Unit 3 Section Ⅳ 单元写作(学案)-【成才之路】2024-2025学年高中新课程英语选择性必修第四册同步学习指导(人教版2019)

Section IV 单元写作 写作方法指写 关于海洋探索与保护的议论文 There is a general discussion nowadays on the 写作指导 problem of...Some argue/hold the view that...,but 议论文主要针对某一观点或问题（一般为有争 others set forth a totally different argument about the 议的观点或问题)发表议论和看法，因此写此类文 issue 章时要考虑的论据多为正反两个方面。通过对有争 如今，…问题引起了广泛的讨论。有些人认 议的观点或问题的不同看法进行比较，然后进行分 为…，但其他人则对此问题持完全相反的观点。 析和评论，最后提出自己的看法，表达自己支持或 2.分析利弊 反对的态度并加以论证说明，得出结论。基本组成 In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When 部分包括：提出论题、进行论证、得出结论。具体来 we...,we should take into consideration all aspects of 说为： the problem,and then make the right decision. 1,提出论题 在我看来，双方在某种程度上都是正确的。当 096 提出论题的方法各种各样，最常用的是开门见我们…时，我们应该考虑问题的各个方面，然后作 成 山直奔主题，如：The topic of my speech today is..·; 出正确的决定。 才 有时采用举例法：另外，用具体的统计数据也是一个 It is difficult to say whether...is good or not in 路 有效的引出论题的方法，比如你要谈遵守交通规则general,,as it depends very much on the situation of., 高 的话题，可以从列举一系列有关车辆、车祸等的数据 However,from a personal point of view I find... 新 开始。 通常很难说…是好还是不好，因为这在很大 课 2.论证 程度上取决于…然而，从我个人的角度来看，我认 论证就是要把道理讲清楚。常见的论证方法有 为… 指 举例法、因果法、对比法等。列举讲话要点，常用 3.解决问题 first of all,secondly,finally等。 It is high time that...Here are some of the 3.结论 measures that might be taken immediately. 结论要简明扼要，以给听众留下深刻印象。有 是时候…了。下面是一些可以立即采取的 时会加上一句总结性的话。如：In a word..,:Only in措施。 this way can we.·e The most effective means to solve this problem is 常用表达 that...In that case,... 1,提出问题 解决这个问题最有效的方法是…在那种情况 As society develops,people are attaching greater 下， importance to... As a result,we should take some effective methods 随着社会的发展，人们越来越重视… Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide 因此，我们应该采取一些有效的措施来… concern.Some people are in alarm that... In a word,the whole society should pay close 最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注。有人attention to the problem of..Only in this way can.·,in 担心 the future. 总之，全社会都应该密切关注…的问题。只 3.人类行为是罪魁祸首。 有这样未来才能… There is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of... 4.一些渔民可能会从事其他工作。 毫无疑问，必须特别注意…的问题。 精品展示 近年来，由于海洋污染和过度捕捞，鱼的数量和 5.以捕鱼为生的人越来越少。 种类在急剧减少。请就该现象写一篇英语短文，给 There are less 学校英语广播站投稿。内容要点如下： 1.海洋渔业资源的现状： 6.采取这些措施，我们最终可以保护渔业资源。 2.分析现状出现的原因： 3.提出解决问题的方法。 we can eventually preserve 注意：1.词数80左右； 第五步：句式升级 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 1.用wh复合结构合并上面第12句。 审题谋篇 In recent years,fishing resources in the ocean 第一步明确要求 have been facing a worsening situation 英 本文要求写一篇主题为海洋鱼类保护的议论 文，故要用一般现在时。人称使用第一人称、第三 2.用强调句型改写上面第3句。 选 人称。 第二步确定段落 性必修 Para.I:提出论题。 3.用s0that合并上面第45句。 Para.2:进行论证。 Some fishermen may take other jobs Para.3:得出结论。 R 第三步核心词汇 4.用oy+介词短语，半倒装改写上面第6句。 1.渔业资源 2.恶化的形势 eventually preserve fishing resources. 097 3.…的数量 第六步连句成篇 4.急剧下降 用适当的过波词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上 5.应承担责任 联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 6.将…倒人… 7.处理这种情况 8.触犯法律 9.以…为食：靠…生活 第四步连词成句 1.近年来，海洋渔业资源面临恶化的局面。 In recent years, in the ocean 2.鱼类的数量和种类正在急剧下降。 are dropping sharply. 话题佳句 1.Currently marine pollution is drawing the attention of more and more people. 现在，海洋污染正在引起越来越多人的注意。 2.There is no denying that the sea has been providing food,mineral and different kinds of resources 写作训练 for humankind. 近十年米，海洋生态系统(marine ecosystems)遭 不容否认，海洋一直在为人类提供食物、矿物以 受破坏，很多海洋生物已经灭绝，这引起了全世界范 及各种各样的资源。 围内的关注。假设你是高二(3)班的李明，你所在 3.Without the sea,the human civilization wouldn't 的学校正在进行有关“生态保护”的校刊专题报道， have been developed in a way. 现请用英文写一篇关于海洋生态系统保护的文章进 在某种程度上，没有海洋，人类文明就不会发展 行投稿。 起来。 内容要点： 4.We will listen to a speech delivered by a famous 1,人们应该意识到保护海洋的重要性： professor,through which we can gain a better 2.政府应当采取有效的措施保护海洋生态 understanding of the ocean. 系统； 我们将听一位著名教授所作的演讲，通过演讲 098 3,我们要提高自身的环保意识，努力保护海洋 我们可以对海洋有更好的理解。 生态系统。 5.The 21st Century Maritime Silk Road aims to 注意：1.词数80左右； not only strengthen the bond between countries along it 才之路 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： but promote the economic development of the countries 3,开头已给出，不计入总词数。 “21世纪海上丝绸之路”致力于加强沿线国家 中 Dear Editor, 的联系并促进这些国家的经济发展。 I'm Li Ming,a student from Class 3,Grade 2 6.The more we learn about the ocean.the more 程学习 adequately we should protect the ocean. 我们对海洋了解越多，我们就应该越充分地保 护海洋。 7.Never should we excessively exploit the ocean! 我们永远不要过度开发海洋！ 8.It was in 1405 that Zheng He first set sail to explore the sea,which started a new era for China in ocean exploration. 1405年，郑和首次起航探索海洋，开创了中国 海洋探索的新时代。 9.So important is the ocean to us that we have every reason to protect it. 海洋对我们如此重要，我们有充足的理由去保 护它。 夯基提能作业 请同学们认真完成练案[12]IV.1.without mercy 2.huge amounts of 3.is home to 4.be balanced with 5.took action 6.talked of 单元重点回顾 V.1.so that you can keep yourself energetic 2.resulting in a serious traffic confusion 1.extension extended extensive ①extend into.... ②extend 3.Collecting information about children's health over sth. 3 extend(..）toh 4.although they were total strangers 2.negotiation negotiator (Dnegotiate sth.2negotiate a deal/ 5.as I get older contraet/treaty/settlement 3negotiate with sb.for/about sth. VI.1.to 2.will continue 3.killing 4.are hunted 5.it ④under negotiation 6.To understand 7.which 8.better 9.Logging 10.ability 3.withdrawal (Dwithdraw sth./sb.from sth Section IV单元写作 ②withdraw sth./sb.③withdraw from④withdraw a schoo/ one's office 审题谋篇 4.bond between A and B 2bond A and B together)3bond 第三步 AtoB④bond with sb. 1.fishing resourees 2.worsening situation 3.the quantity of... 5.professional professor Tthe medical/legal/teaching profession 4.drop sharply 5.be to blame 6.pour...into...7.handle this ②enter/go into/join a profession③by profession④be situation 8.violate the law 9.live on professional in 5 professional knowledge/skills 6 seek 第四步 professional advice/help 7a professional tennis player 1.fishing resources have been facing a worsening situation 6.mix mixed Da mixture of...2a mixture of gases 2.The quantity of fish and their species 3a mixture of emotions a mixture of excitement and fear 3.Human behaviour is to blame. 5a mixture of many cultures 6mix with 7mix A with/and B 4.Some fishermen may take other jobe. 8mix up 9mixed feelings a mixed community 5.people living on fishing 7.Tmedia/newspaper/press coverage 2live coverage 6.With these measures taken fishing resources ③insurance coverage④coverage rate⑤包括；报道；涉及：覆 第五步 盖：支付：行走（一段路程）：占（一片面积）封面：遮盖物 1.with the quantity of fish and their species dropping sharply 6cover...with...be covered with/by (8cover all aspects 2.It is human behaviour that is to blame. Ocover all the expenses eover thirty miles cover an area 3.so that there are less people living on fishing of Beover the story 4.Only with these measures taken can we 8.applause Twarmly applaud 2applaud her decision/speech 第六步 applaud sb.for sth.praise sb.for sth.applaud her for 参考范文： having the courage 5a big round of applause break into In recent years.fishing resourees in the ocean have been facing thunderous applause 7a round of applause a worsening situation with the quantity of fish and their species:9.in the meanwhile(=in the meantime)2for the meanwhile dropping sharply. ③at the same time In my opinion,it is human behaviour that is to blame. 10.mereiful merciless Thave merey on/upon 2show merey to Industrial and agricultural waste such as chemicals and oil is poured sb.3beg for merey 4without merey (5at the merey of into the ocean.What's more,overfishing destroys the balance of life ⑥be mereiful to in the ocean. 11.possess (Din possession of sth.(2in the possession of sb. To handle this situation,laws should be made to punish thoee 3in one's possession gain/get/take/have possession of who violate the law and cause pollution.Besides,some fishermen ⑤be possessed of sth.⑥be possessed with/by.· may take other jobs so that there are less people living on fishing. 12.Dlog into 2log in/on 3log sb.in/on log off/out Only with these measures taken can we eventually preserve fishing ⑤ogsb.ofi/out resources. 13.(Darrest sb.for...2get arrested...(3arrest one's attention 写作训练 ④under arrest⑤make an arrest 参考范文： 0 Dear Editor, 1.Dsearch sp.for sth.2search sb.for sth.3in search of in I'm Li Ming,a student from Class 3,Grade 2.The past ten one's search for years have witnessed that some creatures under the sea have died 2.Dset foot on/in 2set about doing sth.3set off 4set out out,which has been greatly concerned by the whole world. ⑤set down6 set up⑦set aside First,people should be aware of the importanee of protecting 3.Din return(=in reward)2in tum 3on one's return the ocean.As a matter of fact,to protect the ocean is to protect ④retum sth..tosh.=retum sb.sth.⑤return to.· human beings.Second,it is urgent that the government should take 4.Dshake hands 2give sb.a hand 3at hand by hand immediate measures to protect the marine ecosystems.Finally,I'm 5 hand in hand⑥hand down⑦hand out.⑧hand over sure that only by raising the awareness of protecting the marine ⑨hand in ecosystems and making great efforts can we solve the problem. 5.①related②(be）directly related to③(be）closely/strongly Yours. related to a related issue/question 5a stress-related illness Li Ming Orelate 7relate A to B 8relation 9in relation to -244