内容正文:
必修第二册
Unit 1 Lights,camera,action!
Period Ⅳ Writing
内容索引
NEIRONGSUOYIN
单元写作 能力提升
单元写作 能力提升
Part 1 单元写作任务:写电影评论
[文体分析]
本单元的写作任务是写电影评论。电影评论是对各种电影现象进行分析和评价的文章。它是对蕴藏在电影艺术中的审美价值、认识价值及其思想意义的挖掘、揭示,是对电影艺术创作规律的探索,并能从中找出成功的经验和失败的教训。写电影评论一般要遵循三个步骤:首先,选择你最喜欢的电影并仔细观看;其次,
观看时做好笔记;最后,参照笔记写电影评论。写作时文章开头介绍一些基本信息,包括电影的名称、主要角色、导演、电影类型、背景以及概要,以一种有趣而又翔实的方式呈现这些信息;然后简要介绍这部电影的情节;最后就此部电影的主题、情节、人物、语言等内容展开评论或发表自己的看法。
[写作要求]
假定你是李华,你校英文爱好者协会准备在“电影周”期间展播一部英文电影。请你根据提示,给该协会负责人Ted写一封信,向他推荐美国电影《马戏之王》(The Greatest Showman),并对该电影进行评论。
类型 人物传记
上映日期 2018年2月1日
导演 迈克尔·格雷西(Michael Gracey)
剧情简介 P.T.巴纳姆(P.T.Barnum)依靠自己的想象力和锲而不舍的精神,从经营博物馆做起,开创了世界上第一家马戏团
教育意义 ……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Ted,
I'm writing to recommend The Greatest Showman to you for our school Film Week.
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I am looking forward to your consideration of this film.
Yours,
Li Hua
[审题谋篇]
体裁 影评(推荐并评论美国电影《马戏之王》)
时态 在介绍电影情节时,多用一般现在时
人称 多用第三人称
框架 因为该信件的开头和结尾部分已给出,所以我们只需要写出正文部分即可。正文可分为三部分:
第一部分:电影简介(上映日期、类型、导演等);
第二部分:剧情简介;
第三部分:发表评论
[词句推敲]
1.词汇
①发行;上映 ________________
②激励 ________________
③描述 ________________
④某人下定决心做某事 ___________________________
⑤教育性的和启发性的 ________________________
release
motivate
describe
make up one's mind to do sth.
educational and inspiring
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①《马戏之王》是一部著名的美国传记片,导演是迈克尔·格雷西。
The Greatest Showman is a famous American biography film and __________________ is Michael Gracey.
②该影片于2018年2月1日上映。
The film __________________ Feb.1st, 2018.
its director
was released on
③这部电影鼓励我们无论遇到什么困难都要追求成功。
The film __________________ pursue success no matter what difficulties we encounter.
④它对我们学生很有教育意义和启发性。
It is both ________________________ to us students.
encourages us to
educational and inspiring
(2)句式升级
⑤利用分词短语将句①和句②合并为一个简单句。
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⑥利用高级词汇motivate,whatever和obstacle将句③和句④合并为一个句子。
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Directed by Michael Gracey, The Greatest Showman is a famous American biography film released on Feb.1st, 2018.
Motivating us to pursue success whatever obstacles we encounter, the film is both educational and inspiring to us students.
[妙笔成篇]
Dear Ted,
I'm writing to recommend The Greatest Showman to you for our school Film Week.
Directed by Michael Gracey, The Greatest Showman is a famous American biography film released on Feb.1st, 2018.
It tells the story of P.T.Barnum, who originally runs a museum and later makes up his mind to start the world's first circus.The film describes the difficulties he encounters and the positive attitude he adopts in response.With his rich imagination and persistence, he eventually makes it.
Motivating us to pursue success whatever obstacles we encounter, the film is both educational and inspiring to us students.
I am looking forward to your consideration of this film.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你校英文报正在举办主题为“My Favourite Film”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一部你最喜欢的电影并投稿。要点包括:
1.电影简介;
2.你的评价。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[参考范文]
Black Panther, directed by Ryan Coogler, is a science fiction film adapted from cartoons by Marvel.
After the death of his father, the King of Wakanda, T'Challa returns home to take his place as king.However, when a powerful old enemy appears, seeking the rich resources in Wakanda, he is drawn into a serious conflict that puts Wakanda and the whole world at risk.Whenever faced with danger, the young king turns into the Black Panther and defeats his enemies, securing the safety of his people and gaining their wide respect.
With its amazing scenes and appealing plots, Black Panther has gained wide popularity and is really worth watching.
Part 2 读后续写日积月累
读后续写专练之“有关天气描写的表达”
朗读·体会·积累
1. The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.
寒风开始咆哮,像锋利的刀子一样刺痛着我的脸。
2.The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house.
雨倾盆而下,溪水涨起来了,风吹打着房子。
朗读·体会·积累
3.The black clouds gathered and turned into a dense mass.
乌云聚集成稠密的一团。
4. It is becoming foggy; we had better go home before it thickens.
起雾了,我们最好在雾变浓之前回家。
试做·补全·背诵
1.一阵风吹过,吹起了垂柳低垂的枝条,就像窗帘一样。
and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain.
2.暴雨猛烈地砸在屋顶上,冲击着玻璃,奏出激动人心的乐章。
, hit the glass, and played exciting music.
A gust of wind blew
Heavy rain pounded on the roof
试做·补全·背诵
3.刹那间,电闪雷鸣。
In a flash, .
4.我走到外面,拉起衣领以抵御寒雾。
I stepped outside and .
lightning and thunder broke out
pulled up my collar against the cold mist
增补素材——“天气描写”之多样表达
1.a gentle breeze 一缕微风
2.a sharp/hard/severe frost 酷寒
3.a stormy night 暴风雨之夜
4.be bathed in the sunshine 沐浴在阳光下
5.be buried in snow 埋在雪中
6.be full of dark clouds 乌云密布
7.bright sunlight 明媚的阳光
8.clear up 放晴
9.continuous/constant rain 连绵不断的雨
10.fierce/heavy/violent storms 狂风暴雨
11.freezing fog 寒雾
12.hot and steamy 炎热潮湿
13.a light rain 小雨
14.be raining cats and dogs 下倾盆大雨
15.snow melts slowly 雪慢慢地融化了
16.the day is bitterly cold 天气寒冷
17.sheets of rain 倾盆大雨
18.unbearable heat 难以忍受的热
19.in the warm spring sunshine 在春天温暖的阳光里
20.a fresh breeze 一阵清风
21.in the blinding rain 在茫茫大雨中
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