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Section B(3a3b) 写作导学
英语 七年级下册 人教版
原创新课堂
话题剖析 本单元以“Transportation(交通)”为话题,要求学生们能描述人们上班或上学的交通方式,内容包含出行方式、距离、所花费的时间、感觉及对未来出行方式的憧憬等。写此类话题作文时要注意正确使用乘坐交通工具、表达两地距离及花费时间的短语或句型。
写作目标 要求学生能正确运用目标语言、短语及句型,写一篇关于“交通出行”的文章。
1.远离
2.乘火车
3.每个周日
4.步行
5.迟到
6.在……工作
7.起床
8.到达
9.为我自己
far from
take a train
every Sunday
on foot
be late
work at
get up
get to
for myself
1.I usually go to school by bike/bus/on foot.=I usually ride a bike/take a bus/walk to school.我通常骑自行车/乘公交车/步行去学校。
2.My home is far from my school.我家离学校很远。
3.The journey takes us 25 minutes.这趟行程花费我们25分钟。
4.It takes me about 20 minutes by bus.乘公交车要花我大约20分钟时间。
5.My dream is to buy a piano for myself.我的梦想是为我自己买一架钢琴。
6.So I work at a supermarket every Sunday.因此我每周日都在超市上班。
7.The school bus ride is never boring because I always talk to my classmates.乘坐校车从不无聊,因为我总是和我的同学聊天。
请你根据下表提示内容,写一篇60词左右的英语短文,介绍一下Tim与Lily的上学方式,同时也介绍一下自己选择的上学的交通方式,并说说理由。
要求:1.短文除包括所给提示内容外,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,文中不能出现真实姓名。
姓名 Tim Lily 我
离学校距离 远 近 ……
交通方式 公共汽车 步行 ……
花费时间 半小时 10分钟 ……
观点 快,有趣 健康,便宜 ……
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写此类作文应注意以下三点:
1.介绍他人的出行方式要用第三人称,时态应为一般现在时。
2.注意正确使用“take/ride/by...”描述出行方式;正确运用数字来描述时间或距离。
3.注意使用连词,文章上下文要衔接自然,通顺流畅。
1.在相同的班级
2.远离
3.骑自行车
4.实现;成为观察
5.I live near a hospital.(仿写句子)
in the same class
far from
ride a bike/by bike
come true
I live far away from the school.
6.It takes me half an hour to play the piano.(仿写句子)
It takes my mum .
7.It is their dream to have a bridge.(仿写句子)
It is our duty .
8.She often goes to school on foot.(仿写句子)
My father often drives a car to go to work.
9.I think it's healthy and cheap.(仿写句子)
I don't think it's easy and interesting.
10.There is no bridge and the river runs too quickly for boat.(仿写句子)
There are so many people and the road are too crowded.(答案仅供参考)
10 minutes to go to the supermarket
to keep the classroom clean
Tim and Lily are my good friends.We go to the same school and we are in the same class.Tim lives far from school.So he goes to school by bus.It takes him half an hour to get to school.He thinks it's fast and interesting to go by bus.Lily lives near our school.So she walks to school.It takes her ten minutes.She thinks walking to school is healthy and cheap.How about me?It's five kilometers from my home to school.I usually ride my bike to school.It takes me 15 minutes to get to school by bike.I think it's good exercise.
一、回答问题。
“Come on,Dad!It's 7:20 a.m. now,” says Harry.
“I need to wash (洗) the car now,” Mr. Smith says. “You walk to school this morning,OK?”
“But the school is a little far,” says Jane.
“Walking is good.Now get your schoolbags and go!”
Then Jane and Harry walk to school.It takes 30 minutes.When they get to school,they are very tired (疲惫的).
In the evening,Jane and Harry have a big meal (饭) with their grandfather. They tell him they are not happy to walk to school.Grandpa says, “That's good for you.I used to (过去常常) walk five miles to school every day.”
“Really?” Jane says. “But I don't like walking.”
Grandpa says, “Kids need to walk or run every day.It's good for your health.”
“Oh,I will (将要) start walking every day,” Harry says. “I'd like to be healthy.”
“I will join you,Harry,” says Jane.
1.What's the relationship (关系) between Harry and Jane?
They are brother and sister.
2.What does Mr. Smith do at 7:20?
He washes his car.
3.When do Harry and Jane get to school?
They get to school at 7:50 a.m.
4.How far is it from grandpa's home to his school?
It's five miles.
5.How will two kids go to school tomorrow (明天)?
They will go to school on foot/walk to school.
二、书面表达。
某儿童网站对学生上学的交通方式做了一个调查,下表是其中的几条反馈记录。请参考表格,介绍一下这几名学生是如何上学的。
要求:1.语法正确、语句通顺、书写整齐;
2.不少于60词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Who How old How How long
Bai Peng 12 bus 15 minutes
Gao Xing 13 bike 30 minutes
Lu Lu 10 car 25 minutes
Li Lei 11 walk 35 minutes
How do students go to school?Let's have a look.
Bai Peng is 12 years old.He goes to school by bus every day.It usually takes him 15 minutes to get to school.Gao Xing is 13 years old.He rides his bike to go to school and it takes him half an hour to get to school.Lu Lu is 10 years old and she goes to school by car.It always takes her 25 minutes to get there.Li Lei is an 11yearold boy.He walks to school.It takes him 35 minutes to get there.
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