Unit 2 Section Ⅴ Writing-【金版教程】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第一册创新导学案word（译林版2020）

Section Ⅴ　Writing　读后续写——青少年和父母的关系 本单元的写作任务是读后续写，内容是青少年和父母的关系。该类作文以叙述事件为主，多为记叙文，主要通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等交代清楚；同时要结合续写所给段首句，注意续写故事与原文的融合度，以及续写两段内容之间的衔接度。 写作三步骤： 第一步　理已知信息 阅读是读后续写的起点，起点的质量高低直接影响着续写能达到的高度。因此首先要高质量地完成阅读，梳理文中主要人物之间的关系，比如父子、母女关系等；分析主要人物的性格特点，故事发展线索，以便把握故事未知走向，构建情境。这样对人物描写有指导作用，可通过外貌、动作、心理、对话等描写获取人物特点。 第二步　判续写方向 确定故事主线，定文章主调。在读完文章后，根据各段落的主旨，明确文章的整体构架和中心思想。此外，需通过文中的细节描述来确定续写内容的基调，如分析描写人物的形容词和人物发出的动作、文中的对话、所给的两个段首句来确定续写故事的基调，寻找续写切入点，从而展开合理的情节想象。 把握段落开头语，定文章走向。所给段落开头语对故事发展有提示衔接、引导和限制作用，续写时要注意站在作者的角度，继承原文写作思路，续写内容积极向上，需要注意设计的结局应是正向的，如青少年和父母的关系类的续写结局应是亲子关系得到修复，或者双方互相理解，制造惊喜等。注意：续写第二段的开头语往往暗示着第一段的故事走向。 第三步　构建续写故事基本框架，优化表达 在读后续写的过程中，细读是起点，建构是关键，而写作则是重点。在前面所获取的信息的基础上，我们可将选出的信息和拓展的细节结合形成故事发展的要点、构建简单的续写故事框架。再根据故事框架，利用所储备的词汇、语块、句式丰富故事内容，优化语言表达。此外还应注意续写内容与所给段落首句的衔接程度，并确保所续写的内容积极向上、富有正能量。 注意事项： 1．立意“高大上”，突出亲子关系的珍贵和美好。 2．情节丰富合理，衔接自然流畅；亲子关系类的续写可根据自己或周边的生活经历展开合理想象。 3．注重细节描写，侧重青少年和父母的性格、心理、情绪描写，以做到语言生动具体。 (1)I was fortunate in having good parents. 我很幸运有好父母。 (2)Without family, the world would become wilderness. 没有家人，世界会变成一片荒芜。 (3)He's looking for love and he's looking for family; he's looking to be accepted and he's looking forward to being embraced by his father. 他一直在寻找爱，寻找家庭；他渴望被接受，他期待能得到父亲的拥抱。 (4)Health is more than just your physical well­being. You need to have emotional needs met and that means maintaining family and friend relationships. 健康不仅仅是身体健康。你需要满足情感需求，这意味着维系亲情和友情。 (5)We shouldn't take the selfless love from our parents for granted. 我们不应该认为父母无私的爱是理所当然的。 (6)After that, our relationship became closer and we were more like friends. 在那之后，我们的关系变得更亲密，我们更像朋友。 (7)She felt warmth in the cold day, and believed there was kindness in every corner. 她在寒冷的天气里感到了温暖，相信每个角落都有善意。 (8)She stood on the beach, gazing at the ocean. 她站在海滩上，凝视着大海。 (9)We had a good time/enjoyed ourselves. 我们玩得非常开心。 (10)At last, they saw us off and said goodbye. 最终，他们给我们送行说再见。 (11)I learnt a lot from my parents. 我从父母身上学到了很多。 (12)We will always remember this enjoyable experience. 我们将永远记住这个令人愉快的经历。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Growing up, I understood one thing about my dad: He knew everything. This was our relationship: I asked him questions and he told me the answers. In my teen years, he taught me things I'd need to know to survive in the real world. When I moved out on my own, I called him usually when something broke into my apartment and I needed to know how to fix the toilet, the air­conditioner or the wall. But then, eventually, I needed him less. For everything, I had Google. I don't know when it happened, but when I called our conversations developed into six words. Me: “Hi, Dad”. Him: “Hi, sweets. Here's Mom.” I loved my dad, of course, but I wondered at times if maybe he had already shared everything I needed to know. Then, this past summer, I moved in with my parents for three weeks while my house was being repaired. They own a lake house, and Dad asked me to help him rebuild the bulkhead (隔板) at their dock (船坞)． “How do you know how to build a bulkhead？” “I spent a summer in college building them on the Jersey shore.” “You did？” I thought I knew everything about my dad. I knew about the summer at the manufacturing plant that burned his hands raw, and even the tiny little kitchen, where he learned how to make the best pancake. But I never knew this. “Yes. Now come up here and let me teach you how to use this circulars saw (圆锯)．” All of a sudden, I realized that maybe it's not that there's nothing left to say. Maybe it's just that I've spent my life asking him the wrong questions. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 We ended up our talking but I was lost in thought.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 “Wait, Dad，” I said, “How are you？” 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 [精彩范文] We ended up our talking but I was lost in thought. For years, I had taken it for granted that dad could give me answers to any of my questions only if I asked, but seldom did I try to understand his life just like the summer when he was building bulkhead and what he wanted from me. Maybe he was also eager to share his story with me, or he wouldn't have asked me to help him rebuild the bulkhead. After all, it was hard, manual labor. A few weeks later, after I moved back into my house, I called my parents. Dad answered. “Hi, sweets，” he said. “Here's Mom.” “Wait, Dad，” I said. “How are you？” We talked a lot that day, from the little quarrel between him and my mom to the job he was working on. Nothing important. To anyone else, it would sound like a normal conversation between a dad and his daughter. But to me, it was novel, as well as to my dad. I sensed his voice with excitement and delight. It was a whole new beginning. I spent the first part of my life needing to talk to my dad. Now I talk to him because I want to. 总评　本文通篇时态把握准确，语法结构和词汇运用得恰到好处，续写部分构思巧妙，衔接自然，思路清晰自然，续写情节完整。 [亮点呈现] (1)take it for granted, be eager to do sth等短语的运用，凸显了作者灵活运用语言的能力，极大吸引了读者的眼球。 (2)A few weeks later, after I moved back into my house, I called my parents. 时间状语从句的运用，提升了写作的档次。 (3)Now I talk to him because I want to. 原因状语从句的运用，显示了较高的英语水平，精准掌握了从句使用的要领。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Through our lives, we can gain a lot and lose so much. But being honest should always be with us, as honesty is always regarded as a virtue. Every time I talk about the topic, something crowds in my mind as if it had just happened. I was 16 when one morning, Dad told me I could drive him to Mijas and then take the car in a nearby garage to get it serviced. At that time, I had just passed the driving test, and I hardly had a chance to use the car, so I said yes without hesitation. I drove my father to Mijas, promising to pick him up again at 4 pm, then I went to a nearby garage, and put the car in there. Since I had several hours to spare, I decided to go to a movie theater near the garage to see the movie. However, I was so absorbed in the plot of the movie that I forgot the time. When the last movie finished, I looked at my watch: 6 pm. I was two hours late! I thought my father would be very angry if he knew what I was doing. And he would never let me drive again. So I decided to make up an excuse. Then, I drove to the appointed place, my father was sitting in a corner, waiting patiently. I first apologized for being late, then told him that I wanted to get there as soon as possible, but that something was wrong with some of the main parts of the car. I would never forget the way he looked at me. “I'm very disappointed that you thought you had to lie to me, Jason.” My father looked at me again and said, “When you didn't show up on time, I called the gas station and asked if there was anything wrong. They told me you never picked up the car. So, you see, I know there's nothing wrong with the car at all.” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 “But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here, and it's dark. You can't walk back.” I begged.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者因为去看电影而晚了两小时才去接父亲，他谎称自己去修车了，最后谎言被拆穿了，这使得父亲非常生气。作者承认了自己迟到的真正原因，父亲对此的反应是什么？作者此时的心理活动是什么？ [精彩范文] A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. Dad listened carefully as a sadness passed through him, “I'm angry, not with you but with myself. You see. I realize that I have failed as a father if after all these years you feel that you have to lie to me. I have failed because I have brought up a son who cannot even tell the truth to his own father. I'm going to walk home now and think where I have gone wrong all these years”． “But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here, and it's dark. You can't walk back.” I begged. My protests, my apologies and the rest of my words were useless. I had let my father down, and I was about to learn one of the most painful lessons of my life. Dad began walking along the dusty roads. I quickly jumped in the car and followed behind. I apologized all the way, telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me. For 18 miles he kept walking. Seeing my father in so much pain was the most awful experience that I have ever faced. 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