2025年江苏省南京市英语写作复习 主题一 人与自我 Topic 4 自我认识与自我提升课件

Topic 4 自我认识与自我提升 主题一 人与自我 2025江苏英语高频话题写作 南京市英语一轮复习 词句积累 壹 写作迁移练 叁 写作三阶攻关 贰 Topic 4　自我认识与自我提升(2022苏州) 命题角度探索 1. 近5年江苏真题：讲述对“熟能生巧”这句话的理解，以及自己的经历与感悟(2022苏州)。 2. 近3年全国真题： ①介绍自己或他人(2024天津，2024新疆，2024青海省卷；2023天津)；②分享自己成长变化的经历及感悟(2024贵州，2024资阳；2023丽水，2023郴州)；③介绍如何成为新时代青年(2024山西；2023吉林)。 词汇积累 介绍自己 或他人 个人信息：age年龄　 　birth出生　 　birthday生日 height身高 name名字 weight重量 外貌：fit健康的　 thin瘦的 tall高的 　 beautiful美丽的　 handsome英俊的 long 长的 heavy重的 strong强壮的 lovely可爱的 common普通的 词句积累 介绍自己 或他人 爱好：interest兴趣　 dance 跳舞　 draw画画 sing唱歌 violin小提琴 piano钢琴 guitar吉他 music音乐 play sports做运动 性格：humorous幽默的　　 outgoing外向的　　 confident自信的　 capable有能力 direct直率的 easy­going随和的 gentle温柔的 honest诚实的 分享自己成长变化的经历及感悟 accept changes 接受变化　　　stay curious保持好奇 step by step一步一步地 make progress 取得进步 study hard 努力学习 express oneself表达自己 learn from good people向优秀的人学习 form/get into the habit of reading养成阅读习惯 insist on doing everything 坚持做每件事 stay away from bad habits远离坏习惯 learn something by heart 用心学一些东西 介绍如何成为新时代青年 all­round development全面发展　　　　 keep lifelong learning坚持终身学习 develop creativity培养创造力 lead by example以身作则 make a difference对……有影响 stay curious保持好奇 join in/take part in community service参与社区服务 佳句应用 角度 1 介绍自己或他人 1. I am confident in my excellent communication skills and sense of teamwork. 2. I'm so humorous that I often make my parents laugh when they're under stress. 3. As the saying goes, “Beauty lies not only in appearance, but also in the heart.” 4. Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. 5. Sometimes you even lacked courage to ask the teachers problems about learning. 角度 2 分享自己成长变化的经历及感悟 1. You should develop a good sense of time management. 2. I used to be very different, but as I grew older, I learned many new things about myself. 3. I want to get into the habit of taking an active part in all kinds of activities. 4. Make an effort to smile and make eye contact with others to appear kinder. 5. No matter what happens, we should be confident about ourselves. 角度 3 介绍如何成为新时代青年 1. Liu Lingli has worked as a teacher for a special education school for 30 years. 2. Our lives are influenced by our general outlook on life, experiences and how we choose to see things. 3. Life is full of pleasure, pain, growth, happiness and sadness. Those can make us better and wiser. 4. Step out of your comfort zone by trying new experiences and meeting new people. 5. Try to join in more social activities and communicate with different people. 6. Attend social events and gatherings to practice being more outgoing. 1. Never say die. 永不言败。 2. No pain, no gain. 一分耕耘，一分收获。 3. Everyone has a price. 天生我材必有用。 4. Do nothing by halves. 凡事不可半途而废。 俗语谚语 5. Beginning is always difficult.万事开头难。 6. Don't try to run before you walk.循序渐进。 7. Success belongs to the perseverance. 坚持就是胜利。 8. Where there's a will, there's a way. 有志者，事竟成。 9. Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 今日事，今日毕。 ①定主题： ______________________-_ ②定文体：________________________　 ③定人称： ____________________ ④定时态： ____________________ ⑤定要点： ____________________ -__________________________________ ⑥定立意： ____________________ -__________________________________ 对新时代青年的看法；自我奋斗的故事；奋斗的意义 写作三阶攻关 (2024山西改编) 假如你是李华，你将作为中国青少年代表在国际青少年交流沙龙上进行发言，主题为“Youth is a time for fighting”。请用英语写一篇发言稿。提示如下： 1. Your idea about what young people should be like 2. One of your stories about fighting 3. The meaning of fighting 如何成为新时代青年 一阶 审好题 定方向 应用文 第一人称 一般过去时 引导学生自我奋斗，争做新时代青年 “Youth is a time for fighting”主题发言稿 注意：1.短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80～100。 ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 二阶 列框架 写句子 Youth is a time for fighting 开篇：Your ideas about what young people should be like 正文：One of your stories about fighting 结尾：The meaning of fighting 开篇：Your ideas about what young people should be like As young people, we should be_____ (brave/confident/creative/...) and be willing to fight. 引出话题 正文：One of your stories about fighting 描述自 己遇到 的问题 When I entered the middle school, I_____ (feel lonely/don't know what to do/how to deal with/...). I thought I failed in my life because I_____(have difficulty (in) making friends with new classmates/ can't be used to the new environment/...) . After several days, I decided to change the situation. I_______ (try joining different clubs/...) Gradually, I________ (make some close friends /enjoy the company of my new classmates/...). 如何通过自身努力和奋斗解决问题 结尾：The meaning of fighting I was proud of my progress and knew______ (I should never give up easily/the importance of walking out of my comfort zone/...). Fighting makes me_____________(have more confidence /face challenges/better and better/...). It is the brightest color of youth. 奋斗的好 处和自己的感受 普通范文 高分范文 As young people，we should be brave，confident, creative and be willing to fight. When I entered the middle school，I felt lonely and didn't know what to do with it. 　As young people, we should be brave, confident，creative and be willing to fight. When I entered the middle school, I felt lonely and didn't know how to deal with this kind of feeling. 三阶 成篇章 赏美文 普通范文 高分范文 I thought I failed in my life because connecting with others was not easy for me. And I couldn't be used to the new environment.After several days，I decided to change the situation. I tried joining different clubs，and actively took part in school activities. Gradually, I made some close friends. It made me feel like I failed in my life because it was not easy for me to connect with others and be used to the new environment. After several days, I made up my mind to change the situation. I tried joining different clubs, and took an active part in school activities. Gradually, I built friendships with people around me. 普通范文 高分范文 I was proud of my progress and knew that I should never give up easily. Just try to make a change and fight bravely. Fighting makes me better and better. Fighting is the brightest color of youth. I was proud of my progress and knew that I should never give up easily. Just walk out of my comfort zone and fight bravely. It's fighting that makes me better and better. Fighting is the brightest color of youth. 普通范文 高分范文 高阶范文赏析 亮点表达：“didn't know how to deal with this kind of feeling”展现了作者内心的挣扎，在蜕变之后使用了“walk out of your comfort zone”，表达生动形象。 (2024贵阳改编)假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“The Change Made Me...” (改变让我……)的征文活动。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿。要点如下： ①定主题：　为为为为为为为 ②定文体：_____为为为为为为___ ③定人称：____为为为为为为为__ ④定时态：　为接为为为为为 ⑤定要点：______为为为_为为为_为为接__ _________________为___ ⑥定立意：____为______________ _________________________为___ 一阶 审好题 定方向 讲述个人成长变化 记叙文 第一人称 一般过去在时 个人改变；背后的故事；自我感受 引导学生关注个人成长变化，成为更好的自己 写作迁移练 “The Change Made Me...”征文活动 注意：1.短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80～100(标题已给出，不计入总词数)。 二阶　列框架　写句子 开头：Everything is changing.../I believe... 中间：I used to be impatient.../I made up my mind to... 结尾：I am proud of my change...　 三阶　成篇章　修美文 The Change Made Me Better ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— The Change Made Me Better Everything is changing，and I am also changing. I believe I will get better and better. I was impatient and not serious about everything. Therefore，each time I took an exam，I was busy finishing the test paper quickly and didn't check the answers. As a result, I got poor grades. All my friends did better than me in the exam，so I was depressed and decided to make some changes. I reminded myself to pay attention to every detail. Slowly，I became more careful and my grades got better and better. I am proud of my change，because it has made me better. 普通范文 Everything is changing，and so am I. I believe I will get better and better. I used to be impatient and not serious about everything I did. Therefore，each time I took an exam，I was busy finishing the test paper quickly without checking if it was right，which had led to my poor grades. The Change Made Me Better 高分范文 Seeing that all my friends did better than me in the exam，I was depressed and made up my mind to make some changes. I reminded myself to pay attention to every detail. Slowly，I became more focused and my grades got better and better. I am proud of my change，because it has made me better. $$