Module6 大纲法写生日礼物特征（专项训练）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（外研版三起）

Module6大纲法写生日礼物特征 1、 写作方法指引 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 It was Daming's birthday yesterday. He got many presents from his family and friends. Simon's mum bought him a present too引入话题 It was a book about space travel. Daming is very interested.介绍物品特征 01 写作方法指引 主题：描述生日礼物特征 开头：引入话题 介绍生日聚会时间，礼物 介绍最喜欢的礼物 主体：介绍礼物特征 结尾：表达对物品的感情 写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 Hello, my name is Tom. Last Saturday was my birthday. I had a birthday party in the park. My friends came with lots of presents. There were storybooks, toy cars and some cool stickers. 引入话题But my favorite present was a set of paintbrushes. It's in a long, black box. The box has a shiny surface. 介绍物品特征I like them a lot. I'm really excited to get this present. 表达对物品的感情 基础知识精讲 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1. 1.引入话题-姓名，生日聚会，礼物 参考句型： 介绍自己的名字/生日派对的举办地点: 介绍自己的名字/生日派对的举办地点: My name is... 我的名字是…… My birthday is on... 我的生日在…… I had a birthday party... 我在……举办了一场生日派对。 I got many presents. 我收到了许多礼物。 My favorite present is... 我最喜欢的礼物是…… 参考词汇： teacher（老师）name（名字）birthday（生日）party（聚会）present/gift（礼物）last Sunday（上周日）lovely（可爱的）interesting（有趣的） 2.介绍礼物特征 参考词汇： round（圆的）square（方形的）triangle（三角形）rectangle（长方形）color（颜色）wood（木头）plastic（塑料）paper（纸）soft（柔软的）hard（硬的） 参考句型： · It's... (shape). 它是……（形状） · It's... (color). 它是……（颜色） · It's made of... 它由……制成 · - It feels... 它摸起来…… 3.表达对物品的感情 参考句型： I love it very much. 我非常喜欢它 It makes me happy. 它让我很开心。 This present is very special to me. 这个礼物对我来说非常特别。 I will treasure it forever. 我会永远珍惜它。 参考词汇： love（爱）like（喜欢）special（特别的）happy（开心的）excited（兴奋的）treasure（珍惜） 02 基础知识精讲-语法 一般过去时和一般现在时 一般过去时： 表示过去某个时间发生的动作或存在的状态，常与表示过去的时间状语连用，如 yesterday（昨天）、last week（上周）、in 2023（在 2023 年）等。例如：I played football yesterday.（我昨天踢足球了。）也可表示过去经常或反复发生的动作。 例如：He often went to school on foot last year.（他去年经常步行去上学。） 一般现在时： 表示现在的状态、经常或习惯性的动作、客观事实或普遍真理。例如：She is a student.（她是一名学生。） 构成 一般过去时： 肯定句：主语 + 动词的过去式 + 其他。 例如：He played basketball yesterday.（他昨天打篮球了。） 否定句：主语 + didn't + 动词原形 + 其他。 例如：She didn't go to school last Monday.（她上周一没去上学。） 一般疑问句：Did + 主语 + 动词原形 + 其他？ 例如：Did you watch TV last night?（你昨晚看电视了吗？） 一般现在时： 肯定句：主语 + 动词原形 / 动词的第三人称单数形式 + 其他。当主语是第三人称单数（he/she/it 等）时，动词要用第三人称单数形式，一般在动词原形后加 -s 或 -es。 例如：He plays football every Sunday.（他每个星期天都踢足球。） 否定句：主语 + don't/doesn't + 动词原形 + 其他。主语是第三人称单数时用 doesn't，其他人称用 don’t。 例如：She doesn't like apples.（她不喜欢苹果。） 一般疑问句：Do/Does + 主语 + 动词原形 + 其他？主语是第三人称单数时用 Does，其他人称用 Do。 例如：Does he go to school by bus?（他乘公共汽车去上学吗？） 时间表达 例如：I visited my grandparents last month. 说明看望祖父母这个动作发生在上个月，是过去的事情。 一般现在时：着眼于现在的情况，表达的是经常发生的动作或存在的状态，具有一定的规律性和普遍性。 例如：The sun rises in the east. 这是一个客观事实，无论过去、现在还是将来，太阳都是从东方升起，所以用一般现在时。 用所给动词的适当形式填空。 1. I ____________ (go) to the park yesterday. 2. She ____________ (watch) TV every evening. 3. They ____________ (not play) football last Sunday. 4. _____________ he _____________ (get) up early every day? 5. The earth _____________ (move) around the sun. 参考解析： 1. went：yesterday 是一般过去时的标志，所以用 go 的过去式 went。 2. watches：every evening 表示经常发生的动作，主语 she 是第三人称单数，所以 watch 要用第三人称单数形式 watches。 3. didn't play：last Sunday 表明是过去的时间，否定句用 didn't + 动词原形，所以填 didn't play。 4. Does; get：every day 说明是一般现在时，主语 he 是第三人称单数，一般疑问句用 Does 开头，后面动词用原形 get。 5. moves：“地球绕着太阳转” 是客观事实，用一般现在时，主语 the earth 是第三人称单数，所以 move 用第三人称单数形式 moves。 三、模拟写作提升 假如你是小美，上周日在你的生日派对上，收到了朋友们送的生日礼物。请介绍其中一件你最喜欢礼物的样子。 要求： 1. 文章不少于 70 词； 2. 语法无误； 3. 表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 参考句型: Hello, my name is _________. Last Sunday was my birthday. I had a birthday party at _________. My friends brought many presents. There were _________. But my favorite present was _________. It's _________. It has _________. My friend said _________. I like it very much. I'm so _________ to get this present. 参考词汇: last Sunday（上周日）home（家）park（公园）friend（朋友）present（礼物）book（书）ball（球）doll（玩偶）big（大的）small（小的）colorful（彩色的）funny（有趣的）made（制作）happy（开心的） 范文1： Hello, my name is Xiaomei. Last Sunday was my birthday. I had a birthday party at home. My friends brought many presents. There were books, balls and a few dolls. But my favorite present was a big, colorful ball. 引入话题It's round and covered with different colors like red, blue and green. It has some cute patterns on it, like little stars. My friend chose it because I loved playing ball games.介绍物品特征 I like it very much. I'm so happy to get this present. 表达对物品的感情 模拟写作提升2 前情提要： 假如你是李明，上周六在你的生日派对上，收到了朋友们赠送的礼物。请向大家介绍其中一件你最喜爱礼物的特征。 要求： 1. 文章不少于 70 词； 2. 语法无误； 3. 表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 参考句型: Hello, my name is _________. Last Saturday was my birthday. I had a birthday party at _________. My friends brought lots of presents. There were_________. But the present I liked best was _________. It's made of _________ and has a color of _________. It looks really _________.  It looks really unique. My friend _________. I am really fond of it. 参考单词： last Saturday（上周六）home（家）present（礼物）book（书）toy（玩具）painting（绘画作品）model car（汽车模型）wood（木头）plastic（塑料）colorful（色彩丰富的）unique（独特的）hand - made（手工制作的）happy（开心的） 范文2： Hello, my name is Li Ming. Last Saturday was my birthday. I had a birthday party at home. My friends brought lots of presents. There were books, toys and some beautiful cards. 引入话题 I liked a hand - made wooden painting. It's made of wood and has a warm brown color. My friend made it for me. 介绍物品特征 I am really fond of it. 表达对物品的感情 四、真题写作练习-四川成都 假如你是晓雪，上星期二在你的生日聚会上，你收到了朋友们给你送的生日礼物。请向大家介绍一下你收到的礼物特征吧！ 要求： 文章不少于70词； 语法无误； 表达流畅，逻辑清晰。 参考句型： Hello, my name is _________. Last Tuesday was my birthday. I had a birthday party at _________. My friends brought many presents. There were _________. But my favorite present was _________. It's _________ and _________. It looks _________. My friend told me it was a model of _________. In 2003, it took a Chinese taikonaut into space. I like space very much. I'm so _________ to get this present. 参考单词： last Tuesday（上周二）home（家）friend（朋友）present（礼物）book（书）toy（玩具） snack（零食）model spaceship（宇宙飞船模型）Shenzhou V（神舟五号）taikonaut（中国宇航员）space（太空）happy（开心的） 范文3 Hello, my name is Xiaoxue. Last Tuesday was my birthday. I had a birthday party at home. My friends brought many presents. There were books, toys and snacks. But my favorite present was a model spaceship. 引入话题It's white and blue. It looks cool. My friend told me it was a model of Shenzhou V. In 2003, it took a Chinese taikonaut into space. 介绍物品特征 I like space very much. I'm so happy to get this present. 表达对物品的感情 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$