之处，以引起读者的兴趣。 1．介绍活动主题 To help us students learn more about...，our school organized a visit to... 为了帮助我们学生更多地了解……，我们学校组织参观了…… To make our...more...，our school organized a visit to... 为了让我们的……更有……，我们学校今天组织参观了…… 2．介绍活动过程 In the beginning，we visited...，where... 一开始，我们参观了……，在那里…… During the visit，we got the experience of... 在参观期间，我们体验了…… Then，we visited...which...and all of us felt... 然后，我们参观了……我们所有人都感受到…… As there is no...，life in...can be... 由于没有……，……的生活可能…… 3．体验感受 We had never known that life in...was so...and we further realized that... 我们从未知道……中的生活如此……我们进一步意识到…… Getting out of...，we still felt that...，which made us... 走出……，我们仍然觉得……，这让我们…… The experience helps arouse our enthusiasm for... 这段经历有助于激发我们……的热情。 We all thought the experience...and determined to study hard to make contributions to our country in the future. 我们都认为这次经历……并且决定努力学习，将来为国家做出贡献。 假如你是李华，有幸参加了一个太空旅行项目，已经在太空生活了几天。请你用英语写一篇日记，向地球上的朋友们简单介绍一下你在太空中第一天的生活场景，要包括吃饭、锻炼以及睡觉等几个方面。 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 1．确定文体：这是一篇日记，记述过去的某一天所发生的事情； 2．主体时态：以一般过去时为主； 3．主体人称：以第一人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：开门见山，直入主题； 第二段：按时间先后描述这一天发生的事情，注意详略得当； 第三段：发表一下自己的感受以及对太空生活的看法。 第二步　遣词造句 核心词汇 1．地球引力，重力gravity 2．简单的straightforward 3．由……组成consist of/be composed of 4．锻炼work out 5．保持肌肉强壮keep the muscles strong 连词成句 1．由于没有引力，地球上最简单的日常工作在太空中会非常困难。 Because/As there is no gravity，the most straightforward daily tasks on the Earth can be very difficult in space. 2．起床后，我开始吃早餐。它包括一些面包和一袋果汁。 After getting up，I began to have breakfast.It consisted of/was composed of some bread and a bag of fruit juice. 3．工作了两个小时后，我需要锻炼一段时间来保持肌肉强壮。 After I worked for two hours，I needed to work out for some time to keep my muscles strong. 4．我把腿系到一个特殊的机器上以便我不会飘走。 I tied my legs to a special machine so that I wouldn’t float away. 5．在太空生活很困难，但很有趣。我非常喜欢。 Living in space is rather difficult but fun.I enjoy it very much. 第三步　句式升级 1．用独立主格结构改写句1。 There being no gravity，the most straightforward daily tasks on the Earth can be very difficult in space. 2．用非限制性定语从句改写句2。 After getting up，I began to have breakfast，which consisted of/was composed of some bread and a bag of fruit juice. 3．用现在分词短语作时间状语改写句3。 Having worked for two hours，I needed to work out for some time to keep my muscles strong. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 参考范文 There being no gravity，the most straightforward daily tasks on the Earth can be very difficult in space. The first day was the most difficult.After getting up，I began to have breakfast，which consisted of some bread and a bag of fruit juice.I had to fetch a straw to drink the juice，otherwise it would float around in the spacecraft.Having worked for two hours，I needed to work out for some time to keep my muscles strong.I tied my legs to a special machine so that I wouldn’t float away.When it was time to go to bed，I went into a small cupboard，got into a sleeping bag and tied it to the wall.I think I must look like a big sausage.It is so funny，isn’t it? Living in space is rather difficult but fun. I enjoy it very much. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$