内容正文:
Section Ⅳ 写作指导
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A peacock(孔雀)was very unhappy with her
ugly voice,so she spent most of her days
complaining about it.
“It is true that you cannot sing,”said the fox,
“but look how beautiful you are!”
“Oh,but what good is all this beauty,”cried
the peacock,“with such an unpleasant voice!”
“Listen,”said the fox,“each one owns
something good:you have such beauty; the
nightingale (夜莺)has her songs;and the owl(猫
头鹰)has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice,
you would still complain about another thing. Why
cant you just be happy about what you have already
got?”
请从这则寓言中提炼出一个恰当的主题,写
一篇80词左右的英文读后感。内容包括:
1.简要概括这则寓言;
2.谈谈你的理解或感受;
3.以你或你身边的人或事加以论证。
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一、审题谋篇
体裁:议论文——寓言故事评论
人称:第三人称
时态:一般现在时
文章结构:
第一段:寓言简介;
第二段:得到的启示;
第三段:举例论证并总结观点。
二、要点陈述
1.这则寓言讲的是一只孔雀抱怨自己的声音太
难听,忽视了自己真正的美丽。
The fable is about a peacock who complains
about her ugly voice and ignores her true
beauty.
2.但是一只狐狸建议她满足于她所拥有的。
But a fox advises her to be content with what
she owns.
3.他各科成绩都很好,在大多数考试中都名列
前十。
He does very well in all subjects,and ranks as
Top 10 in most of the exams.
4.他永远也不会知道我们是多么钦佩他!事实
上,没有人能在各个方面都发展得很好,即使
他/她是人才。
He will never know how much we admire him!
In fact,nobody can develop very well in all
aspects even if he / she is a talent .
三、句式升级
1.将第1句用分词改写。
2.将第2句用宾语从句改写。
3.将第3句用分词改写。
4.将第4句用倒装句改写。
四、
连句成篇
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Section Ⅴ 读后续写技能之环境描写(二)
风霜雨雪
HI()
1. wind n.风;气流 v.刮风
2. frost n.霜 v.结霜
3. rain n.雨 v.下雨
4. snow n.雪 v.下雪
5. fog n.雾
6. shower n.阵雨
7. storm n.暴风雨
8. downpour n.倾盆大雨
9. snowstorm n.暴风雪
10. typhoon n.台风
11. tornado n.龙卷风
12. hurricane n.飓风
13. stormy adj.有暴风雨的
14. freezing adj.极冷的
15. foggy adj.雾气茫茫的
16. frosty adj.严寒的
17. damp adj.潮湿的
HI;.
1. the pure feathery snowflakes鹅毛般纯洁的雪花
2. be covered with thick snow被厚厚的雪覆盖
3. pour with rain大雨滂沱
4. a blanket of fog / snow厚厚的一层雾/雪
5. be hit / struck by a heavy snow遭受大雪的袭击
6. a fierce / heavy storm狂风暴雨
7. a gust of wind一阵狂风
8. a rainy season多雨的季节
9. the dark raining evening漆黑的雨夜
10. a stormy night暴风雨之夜
11. exposed to four winds of heaven四面受风
12. continuous / constant rains连绵不断的雨
13. in the blinding rain在茫茫大雨中
14. be buried in snow深埋在雪中
15. a timely / seasonable rain及时雨/好雨
16. a sharp / hard / severe frost酷寒
17. frost damage霜冻害
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1. The windows had frosted over.
窗子结满了霜。
2. An icy biting wind stung my face.
刺骨的狂风刺痛了我的脸。
3. The wind is whispering in the forest.
风在森林中沙沙作响。
4. There is frost on the ground and snow is forecast.
地上结霜了,而且预报说会有雪。
5. A cool breeze wafted through my hair.
一阵凉风吹过我的头发。
6. Its pouring really hard.
大雨倾盆而下。
7. The wind is getting up and it is becoming
cloudy.
风势渐大,天空开始阴云密布。
8. The thick fog blanketed the field.
浓雾笼罩着整个大地。
9. Mild breeze flowed through my hair together with
faint sounds far away.
微风拂过我的头发,伴着远处微弱的声音。
10. The rain came pouring down,the streams rose,
and the wind blew and beat against the house.
大雨倾盆而下,河水上涨,风吹打着房子。
11. The dark clouds packed with tons of water ready
to pour out anytime.
乌云挤满了大量雨水,随时准备倾泻
。
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12. That night there came a terrific storm,with
driving rain,claps of thunder and blinding
sheets of lightning.
那天夜里下了一场可怕的暴风雨,大雨滂
沱,电闪雷鸣。
13. Gray mist and clouds were swept away in the
night by the wind.
灰色的雾和云朵在夜晚被风吹散了。
14. Its dark now and the snow is still falling,
clumps of wet flakes drifting mindlessly down,
the air moist,the sidewalk mushy underfoot.
现在天黑了,雪还在落下,一团团的雪花随
风飘落,空气潮湿,走在人行道上,脚底黏
糊糊的。
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Ⅰ.完成句子
1. The wind was blowing (风吹着) softly /
gently / comfortably / wildly / dreadfully.
2. A fierce / heavy storm (猛烈的暴风雨)now
whipped the house.
3. It can be used for devising systems to protect
against frost damage (防止霜冻害).
4. I had dreamed of streets and houses buried in
snow (被大雪埋住).
Ⅱ.翻译句子
1.一阵冷风吹过安静的公园。
2.鹅毛般纯洁的雪花在空中飞舞,像一幅美丽
的图画。
3.风雨击打房子。
4.风呼啸着,堆着阵阵飘动的雪,用雪白的颗粒
蒙蔽了黑夜。
5.柔和而寒冷的风吹过树枝,吹动了点缀在山
坡上的灌木丛。
Ⅲ.片段续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开
头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,续写
词数为100词左右。写作时尽量使用涉及“风霜
雨雪”的词汇和句式。
The sun was shining in Utrecht, the
Netherlands,when my friend Rini and I set off for
England by car. Aged 19 and 20,we were full of
the spirit of adventure.
It was so mild when we arrived in Kent that
occasionally we would stop to sunbathe. We didnt
check the forecast(预报)on our way to Cumbria.
As we drove, the weather got colder and
wilder. Snow was falling and wind was blowing as
we reached the Yorkshire Dales. We struggled on
until the storm became so heavy that we couldnt
see where we were going;the car barely moved.
With no chance of going anywhere,we waited for
the storm to pass.
The next morning, the car was buried in
snow. Everything was dark. Panic(恐慌)set in.
Staying in the car would kill us. We managed to get
out,trying to find a farm wed passed,but it was
hopeless. The storm changed everything. The sky
and the road were indistinguishable(无法分辨). I
felt ready to die. At that moment,I heard what
sounded like a dog bark. Then a figure came
towards us.“Are you both crazy?
Out for a walk in
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this weather?”the man shouted.
The man,Clifford Harker,told us he owned
the farm we had passed. He was out with his dog,
leading his sheep to safety. He told us he lived a
10minute walk away,so we followed,battling
against the storm. Ten minutes passed,and there
was nothing in sight. “How much longer?” we
begged.“Ten more minutes,”he replied.
After what seemed like a lifetime,we saw lights
in the distance.
思路点拨:
1.通读全文,把握原文要领
(1)体裁:记叙文
(2)故事主线和线索:
①作者和朋友Rini开车从荷兰到英格兰,
到了肯特时还是阳光灿烂,天气温暖,但随着他
们一路向前行驶,天气越来越冷,一场暴风雪困
住了他们。
②续写线索:看到光——到达Clifford的
家——Clifford的妻子照顾作者和朋友——作者
和朋友康复
2.细读续写段首句,推测故事情节
由续写段首句内容“在过了好像一辈子之
后,我们看到了远处的光。”可知,续写段可描写
作者和朋友终于到了Clifford的家以及在其家中
受到的待遇等
。
单元评价
Ⅰ.词汇评价
1. majority n.大部分;大多数
major adj.主要的 vi.主修n.主修课程
the / a majority of. . .大多数的……
in the / a majority占大多数
major in 主修;{ 专攻
2. complain vi. & vt.抱怨;发牢骚;投诉
complaint n.投诉;抱怨;控告
complain to sb.向某人抱怨/投诉
complain about / of sth.抱怨某事
make a complaint about . . .抱怨/投诉{ ……
3. appoint vt.任命;委派
appointment n.约会;约定;任命
appointed adj.约定的;指定的
appoint sb. as / to be . . .任命某人为……
appoint sb. to do sth. 委派某人做某事
keep / break an appointment守约/失约
at the appointed time
在约定的时间
4. scared adj.害怕的;对……感到惊慌或恐惧的
scare vt.惊吓;使害怕vi.受惊吓
scary adj.令人害怕的;吓人的;
恐怖的
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Section Ⅲ Listening and Talking,
Reading for Writing
自主预习
Ⅰ. 1. disguise 2. spill 3. tear 4. despair 5. might 6. income
7. per 8. therefore
Ⅱ. 1. harmful harmless 2. flexibility flexibly 3. tense
Ⅲ. 1. once upon a time 2. in the middle of 3. crash into. . .
4. pick oneself up 5. trip over 6. limp away 7. in tears 8. think
about doing sth. 9. complain about. . . 10. make an attempt to do
sth. 11. in despair 12. say to oneself 13. with all ones might
14. a great deal (of) 15. succeed in doing sth. 16. belong to
Ⅳ. 1. spilling the milk everywhere 2. each balancing a pot of water
on her head 3. Neither she nor her friends
Ⅴ. 1. C 2. D 3. B
要点探究
核心词汇
1.①up ②up ③out ④and
2.①into ② in ③couldnt hold back his tears ④were moved
to tears
3.①harmful ②to ③harmless
4.①have offered me a great deal of good learning advice ②runs a
great deal faster than
重点句型
1.①to do ②leading ③fixed ④Time permitting,wed better have
a rest this weekend. ⑤The clock striking 10,he went to bed.
2.① are ② am ③ wants ④ were able to persuade ⑤ is
to attend
随堂达标
Ⅰ. 1. despair 2. spilt 3. flexible 4. income 5. appointment
6. replaced 7. scholarship 8. operation 9. assistance
10. harmless
Ⅱ. 1.(1)掩饰 (2)球场 2.(1)D (2)A (3)B (4)C
(5)E
Ⅲ. 1. to test 2. himself 3. placing 4. under 5. crashed
6. anger 7. whom 8. disappointed 9. the 10. was given
Section Ⅳ 写作指导
Ⅱ.二、1. complains about 2. be content with 3. does very well in
4. even if he / she is a talent
三、1. The fable is about a peacock who complains about her ugly
voice,ignoring her true beauty. 2. But a fox advises that she be
content with what she owns. 3. He does very well in all subjects,
ranking as Top 10 in most of the exams. 4. Never will he know how
much we admire him!In fact,nobody can develop very well in all
aspects even if he / she is a talent.
四、参考范文:
The fable is about a peacock who complains about her ugly
voice,ignoring her true beauty. But a fox advises that she be content
with what she owns.
After reading it,I understand that we teenagers should find and
make good use of our advantages,stopping complaining about the
shortcomings all the time.
Many people around me make the same mistake,who only focus
on what they cannot get. Take my friend Mike as an example. He does
very well in all subjects,ranking as Top 10 in most of the exams. But he
usually complains that he cant play basketball well. Never will he know
how much we admire him!In fact,nobody can develop very well in all
aspects even if he / she is a talent. So we should stay positive and value
what we have instead of complaining too much.
Section Ⅴ 读后续写技能之环境描写(二)
四、Ⅰ. 1. The wind was blowing 2. A fierce / heavy storm
3. protect against frost damage 4. buried in snow
Ⅱ. 1. A cold breeze blew through the quiet park. 2. The pure
feathery snowflakes danced in the air,making a beautiful picture.
3. Wind and rain whipped the house. 4. The wind howled,piling
up snow in drifts,blinding the night with icewhite dust. 5. The
wind,soft but cold,clicked through tree branches and stirred the
bushes that sprinkled the slope.
Ⅲ.参考范文:
After what seemed like a lifetime,we saw lights in the distance.
We walked into the farmhouse,much to the surprise of Cliffords
wife. We were shaking and numb with cold,but alive. She ran a bath
for us,brought us her husbands clothes,and on her doctors
advice,made our bowls full of warm food. It was the first thing we
ate in almost two days and it tasted delicious. The storm left the
roads blocked,so we had to stay for several days. The couple were so
welcoming—even we were two strangers.
单元评价
Ⅰ. 1. the / a the / a in 2. to about / of about 3. as / to be to
do sth. keep / break appointed 4. to do sth. of into 5. to
do / in doing sth. in / with of 6. to (in)doing to
Ⅱ. 1.帮助某人渡过难关 2.发挥主要作用 3.对……负责
4.在某人的一生中 5.作为对……的纪念 6.(跌倒后)爬起来
7.抱怨…… 8.处于绝望中
Ⅲ. 1.动词ing 2.动词ing only to do 3.动词ing 省略to的
动词不定式
Ⅳ. 1. nothing is more precious than 2. the first to be hired as a
resident physician 3. each balancing a pot of water on her head
4. Neither she nor her friends
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