Unit7汉堡法介绍假期计划（课件）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

Unit 7 译林版三年级起点六年级下册 汉堡法介绍假期计划 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 介绍假期即将到来及目的地，交通方式，停留时间 详细介绍假期活动 4 01 写作方法指引-汉堡法 介绍假期即将到来及目的地，交通方式，停留时间 I will go to ____ with ____. We will go there by _____. We will stay______. 假期活动 We will 表达感受 I think I will ______. I’m very excited about the summer holiday. I will go to Sanya with my parents. We will go there by plane. We will stay there for five days. Sanya has beautiful beaches. We will swim in the sea and lie on the beach. We will take many beautiful photos. The people there are very friendly. The food there is delicious, especially the seafood. I can’t wait for the summer holiday. It will be a wonderful time with my family. 01 写作方法指引-示例 I’m very excited about the summer holiday. I will go to Sanya with my parents. We will go there by plane. We will stay there for five days. Sanya has beautiful beaches. We will swim in the sea and lie on the beach. We will take many beautiful photos. The people there are very friendly. The food there is delicious, especially the seafood. I can’t wait for the summer holiday. It will be a wonderful time with my family. 介绍假期即将到来及目的地，交通方式，停留时间 详细介绍假期活动 表达对假期的期待 I’m very excited about the summer holiday. I will go to Sanya with my parents. We will go there by plane. We will stay there for five days. Sanya has beautiful beaches. We will swim in the sea and lie on the beach. We will take many beautiful photos. The people there are very friendly. The food there is delicious, especially the seafood. I can’t wait for the summer holiday. It will be a wonderful time with my family. I’m very excited about the summer holiday. I will go to Sanya with my parents. We will go there by plane. We will stay there for five days. Sanya has beautiful beaches. We will swim in the sea and lie on the beach. We will take many beautiful photos. The people there are very friendly. The food there is delicious, especially the seafood. I can’t wait for the summer holiday. It will be a wonderful time with my family. 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.介绍暑假即将到来及目的地。 参考句型： The summer holiday is coming. I will go to__________. The summer holiday is near. I’m going to__________. 参考词汇： summer holiday（暑假）， “winter holiday（寒假）” 目的地词汇“Shanghai（上海）、Guangzhou（广州）”等 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.介绍交通方式、停留时间和具体活动。 参考句型： I will go there by...（表达出行方式） I will stay there for...（表达停留时间） I will visit...（表达将参观某地） I’ll take...to go there.（“take + 交通工具”，表达出行方式） - I’ll spend...days there.（“spend”表达花费时间） - I’ll see...（“see”表达看见） 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.介绍交通方式、停留时间和具体活动。 参考词汇： 交通方式：by train（乘火车），还可以有“by bus（乘公交车）、by car（乘小汽车）”等； 地点：Great Wall（长城）、Palace Museum（故宫），其他如“park（公园）、zoo（动物园）”等（复习场所词汇）； 活动：take photos（拍照），eat food（吃东西）等（复习动作短语）。 10 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.表达感受 参考句型： I think I will have a good time...（表达感受） I believe I’ll enjoy myself...（“enjoy oneself”表达玩得开心） 参考词汇： have a good time（玩得开心） have fun（玩得愉快）be happy（开心）”等。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 “will”用法讲解 定义： 在英语中，我们常用 “will + 动词原形” 来表示一般将来时，用来描述将来要发生的动作或存在的状态。在描述暑假计划时，“will” 非常实用。 结构： 肯定句：主语 + will + 动词原形 + 其他。 例：I will visit the Great Wall.我将参观长城。） 02 基础知识精讲-语法 “will”用法讲解 否定句：主语 + will not (won’t) + 动词原形 + 其他。 例：I won’t stay at home during the summer holiday. 暑假期间我不会待在家里。 - 一般疑问句：Will + 主语 + 动词原形 + 其他？ 肯定回答：Yes, 主语 + will.否定回答：No, 主语 + won’t. 例：— Will you go to Shanghai by plane?你将乘飞机去上海吗？ — Yes, I will. / No, I won’t.是的，我会。/ 不，我不会。 选择题 1. — Will you visit the museum this summer holiday? — Yes, ______. I will B. I do C. I am 2. She ______ go to the park. She will stay at home. will B. won’t C. is 3. — What will they do? — They ______ climb the mountain. A. will B. won’t C. are 02 基础知识精讲-语法 A B A 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 根据表格信息，完成作文。 地点 交通方式 活动 感受 香港 乘飞机 参观迪士尼和海洋公园 开心 要求: 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 16 参考句型： The summer holiday is coming. I will go to ______ by ______.I will visit ______ and ______.In ______, I can ______.It will be ______.I think I will ______. 参考词汇： Hong Kong（香港）、by plane（乘飞机）、Disneyland（迪士尼）、Ocean Park（海洋公园）、have a great time（玩得开心）、exciting（令人兴奋的）、lovely（可爱的） 17 The summer holiday is coming. I will go to Hong Kong by plane. I will visit Disneyland and Ocean Park. In Disneyland, there are many lovely cartoon characters and exciting rides. I can take photos with them. In Ocean Park, I can see all kinds of sea animals, like dolphins and sea lions. It will be very interesting. I think I will have a great time in Hong Kong. 范文1： 介绍假期即将到来及目的地，交通方式，停留时间 详细介绍假期活动 表达对假期的期待 18 模拟写作提升2 看上海的图片，写一写你在上海的暑假计划。 要求: 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 19 参考句型： The summer holiday is near. I will go to Shanghai. I will visit ______ and ______.______ is/are very ______.I will ______ and ______.It will be ______. 参考词汇： Shanghai（上海）、the Bund（外滩）、the Oriental Pearl Tower（东方明珠塔）、visit（参观）、interesting（有趣的）、tall（高的）、beautiful（美丽的）、go shopping（购物） 20 The summer holiday is near. I will go to Shanghai. I will visit the Bund and the Oriental Pearl Tower. The Oriental Pearl Tower is very tall. From the top, I can see the beautiful city. The Bund has many old and wonderful buildings. I will take photos and go shopping there. I can buy some nice things for my friends. It will be a wonderful trip. 范文2： 介绍假期即将到来及目的地，交通方式，停留时间 详细介绍假期活动 表达对假期的期待 21 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 请通过回答以下问题，写一写你的暑假计划。 1. Where will you go? 2. How will you go there? 3. What will you do there? 要求: 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 真题写作练习-苏州姑苏 23 参考句型： The summer holiday is coming. I will go to ______.I will go there by ______.I will stay there for ______ days/weeks. I will ______ and ______.I think I will ______. 参考词汇： summer holiday（暑假）、will（将）、visit（参观）、by plane（乘飞机）、by train（乘火车）、the Great Wall（长城）、the Palace Museum（故宫）、take photos（拍照）、delicious food（美食） 24 The summer holiday is coming. I will go to Beijing. I will go there by train. I will stay there for a week. I will visit the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. The Great Wall is very long and great. I can take many photos there. The Palace Museum has a lot of interesting things. I will also eat some delicious Beijing food, like Beijing Roast Duck. I think I will have a good time in Beijing. 范文3： 介绍假期即将到来及目的地，交通方式，停留时间 详细介绍假期活动 表达对假期的期待 25 Thank you! $$