Unit 4 Section Ⅶ Writing(课件PPT+Word教案)-【步步高】2024-2025学年高一英语必修第三册教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅶ Writing Unit 4 Amazing art 本单元的写作内容是写一篇关于艺术品的文章，属于说明文的范畴。描写艺术品时需要对该艺术品的作者及创作背景、主题、特点等作客观而准确的说明，使读者了解这件作品。 一、格式 文章分为三段：首段简单介绍作品和作者，第二段介绍作品细节，尾段说明作品的价值和意义。 二、时态和人称 时态多用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。 写作指导 1.作品简介 My favorite painting is...，which is created by.... 我最喜欢的画是……，它是由……创作的。 ...is an oil painting/a sculpture...drawn/made by...in... 这是一幅/座由……在……绘制/制作的油画/雕塑…… ...，one of the treasures in...，is a well-known representative of... ……，……的珍宝之一，是……著名的代表作。 常用表达 ...，one of China’s greatest painters，created many famous works，among which the most amazing is... ……是中国最伟大的画家之一，创作了许多著名的作品，其中最令人惊叹的是…… ...is a famous painting drawn by...，a well-known Chinese artist who was most famous for... ……是一幅由……绘制的名画，他/她是一位著名的中国艺术家，以……而闻名。 2.具体描述 It measures.../It is...in length/width/height. 它长/宽/高…… The colour ranges from...to... 色彩由……到……变化。 This painting describes...so vividly that... 图画如此生动地描绘了……以至于…… This painting，a combination of Chinese ink-wash techniques with Western painting skills，is considered as... 这幅画是中国水墨技法与西方绘画技巧的结合，被认为是…… The painting not only shows...but also is the symbol of... 这幅画不仅展示了……，也是……的象征。 3.评论 It has a great influence on... 它对……有极大的影响。 It is regarded/considered as... 它被看作是…… Visitors all sing high praises for it. 游客们都对其赞不绝口。 In a word，the painting is really a work of...It’s on my recommendation list. 总之，这幅画确实是一幅……的作品。它在我的推荐名单上。 You can’t miss it when you pay a visit to the museum. 如果你去博物馆参观，你一定不要错过它。 It is really a blessing that we could enjoy such a wonderful painting. 我们能欣赏到如此美妙的画作，真是一件幸事。 分步演练 假定你是你校校报英文版的编辑李华，你们计划在下期报纸的“Great Artworks”栏目中向读者介绍凡·高的《向日葵》。请你根据表格内的提示信息，写一篇文章介绍这幅画。 作品名称 《向日葵》(Sunflowers) 作者 文森特·凡·高(Vincent van Gogh) 作品特点 1.这幅画完成于1889年，是凡·高最著名的油画作品之一； 2.插在花瓶中的15朵向日葵，以黄色为主色调，深浅不一，有亮黄色和棕黄色，展现了不同阶段的向日葵。 作品评价 这幅画显示了生命的意义，加深了我对生命的理解。 注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 写作要求是介绍一幅画，写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是说明文。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。 3.主体人称：人称应该以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：简单介绍作品名称及其作者； 第二段：介绍作品的特点； 第三段：对作品进行评价。 _______________ _____ ____________________ ____________________ _______ _______ ________________________ __________________ 第二步　遣词造句 核心词汇 1.一幅油画 2.花瓶 3.三种深浅的黄色 4.生命的不同阶段 5.开花，绽放 6.枯萎，凋谢 7.给……留下深刻印象 8.生命的意义 an oil painting vase three shades of yellow different stages of life bloom wither leave a great impression on the meaning of life 连词成句 1.《向日葵》是文森特·凡·高的油画。 The Sunflowers is Vincent van Gogh. 2.文森特·凡·高是一位来自荷兰的伟大画家。 Vincent van Gogh is . 3.它于1889年在阿尔勒被完成，是他最著名的作品之一。 It in Arles in 1889 and is . 4.它展现的是花瓶里的15朵向日葵。 ______________________________________________________________ an oil painting by a great painter from the Netherlands was completed one of his most famous works It shows fifteen sunflowers in a vase. 5.这幅画主要有三种深浅不同的黄色，从亮黄色到棕黄色。 The painting is mostly ，from bright yellows to brownish yellows. 6.我们可以看到这些花处于生命的不同阶段。 We can see . 7.有些刚刚开始绽放，有些开始枯萎。 Some are just starting to bloom and . 8.这幅画给我留下了深刻的印象。 The painting . in three shades of yellow the flowers are at different stages of life some start to wither leaves a great impression on me 9.它向我展示了生命的意义。 ______________________________________________________________ 10.每一朵花都在尽力生长并展示自己的美丽，无论它处于生命的哪个阶段。 Each of the flowers is ，no matter which stage of life it is at. It shows me the meaning of life. trying its best to grow and show its beauty 第三步　句式升级 1.将句1和句2用同位语合并成一个句子。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.将句4和句5用介词短语作伴随状语合并成一个句子。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Sunflowers is an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh，a great painter from the Netherlands. It shows fifteen sunflowers in a vase，mostly in three shades of yellow，from bright yellows to brownish yellows. 3.用独立主格结构改写句7。 _______________________________________________________________ 4.将句8和句9用分词作状语合并成一个句子。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Some are just starting to bloom，some starting to wither. The painting leaves a great impression on me，showing me the meaning of life. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 参考范文 The Sunflowers is an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh，a great painter from the Netherlands.It was completed in Arles in 1889 and is one of his most famous works. It shows fifteen sunflowers in a vase，mostly in three shades of yellow，from bright yellows to brownish yellows.We can see the flowers are at different stages of life—some are just starting to bloom，some starting to wither. The painting leaves a great impression on me，showing me the meaning of life.Each of the flowers is trying its best to grow and show its beauty，no matter which stage of life it is at.The painting deepens my understanding of life. $$ Section Ⅶ　Writing 本单元的写作内容是写一篇关于艺术品的文章，属于说明文的范畴。描写艺术品时需要对该艺术品的作者及创作背景、主题、特点等作客观而准确的说明，使读者了解这件作品。 一、格式 文章分为三段：首段简单介绍作品和作者，第二段介绍作品细节，尾段说明作品的价值和意义。 二、时态和人称 时态多用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。 1．作品简介 My favorite painting is...，which is created by.... 我最喜欢的画是……，它是由……创作的。 ...is an oil painting/a sculpture...drawn/made by...in... 这是一幅/座由……在……绘制/制作的油画/雕塑…… ...，one of the treasures in...，is a well-known representative of... ……，……的珍宝之一，是……著名的代表作。 ...，one of China’s greatest painters，created many famous works，among which the most amazing is... ……是中国最伟大的画家之一，创作了许多著名的作品，其中最令人惊叹的是…… ...is a famous painting drawn by...，a well-known Chinese artist who was most famous for... ……是一幅由……绘制的名画，他/她是一位著名的中国艺术家，以……而闻名。 2．具体描述 It measures.../It is...in length/width/height. 它长/宽/高…… The colour ranges from...to... 色彩由……到……变化。 This painting describes...so vividly that... 图画如此生动地描绘了……以至于…… This painting，a combination of Chinese ink-wash techniques with Western painting skills，is considered as... 这幅画是中国水墨技法与西方绘画技巧的结合，被认为是…… The painting not only shows...but also is the symbol of... 这幅画不仅展示了……，也是……的象征。 3．评论 It has a great influence on... 它对……有极大的影响。 It is regarded/considered as... 它被看作是…… Visitors all sing high praises for it. 游客们都对其赞不绝口。 In a word，the painting is really a work of...It’s on my recommendation list. 总之，这幅画确实是一幅……的作品。它在我的推荐名单上。 You can’t miss it when you pay a visit to the museum. 如果你去博物馆参观，你一定不要错过它。 It is really a blessing that we could enjoy such a wonderful painting. 我们能欣赏到如此美妙的画作，真是一件幸事。 假定你是你校校报英文版的编辑李华，你们计划在下期报纸的“Great Artworks”栏目中向读者介绍凡·高的《向日葵》。请你根据表格内的提示信息，写一篇文章介绍这幅画。 作品名称 《向日葵》(Sunflowers) 作者 文森特·凡·高(Vincent van Gogh) 作品特点 1.这幅画完成于1889年，是凡·高最著名的油画作品之一； 2.插在花瓶中的15朵向日葵，以黄色为主色调，深浅不一，有亮黄色和棕黄色，展现了不同阶段的向日葵。 作品评价 这幅画显示了生命的意义，加深了我对生命的理解。 注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 写作要求是介绍一幅画，写作时应注意下面几点： 1．确定文体：这是说明文。 2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。 3．主体人称：人称应该以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：简单介绍作品名称及其作者； 第二段：介绍作品的特点； 第三段：对作品进行评价。 第二步　遣词造句 核心词汇 1．一幅油画 an oil painting 2．花瓶 vase 3．三种深浅的黄色 three shades of yellow 4．生命的不同阶段 different stages of life 5．开花，绽放 bloom 6．枯萎，凋谢 wither 7．给……留下深刻印象 leave a great impression on 8．生命的意义 the meaning of life 连词成句 1．《向日葵》是文森特·凡·高的油画。 The Sunflowers is an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh. 2．文森特·凡·高是一位来自荷兰的伟大画家。 Vincent van Gogh is a great painter from the Netherlands. 3．它于1889年在阿尔勒被完成，是他最著名的作品之一。 It was completed in Arles in 1889 and is one of his most famous works. 4．它展现的是花瓶里的15朵向日葵。 It shows fifteen sunflowers in a vase. 5．这幅画主要有三种深浅不同的黄色，从亮黄色到棕黄色。 The painting is mostly in three shades of yellow，from bright yellows to brownish yellows. 6．我们可以看到这些花处于生命的不同阶段。 We can see the flowers are at different stages of life. 7．有些刚刚开始绽放，有些开始枯萎。 Some are just starting to bloom and some start to wither. 8．这幅画给我留下了深刻的印象。 The painting leaves a great impression on me. 9．它向我展示了生命的意义。 It shows me the meaning of life. 10．每一朵花都在尽力生长并展示自己的美丽，无论它处于生命的哪个阶段。 Each of the flowers is trying its best to grow and show its beauty，no matter which stage of life it is at. 第三步　句式升级 1．将句1和句2用同位语合并成一个句子。 The Sunflowers is an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh，a great painter from the Netherlands. 2．将句4和句5用介词短语作伴随状语合并成一个句子。 It shows fifteen sunflowers in a vase，mostly in three shades of yellow，from bright yellows to brownish yellows. 3．用独立主格结构改写句7。 Some are just starting to bloom，some starting to wither. 4．将句8和句9用分词作状语合并成一个句子。 The painting leaves a great impression on me，showing me the meaning of life. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。 参考范文 The Sunflowers is an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh，a great painter from the Netherlands.It was completed in Arles in 1889 and is one of his most famous works. It shows fifteen sunflowers in a vase，mostly in three shades of yellow，from bright yellows to brownish yellows.We can see the flowers are at different stages of life—some are just starting to bloom，some starting to wither. The painting leaves a great impression on me，showing me the meaning of life.Each of the flowers is trying its best to grow and show its beauty，no matter which stage of life it is at.The painting deepens my understanding of life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$