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Section Ⅳ Writing—An argumentative essay on sea exploration
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to better understand
environmental change
address current situations
predict the future situations
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what are available in oceans
make good use of the deepsea resources
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that happen to the ocean
happening to the ocean
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be of great benefit to
be greatly beneficial
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It can establish the basic information needed to better understand
environmental change,which helps scientists to address current situations.
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本单元的写作任务是辩论性议论文。议论文以说理为主要表达方式,针对某个问题、某种现象或某个事件进行分析、评论,从而剖析事物,论述事理,发表见解,提出主张。
[文章架构]
[必备词汇]
①ocean n.海洋
②marine adj.海洋的,船舶的
③creature n.生物
④overfish v.过度捕捞
⑤vessel n.舰;轮船
⑥resource n.资源
⑦explore v.探索
⑧exploitation n.开采,开发
⑨reserves n.储备(量)
⑩coastal adj.沿海的
⑪offshore adj.近海的
⑫undersea adj.海底的
⑬pollution n.污染
⑭balance v.&n.平衡
⑮submarine adj.水下的 n.潜艇
[必备句型]
引入话题
①Recently our class had a discussion about sea exploration.
最近我们班进行了一次关于海洋探索的讨论。
②Opinions were divided on the topic.
在这个话题上意见有分歧。
列举正方和反方的观点并说明理由
①However,every coin has two sides.
然而,任何事物都有两面性。
②Some students support/are for/in favor of the opinion.Other students oppose/are against the opinion.
一些学生支持这个观点。其他学生反对这个观点。
表明自己的观点
①I agree with the second view that it is necessary to explore the sea.
我同意第二种观点,探索海洋是必要的。
②As far as I'm concerned/Personally,I'm in favor of the first/second view.
就我个人而言,我赞成第一/第二种观点。
[题目要求]
假如你是李华,学校即将举行以“Is it necessary for humans to explore oceans?”为题目的英语作文比赛,请按照下列要求写一篇80词左右的议论文。要点如下:
1.使海洋可持续发展;
2.了解海洋环境;
3.更好地了解气候。
[写作步骤]
第一步:审题谋篇
第二步:遣词造句
1.它可以建立更好地理解环境变化所需的基本信息。
It can establish the basic information needed ________________________ _____________________.
2.这有助于科学家解决目前的情况。
It helps scientists to __________________________.
3.这有助于科学家预测未来可能出现的情况。
It helps scientists to _____________________________ that may emerge.
4.它还可以让我们了解海洋中可利用的物质,生命形式是如何生存的,以及人类如何在海底生存或充分利用深海资源。
It can also give us knowledge about ____________________________,how the life forms live,and find out how humans can survive down there or ____________________________________.
5.(一句多译)它可以帮助我们跟踪发生在海洋上的气候变化以及可能影响我们生活的因素。
★It can help us keep track of the climate changes ____________________ and what might affect our life.(定语从句)
★It can help us keep track of the climate changes ___________________ and what might affect our life.(现在分词作定语)
6.(一句多译)海洋探险将对人类有很大的好处。
★Ocean exploration will ______________________ humans.(benefit)
★Ocean exploration will _____________________ to humans.(beneficial)
第三步:词句升级
7.用定语从句升级句1和句2
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第四步:妙笔成篇
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【参考范文】
Is it necessary for humans to explore oceans?
I am in favor of the view that it is essential for humans to explore oceans.
First,it can establish the basic information needed to better understand environmental change,which helps scientists to address current situations and to predict the future situations that may emerge.Moreover,it can also give us knowledge about what are available in oceans,how the life forms live,and find out how humans can survive down there or make good use of the deepsea resources.In addition,it can help us keep track of the climate changes that happen to the ocean and what might affect our life.
In sum,ocean exploration will be of great benefit to humans.
假定你是李华,最近你班就“人类是否应该进行海洋探索”进行了讨论。请根据讨论结果,写一封信给某英文报社的编辑来报道此事。
赞成的理由
反对的理由
你的看法
1.获取更多的海底资源;
2.提高对地球上生命的理解。
1.造成海洋污染,导致海洋生物死亡;
2.破坏生态系统。
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注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
Yesterday our class had a heated discussion about whether people should explore oceans extensively.
As sea exploration makes it possible to discover new sources of food and energy and improves our understanding of life on the earth,some are in favour of it.Opponents of sea exploration think that it may bring about so much pollution that it can destroy the underwater ecosystem.Besides,with so many
marine animals murdered without mercy,the diversity of sea species is being destroyed.
Personally,balancing environmental risks with economic needs can guarantee harmonious sea exploration.
Yours,
Li Hua
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