U2 Section B Writing 写作指导（作业课件）-原创新课堂2023-2024学年八年级英语下册（人教版）广东

Section B　Writing　写作指导 英语 八年级下册 人教版 原创新课堂 【话题剖析】 本单元的话题是“志愿者服务与慈善活动”，话题形式通常为记叙文或夹叙夹议型文章。本话题旨在帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观，学会关爱他人、关爱社会，并鼓励学生积极参加志愿者活动或慈善活动，为社会的和谐进步做出自己的贡献。 【写作目标】 阅读有关文章并能将目标语言、短语及语法运用到写作中去，会写一篇与慈善和志愿服务相关的文章。 假设你是校英语报的小记者，你打算向某英文网站投稿，分享上周你校举行的志愿者活动，请你根据右边思维导图内容提示，用英文写一篇短文。 注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2．不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名； 3．语句连贯，词数70左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Last weekend we visited a village school._________________ 【思路点拨】 1．这是一篇报道。注意写作时要用一般过去时描述发生过的事情，写作时需用第一人称。 2．叙述事件时，注意先后顺序。 3．结尾处可补充自己对本次活动的看法或今后的想法。 结构 素材要点 开头：直接 引入主题 1.参观希望小学(visit a hope school) 2．是了解其他孩子们生活的好方法(a great way to... other children's life) 正文：描述 具体活动 1.周六的活动：开联谊会(have a party)；打扫卫生(clean up)； 听贫困生的故事(stories about some hard­working students who are from poor families) 2．周日的活动：义卖(hold a big sale)；筹钱(raise money) 结尾：我 的感受 1.当志愿者真的很棒(be a volunteer；really great) 2．想帮助更多的人(would like to help more people) 【句型仿写】 1．You could help to clean up the city parks. You could help to _____________________． 2．I'm interested in basketball. I'm strong in ________________________________． 3．I'd like to help out as a volunteer in your school because I love kids. I'd like to help out as a volunteer in __________ because __________________________． look after the old communicating with others the hospital I want to cheer the sick up 4．I want to learn more about how to care for animals. I want to learn more about __________________________________． 5．I think helping others makes me happier. I think _________________________________________________________． what the world is like for a blind volunteering makes a great difference to my life(答案不唯一) 【佳作欣赏】 Last weekend we visited a village school.It was a great way to know some other children's life.We had a party with the students there.We also helped them clean up their classrooms.The headteacher told us some stories about some hard­working students who are from poor families.And in order to raise money for them，we held a big sale in our school playground the next day.We raised a lot of money.I think being a volunteer is really meaningful and I would like to help more people. 一、回答问题。 My name is Ann.I worked as a volunteer in 2023 because I wanted to do something to help others.Sue Ryder was a charity very close to my heart because volunteers from Sue Ryder once cared for my dad in the hospital. Volunteering in the shop helped me know what shop work was like and I was surprised to find how much I really enjoyed doing it.I also found how important the public (民众) were.Lots of people gave us things they didn't need for the shop to sell.In this way，Sue Ryder raised money to look after people with life­changing illnesses.I always left the charity shop late because I knew how important the work of Sue Ryder was. Another thing I enjoyed about volunteering was talking with other volunteers in the shop.They were all friendly.I really improved my teamwork skills by volunteering. I worked in the shop from late January to early May.I learned many things from it, and I am sure they will be useful in the future. 1．Why was Sue Ryder a charity very close to Ann's heart? Because volunteers from Sue Ryder once cared for Ann's dad in the hospital. 2．How did Sue Ryder raise money? Sue Ryder raised money by selling things people gave it. 3．Who did Sue Ryder use the money for? Sue Ryder used the money for (looking after) people with life­changing illnesses. 4．What did Ann improve by volunteering? Ann improved her teamwork skills (by volunteering). 5．How long did Ann work in Sue Ryder? She worked (in Sue Ryder) for more than/over/about 3/three months. 二、书面表达。 人们常说：“服务他人，快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的暑假去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格内容提示，用英文写一篇短文，介绍一下你的计划。 Places Activities Community center help the old，sing songs，tell stories，... Community hospital(s) hand out the leaflets (宣传册) on healthy life... Community park(s) pick up rubbish，water flowers，... ．.. ... 注意：1.可在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2．不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名； 3．语句连贯，词数70左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 As we all know，“Serving others can bring us happiness.” Summer holiday is coming，I'll do some service in my community to make it better. First, I'll go to our community center to help and cheer up the old people. For example, I can sing songs or tell them some interesting stories. Second, I'm going to hand out the leaflets on healthy life at our community hospital or other places. Next, I also plan to pick up and sort rubbish with my friends in our community park. And I will water flowers in the park. What's more, I will help the kids with their lessons and look after them as well. I'm sure I'll have a meaningful holiday this summer. $$