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Section Ⅴ Writing
[对应学生用书P70]
写一篇关于历史事件的文章
本单元写作要求为写一篇有关历史事件的文章。写作时常用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。注意介绍历史事件时一般按照时间顺序。同时注意确定前后逻辑的衔接。注意细节,如拼写、标点符号或句式结构等。注意语言要平实,准确。
1.milestone n.里程碑,划时代的事件
2.in the early/late 1980在20世纪80年代初/末
3.a man of great achievements 一个有伟大成就的人
4.be considered/regarded as/to be 被认为是
5.go down in history 载入史册,为后世铭记
6.in memory/honour 为了纪念
1.A fair death honours the whole life.
死得其所,流芳百世。
2.His accomplishments are now widely acknowledged.
他的成就现在得到广泛认可。
3.He is remembered as one of China's most influential explorers.
他被认为是中国最有影响力的探险家之一。
4.It has a farreaching impact on the development of the world.
它对世界的发展有着深远的影响。
假定你校英文报即将开辟“History”栏目。请你根据所给要点写一篇短文为该栏目投稿,简要介绍英国工业革命(the Industrial Revolution)。
开端
纺织业的技术革新
时间
第一次工业革命:18世纪中期至19世纪中期(蒸汽动力起重要的作用);
第二次工业革命:19世纪中期至20世纪初(更多新技术被用于大规模生产,进入电气时代)。
影响
人口从农村转移至城市,交通更加便利快捷。
注意:可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:纺织业 the textile industry;蒸汽动力 steam power;电气时代 the age of electricity
Step One 审题谋篇
体裁
说明文
话题
历史事件
时态
以一般过去时为主
人称
第三人称
Step Two 词汇运用
1.innovation n.革新,创新
2.last vi.持续
3.massproduce vt.大规模生产,批量生产
4.convenient adj.方便的,便利的
5.play an important role起重要的作用
6.take place发生
7.bring about带来
Step Three 句式表达
1.完成句子
①The Industrial Revolution began in Great Britain in the mid1700s,and the innovations were mainly used in the textile industry.
工业革命始于18世纪中期的英国,创新主要用于纺织业。
②The first wave of the Industrial Revolution lasted from the mid1700s to the mid1800s.
工业革命的第一波浪潮从18世纪中期持续到19世纪中期。
③At that time,steam power played an important role.
当时,蒸汽动力发挥了重要作用。
④The next wave took place from the mid1800s to the early 1900s.
下一波浪潮发生在19世纪中期至20世纪初。
⑤At that time,more technologies were used to massproduce goods.
当时更多的技术被用于大规模生产商品。
⑥The Industrial Revolution brought about many changes to people's daily life.
工业革命给人们的日常生活带来了许多变化。
⑦They moved from the country and farms to the cities to work in factories.
为了在工厂里工作,他们从农村和农场搬到城市。
⑧Meanwhile,new ways of transportation were introduced.
同时,新的交通方式被引入。
⑨This made it more convenient and fast to travel to other places.
这使得去其他地方旅行更加方便、快捷。
2.句式升级
将句①改为含有with复合结构的句子。
The Industrial Revolution began in Great Britain in the mid1700s,with the innovations mainly used in the textile industry.
⑪将句②和句③合并为含有when引导的非限制性定语从句的句子。
The first wave of the Industrial Revolution lasted from the mid1700s to the mid1800s,when steam power played an important role.
⑫将句④和句⑤合并为含有when引导的非限制性定语从句的句子。
The next wave took place from the mid1800s to the early 1900s,when more technologies were used to massproduce goods.
⑬将句⑧和句⑨合并为含有which引导的非限制性定语从句的句子。
Meanwhile,new ways of transportation were introduced,which made it more convenient and fast to travel to other places.
Step Four 连句成篇
The Industrial Revolution began in Great Britain in the mid1700s,with the innovations mainly used in the textile industry.
The first wave of the Industrial Revolution lasted from the mid1700s to the mid1800s,when steam power played an important role.The next wave took place from the mid1800s to the early 1900s,when more technologies were used to massproduce goods.The age of electricity began.
The Industrial Revolution brought about many changes to people's daily life.They moved from the country and farms to the cities to work in factories.Meanwhile,new ways of transportation were introduced,which made it more convenient and fast to travel to other places.
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