内容正文:
九年级作文:
1. 必须分段(总起句要有)
2. 审题并确定人称、时态和要点。
3. 要点分清-有观点且支撑写出观点的句子(注意详略得当)
4. 使用漂亮的句子:
· Doing sth. is …
· It is +形容词+for sb. +to do sth.
· I find it +形容词+for sb. + to do sth.
· The +比较级; the +比较级
· by doing sth.
· if 条件状语从句
· 使用定语从句
话题一: Problems and suggestions:
句型可用:
· 分段叙述:
1. Firstly/First of all/ To begin with…
2. Secondly/What’s more /Besides/ Moreover/Apart from that …
3. Finally /last but not least/ The most important thing is that …/One more thing is that …
4. One example is that… /Another example is that…/ Another thing is that…/Also, …
· How to show your problems:
1. I have difficulties/ problems/ trouble in doing …
2. I find it really/quite hard for me to …
3. It is really hard for me to …
4. Doing sth. well is really a great challenge for me.
5. I am worried about …
6. I can’t get the …right.
7. I am not good at …
8. The biggest problem is that …
9. … is so….that …/ too …to …
10. … be afraid of doing /to do …
· suggestions:
1. You’d better do …
2. How about/what about doing sth. …?
3. Why not do / why don’t you do …?
4. I think/suppose/suggest that you should do…
5. It’s best to do / It is a good way/idea to …
6. The most important thing is to …
7. If I were you, I would do sth. (虚拟语气)
8. The + 比较级 …, the +比较级…
· 框架参考(最简易版本)
There are three ways to learn English well.
First (of all), I think you should listen to English songs on the radio and repeat the difficult words.
Second (Besides), it is also a good idea to write the new words in your notebook and review them from time to time.
Third (what’s more), you could try to improve your English by joining an English language club to practice your speaking.
Finally, you’d better find a pen pal to get much writing practice.
I hope my suggestions can be helpful.
话题二: Chinese customs
· 可用句型:
1. You are supposed/ expected to do sth. …
2. You’d better do sth.
3. It’s impolite/rude(粗鲁的)/polite to do sth.
4. It’s important to do sth.
5. Remember to do sth.
6. Don’t forget to do sth.
7. When in Rome, do as the Romans do.
· 可用开头结尾:(背!)
Each country has different customs. As the old saying goes,“When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”So what are you supposed to do in China? Here are some suggestions.
Learning all these may be difficult, but it is worth the trouble if you want to be accepted in China.
· 传统:
1. You are supposed to shake hands when you meet for the first time.
2. In China, you are not expected to stick your chopsticks into the food.
3. It’s impolite to point at anyone with your chopsticks.
4. You shouldn’t start eating first if there are older people at the table.
5. It’s impolite to use your chopsticks to hit an empty bowl.
话题三:Festivals
· 节日名称: Spring Festival; Dragon Boat Festival, Mid-autumn Festival; Lantern Festival
· 可用句型:
1. The Spring Festival falls on January the 1st of the Chinese lunar calendar.
2. The Dragon Boat Festival is on May the 5th according to the Chinese lunar calendar.
3. It is our tradition to ….
4. On that day, all the family members get together to / in order to /so that …
5. admire the full moon/ eat mooncakes /zongzi
6. enjoy the Dragon boat races/ make wishes /…
7. 为了纪念:in memory of / to remember
· 范文:(节日内容: 开头总起-介绍节日的活动,食物等-总结) (背!)
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about one of the most important festivals in China—the Lantern Festival.
People celebrate it on the fifteenth day of the first month in the Chinese lunar calendar. On the Lantern Festival, children will go out at night with lanterns. The lanterns are different in shape and size, and they are almost red which is the symbol of good luck. The special food for the Lantern Festival is tangyuan. The Chinese people believe that eating tangyuan may bring the family happiness and good luck in the new year.
The Lantern festival plays an important role in Chinese culture. It means a lot to Chinese people.
话题四:今昔对比
1. I used to be… but now I am…(可用例子支撑你的观点)
2. I was…, but now…
3. I like the changes because I become more and more confident. And I like myself more than before.
话题五:Travel plan:
· 可用句型:
1. which city/country城市或者国家:
1) It is a …city with/which has a long history.
2) It is a …city with beautiful views and amazing culture.
3) There are many places of interest(名胜古迹).
2. What (从哪几个方面介绍这个城市或者国家):
1) places of interest :be worth doing
2) food: delicious/tasty/ can’t wait to do /can’t help doing sth.
3) people: friendly– whenever you are in trouble, they are ready to help.
3. How: (在该地的旅游计划或者建议:关注审题和事态,以下为建议的句型)
1) I suggest that you should pay a visit to …
2) It is a good choice for you to go …
3) You will never forget the … of … if you go…
4. 结尾:I hope you will enjoy your stay in …
话题六:介绍人物
1. 姓名 I have a friend named/called …
2. 年龄 He is an eighteen-year-old boy with ...hair/ glasses.
3. 外貌
He has big brown eyes..
He is tall/heavy/smart/of medium height/build.
He is taller than any other students in our class.
4. 性格He is outgoing/shy/quiet/..
5. 兴趣爱好
He enjoys /likes/ prefers doing…
He is fond of doing sth…
He is interested in doing sth.
He shows a great interest in doing sth….
6. 中考高分范文
How is everything going? I’m glad to tell you something about my brother Tom.
Tom is a fifteen-year-old boy with short straight black hair. He is of medium height and medium build.
As an active and outgoing boy, playing football is his favorite. Taking photos is also one of his hobbies. He might be really grateful if you could take him visit some places of interest so that he could take fascinating photos there.
Thanks a lot for your e-mail. And I believe that Tom will have a great time in Rome with the company of me.
Yours,
Li Ping
如何提升作文档次: (把简单的单词变为高级词组)
1. important—play a role in/ make a difference to/have an influence on ..
2. understand—have a better understanding of…
3. use—put sth. to good use by doing sth.
4. 尽力做某事—make ones’s way to do /make an effort to do /go out of one’s way to do sth.
5. 表达某个人或某事时可用定语从句修饰
Hangzhou is a famous city which attracts /receives millions of visitors from all over the world.
She is such a beautiful girl that …
6. 使用谚语(As the saying goes,… )
7. 联想和引用课文中学过的句子和短语。
过渡词
顺序:第一, firstly, first and foremost, to begin with, in the first place.
第二.第三. Secondly,thirdly, in the second place, What's more, besides, in addition
最后: finally, at last, lost but not least
总而言之In a word, all in all, In short, in conclusion, in general, generally speaking
转折 however, but, instead, nevertheless(然而), some..., while others...
所以: so, therefore, as a result, for this reason, thanks to
举例说明: like(像),such as+名词, for example,+句子
陈述观点:①Asfar as I'm concerned,我认为
②to be honest 老实说 to tell the truth
③Infact
④As fas as I know据我所知
⑤I think/believe+从句
常用谚语
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As the saying goes,
1. How time flies! 时间飞逝.
2. Never say die. 永不言弃
3. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧
4. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量
5. No pains, no gains. 一分耕耘一分收获
6. Every coin has two sides. 凡事都有两面性
7. Easier said than done. 说说容易,做做难
8. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成
9. It’s never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老
10. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情
11. When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗
12. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半
13. Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles. 读万卷书,行万里路
14. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作,不玩耍,聪明小伙也变傻。
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