小升初专项突破练：08书面表达 （专项训练）-2024-2025学年译林版（三起）英语六年级下册

小升初专项突破练：08书面表达 专项训练 2024-2025学年译林版（三起）英语六年级下册 1．书面表达。 Lily是一名六年级的小学生，她有许多好习惯。请根据下面的图片内容发挥想象，用英文写一篇短文，说一说她有哪些好习惯。要求：(1) 契合主题，表达流畅；(2) 书写规范，标点正确；(3) 不少于5句话。 Lily’s good habits ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 2．书面表达。 Su Fang下个月要去澳大利亚旅游，但她对澳大利亚不是很了解，你能向她介绍一下澳大利亚的相关信息吗？ 要求：（1）.完整描述所给信息条理清晰，意思明确； （2）.可适当发挥，使内容更具体； （3）.不少于50个单词，不得出现真实的校名和人名。 Australia: Sydney Australia football, kangaroos... You can find many interesting things in Australia. ________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．请结合图片和提示，写一篇有关健康饮食的小短文。要求：语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 Hello! I’m Frank. I have many good habits. I also have a healthy diet. For breakfast, _________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ For lunch, ____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ For dinner, ___________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 4．毕业啦！现在的你已养成了哪些好习惯？（比如：生活习惯，饮食习惯，规则意识等），还有不足的地方吗？你又打算如何改进呢？请结合以上内容谈谈自己。 要求:（1）. 内容要涉及以上三个问题，可适当发挥； （2）. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确； （3）. 不少于80字。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．书面表达。 假如Mary是你的网友，“Talk Show”节目邀请你用英语向大家介绍一下她的情况。请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文不少于50词。 写作提示：（1）. Mary是一名来自澳大利亚的中学生，14岁； （2）. 她的学校里有很多规章制度。不准带手机到学校是非常重要的。但是她喜欢她的学校； （3）. 她最喜欢的动物是熊猫。她现在正在图书馆看一本关于熊猫的书。来中国看熊猫是她的梦想。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．写一写去年暑假你去了哪些地方旅游，今年呢？（不少于10句话） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．金陵中学 (Jinling High School) 校文学社推出了新海报，标题为 “Together For The Future” (一起向未来)。文学社社长刘方邀请你写一篇文章，作为文学社征文范本。 [要求] （1）. 文章不少于80词，不少于6句话。 （2）. 涵盖海报所有要点，可适当发挥，全文准确通畅。 （3）. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 “Together For The Future” 2022 is a new start, what makes you unforgettable in 2021? It can be activities, TV programs, news, great people and so on. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. When we enjoy ourselves, danger is sometimes around us. What should we remember to do and not to do to avoid it? In 2022, what do you want to say to others? Write down your passage and give it to us! ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．写话练习。 根据图片内容，以“Dreams”为题，谈谈王兵和迈克的梦想，可着重围绕这三个方面：(1)What do they want to be in the future? (2)Why? (3) What should they do to make their dreams come true? 要求：结构完整，逻辑清晰，表达正确，语言丰富，书写工整；不少于50个单词。 Dreams ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．我们的国家在日益强大，作为中国人，我们感到十分自豪。请以“Welcome to China”为题，写一篇小短文，从城市、动物、名胜古迹等方面向大家简单介绍一下中国。不少于50词。 Welcome to China _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 10．书面表达。 每个人都有自己的梦想，这些梦想或大或小，但梦想总是美丽的。你有什么梦想呢？请以“My dream”为题写一写你的梦想。 要求：1. 条理清晰，语法正确，语句通顺，用词恰当；2. 书写工整、规范，正确使用标点符号；3. 不少于5句话。 My dream _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案 1．例文： Lily’s good habits Lily is a sixth grade school pupil. She has many good habits. She gets up early in the morning and eats breakfast on time. She likes doing sports and she runs everyday. So she is always healthy. At home, Lily always puts her things in order. She usually finishes her homework before dinner. 【详解】该书面表达要求以“Lily’s good habits”为题写一篇作文。时态为一般现在时，用第三人称写Lily的好习惯。注意书写格式和单词数量。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：起床get up，吃早餐eat breakfast，跑步run，完成作业finish homework，健康的healthy，有序in order 参考句型：She is…；She likes…；She always… 2．范文： You can find many interesting things in Australia. There are many kangaroos and koalas in Australia. They are so cute. People in Australia like playing Australian football. It is very exciting. Sydney is a very beautiful city. Many people visit there every year. I want to visit Sydney some day. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称向苏芳介绍一下澳大利亚的相关信息，注意文章时态为一般现在时并要符合单词数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：Sydney悉尼，Australia澳大利亚，football足球，，kangaroos袋鼠 参考句型：There are...；It is...；They are...；I want to... 3．范文： Hello! I’m Frank. I have many good habits. I also have a healthy diet. For breakfast, I have some bread and milk. I also eat an egg every day. I like drinking water. For lunch, I have some meat and some vegetables. I have some rice too. For dinner, I have a little rice and some fish. I also eat some fruit. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该书面表达要求结合图片和提示写有关健康饮食的短文。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：rice米饭，milk牛奶，bread面包，water水，vegetables蔬菜，fruit水果，egg鸡蛋 参考句型：I have...， I eat...， I like... 4．范文： I have a lot of good habits. I get up early and never go to bed late. I often put things in order. I usually help my mum with housework. When crossing the road, I always look for a zebra crossing. I also look at the traffic lights and wait for the green light. But I still have many bad habits. I like eating sweets, cakes and ice creams. I often eat a lot of meat. But I don't like vegetables. I don’t like to play sports, either. So I’m fat now. To keep healthy, I am going to eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. I’m going to do exercises every day. I hope I will have a healthy diet soon. 【详解】1. 题干分析：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己已经养成的好习惯，还有哪些不足，以及打算怎样改进。注意文章时态为一般现在时和一般将来时并要符合单词数量要求，确保书写规范。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：habits习惯，get up起床，like喜欢，vegetable蔬菜，healthy健康的 参考句型：I have...；I often...；I like...；I am going to... 5．范文： Hello, boys and girls! I have a pen friend. Her name is Mary. She is a middle school student from Australia. She is 14 years old. There are many rules in her school. She can’t bring a mobile phone to school, and that’s very important. But she likes her school very much. Her favourite animals are pandas. Now she is reading a book about pandas in the library. It’s her dream to go to China to see pandas. It’s her dream to go to China to see pandas. I think her dream can come true! Who is your e-friend? Can you tell me something about him / her? 【详解】题干解读：该题目要求用人称用第三人称介绍你的网友的基本情况，时态用一般现在时，同时注意单词数量的要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：pen friend笔友，middle school中学，rules规则，important重要的，favourite最喜欢的，dream梦想， pandas熊猫 参考句型：I have...；Her name is...；She is...；There are...；I think...； 6．范文 I went to Beijing last summer holiday. I went there by train with my parents. We went to the Summer Palace. We also visited the Great Wall. Dad and I took some pictures. We had a good time. This summer holiday, I will go to Sanya. My mother and I are going there by plane. I will go swimming in the sea. I want to buy some tropical fruits. My trip will be great. 【详解】1. 题干分析：要求写一写去年暑假你的旅游情况和今年的旅游计划，要用第一人称的角度描述，主要用一般过去时和一般将来时，要满足句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇和参考句型： 参考词汇：last summer holiday去年暑假，by train坐火车，the Great Wall长城，Sanya三亚。 参考句型：I went…；We also visited…；This summer holiday, I will…；My trip will…。 7．例文： Together For The Future In 2022, I want to be a better girl. I will go to bed early. I will put my books and toys in order. I want to be a healthier girl. I like eating sweet food. That is bad for our teeth. So I will eat less sweet food and more fruit every day in 2022. I like playing football and running on the road. This is not safe. In 2022, I will follow the road rules and stay safe on the road! In a word, we should break our bad habits, and become a better man. 【详解】1.该题目是涵盖所给海报所有要点，写一篇标题为Together For The Future的文章，作为文学社征文范本。时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。注意字数要求，文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 2.参考词汇及参考句型： 参考词汇：go to bed early早睡，put my books and toys in order把我的书和玩具整理好，healthier更健康的，eat sweet food吃甜食，play football踢足球，follow the road rules遵守交通规则，stay safe保持安全，break our bad habits改掉坏习惯 参考句型：I want to…；I will…；I like…；We should… 8．范文：                                                                                        Dreams Wang Bing and Mike are talking about their dreams. Wang Bing wants to be an astronaut in the future. Because he wants to fly a spaceship to the Moon. Mike wants to be a dentist in the future. Because he wants to help children take care of their teeth. They should study hard to make their dreams come true. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“Dreams”为题，谈谈王兵和迈克的梦想。然后再阐述未来想成为什么，为什么及做什么能使梦想实现。注意文章主要为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：talk about谈论，astronaut宇航员，in the future在未来，spaceship宇宙飞船，dentist牙医，take care of照顾，study hard努力学习，come ture实现 参考句型：... are …；… wants to be …；Because …； They should … 9．范文： Welcome to China China is an old and beautiful country. You will find many interesting things in China. Come to Chengdu and see the lovely pandas. You will love them. You can also visit Shanghai on a sunny day. You can take a boat trip along the Huangpu River there. There are also many places of interest like the Great Wall, the Bund and Jiuzhaigou. Many people visit China every year. Welcome to China! 【详解】1.题干分析：本文要求以“Welcome to China”为题，写一篇短文，从城市、动物、名胜古迹等方面向大家简单介绍一下中国。如：成都的熊猫；上海的外滩；北京的长城具有中国特色的事物。注意文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。 2.参考词汇与句型 参考词汇：visit参观；take a boat trip乘船旅行；pandas熊猫；Huangpu River黄浦江；the Great Wall长城，the Bund外滩； places of interest名胜古迹； 参考句型：China is a/an...and...country.；You can visit...；You will...；There are many places of interest like...； 10．例文：                                                                                 My dream     I have a big dream. I want to be a dentist in the future. Many children don't care about their teeth. I want to help them. I will work hard. I will be a good dentist. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己的梦想。阐述自己的梦想是什么，为什么产生这个梦想以及如何做。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：dream梦想，in the future将来，dentist牙医，work hard努力学习 参考句型：I want to be a…；I will… 答案第1页，共2页 答案第1页，共2页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$