读后续写 火灾故事续写 讲义 广西钦州市示范性高中2023-2024学年高一下学期第三阶段考试英语试题

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。 Thomas and Christine Noctor have lived and raised their family in the home for three decades. They and their 12-year-old grandson Dean, who lives with them, had most of their personal belongings damaged or destroyed after a fire broke out in Thomas’ home office on Saturday evening. Ally Noctor was in the home with her mother, father, nephew Dean, and brother James when the incident happened. “My mom has COPD （慢性阻寒性肺病） so I said ‘just get out the back’, and she took the dog out the back,” Ally recalled. “My brother came running down looking for a fire extinguisher （灭火器）, and my dad was screaming, ‘Fire !’” The fire started in the box room It’s Thomas home office. He’d just done it up. It was clearly an electrical fault but no one thought at the time to turn off the electricity. The room started filling with smoke quickly and they had to leave immediately. The house is located just a short walk away from the fire station. But when neighbors called, the available trucks were already out — so nearly 20 minutes had passed before the fire crew arrived. Thankfully, they managed to prevent the fire from spreading to the attic （阁楼） or to any more homes in the community. The family then went back inside the house to investigate what had happened and survey the damage caused. Dean’s gaming PC was melted, toys were melted, and even the shower was melted. All their clothes couldn’t be taken out. “The downstairs is okay, but there is smoke damage and water damage. And all of the upstairs is completely damaged. My mom is still in shock. She’s just staring into space,” Ally said. But Ally was quick to praise her community, who were right there to help the Noctors get out of the house the moment they sensed trouble and every one of the family got timely help. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置上作答。 Ally ran out the door without shoes on when escaping. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The temporary house is OK but New Year may be difficult. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 火灾故事续写 一、续写分析​ 第一段续写分析：此段围绕 Ally 逃生后的遭遇展开。故事线从火灾发生时 Ally 赤脚跑出家门，到邻居们对她及家人的及时救助。高频单词有 escape（逃跑）、chaos（混乱）、distress（痛苦）、neighbor（邻居）、support（支持）。短语包括 ran out（跑出）、in the chaos（在混乱中）、watching... billowing（看着…… 滚滚而来）、brought... over（拿来）、provide... for（为…… 提供）。主旨升华句如：“In times of crisis, the kindness of neighbors can turn a tragedy into a moment of hope.”（在危机时刻，邻居的善意能将悲剧转变为充满希望的时刻。）“The immediate response of the community showed that humanity shines brightest in the face of adversity.”（社区的迅速反应表明，人性在逆境中最为闪耀。）​ 第二段续写分析：该段聚焦于火灾后家庭在新年期间的状况以及社区的关爱。故事线从家庭难以适应临时住所、新年临近的悲伤，到社区组织特别聚会带来温暖。高频单词有 temporary（临时的）、adjust（适应）、celebration（庆祝）、kindness（善良）、community（社区）。短语有 trying to adjust to（努力适应）、the approaching New Year（即将到来的新年）、loom with（笼罩着）、organizing a... gathering（组织一场…… 聚会）、bring back（带回）。主旨升华句比如：“Even in the darkest of times, the power of community can light up the path to recovery.”（即使在最黑暗的时刻，社区的力量也能照亮恢复之路。）“The community's efforts during the New Year not only brought joy but also reaffirmed the strength of human connection.”（社区在新年期间的努力不仅带来了欢乐，还再次证实了人与人之间联系的力量。） 二、故事线​ 第一段故事线：火灾突发，Ally 赤脚逃出家门，震惊地看着自家房子起火。邻居们发现她的困境，纷纷伸出援手，送拖鞋、毛毯，提供临时住所，慈善机构也送来生活必需品，家人感受到社区支持带来的希望。​ 第二段故事线：家庭搬到临时住所，新年将至，因无法在自家庆祝而难过。社区得知后，组织特别的新年聚会，装饰临时住所、准备大餐，让 Noctors 一家深受感动，意识到社区的爱和支持是他们面对未来的坚实力量。​ 三、高频单词​ 第一段高频单词：escape（逃跑）、chaos（混乱）、distress（痛苦）、neighbor（邻居）、slipper（拖鞋）、blanket（毛毯）、charity（慈善机构）、necessity（必需品）​ 第二段高频单词：temporary（临时的）、adjust（适应）、celebration（庆祝）、sadness（悲伤）、community（社区）、organize（组织）、decorate（装饰）、meal（餐食）​ 四、短语​ 第一段短语：ran out（跑出）、in the chaos（在混乱中）、watching... billowing（看着…… 滚滚而来）、brought... over（拿来）、provide... for（为…… 提供）、offer to do（主动提出做）、send over（送来）、a glimmer of hope（一线希望）​ 第二段短语：trying to adjust to（努力适应）、the approaching New Year（即将到来的新年）、loom with（笼罩着）、organizing a... gathering（组织一场…… 聚会）、decorate... with（用…… 装饰）、prepare a... meal（准备一顿…… 餐食）、bring back（带回）、be deeply touched by（被…… 深深感动）​ 五、主旨升华句​ 第一段主旨升华句：“In times of crisis, the kindness of neighbors can turn a tragedy into a moment of hope.”（在危机时刻，邻居的善意能将悲剧转变为充满希望的时刻。）“The immediate response of the community showed that humanity shines brightest in the face of adversity.”（社区的迅速反应表明，人性在逆境中最为闪耀。）“The support from neighbors and charities demonstrated the power of unity in overcoming difficulties.”（邻居和慈善机构的支持展示了团结克服困难的力量。） 第二段主旨升华句：“Even in the darkest of times, the power of community can light up the path to recovery.”（即使在最黑暗的时刻，社区的力量也能照亮恢复之路。）“The community's efforts during the New Year not only brought joy but also reaffirmed the strength of human connection.”（社区在新年期间的努力不仅带来了欢乐，还再次证实了人与人之间联系的力量。）“This special New Year's gathering symbolized the resilience of the family and the unwavering support of their community.”（这次特别的新年聚会象征着家庭的坚韧和社区坚定不移的支持。） 六、写作示范​ 示范一​ Ally ran out the door without shoes on when escaping. The intense heat and thick smoke propelled her forward in a blind panic. Standing outside, her heart raced as she witnessed the inferno consuming her home. Neighbors rushed to her side, their faces filled with concern. One neighbor quickly fetched a pair of old but comfortable slippers, while another wrapped a soft blanket around her trembling shoulders. Some neighbors immediately called local charities, and within hours, boxes of food and essential items arrived. Their selfless actions were a beacon of light in the otherwise dark situation, making Ally and her family feel a sense of warmth and security despite the loss.​ The temporary house is OK but New Year may be difficult. The family has been struggling to come to terms with their new living arrangement. As the New Year approaches, the absence of their familiar home and traditions weighs heavily on their hearts. However, the community has once again stepped in. Neighbors are busy planning a surprise New Year's party. They are gathering decorations, baking delicious treats, and arranging musical performances. This collective effort is not just about celebrating the new beginning but also about mending the broken spirits of the Noctors. The family, touched by this outpouring of love, realizes that home is not just a physical place but the people who care and support them.​ 示范二​ Ally ran out the door without shoes on when escaping. The suddenness of the fire left her disoriented, and she stumbled outside, her feet stinging on the cold ground. The sight of her home engulfed in flames was heart - wrenching. Neighbors, alerted by the commotion, were quick to act. They brought her shoes and offered words of comfort. Some opened their homes, inviting the family to take shelter. Local charities, informed of the situation, dispatched volunteers with bags of food and clothing. The community's immediate and coordinated response was overwhelming, giving the Noctors the courage to face the difficult days ahead.​ The temporary house is OK but New Year may be difficult. Adjusting to the temporary house has been a challenge for the family. The approaching New Year, usually a time of great celebration, now seems gloomy. But the community has a plan to change that. They are organizing a New Year's event at the local community center. Volunteers are working hard to decorate the center with festive lights and streamers. They are also collecting donations for a special New Year's dinner for the Noctors. This gesture of kindness is a powerful reminder that in the face of disaster, the community's love and support can turn a difficult situation around. The Noctors are filled with gratitude, knowing that they are not alone in rebuilding their lives.​ 参考答案 Ally ran out the door without shoes on when escaping. A neighbour offered shoes to her within seconds. Her mom was given a blanket and a cup of tea by another neighbor. Two more neighbors came to help her dad and Ally didn’t even notice when they left. The following day, the family stayed in the next door’s house and all the other neighbors came over to comfort them. The family soon settled in a nearby temporary house. The temporary house is OK but New Year may be difficult. As the fire ruined almost everything in the house, the budget for New Year might be a little bit tighter. They have to save on anything they can and get it to the new house. But they are really lucky to live in a harmonious community. The neighbors come again with all that is needed for a simple family New Year celebration. The family are so grateful that they decide to throw a party for every neighbor when they are back in their house. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$