Module7 汉堡法介绍偶像（课件）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（外研版三起）

Module 7 外研版三起五年级下册 汉堡法介绍偶像 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业 主要事迹 表达对偶像的影响或评价 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 4 01 写作方法指引-汉堡法 介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业 First, ______is ______. Second, she was born in ____ in ____. 主要事迹 In ____, he/she _____. He / She spent ____ in _____. He / She did _____. 表达偶像的影响或评价 We are _____ of him/her. He / She is a role model for _____. 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 01 写作方法指引-示例 Yuan Longping First, Yuan Longping is a great scientist. Second, he was born in China in 1930. Third, he studied rice and wanted to help people have more food. With his hard work, he grew a new kind of rice that could feed more people. Last, he is a role model for all of us. Yuan Longping First, Yuan Longping is a great scientist. Second, he was born in China in 1930. Third, he studied rice and wanted to help people have more food. With his hard work, he grew a new kind of rice that could feed more people. Last, he is a role model for all of us. Yuan Longping First, Yuan Longping is a great scientist. Second, he was born in China in 1930. Third, he studied rice and wanted to help people have more food. With his hard work, he grew a new kind of rice that could feed more people. Last, he is a role model for all of us. 介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业 主要事迹 表达对偶像的影响或评价 Yuan Longping First, Yuan Longping is a great scientist. Second, he was born in China in 1930. Third, he studied rice and wanted to help people have more food. With his hard work, he grew a new kind of rice that could feed more people. Last, he is a role model for all of us. 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.开头（介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业） 参考句型： 1. ___________ is a __________. 2. He / She was born in __________. 3. He / She is a __________. 4. This is__________ . 参考词汇： 人物身份与职业：teacher（教师）doctor（医生）nurse（护士） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.开头（介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业） 参考词汇： driver（司机）farmer（农民）singer（歌手）dancer（舞者）actor（演员）actress（女演员）painter（画家）writer（作家）scientist（科学家）taikonaut/astronaut（宇航员）pilot（飞行员）policeman（警察）policewoman（女警察）firefighter（消防员）great teacher（伟大教师）famous writer（著名作家） born（出生） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.介绍偶像的主要事迹 参考句型： 1. In __________, he/she __________. 2. He / She spent __________ in __________. 3. He / She did __________. 4. With __________’s help, he/she learnt to __________. 5. He / She had __________ and taught __________. He / She __________ very well. 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 10 02 基础知识精讲-句型 参考词汇： 动作与经历：fly into space（飞入太空）spend（度过）work（工作）make a video（制作录像）study（学习）help（帮助）share（分享）learn（学习）teach（教）write（写）read（读）speak（说）、draw（画）sing（唱）dance（跳舞）play（玩/演奏）invent（发明）build（建造）save（拯救）protect（保护）travel（旅行）try hard（努力尝试） 特殊经历：blind（失明的）deaf（失聪的）students（学生） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 11 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.表达偶像的影响或评价 参考句型： 1. We are ____________ of him/her. 2. He / She is a role model for ____________. 3. People still ____________ from him/her. 4. He / She is ____________ in ____________. 5.Many people like him/her because ____________. 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 12 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.表达偶像的影响或评价 参考词汇： proud（自豪的）role model（榜样）learn（学习）important（重要的）history（历史）kind（善良的）wise（智慧的）brave（勇敢的）hard-working（努力的）helpful（乐于助人的）patient（耐心的）clever（聪明的）funny（有趣的）honest（诚实的）friendly（友好的）famous（著名的）great（伟大的）special（特别的）popular（受欢迎的）successful（成功的） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 13 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 题目要求：以“航天英雄”为题，结合以下问题写短文： 1. Who is the space hero? 2. When was he born? What’s his job? 3. What did he do? 要求： 文章不少于 70 词； 语法无误； 表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 参考句型： First, Yang Liwei is a ___________.  Second, he was born in ___________ and is a ___________. Third, ___________.  Last, we all ___________. 参考词汇： space hero（航天英雄） taikonaut（宇航员） fly into space（飞入太空） spend（度过） work（工作） make a video（制作录像） proud（自豪的） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 16 The Space Hero—Yang Liwei First, Yang Liwei is a space hero. Second, he was born in 1965 and is a taikonaut. Third, in October 2003, he flew into space in Shenzhou V. He spent about twenty-one hours there, did much work, and made a video. Last, we are very proud of him. 范文1： 介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业 主要事迹 表达对偶像的影响或评价 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 17 模拟写作提升2 题目要求：根据表格信息，介绍名人 Helen Keller。 要求： 文章不少于 70 词； 语法无误； 表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 Name Born Job experience Helen Keller 1880, America writer wrote a book 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 18 参考句型: First, Helen Keller is _________. Second, she was born in _________ in _________. Third, as a baby, she became _________. With her _________ help, she learnt to _________ and _________about _________. Last, she is _________ for _________. 参考单词： writer（作家） blind（失明的） deaf（失聪的） teach（教） read（阅读） write（写作） speak（说话） role model（榜样） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 19 Helen Keller First, Helen Keller is a famous writer. Second, she was born in America in 1880. Third, as a baby, she became blind and deaf. With her teacher’s help, she learnt to read, write, and speak and wrote a book about herself. Last, she is a role model for many people. 范文2： 介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业 主要事迹 表达对偶像的影响或评价 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 20 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 题目要求：根据信息卡，介绍孔子。 要求: 文章不少于70词； 语法无误; 表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 真题写作练习-四川成都 Name : Confucius Born: 551 BC a great teacher had many students lived to be seventy-two 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 22 参考句型： First, Confucius is _________. Second, he was born _________. Third, he had _________ and _________. Also, he lived to be _________. Last, people _________ today. He is ____________. 参考单词： teacher（教师） student（学生） teach（教） wise ideas（智慧的思想） live（生活） 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 23 Confucius First, Confucius is a great teacher. Second, he was born in 551 BC. Third, he had many students and taught them wise ideas. Also, he lived to be seventy-two. Last, people still learn from his ideas today. He is very important in Chinese history. 范文3： 介绍人物身份、出生信息、职业 主要事迹 表达对偶像的影响或评价 行业PPT模板http://www.1ppt.com/hangye/ 24 Thank you! $$