Module6思维导图法介绍旅行经历（专项训练）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（外研版三起）

Module6思维导图法写旅行经历 1、 写作方法指引 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 Last July Lingling went to Xinjiang with her parents. Xinjiang is in the west of China. 引出话题,介绍基本信息 She rode a horse. She climbed the Tianshan Mountains. She visited the Tianchi Lake. It was very beautiful. 详细旅行活动 She had a lovely time there. 抒发自己的旅行感受 01 写作方法指引 写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 I went to Xi'an with my classmates last October. Xi'an is in the middle of China. We went there by high - speed train. 引出话题,介绍基本信息The ancient city walls there are magnificent. I walked on the city walls and imagined the past stories. We also ate many delicious local snacks like rou jia mo and yang rou pao mo in Xi'an. 详细旅行活动We had an amazing time there. 抒发自己的旅行感受 基础知识精讲 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1. 引入话题:时间，目的地， 人物，交通方式，以及旅游地点的方位 参考句型: I went to...目的地with...人物…last… It is in the... (east/west/south/north) of... We went there by... 参考词汇 人物称呼：parents（父母）friends（朋友） 地点：Sanya（三亚）Beijing（北京） 时间： last year（去年）​the year before last（前年）​two years ago（两年前）​in 2019（在 2019 年）​in 2015（在 2015 年）last spring（去年春天）​last summer（去年夏天）​last autumn（去年秋天） ​last winter（去年冬天） 方位：east（东）west（西）south（南）north（北） 交通方式：plane（飞机）train（火车）bus（公共汽车）car（汽车） 2.介绍具体的旅行经历 参考句型 · We visited... · We climbed... · We rode a... · We took lots of photos. - We ate some delicious food.参 考单词： 景点： mountain（山）museum（博物馆）park（公园）zoo（动物园） 活动： swim（游泳）shop（购物）ride a horse（骑马） 食物：delicious food（美味的食物） 3.分享一下这次旅行给你带来的感受。 参考句型 We really had a/an... time. - It was... - I felt... 参考词汇 lovely（美好的），happy（开心的），great（很棒的），nice（不错的），interesting（有趣的） 02 基础知识精讲-语法 一般过去时 一般过去时表示过去某个时间发生的动作或存在的状态，也可表示过去经常或反复发生的动作。 1. 动词过去式的变化规则- 一般情况：在动词原形后直接加 -ed。 例如：work - worked，visit - visited。 以不发音的字母e结尾：直接加 -d。 例如：live - lived，hope - hoped。 以“辅音字母 + y”结尾：变y为i，再加 -ed。 例如：study - studied，carry - carried。 以重读闭音节结尾，且末尾只有一个辅音字母：双写末尾的辅音字母，再加 -ed。 例如：stop - stopped，plan - planned。 不规则变化：需特殊记忆。 例如：go - went，have - had，eat - ate，see - saw。 2. 一般过去时的句式- 肯定句：主语 + 动词过去式 + 其他。 例如：I went to the park yesterday.（我昨天去了公园。） 否定句：主语 + didn't + 动词原形 + 其他。 例如：He didn't play football last weekend.（他上周末没有踢足球。） 一般疑问句：Did + 主语 + 动词原形 + 其他？ 肯定回答：Yes, 主语 + did. 否定回答：No, 主语 + didn’t. （你昨晚看电影了吗？是的，我看了。/ 不，我没看。） 特殊疑问句：特殊疑问词 + did + 主语 + 动词原形 + 其他？ 例如：What did you do last summer?（你去年夏天做了什么？） 用所给动词的适当形式填空。 I ______ (see) a beautiful bird in the tree yesterday. They __________ (not go) to school last Monday. ______ she ______ (clean) her room last weekend? We ______ (have) a party last night. 参考解析： 1. 用所给动词的适当形式填空 “yesterday”表明是过去时间，“see”的过去式是“saw”，所以填saw。“last Monday”是过去时间，否定句借助助动词“didn't”，后面动词用原形“go”，所以填didn't go。 “last weekend”是过去时间，一般疑问句借助助动词“Did”，句首大写，后面动词用原形“clean”，所以填Did; clean。 “last night”是过去时间，“have”的过去式是“had”，所以填had。 2. 按要求改写句子 原句是一般过去时，改为否定句借助助动词“didn't”，“played”还原为“play”，即He didn't play basketball after school.对“做了什么”提问用“What”，原句是一般过去时，借助助动词“did”，“went”还原为“do”，即What did you do last Sunday? 一般疑问句“Did they...?”的肯定回答是Yes, they did. 三、模拟写作提升 从各方面介绍自己的旅行经历介绍你刚经历过的一次假期旅行。包括你去了哪里、跟谁一起去的、如何去的、旅游地点的具体位置、旅行中有哪些活动和大家的心情如何等情况。 要求: 1.句子通顺，思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于六句。 参考句型： I went to __________ with my __________ last __________. __________ is in the __________ of China. We went there by __________. The __________ there is/are beautiful. I __________ and __________ there. We also ate many __________ food. We had a __________ time there. 参考单词： Sanya（三亚）parents（父母）July（七月）south（南方）plane（飞机）sea（大海）sky（天空）bought（buy 的过去式，买）swimsuit（泳衣）swam（swim 的过去式，游泳） delicious（美味的）lovely（愉快的） 范文1： I went to Sanya with my parents last July. Sanya is in the south of China. We went there by plane.引出话题,介绍基本信息 The sea is beautiful and the sky is blue. I bought a new swimsuit and swam in the sea. We also ate many delicious food in Sanya. 详细旅行活动We had a lovely time there. 抒发自己的旅行感受 模拟写作提升2 前情提要： 请根据图片提示，以“My trip”为题介绍一下你的旅行经历。 要求: 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考句型 I went to __________ with my __________ last __________. __________ is in the __________ of China. We went there by __________. The __________ there is/are beautiful. I __________ and __________ there. We also ate many __________ food. We had a __________ time there. 参考单词 Guilin（桂林）friends（朋友）August（八月）south - east（东南方）train（火车）mountains（山）rivers（河流）took photos（take photos 的过去式，拍照）boated（boat 的过去式，划船）local（当地的）happy（开心的） 范文2： My trip I went to Guilin with my friends last August. Guilin is in the south - east of China. We went there by train. 引出话题,介绍基本信息The mountains and rivers there are beautiful. The mountains are unique and the Li River is crystal - clear. I took a lot of photos of the amazing scenery and boated on the Li River. We also ate many local delicious food in Guilin. The rice noodles there were especially tasty. 详细旅行活动We had a happy time there. 抒发自己的旅行感受 四、真题写作练习-成都双流区 根据下面的问题回忆自己的旅行经历，请介绍你刚经历过的一次假期旅行。 要求： 1.句子通顺，思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于六句。 Q: Where did you go? Q: How did you go there? Q: What did you see? Q: How did you feel? Q: Who did you go with? 参考句型​ I went to __________ with my __________ last __________. __________ is in the __________ of China. We went there by __________. The __________ there is/are beautiful. I __________ and __________ there. We also ate many __________ food. We had a __________ time there.​ 参考单词​ Zhangjiajie（张家界）family（家人）October（十月）northwest（西北方）train（火车）mountains（山脉）forests（森林）hiked（hike 的过去式，徒步旅行）took pictures（take pictures 的过去式，拍照）local（当地的）joyful（高兴的） 范文3 I went to Zhangjiajie with my family last October. Zhangjiajie is in the northwest of Hunan Province in China. We went there by train. 引出话题,介绍基本信息 The mountains and forests there are beautiful. We also ate many local delicious food in Zhangjiajie. We visited lots of beautiful places. 详细旅行活动 We had a joyful time there. The trip to Zhangjiajie left us with unforgettable memories and we hope to visit it again someday. 抒发自己的旅行感受 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$