内容正文:
Period 5 Writing
应用文写作——申请信
技法指导
申请信是高考中常考的体裁之一,主要以介绍个人情况为主,包括自己的姓名、年龄、身高、健康状况、业余爱好、特长、工作态度及人际关系等。申请信中通常会涉及到以下几点: 信息的来源(比如从报纸上得知或经朋友介绍等);个人情况(学习工作经历、个人特长爱好等)及自己对申请对象的期盼等。
申请信可分为三部分:
第一部分:简要介绍自己,说明信息来源,并提出申请。
第二部分:主体部分,即介绍个人的情况。应包括个人的基本情况:个人信息、工作经历、个人技能等。突出自己的特点,具体说明胜任理由。
第三部分:结束语。请求给予机会,期望尽快回复。
经典句式
1.开头常用句式
①I have read in the newspaper that a secretary is wanted in your company.
我在报纸上看到你们公司在招聘一名秘书。
②I read the announcement of the Experience Life that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息,我对此很感兴趣。
③I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for an English tutor in the newspaper.
我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。
2.主体段落常用句式
①I think I'm qualified for the position.
我认为我有资格胜任这个职位。
②In the first place, I have strong written and spoken communication skills.
首先,我有很好的写作和交流技巧。
③Last but not least, I have good personality, and I am independent in life.
最后但同样重要的是,我性格很好,并且在生活中很独立。
④I am an outgoing and friendly girl/boy, which makes me popular with all my classmates and teachers.
我是一个开朗友好的女孩/男孩,这使我在同学和老师中很受欢迎。
⑤I love to challenge myself in a variety of activities, especially drama performance.
我喜欢在各种各样的活动中挑战自己,特别是戏剧表演。
⑥I think it's of great use to me. For one thing, I can gain some experience for my future job; for another, I can make more friends.
我认为它对我是有好处的。一方面,我能够为未来的工作获得经验;另一方面,我可以交到更多的朋友。
3.结尾常用句式
①If my application could be taken into favorable consideration, I would be most grateful.
如果您能惠予考虑我的申请,本人将十分感激。
②I will appreciate it very much if you could give me a chance.
如果您能给我一次机会的话,本人将不胜感激。
③If you need to know any more about me, please contact me.
如果您想了解我的更多信息,请联系我。
典例演练
假如你是王哲,24岁,北京大学英语系毕业,英语口语好。当了3年英语导游,对英文秘书工作有兴趣。看到报纸上某公司招聘英文秘书的广告,于是想去该公司应聘。请根据个人情况写一封申请信。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[精彩范文]
Dear Sir or Madam,
Having read your ad. in the newspaper, I hope to get the job as an English secretary in your company.
My name is Wang Zhe. I graduated from the English Department of Peking University three years ago. I can speak fluent English and can write in English as well as read all kinds of articles in English. What's more, skillful in operating words on computer, I can type 100 words per minute. With three years' guide experience in a travel corporation, I could make myself generally useful, if there should be any opportunity of your requiring my services.
I will appreciate it if you could give me a chance.
Yours,
Wang Zhe
总评 本篇范文内容要点齐全,行文流畅自然,简要、精准地介绍了自己的情况和特点,条理清晰,层次感强,同时一些高级句型和词汇的使用提高了文章的档次。
[亮点呈现]
(1)非谓语动词的完成式Having read your ad. in the newspaper, with的复合结构With three years' guide experience in a travel corporation以及as well as连接并列结构的用法,体现了作者深厚的语言功底。
(2)if there should be any opportunity of your requiring my services是if引导的条件状语从句,主从复合句的运用,提升了文章档次。
跟踪演练
假设你是中国学生李华,在英国交流学习,担任学校中国语言与文化社社长。近期,校学生会发布了举办“国际文化节”的通知,请结合通知要求写一封邮件申请参加此活动。
Notice
This is to inform that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held on December 30th, 2023. Any student club that intends to join please sends an email to us by December 15th, 2023 to apply for a booth (临时货摊). The name of the booth and main activities should be included in the application.
Student Union
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
[精彩范文]
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of China Language and Culture Club. I am glad to know that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held on December 30th, 2023. I am writing to apply for a booth.
The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce Chinese tea culture and the benefits of Chinese tea. Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history. Drinking tea has become a much more popular lifestyle, through which we can keep in good health. Besides, students visiting our booth will enjoy drinking Chinese tea.
I would appreciate it if you can take my application into account. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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