Unit 3 Section Ⅳ Writing（课件PPT）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第三册（外研版2019）

UNIT 3　War and peace (单元主题语境：人与社会——战争与和平) Section Ⅳ　Writing 1.写作词汇再现 ①perseverance n．毅力；韧性 ②persistence n．坚持不懈；坚持；锲而不舍 ③perform v．履行；执行 ④responsible adj.负责的 ⑤generous adj.慷慨的 ⑥strong adj.坚强的 ⑦helpful adj.有用的 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ⑧friendly adj.友好的 ⑨kind adj.友善的 determined adj.下定决心的 ⑪gentle adj.温和的 ⑫considerate adj.考虑周到的 ⑬optimistic adj.乐观的 ⑭easy-going adj.随和的 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ⑮warm-hearted adj.热心的 ⑯hard-working adj.勤奋的 ⑰have the spirit of commitment有奉献精神 ⑱be recognized in this area在这一领域得到了认可 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 2．精彩句式再练 单句填空/完成句子 ①Hard work can pay ___． ②When _______(fail) in exams，we should reflect on our weak points and do countless exercises rather than drown ourselves in sorrow or disappointment. ③他出生在贫穷/富裕的家庭。 He ___________ a poor/rich family. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ④他把“治病救人”放在首位，难怪他赢得了人们的广泛尊重。 He puts “curing the sickness to save the patient” first，and ___________________ he wins wide respect from others. ⑤他是一个意志坚定且顽强不屈的人。 He is ____________________________． ⑥他参了军，在部队里他加入了共产党并参加了多次战斗。 He joined the army，during which he joined the Communist Party and ____________ many battles. ⑦我们把他作为我们的榜样。 We _____________ our model. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Ⅰ 介绍一位英雄人物 ►文体感知 人物介绍是一种以写人记事为主的文体。写人时主要交代清楚人物的生平；介绍人物事迹时一般以事情发生的先后为顺序，包括出生与童年、兴趣与工作、勤勉与成功、成就与影响等方面。 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ►写作技巧 写作时应注意以下几个方面： 1．突出重点，略加点评。一个人一生所做的事情很多，突出主要活动和事迹来写。在人物简介中，要对人物作简短的评论。点评可放在开头，也可放在中间或末尾。点评务必简洁明了。 2．叙述精练，避免渲染。人物简介，即使是介绍人物的重要活动和事迹，也务必做到高度精练，不可过度渲染。 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ►典例展示 假定你是李华，校刊英语专栏正在征集以“A War Hero”为题的英文短文。请你根据所给提示，写一篇介绍战斗英雄的文章投稿。 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 英雄人物 董存瑞 主要经历 1929年出生于河北怀来县一户贫苦农民家庭。1945年参加八路军(the Eighth Route Army)。1947年3月，加入中国共产党(the Communist Party of China)。1948年在解放隆化县的战斗中他舍身炸碉堡(blockhouse )，英勇牺牲 你的评价 …… UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [审题谋篇] 确定体裁、话题 体裁：记叙文 话题：描写英雄人物 确定时态、人称 时态：一般过去时为主 人称：第三人称为主 布局文章架构 首段：姓名、出生日期、出生地等 中段：主要英雄事迹 尾段：对英雄的评价 列出核心要点 1.介绍英雄董存瑞的相关经历和事迹 2.发表个人看法以及感想 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [实践应用] 1．完成句子 ①董存瑞是一位战斗英雄，1929年出生于河北省怀来县的一户贫苦农民家庭。 Dong Cunrui，__________，was born in a poor peasant family in 1929 in Huailai County，Hebei province.(名词短语作同位语) UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ②1945年，他参加了八路军，并参加了多次战斗。 In 1945，he ____________________________ and ____________ many battles. ③1947年3月，他加入中国共产党。 In March，1947，he ___________________________________． UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ④1948年，在解放隆化县的战斗中，从一座桥上射出的六条火舌拦住了解放军的道路。 In 1948，during the battle for the liberation of Longhua County，six jets of fire from a bridge ___________________ the People's Liberation Army troops. ⑤这座桥是敌人建造的碉堡。 The bridge was a blockhouse ______________________________． UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ⑥董存瑞提出要炸掉它。在做这件事时，他英勇牺牲了。 Dong Cunrui offered to blow it up.__________________________，he died a hero. ⑦他的故事激励着一代又一代的中国青年学习革命精神，为祖国做贡献。 His story has inspired generations of China's youth ________________________________________________________________． UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 2．句式升级 ⑧用强调句升级句③ _____________________________________________________________ 3．靓化成篇 结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [参考范文] A War Hero Dong Cunrui，a war hero，was born in a poor peasant family in Huailai County，Hebei province in 1929. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 In 1945，he joined the Eighth Route Army and took part in many battles.It was in March，1947 that he joined the Communist Party of China.In 1948，during the battle for the liberation of Longhua County，six jets of fire from a bridge blocked the path of the People's Liberation Army troops.The bridge was a blockhouse (which was) built by the enemy.Dong Cunrui offered to blow it up.In doing so/When he did so，he died a hero. His story has inspired generations of China's youth to learn the revolutionary spirit and make contributions to our country. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ►实战演练 假定你是李华，你们学校正在组织同学们学习中国工程院院士陈薇的典型事迹，请根据以下要点写一篇文章。内容主要包括： 1．研发疫苗的背景； 2．研发过程； 3．被授予“人民英雄”称号。 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [参考范文] There are still different viruses in the world，such as Ebola virus，which seriously threaten people's lives and property. Chen Wei，an academician of the Chinese Academy of Engineering，often worked around the clock on the vaccines against viruses.After numerous calculations and innovations，Chen's team finally developed a series of vaccines after successful animal tests and clinical trials. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Having long been engaged in the systematic research of biological defense，new vaccines and new biological drugs，and breaking numerous technical barriers with remarkable achievements，Chen Wei is worthy of “the People's Hero”． UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Ⅱ 读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 No matter how small you are，you can also give help or support to others.I didn't understand these words until I saw my grandfather weep that day. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 I grew up in Southern California，and my family often went to Disneyland，Knott's Berry Farm，and Sea World.The highlight of those park visits for me was always the evening activities when there would be fireworks. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 As I grew older and more observant，I noticed that my grandfather would go missing just before the fireworks were scheduled to start and reappear shortly after they finished.I asked my mother about this and was told that Grandpa didn't like to hear the noise of the explosions.They reminded him of the war and his fellows who died in the war.So every time there was fireworks he would go inside the bathrooms until they were done.I felt surprised because my grandfather was such a strong man. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 One summer night，somewhere near my tenth birthday，my family and I exited a ride just in time to hear over the loudspeakers，“In only two minutes，the lights will be turned off around the Rivers of America，and Disneyland will present their fireworks in the skies over the park.” At this moment，Grandpa was just in front of me，and when he heard the announcement，he started jogging ahead without a word to anyone.Without really thinking，I took off after him，against the orders of my mother，who repeatedly called after me to stay with the rest of the family.Grandpa，unaware that I was behind him，tried desperately to walk through the masses of people who were stopped in the street waiting for the show to begin. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 As he tried to reach the restrooms，the first shell broke in the skies above us.Grandpa paused and looked up，just looking as if he had been hit by a shot.And then he kept moving forward.As shell after shell burst overhead，he struggled forward and almost fell over before he could sit onto a bench nearby. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： Instantly，I went forward and was by his side.________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： When the fireworks show ended，he straightened suddenly and wiped the tears.______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [巧读文] 1．读要素 Who：I，my grandfather，my mother Where：Disneyland When：One summer night UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 What：The author's grandfather was afraid of the sound of fireworks，which reminded him of the war and his comrades who died in it.On the night of the author's tenth birthday，the Disneyland will set off fireworks over the park.After hearing this，the author's grandfather ran forward without a word to find a restroom to hide. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 2．读双线(情节线、情感线) 情节线： UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 情感线： surprised→nervous UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [妙构思] 1．读首句，定方向 Paragraph 1： 由续写第一段首句“我立刻走到他身边”可推知，第一段可写作者安慰祖父的详细过程。由续写第二段首句“烟花表演结束时，他突然直起身来擦眼泪”可知，第一段结束的时候要提到作者对祖父的安慰，祖父的情绪变化是高潮。 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： 由续写第二段首句“烟花表演结束时，他突然直起身来擦眼泪”并结合上文提到的细节可推知，第二段可描写祖父感谢作者以及作者的感悟。 UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 2．巧设问，定细节 Paragraph 1： (1)What did the author see from Grandpa? ________________ (2)What happened to Grandpa? ______________________________________________________________ UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 (3)What would the author do? ______________________________________________ (4)How would the story develop? _____________________ UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： (1)What would Grandpa say? ________________ (2)What did they do? _____________________ (3)What did the author think? ______________________________________________________________ UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [雕句式] 根据提示升级下列句子 1．He looked up at me in surprise.I saw fear on the face that had only shown strength and kindness before. →____________________________________________________________________________________________________________(时间状语从句) UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 2．People were absorbed in the show.No one noticed us on that bench as we sat for what seemed like hours ...a child supporting a grown man. →_________________________________________________________________________________________ ...a child supporting a grown man.(形容词短语作状语) UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 3．While I was walking through the crowd，I knew that I ought to never mention this to anyone. →_________________________，I knew that I ought to never mention this to anyone.(省略句) UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [成美文] Paragraph 1： Instantly，I went forward and was by his side.______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： When the fireworks show ended，he straightened suddenly and wiped the tears.______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [参考范文] Paragraph 1： Instantly，I went forward and was by his side. And when he looked up at me in surprise，I saw fear on the face that had only shown strength and kindness before.I grasped his hand firmly.It was trembling and seemed much weaker than I remembered.Grandpa sunk into my arms.His breath was labored and quick，and he wept soundlessly.I kept perfectly still and didn't say a word.Absorbed in the show，no one noticed us on that bench as we sat for what seemed like hours ...a child supporting a grown man. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： When the fireworks show ended，he straightened suddenly and wiped the tears.He calmed himself for just a moment，and then put his arms around me and said，“Thanks，child.” Seconds later，he was on his feet，declaring that we should find the others and leading me into the crowd by the hand.I once again felt his strong hand.Walking through the crowd，I knew that I ought to never mention this to anyone.At the same time，I realized that however little one is，he can offer help and support to others. UNIT 3　War and peace 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 课时梯级训练(十二) 单元综合检测(三) 谢 谢 off failing it's no wonder that strong-willed and unyielding took part in regard him as a war hero joined the Eighth Route Army took part in joined the Communist Party of China blocked the path of (which was) built by the enemy In doing so/When he did so to learn the revolutionary spirit and make contributions to our country It was in March，1947 that he joined the Communist Party of China. fear on the face trembling ...His breath was labored and quick，and he wept soundlessly. kept perfectly still and didn't say a word ... Grandpa recovered ... Thanks，child ... find their family ... When he looked up at me in surprise，I saw fear on the face that had only shown strength and kindness before. Absorbed in the show，no one noticed us on that bench as we sat for what seemed like hours Walking through the crowd $$