U1 Section B Writing 写作指导（作业课件）-原创新课堂2023-2024学年八年级英语下册（人教版）广东

Section B　Writing　写作指导 英语 八年级下册 人教版 原创新课堂 【话题剖析】 本单元以“健康和事故”为话题，谈论了自己的健康状况，发生事故时该怎么做及如何向他人提出建议和劝告，从而养成良好的饮食和生活习惯。要求同学们熟悉人体部位的英文表达，掌握描述身体不适的各种表达方式，并能用所学的情态动词should提出正确合理的建议。在写这类文章时，给出的意见或建议语气要委婉，内容要合理。 【写作目标】 能阅读与健康、急救相关的文章；能将目标语言、短语及语法运用到写作中去，完成一篇关于健康的写作。 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文给他写一封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。 注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2．文中不能出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名； 3．语句连贯，词数70左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike， I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker._____________ Yours， Li Hua 【思路点拨】 1．本文讲述的主题是如何保护视力，文体为夹叙夹议。 2．注意时态的应用：描述自己的做法并对做法进行解释说明时，应用一般现在时。 3．人称：在信件中，提到对方时用第二人称；谈论自己的相关情况时用第一人称。 4．正确运用情态动词should/shouldn't提建议。 结构 素材要点 开头：引出话题 I'm sorry to...；get weaker share...with you 正文：介绍方法并解释原因 1.go out of the classroom；do physical exercise 2.avoid using the electronic products；be harmful to... 3.doing eye exercises；play an important role in... 4.have eyes examined；make sure... 结尾：表达祝愿 hope...helpful 【句型仿写】 1．I have a toothache. I have a ________________． _________________has a _____________． 2．You should lie down and rest. You should __________________________． ________________shouldn't ___________________． 3．I fell down from the bike. I ___________________________ ． Jim_______________________________ . headache My friend Tom fever take your temperature Your son eat too much was hit by a car broke his arm playing volleyball 4．If you doesn't feel well，you should go to a doctor. If you ______________，you should _______________________________． 5．What's wrong with you? __________________________________________________(答案不唯一)? cut yourself put some medicine on it What's up/What's the matter (with you) 【佳作欣赏】 Dear Mike， I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.I'd like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life. At school，I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.In my free time，I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.You know，the light they give off is harmful to our eyes.Besides，doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes.Lastly，I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy. I hope you'll find my ways helpful. Yours， Li Hua 一、回答问题。(2023，绥化) You may know about “junk food” like French fries.But do you know about “junk sleep”？ A British survey shows that there are many electronic products in teenagers' bedrooms. They are influencing teenagers' sleep badly. The survey was done among 1，000 British kids from 12 to 16.It is found that 50% of them got just 4 to 7 hours' sleep every day.But doctors say they need 8 to 9 hours. Almost 25% of the kids said they often fell asleep while they were watching TV，listening to music or using other electronic products. “This is very worrying，” said Dr. Chris，a British professor (教授). “We call it ‘junk sleep’. It means you don't get enough sleep and the quality (质量) of the sleep is low，too.” The survey found that quite a few of the kids felt tired each day because of the junk sleep，especially girls between 13 and 16.Nearly all the teenagers have a phone，music player or TV in their bedrooms. And lots of them even have all the three. Dr. Chris suggested that parents should help their children keep away from electronic products，and that teenagers should spend less time on the electronic products. 1．How many British kids from 12 to 16 got less than 8 hours' sleep a day in the survey? Five hundred. 2．According to the passage，what were 25% of the kids doing when they fell asleep? They were watching TV，listening to music or using other electronic products. 3．What does “junk sleep” mean in the passage? It means you don't get enough sleep and the quality of the sleep is low，too. 4．In Dr. Chris' opinion，what should teenagers do? They should spend less time on the electronic products. 5．What does this passage mainly talk about? This passage is about “junk sleep”． 二、书面表达。 假如你是张斌，请根据以下表格内容提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下昨天发生的事。 原因 在放学回家的路上，突降大雨，全身淋湿。 症状 咳嗽；头痛；发烧。 医生建议 一天服药三次；多喝水；在家休息两天。 注意：1.可在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2．不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名； 3．语句连贯，词数70左右。 Yesterday afternoon it suddenly rained hard on my way home from school.I didn't bring an umbrella with me，so I got wet all over in the rain.When I got home，I coughed，had a headache and had a fever.My mother took me to a doctor in the evening.The doctor gave me some medicine and asked me to take it three times a day.He also advised me to drink lots of water and rest at home for two days.What a bad day! $$