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写作园地
应用文写作-新闻报道
技法指导
本单元的写作任务是写一篇新闻报道。新闻报道是指用客观叙述的方法,及时地传递新闻信
息,要求作者客观、如实地叙事,而且要简练、及时。写作时可分成三段:
1. 导语:简要地写出本新闻中最有新闻价值的信息,主要是信息发生的时间、地点以及事件
的基本情况等。
2. 主体:新闻的主干部分,将导语中涉及的事实详细展开,使新闻更加具体、可信。
3. 结尾:对整篇新闻的小结、说明等。
写新闻报道时,要注意以下几点:
1. 新闻的时间、地点、人物、事件和事件的原因及结果必须具体、确凿。
2. 新闻中引用的数字、引语、典故以及其他背景材料都必须有据可依。
3. 新闻中对事物的解释和说明必须符合事物的本来面目,不能歪曲事实
经典句式
1. 开头常用句式
①Last Sunday witnessed a.. in which both students and teachers of our school participated
上周日,我们学校的学生和老师参加了一场......
②On Global Youth Service Day, my classmates and I went to the . where we had a meaningful
experience
在国际青年服务日,我和同学们去了......,那是一次有意义的经历。
③Thanks to ., great changes have taken place in...
多亏了.........发生了巨大的变化。
2.主体段落常用句式
①To solve the problem. some measures should be taken
为了解决这个问题,(我们)应该采取一些措施。
②As we all know.. is plaving an important part in our daily life
众所周知,....-在我们的日常生活中起着重要的作用。
③First of all. under the leadership of . the students entered. and saw a variety of . which
surprised the students
首先,在.....的带领下,学生们进入了......,看到了各种各样的......,这让学生们很吃惊。
④We spared no effort to..
我们不遗余力地.....
The whole course was extremely challenging, especially the part near the mountain, narrow and
rough
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整个过程极具挑战性,特别是靠近山的部分,狭窄而崎岖。
However difficult it was, no participants gave up halfway
无论多么困难,没有参与者半途而废。
3.结尾常用句式
①Through personal experience, the students learned more about -, and had a better understanding
of
通过亲身体验,学生们学习了更多的.....,对.....有了更好的了解。
②We have every reason to believe that the development will be a great success
我们有足够的理由相信这次发展会很成功。
③A tiny drop of water isn't anything until many drops come together to form the powerful sea
一粒小水滴微不足道,只有许多的水滴才能汇聚成强大的海洋。
典例演练
假定你是校英语报的记者李华,上周日,你和班里的同学去参观了杭州科技馆,请写一则新
闻报道,内容包括以下要点
1.活动内容(至少两项):
2. 简短评论。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[精彩范文]
Last Sunday, the students from Class Three of our school went to visit the latest technology
exhibition at the Hangzhou Science and Technology Museum
First of all. under the leadership of teachers and staff, the students entered the Biology
Museum and saw a variety of biological specimens, which surprised the students.After that, the
students entered the Space Museum Many students experienced stimulating Star Trek on the
astronaut trainers.Finally, everyone came to the Robot Museum. Industrial robots performed
dancing, Peking Opera and played rock and roll for visitors
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Through personal experience, the students learned more about science in a relaxed
environment, and had a better understanding of the development of science and technology, which
has enhanced their motivation to explore science
总评本篇范文结构清晰、完整,逻辑通顺。范文第一段介绍了事件发生的时间、地点以及
基本情况等;第二段具体介绍了在参观科技馆时参加的活动;第三段是对该活动的总结。
[亮点呈现]
(1)which has enhanced their motivation to explore science 使用which 引导非限制性定语从句.
丰富了文章句式的多样性。
(2)first of all. after that. finally等逻辑连接词的使用,使文章脉络清晰。
)跟踪演练
上周末,高二(3)班的学生志愿者李跃和张华一起去阳光敬老院(SunshineNursingHome)开展
志愿者活动。假设你是校英语报的记者,请按下列要点用英语写一则新闻报道;
1.时间、地点、人物和活动
2. 老人们的反应:
3. 简短评论。
注意:1写作词数应为80左右;
2. 报道的标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Student Volunteers Brought
Sunshine to the Elderh
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[精彩范文
Student Volunteers Brought
Sunshine to the Elderly
Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Senior Two, went to Sunshine Nursing
Home and did some voluntary work last weekend. The moment they arrived, they presented the
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elderly with flowers and fruits and started working at once. such as cleaning the windows and
sweeping the floor. Evervthing done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people
When it was time for them to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They
said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched
their own lives