Unit 2 Section Ⅶ Writing-（课件PPT+Word教案）【步步高】2024-2025学年高二英语选择性必修第三册教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅶ　Writing 本单元的写作任务是写一篇说明文。说明文是以说明为主要表达方式的文体。它主要用来说明事物的特点和发展变化的规律，有时候会添加个人评价，目的在于使读者获得必要的信息，对事物有更清晰、完整的了解和认识。 一、篇章结构 1．开头：清晰阐明要说明的对象。 2．主体：实例、事实或证据。 3．结尾：得出结论。 二、注意事项 1．语言简明扼要，通俗易懂，避免夸张华丽的辞藻。 2．使用合理的顺序，让文章条理清晰。 3．正确使用时态。 1．开头部分常用表达 With a history of more than 5,000 years，there are many traditional crafts that have been inherited，such as... 有着5 000多年的历史，有许多传统手工艺得到了传承，比如…… Among all these traditional crafts，...is the most popular and well-preserved. 在所有这些传统手工艺中……是最受欢迎和保存完好的。 There are many famous craftsmen who have contributed a lot to... 有许多著名的工匠为……做出了很大的贡献……。 The popular object is made by an old craftsman named... 这个受欢迎的物品是由一位名叫……的老工匠制作的。 ...is a kind of amazing art where people can use... ……是一种神奇的艺术，人们可以用……。 2．主体部分常用表达 He/She had much difficulty (in) improving this skill，but he/she never... 他/她在提高这项技能方面有很大的困难，但他/她从来没有…… For craftsmen，...is a painstaking process，which takes various...and large amounts of time and energy. 对于工匠来说，……是一个艰苦的过程，需要各种……以及大量的时间和精力。 No mistake can be made during the process，otherwise the work would fail. 在这个过程中不能犯任何错误，否则工作将会失败。 3．结尾部分常用表达 It is such a precious craft that we need to... 这是一种如此珍贵的工艺，我们需要…… It not only reflects...but also is a symbol of Chinese wisdom and intelligence. 它不仅反映了……同时也是中国人的智慧和才智的象征。 It was the qualities of diligence，innovation...that made him/her... 正是他/她的勤奋、创新……让他/她…… Successful as he/she is，he/she seldom cares about the fame. 尽管他/她很成功，但他/她很少关心名气。 Though he/she has passed away，his/her spirit of craftsmanship is everlasting. 虽然他/她已经去世，但他/她的工匠精神是永恒的。 请根据下列汉语提示，写一篇说明文介绍中国民间工匠“泥人张”(“Clay Figure Zhang”)。 1．“泥人张”制作的彩塑深受大家的欢迎。 2．张先生出生在一个贫困家庭，从小靠制作彩塑谋生。他很聪明、善于观察，且敢于打破常规去思考。他捏制出来的泥人个个非常生动。 3．经过数十年的辛勤努力，张先生共创作了一万多件作品。 4．张先生的工匠精神是永恒的。 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 写作要求是写一篇说明文介绍“泥人张”。写作时应注意下面几点： 1．确定文体：这是一篇说明文。 2．主体时态：文章介绍过去的人物，应以一般过去时为主。 3．主体人称：由于是介绍“泥人张”，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：简要介绍“泥人张”及其作品； 第二段：介绍“泥人张”成功的经历以及品质； 第三段：总结“泥人张”的工匠精神。 第二步　遣词造句 核心词汇　(含本单元词汇) 1．工匠craftsman 2．受……欢迎 be popular with 3．作为一种……的方式as a means of... 4．谋生earn a/one’s living 5．各行各业all walks of life 6．工匠精神the spirit of craftsmanship 7．不拘一格地思考think outside the box 8．传承pass down 连词成句　(含本单元句型) 1．在中国著名的民间工匠中，有一个人叫“泥人张”。 Among all famous folk craftsmen in China，there was a man called “Clay Figure Zhang”． 2．他制作了许多栩栩如生的泥人，深受人们的喜爱。 He made many vivid clay figures and they were very popular with people. 3．张先生出生在一个贫困家庭，靠制作泥人为生。 Mr Zhang was born in a poor family and he made clay figures as a means of earning a living. 4．张先生经常出入市场和剧院，观察各行各业的人们。 Mr Zhang was often in the markets and theatres and observed people from all walks of life. 5．另外，他很聪明，经常不拘一格地思考。 In addition，he was so intelligent and often thought outside the box. 6．张先生的工匠精神是永恒的。 Mr Zhang’s spirit of craftsmanship is everlasting. 7．他的技艺已经由他的后代(descendant)传承下来。 His craftsmanship has been passed down through his descendants. 第三步　句式升级 1．请用过去分词作定语升级句2 The vivid clay figures made by “Clay Figure Zhang” were very popular with people. 2．请用非谓语动词改写句3 Mr Zhang，born in a poor family，made clay figures as a means of earning a living. 3．请用非谓语动词改写句4 Mr Zhang was often in the markets and theatres，observing people from all walks of life. 4．请用定语从句连接句6和句7 Mr Zhang’s spirit of craftsmanship that/which has been passed down through his descendants is everlasting. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 参考范文 Among all famous folk craftsmen in China，there was a man called “Clay Figure Zhang”．The vivid clay figures made by “Clay Figure Zhang” were very popular with people. Mr Zhang，born in a poor family，made clay figures as a means of earning a living.Mr Zhang was often in the markets and theatres，observing people from all walks of life.In addition，he was so intelligent and often thought outside the box，which made his clay figures more vivid! He spent most of his time in the workshop.Through his hard work of several decades，Mr Zhang created more than ten thousand works. Mr Zhang’s spirit of craftsmanship which has been passed down through his descendants is everlasting. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Section Ⅶ Writing A life's work UNIT 2 本单元的写作任务是写一篇说明文。说明文是以说明为主要表达方式的文体。它主要用来说明事物的特点和发展变化的规律，有时候会添加个人评价，目的在于使读者获得必要的信息，对事物有更清晰、完整的了解和认识。 一、篇章结构 1.开头：清晰阐明要说明的对象。 2.主体：实例、事实或证据。 3.结尾：得出结论。 写作指导 二、注意事项 1.语言简明扼要，通俗易懂，避免夸张华丽的辞藻。 2.使用合理的顺序，让文章条理清晰。 3.正确使用时态。 1.开头部分常用表达 With a history of more than 5,000 years，there are many traditional crafts that have been inherited，such as... 有着5 000多年的历史，有许多传统手工艺得到了传承，比如…… Among all these traditional crafts，...is the most popular and well-preserved. 在所有这些传统手工艺中……是最受欢迎和保存完好的。 常用表达 There are many famous craftsmen who have contributed a lot to... 有许多著名的工匠为……做出了很大的贡献……。 The popular object is made by an old craftsman named... 这个受欢迎的物品是由一位名叫……的老工匠制作的。 ...is a kind of amazing art where people can use... ……是一种神奇的艺术，人们可以用……。 2.主体部分常用表达 He/She had much difficulty (in) improving this skill，but he/she never... 他/她在提高这项技能方面有很大的困难，但他/她从来没有…… For craftsmen，...is a painstaking process，which takes various...and large amounts of time and energy. 对于工匠来说，……是一个艰苦的过程，需要各种……以及大量的时间和精力。 No mistake can be made during the process，otherwise the work would fail. 在这个过程中不能犯任何错误，否则工作将会失败。 3.结尾部分常用表达 It is such a precious craft that we need to... 这是一种如此珍贵的工艺，我们需要…… It not only reflects...but also is a symbol of Chinese wisdom and intelligence. 它不仅反映了……同时也是中国人的智慧和才智的象征。 It was the qualities of diligence，innovation...that made him/her... 正是他/她的勤奋、创新……让他/她…… Successful as he/she is，he/she seldom cares about the fame. 尽管他/她很成功，但他/她很少关心名气。 Though he/she has passed away，his/her spirit of craftsmanship is everlasting. 虽然他/她已经去世，但他/她的工匠精神是永恒的。 请根据下列汉语提示，写一篇说明文介绍中国民间工匠“泥人张”(“Clay Figure Zhang”)。 1.“泥人张”制作的彩塑深受大家的欢迎。 2.张先生出生在一个贫困家庭，从小靠制作彩塑谋生。他很聪明、善于观察，且敢于打破常规去思考。他捏制出来的泥人个个非常生动。 3.经过数十年的辛勤努力，张先生共创作了一万多件作品。 4.张先生的工匠精神是永恒的。 分步演练 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 写作要求是写一篇说明文介绍“泥人张”。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇说明文。 2.主体时态：文章介绍过去的人物，应以一般过去时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是介绍“泥人张”，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：简要介绍“泥人张”及其作品； 第二段：介绍“泥人张”成功的经历以及品质； 第三段：总结“泥人张”的工匠精神。 第二步　遣词造句 核心词汇　(含本单元词汇) 1.工匠 _________ 2.受……欢迎 ______________ 3.作为一种……的方式 _____________ 4.谋生 ________________ 5.各行各业 _____________ 6.工匠精神 _______________________ 7.不拘一格地思考 __________________ 8.传承 _________ craftsman be popular with as a means of... earn a/one’s living all walks of life the spirit of craftsmanship think outside the box pass down 连词成句　(含本单元句型) 1.在中国著名的民间工匠中，有一个人叫“泥人张”。 Among all famous folk craftsmen in China，________________________ ___________________. 2.他制作了许多栩栩如生的泥人，深受人们的喜爱。 He made many vivid clay figures and . there was a man called “Clay Figure Zhang” they were very popular with people 3.张先生出生在一个贫困家庭，靠制作泥人为生。 Mr Zhang was born in a poor family and ___________________________ _______________________. 4.张先生经常出入市场和剧院，观察各行各业的人们。 Mr Zhang was often in the markets and theatres and _________________ ___________________. 5.另外，他很聪明，经常不拘一格地思考。 In addition，he was so intelligent . he made clay figures as a means of earning a living observed people from all walks of life and often thought outside the box 6.张先生的工匠精神是永恒的。 Mr Zhang’s is everlasting. 7.他的技艺已经由他的后代(descendant)传承下来。 His craftsmanship through his descendants. spirit of craftsmanship has been passed down 第三步　句式升级 1.请用过去分词作定语升级句2 The vivid clay figures were very popular with people. 2.请用非谓语动词改写句3 Mr Zhang， ，made clay figures as a means of earning a living. 3.请用非谓语动词改写句4 Mr Zhang was often in the markets and theatres，___________________ _______________. made by “Clay Figure Zhang” born in a poor family observing people from all walks of life 4.请用定语从句连接句6和句7 Mr Zhang’s spirit of craftsmanship ________________________________ ______________________is everlasting. that/which has been passed down through his descendants 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 Among all famous folk craftsmen in China，there was a man called “Clay Figure Zhang”.The vivid clay figures made by “Clay Figure Zhang” were very popular with people. Mr Zhang，born in a poor family，made clay figures as a means of earning a living.Mr Zhang was often in the markets and theatres，observing people from all walks of life.In addition，he was so intelligent and often thought outside the box，which made his clay figures more vivid! He spent most of his time in the workshop.Through his hard work of several decades，Mr Zhang created more than ten thousand works. 参考范文 Mr Zhang’s spirit of craftsmanship which has been passed down through his descendants is everlasting. 本课结束 $$