Module7汉堡法写父母职业工作时间（专项训练）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（外研版三起）

Module7汉堡法介绍父母职业工作时间 1、 写作方法指引 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 My father goes to work at six o'clock every evening. He's a worker in a factory. 介绍父亲的职业，上班时间 My mother goes to work at eleven o'clock every night. She's a nurse.介绍母亲的职业，上班时间 01 写作方法指引 写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 My father is tall and a bit fat. He is a driver. He goes to work at six every morning. 介绍父亲的外貌，职业，上班时间My mother is thin and beautiful, She is a teacher. She goes to work at seven in the morning. 介绍母亲的外貌，职业，上班时间They often go to the park with me on Sundays. I love them very much.抒发自己对父母的感受 基础知识精讲 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.外貌描写:描述父母的外貌特征 基础型：My father/mother is ____. 拓展型：He / She looks ____. / My father/mother has ____（如black hair, big eyes）. 参考词汇： tall（高的）、strong（强壮的）、thin（瘦的）、kind（和蔼的）、beautiful（美丽的）。short（矮的）、pretty（漂亮的）、friendly（友好的）、quiet（安静的）。 2.职业介绍:说明父母的职业 参考句型： 基础型：He / She is a ____. 拓展型：His /Her job is ____. / My father/mother works as a ____.参考词汇： policeman（警察）、nurse（护士）、taxi driver（出租车司机）、teacher（教师） 、 engineer（工程师）、farmer（农民）、doctor（医生）、worker（工人） 3.上班时间 参考句型： 基础型：He / She goes to work at ____. 拓展型：My father/mother starts work at ____. / Every morning, he/she goes to work at ____. 参考词汇： 时间表达：eight o’clock（八点）half past seven（七点半）、a quarter past six（六点一刻）。 频率词汇：every morning（每天早上）、every day（每天）。 4.情感表达 参考句型： 基础型：I love my parents. 拓展型：I’m proud of them. / They are great, and I love them very much. 参考词汇： love（爱）、proud（骄傲的）、great（了不起的）、hard-working（勤劳的）。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 时间表达讲解 1. 基础句型： 第三人称单数工作时间：主语 + goes to work at + 时间. 例：My father goes to work at eight o’clock every morning. 我爸爸每天早上八点上班。 将来时间安排：主语 + will + 动词原形 + at + 时间. 例：She will clean the room at half past ten. 她将在十点半打扫房间。 2.时间表达法： 整点：数字 + o’clock，如 five o’clock（五点）。 半点：half past + 数字，如 half past seven（七点半）。 一刻钟：a quarter past（过一刻）/ a quarter to（差一刻）， 如 a quarter past nine（九点一刻），a quarter to eight（七点四十五）。 练一练 一、翻译句子。 1. 我爸爸每天晚上六点半上班。___________________________ 2. 她将在八点一刻写作业。 _______________________________ 二、用合适的时间表达填空。 1. My teacher goes to work at ____________（六点）every morning. 2. They will watch TV at ___________（十点半）tonight. 3. The meeting starts at __________________（三点四十五）. 参考解析： 一、翻译句子 1. My father goes to work at half past six every evening. 2. She will do homework at a quarter past eight. 二、填空 1. six o'clock 2. half past ten 3. a quarter to four 三、模拟写作提升 回答以下问题，介绍父母的职业、外貌和上班时间，不少于6句话。 ① What does your father do? What does your mother do? ② What time does your father go to work? What time does your mother go to work? ③ What’s your father/mother like? 要求： 1.句子通顺，思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于六句。 参考句型： My father is a __________. He is ___________. He goes to work at ___________. My mother is a __________. She is ___________. She goes to work at ___________. They are ___________. I’m proud of them. 参考单词： worker（工人） doctor（医生） busy（忙碌的） be proud of（为……骄傲） 范文1： My father is a worker at a factory. He is strong. He goes to work at eight o’clock every morning. 介绍父亲的外貌，职业，上班时间My mother is a doctor. She is tall and thin. She is kind. She goes to work at half past seven every morning. 介绍母亲的外貌，职业，上班时间They are busy every day, but they always play with me on weekends. I’m proud of them. 抒发自己对父母的感受 模拟写作提升2 根据表格信息，介绍父母的职业、外貌和上班时间，语句通顺，不少于5句话。 要求: 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考句型： My father is __________. He is a ____________. He goes to work at ____________.My mother is ____________. She is a ____________. She goes to work at ____________. They ____________. 参考单词 cool（酷的） taxi driver（出租车司机） teacher（教师） work hard（努力工作） 范文2： My father is tall and cool. He is a taxi driver. He goes to work at half past five every morning. 介绍父亲的外貌，职业，上班时间My mother is beautiful. She is thin and tall. She is a teacher at a primary school. She teaches Chinese at school. She goes to work at seven o’clock every morning. 介绍母亲的外貌，职业，上班时间 They work hard, and I love them. 抒发自己对父母的感受 四、真题写作练习-四川成都 请介绍你的父母，包含他们的职业、外貌以及上班时间。 要求: 1.句子通顺，思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于六句。 参考句型： My father is _________. He is a __________. He goes to work at __________. My mother is __________. She is a __________. She goes to work at ____. I love ____________. 参考词汇： tall（高的） strong（强壮的） thin（瘦的） kind（和蔼的） policeman（警察） nurse（护士） go to work（去上班） 范文3 My father is tall and strong. He is a policeman. He goes to work at eight o’clock every morning. He helps people on the street and keeps everyone safe. 介绍父亲的外貌，职业，上班时间My mother is thin and kind. She is a nurse in a hospital. She goes to work at half past six every morning. 介绍母亲的外貌，职业，上班时间It’s very early. I love my parents.抒发自己对父母的感受 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$