读后续写公开课课件以及教案--动作描写（如何构建动作链）课件-2025届高三下学期英语二轮复习专项

How can we describe actions vividly? Action chains in Continuation Writing action chains 动作链 open the door put the elephant in the fridge close the door 将结果性的动作，分解成更细致的连贯性的微动作，使动作结果过程化。 Tip 1: 动作三连结构（A, B and C结构） Pre-action（先前动作） Trans-action(过渡动作) Post-action (后续动作) took off the clothes The boys rushed to the lake, + Describe：男孩们跳入湖中嬉戏。 jump = + 冲向湖边 脱掉衣服 跳入湖中 and jumped into the water. A B C 构建动作链 Tip 1 : →动作三连结构 A, B and C 3 She dashed forward, + hug = + 冲向前 跪下 抱住孩子 A B C knelt down her arms. and hugged her son into Describe：她抱住了孩子。 Tip 1 : →动作三连结构 A, B and C 4 尖叫 奔跑 跳入井中 + + screamed ran away jumped into the well The man screamed, ran away and jumped into the well. Tip 1: 动作三连结构（A, B and C结构） 环顾四周 躺倒在地 用纸盖住脸 + + glanced around lay down on the ground covered her face with a piece of paper She glanced around, lay down on the ground and covered her face with a piece of paper. Tip 1: 动作三连结构（A, B and C结构） ? Tip 2 Non-finite verbs (分词作状语) ① 主+谓, doing sth.（主动） / Doing sth. （主动）, 主＋谓 She rushed happily into the rain. She sang and danced. She rushed happily into the rain, singing and dancing. 哪吒跳下来。 Nezha jumped off the wall. heard Nezha ______ mom's words, _______ and _______ off the wall. smiled jumped 动作链： 非谓语动词： _______ mom's words, Nezha smiled and jumped off the wall. Hearing ②Having done sth, 主+谓 等了三个小时, 他被告知票被卖完了。 动作1 动作2 后发生的动作---用谓语动词 主动且先发生---用非谓语动词表示（having done） Having waited for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out. ② 同一主语动作有先后关系时—— Having done sth(先), 主+谓(后) queue Example ③ Done sth. , 主+谓 孩子感动哭了。 孩子被感动 ＋ 孩子哭了 The child was moved by the story. The child began to cry. _______by the story, the child began to cry. ③动作与主语逻辑关系为被动时 —— Done sth. , 主+谓 Moved Example delightedly, excitedly... angrily, anxiously... sadly, heart-brokenly,... surprisedly,... quickly, bravely.... Emotion Movement Tip 3: Add other modifiers （修饰语） 1) Add adverbs The man let out a scream _________, ran away _________ and jumped into the well _________. 这位男子紧张地尖叫，赶紧跑开，勇敢地跳入井中。 Practice nervously quickly bravely Hearing mom's words, Nezha smiled ___________ and jumped off the wall _______________. Hearing mom's words, Nezha smiled and jumped off the wall. happily 添加副词： quickly surprise Nezha looked at his mom sadness 2) Add prepositional phrases（介词短语） anger fear in high spirits in When Nezha came, the villagers fled out of the house__________. in fear Hearing mom's words, Nezha smiled cheerfully and jumped off the wall briskly. 添加介词短语： Hearing mom's words, Nezha smiled cheerfully and jumped off the wall briskly____________________________________. in high spirits 他欣喜若狂，在雨中又唱又跳。 (2021年浙江高考) 2. 爸爸冲了进来，静静地站着，然后突然大笑起来。(2021年 浙江卷)                       3.老师走上前，拍了拍我的肩膀，温柔地说: “有志者，事竟成。”(2023) "where there is a will, there is a way. " Summary and Homework 主语+谓语，doing and doing A, B and C 结构 Summary and Homework 4.她在街上漫无目的地逛了好几个小时以后，感到有点饿，想吃点东西。 5.她瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。 6.听完后深受鼓励，David伸出双臂抱住了我并微笑着说：“ 我可以做到！” (2022年 新高考I )  Done sth. , 主+谓 Having done sth, 主+谓 A, B and C 结构 Lavf55.33.100 $$