读后续写--校车司机退休的故事 讲义-四川省绵阳南山中学高2024-2025学年高一下学期3月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Peter, 60, loved his job as a school bus driver. He had been one almost all his life, loving the company of the little children who rode his bus daily. It made him feel younger and more energetic. His record was clean, without one accident during his tenure (任期), which made him a trustworthy driver. However, Mr. Clark, Peter’s boss, was concerned that he was too old to be a school bus driver and that it was time for him to retire. “You don’t have a choice here, Peter,” he said seriously. “We don’t want to invite any risk to the children who take your bus every day. We need a replacement at this stage.” “But I have a perfect record,” argued Peter. “You know, for an elderly man like me, my job is the only thing that keeps me alive. I enjoy staying with children. I want to keep my joy.” “Think about those kids, Peter,” Mr. Clark said. “I didn’t want to bring this up, but didn’t you mention before that you’ve been having some health problems lately? Would you take responsibility if something bad happened to those kids?” “There is no problem with my body now. I’m still capable of handling driving,” Peter became a bit anxious and tried to explain further. But Mr. Clark’s attitude was firm. He shook his head, emphasizing that he couldn’t afford to take any risks, as the children’s safety was the top priority. Looking at Mr. Clark’s tough attitude, Peter thought it over and very unwillingly gave in to Mr. Clark’s request. Peter decided to retire a week later. His retirement day approached pretty soon. On his last day of diving the school bus, Peter was filled with a heavy heart. As he made his usual rounds, picking up the children, he noticed that he was a bit more tired than usual. But he shrugged it off, thinking it was just the sadness of leaving his beloved job. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Suddenly, Peter felt a sharp pain in his chest. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The next day, Peter saw the boss and children come to his home with flowers. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一．文本主旨 本文围绕校车司机彼得展开，他热爱工作且有着良好的工作记录，但老板因他年龄和健康问题要求其退休。退休日当天，彼得心情沉重，开车时身体突感不适。​ 二、五要素分析​ 人物：彼得、老板克拉克先生、乘坐校车的孩子们。​ 时间：彼得退休前一周及退休当天，第二天。​ 地点：校车上、彼得家中。​ 事件：老板要求彼得退休，彼得退休当天驾驶校车时身体不适，第二天众人前往彼得家中探望。​ 起因：老板担心彼得年龄和健康问题影响孩子安全，要求其退休。​ 三、词汇积累​ sharp pain 剧痛；chest tightness 胸闷；dizzy 头晕的；sweat profusely 大量出汗。​ worried 担心的；anxious 焦虑的；relieved 宽慰的；grateful 感激的。​ pull over 停车；call for help 呼救；rush to 送往；visit 探望。​ 四、续写分析​ 衔接句：第一段开头 “Suddenly, Peter felt a sharp pain in his chest.” 直接承接上文，引出身体突发状况。第二段开头 “The next day, Peter saw the boss and children come to his home with flowers.” 自然衔接第一段彼得被送往医院后的第二天，众人前来探望的情节。​ 情节合理性：第一段描述彼得在驾驶校车时身体不适，为保证孩子安全，他努力停车并求助，符合常理。第二段众人得知消息后前往探望，表达关心与感谢，也符合人际关系逻辑。​ 情感铺垫：前文彼得对工作的热爱、退休时的不舍为后文众人对他的关心和他的感动做了情感铺垫。​ 五、情感走向​ 第一段从彼得身体不适时的紧张、焦虑，到孩子们的担心，营造出紧张氛围。第二段众人探望时，情感转为温暖、宽慰，体现人与人之间的关爱。​ 六、主题深化​ 通过彼得在身体不适时仍坚守职责保护孩子，以及众人对他的关心，深化了对责任、关爱的主题表达，也呼应了彼得与孩子们之间深厚的情感。​ 七、下水文​ 下水文一​ Suddenly, Peter felt a sharp pain in his chest. His face turned pale, and beads of sweat rolled down his forehead. Realizing the seriousness of the situation, he tried his best to stay calm. With great effort, he pulled the bus over to the side of the road. The children on the bus were frightened. Some started crying, while others asked what was wrong. Peter managed to tell them not to worry and called for help immediately. Soon, an ambulance arrived and rushed him to the hospital.​ The next day, Peter saw the boss and children come to his home with flowers. The boss looked relieved and said, “Peter, you’ve always been a responsible driver. Yesterday, even when you were in pain, you thought of the children first.” The children surrounded him, saying how much they missed him. Peter was deeply moved, his eyes filled with tears. He realized that although he had retired, his love for the children and their love for him would last forever.​ 下水文二​ Suddenly, Peter felt a sharp pain in his chest. The pain was so intense that he gasped for breath. Despite the discomfort, he knew he had to act quickly to ensure the safety of the children. With trembling hands, he firmly stepped on the brake. Then, he slumped back in his seat, feeling extremely weak. The children were in a panic. One brave child called the emergency number. Moments later, paramedics arrived and took Peter to the hospital.​ The next day, Peter saw the boss and children come to his home with flowers. The boss said with gratitude, “Peter, your selfless act yesterday once again proved that you are an outstanding driver. Your sense of responsibility is truly admirable.” The children gave him handmade cards, expressing their love. Peter’s heart was filled with warmth. Even in retirement, he knew his bond with the children and the school would never be broken. 【答案】 Suddenly Peter felt a sharp pain in his chest. His hands trembled on the steering wheel, and for a moment he lost control. The children in the bus started to scream in feat In that split second, visions of the children’s bright smiles during every ride flashed before his eyes. “I mustn’t let anything happen to them. I mustn’t....,” Peter endured the severe pain, murmuring to himself . Fortunately, with his last bit of strength and his years of driving experience, he managed to pull the bus over safely to the side of the road. The next day, Peter saw the boss and children come to his home with flowers. The children handed him flowers and a drawing titled “Our Hero, Mr. Peter.” Tears welled up in Peter’s eyes Mr. Clark softened his tone and said, “Thank you for your quick thinking and dedication during such a critical moment. You’ve fulfilled your promise to keep the children safe.” Then he offered Peter an honorary position as a safety advisor. Peter felt a deep sense of fulfillment, knowing he could still play a meaningful role in ensuring the children’s safety and staying connected to the job he cherished. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$