读后续写：帮助迷路男孩故事 讲义-广东省茂名市5+2校际联盟2024-2025学年高二下学期3月质量检测英语试题

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 During my year as an exchange student in Spain, I had always been eager to fully immerse (沉浸) myself in the local culture and make a positive difference. Little did I know that this desire would teach me a valuable lesson about the power of kindness. It all began on a sunny Saturday morning when I was exploring a small town near my host family’s home. As I wandered through the narrow, winding streets, I noticed a crowd gathered in the central square. Full of curiosity, I made my way over to see what was happening. To my surprise, I found a group of people standing around a young boy who looked to be about ten years old. He was sitting on the ground, his face with a mix of fear and confusion. Tears streamed down his cheeks as he tried to communicate with the onlookers who were mostly ignoring him. My heart went out to the boy, and without hesitation, I approached him. Using the limited Spanish I’d learned, I asked him what was wrong. It turned out that he had got lost while visiting his grandmother and couldn’t find his way back. The problem was that his grandmother lived in a nearby village, but he didn’t know the name of the street or have any form of identification on him. Determined to help, I decided to take him to find his grandmother. I started by asking the people in the square if they knew the boy or had any information about his grandmother. Most shook their heads. Not wanting to give up, I decided to expand my search. I took the boy to the local police station, hoping the police could assist us. However, communication proved to be a challenge as the policemen spoke in rapid Spanish, which I struggled to understand. Frustration (沮丧) began to set in, but I reminded myself that I was here to make a difference. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Failing to communicate with the police I decided to try a different way. _________________________________________________________________ Within minutes, we received a response from the boy’s grandmother. _________________________________________________________________ 帮助迷路男孩故事续写 一、续写分析​ 第一段​ 情节发展：主人公在与警察沟通受阻后，想到利用手机翻译软件向警察说明情况，接着又采取在社交媒体发布男孩照片及相关情况的方法来扩大寻找范围。这一段重点在于展现主人公积极寻找解决问题的办法，推动故事朝着解决男孩迷路困境的方向发展。​ 写作手法：运用了动作描写，如 “took out my phone”“typed in”“posted” 等，生动地呈现主人公的行动过程；同时有心理描写，“With a glimmer of hope” 体现主人公在困境中不放弃的心态。​ 第二段​ 情节发展：男孩的奶奶看到社交媒体上的帖子后联系警察，随后赶到警察局与男孩团聚。主人公见证这一温馨时刻，并从中获得关于善良、坚持和同理心的深刻感悟。此段为故事的高潮与结局部分，着重描绘团聚场景以及主人公的内心成长。​ 写作手法：通过对人物情感的刻画，如 “overjoyed”“sobbing with relief”“thanked me profusely” 等，增强故事的感染力；结尾运用议论手法升华主题。​ 二、故事线​ 帮助开端：主人公在小镇广场发现迷路男孩，决定帮助他找奶奶。​ 遇到困难：与男孩沟通不畅，向广场上的人及警察求助均受阻。​ 积极尝试：利用手机翻译软件向警察说明情况，在社交媒体发布男孩信息。 问题解决：奶奶看到帖子联系警察，与男孩团聚，主人公获得成长感悟。​ 三、高频单词​ translate [trænsˈleɪt] v. 翻译​ glimmer [ˈɡlɪmə(r)] n. 微光，一丝​ database [ˈdeɪtəbeɪs] n. 数据库​ response [rɪˈspɒns] n. 回应​ overjoyed [ˌəʊvəˈdʒɔɪd] adj. 极为高兴的​ gratitude [ˈɡrætɪtjuːd] n. 感激​ perseverance [ˌpɜːsɪˈvɪərəns] n. 毅力​ empathy [ˈempəθi] n. 同理心​ 四、短语​ in real - time 实时地​ with a glimmer of hope 怀着一线希望​ search for 寻找​ along with 连同，和…… 一起​ a short while later 一会儿之后​ run into one's arms 跑进某人的怀抱​ thank sb. profusely 再三感谢某人​ make a huge difference 产生巨大影响​ 五、主旨升华句​ This encounter taught me that kindness is a universal language that can break through any barrier, be it language or distance.（这次相遇让我明白，善良是一种通用语言，能够突破任何障碍，无论是语言还是距离。）​ The experience not only rescued a lost boy but also kindled a deeper sense of responsibility within me to reach out to those in need, regardless of the challenges.（这段经历不仅解救了一个迷路的男孩，还在我内心点燃了一种更深刻的责任感，让我无论面对何种挑战，都要向那些需要帮助的人伸出援手。）​ In a foreign land, every act of kindness becomes a bridge that connects hearts and cultures, and I am honored to have played a part in building such a bridge.（在异国他乡，每一个善举都成为连接心灵与文化的桥梁，我很荣幸能为搭建这样一座桥梁贡献一份力量。）​ This incident served as a powerful reminder that even the smallest efforts, when driven by genuine compassion, can create ripples of hope that spread far and wide.（这件事有力地提醒我们，即使是最微小的努力，只要是出于真诚的同情，也能激起希望的涟漪，广泛传播。）​ Through this journey of helping the lost boy, I learned that true cultural immersion comes not only from exploring places but also from showing kindness and understanding to its people.（通过这次帮助迷路男孩的经历，我明白真正的文化融入不仅来自于探索地域，还来自于对当地人民展现出的善良和理解。）​ 六、写作示范​ 示范一​ Failing to communicate with the police, I decided to try a different way. I recalled an app I had installed on my phone which specialized in voice - to - voice translation. With a sense of determination, I launched the app and began speaking in English, detailing the boy's situation. The translated Spanish words echoed from my phone speaker. The police officers, finally grasping the situation, quickly initiated a more targeted search in their databases. Additionally, I took advantage of the power of social media. I snapped a clear photo of the boy and wrote a heartfelt appeal, including all the details I knew. I shared it across various local community platforms, praying for a quick response.​ Within minutes, we received a response from the boy’s grandmother. She had been anxiously looking for her grandson and happened to see my post. She called the police in a state of extreme excitement. When she rushed into the police station, the boy's face lit up with joy. He sprinted towards her, hugging her tightly. The grandmother turned to me, her eyes brimming with tears of gratitude. She thanked me over and over again. As I witnessed this touching reunion, I realized that kindness has no boundaries. It can overcome language hurdles and bring warmth to the coldest of situations. This experience engraved in my heart the significance of never giving up and always being ready to show compassion.​ 示范二​ Failing to communicate with the police, I decided to try a different way. I knew that time was of the essence, so I quickly opened a language translation website on my phone. I painstakingly typed out the entire story in English and hit the translate button. Handing my phone to the police, I gestured for them to read the Spanish version. They nodded in understanding and immediately started cross - referencing the information with their records. Meanwhile, I had an epiphany. I decided to record a short video of the boy, explaining his situation in English, and posted it on a popular local forum. I hoped that someone might recognize him.​ Within minutes, we received a response from the boy’s grandmother. She had been scouring the internet for any news of her missing grandson and came across my post. She called the police station, her voice trembling with relief. Soon, she arrived, out of breath but filled with joy. The boy let out a cry of happiness and rushed into her embrace. The grandmother showered me with praises and gratitude. This encounter made me understand that in a foreign land, a simple act of kindness can have a profound impact. It not only united a family but also made me realize that perseverance and empathy are the keys to making a positive difference in the world around us.​ 参考答案 Failing to communicate with the police, I decided to try a different way. I remembered seeing a library nearby and thought that maybe the librarian could help translate for us. With a regained sense of purpose, I grabbed the boy’s hand and we made our way to the library. The librarian, a kind-hearted elderly woman, greeted us warmly. I explained our situation to her, and she immediately took charge. Not only did she translate for us, but she also called the boy’s grandmother using the contact information the boy provided. Within minutes, we received a response from the boy’s grandmother. Relief washed over the boy’s face as he heard his grandmother’s voice on the other end of the line. The librarian then provided us with detailed directions and even drew a map for us to find the village. Finally, we reached the house of the boy’s grandmother. On seeing her grandson, the boy’s grandmother hugged him tightly, tears streaming down her face. Meanwhile, she thanked me deeply and sincerely. This experience taught me that wherever you are, a simple act of kindness can have a far-reaching impact. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$