Module7 汉堡法介绍偶像（专项训练）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（外研版三起）

Module7汉堡法介绍偶像 1、 写作方法指引 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 Helen Keller was born in the US in1880.As a baby, she became blind and deaf. She couldn't see. 介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业 Later Helen learnt to read, write and speak. She wrote a book about herself and travelled all over the world.主要事迹 Helen lived to be eighty-seven. She is a role model for blind people, and also for you and me.表达对偶像的影响或评价 01 写作方法指引 写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 Yuan Longping First, Yuan Longping is a great scientist. Second, he was born in China in 1930.介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业 Third, he studied rice and wanted to help people have more food. With his hard work, he grew a new kind of rice that could feed more people.主要事迹 Last, he is a role model for all of us.表达对偶像的影响或评价 基础知识精讲 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.开头（介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业） 参考句型： 1. ___________ is a __________. 2. He / She was born in __________. 3. He / She is a __________. 4. This is__________ . 参考词汇： 人物身份与职业：teacher（教师）doctor（医生）nurse（护士）driver（司机）farmer（农民）singer（歌手）dancer（舞者）actor（演员）actress（女演员）painter（画家）writer（作家）scientist（科学家）taikonaut/astronaut（宇航员）pilot（飞行员）policeman（警察）policewoman（女警察）firefighter（消防员）great teacher（伟大教师）famous writer（著名作家） born（出生） 2.介绍偶像的主要事迹 参考句型： 1. In __________, he/she __________. 2. He / She spent __________ in __________. 3. He / She did __________. 4. With __________’s help, he/she learnt to __________. 5. He / She had __________ and taught __________. He / She __________ very well. 参考词汇： 动作与经历：fly into space（飞入太空）spend（度过）work（工作）make a video（制作录像）study（学习）help（帮助）share（分享）learn（学习）teach（教）write（写）read（读）speak（说）、draw（画）sing（唱）dance（跳舞）play（玩/演奏）invent（发明）build（建造）save（拯救）protect（保护）travel（旅行）try hard（努力尝试） 特殊经历：blind（失明的）deaf（失聪的）students（学生） 3.表达偶像的影响或评价 参考句型： 1. We are ____________ of him/her. 2. He / She is a role model for ____________. 3. People still ____________ from him/her. 4. He / She is ____________ in ____________. 5.Many people like him/her because ____________. 参考词汇： proud（自豪的）role model（榜样）learn（学习）important（重要的）history（历史）kind（善良的）wise（智慧的）brave（勇敢的）hard-working（努力的）helpful（乐于助人的）patient（耐心的）clever（聪明的）funny（有趣的）honest（诚实的）friendly（友好的）famous（著名的）great（伟大的）special（特别的）popular（受欢迎的）successful（成功的） 三、模拟写作提升 题目要求：以“航天英雄”为题，结合以下问题写短文： 1. Who is the space hero? 2. When was he born? What’s his job? 3. What did he do? 要求： 1. 文章不少于 70 词； 2. 语法无误； 3. 表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 参考句型： First, Yang Liwei is a ___________.  Second, he was born in ___________ and is a ___________. Third, ___________.  Last, we all ___________. 参考词汇： space hero（航天英雄） taikonaut（宇航员） fly into space（飞入太空） spend（度过） work（工作） make a video（制作录像） proud（自豪的） 范文1： The Space Hero—Yang Liwei First, Yang Liwei is a space hero. Second, he was born in 1965 and is a taikonaut.介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业Third, in October 2003, he flew into space in Shenzhou V. He spent about twenty-one hours there, did much work, and made a video. 主要事迹 Last, we are very proud of him.表达对偶像的影响或评价 模拟写作提升2 前情提要： 题目要求：根据表格信息，介绍名人 Helen Keller。 要求： 1. 文章不少于 70 词； 2. 语法无误； 3. 表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 参考句型: First, Helen Keller is _________. Second, she was born in _________ in _________. Third, as a baby, she became _________. With her _________ help, she learnt to _________ and _________about _________. Last, she is _________ for _________. 参考单词： writer（作家） blind（失明的） deaf（失聪的） teach（教） read（阅读） write（写作） speak（说话） role model（榜样） 范文2： Helen Keller First, Helen Keller is a famous writer. Second, she was born in America in 1880.介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业 Third, as a baby, she became blind and deaf. With her teacher’s help, she learnt to read, write, and speak and wrote a book about herself.主要事迹Last, she is a role model for many people.表达对偶像的影响或评价 四、真题写作练习-四川成都 题目要求：根据信息卡，介绍孔子。 要求: 文章不少于70词； 语法无误; 表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 参考句型： First, Confucius is _________. Second, he was born _________. Third, he had _________ and _________. Also, he lived to be _________. Last, people _________ today. He is ____________. 参考单词： teacher（教师） student（学生） teach（教） wise ideas（智慧的思想） live（生活） 范文3 Confucius First, Confucius is a great teacher. Second, he was born in 551 BC.介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业 Third, he had many students and taught them wise ideas. Also, he lived to be seventy-two. 主要事迹Last, people still learn from his ideas today. He is very important in Chinese history.表达对偶像的影响或评价 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$