内容正文:
必修第二册
Unit 3 Festivals and customs
Period Ⅳ Writing
内容索引
NEIRONGSUOYIN
单元写作 能力提升
单元写作 能力提升
Part 1 单元写作任务:推广中国传统节日
[文体分析]
本单元的写作任务是推广中国传统节日。写作可以是给外国朋友介绍中国传统节日,也可以是邀请他/她参加并体验中国传统节日。注意:邀请要真诚;具体介绍要重点突出,进行充分的、适当的拓展;宣传中国正能量、体现社会主义核心价值观、体现和谐社会概念。
常用表达:
1.an event of great importance一次具有重大意义的事件
2.attend a ceremony出席一个仪式
3.a display of fireworks一场烟火表演
4.enjoy popularity深受欢迎
5.attach importance to重视
6.dress up打扮;装饰
7.watch the dragon boat race观看龙舟比赛
8.have great fun玩得开心
9.look forward to盼望
10.receive lucky money收红包
11.set off fireworks放烟火
[写作要求]
假定你是李华,你在美国的笔友Jim来信询问当前中国过春节的情况。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信:
1.中国人越来越重视春节;
2.春节活动更具环保性和人文性。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
How is everything? I'm more than happy to have received your letter,__________________________________________________
Look forward to learning something about your favorite festival.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
[审题谋篇]
体裁 书信(推广中国传统节日)
时态 一般现在时
人称 第三人称
框架 1.点明主旨:询问春节情况
2.当前春节情况:
(1)重要性
(2)更注重环保
(3)人文性
[词句推敲]
1.词汇
①这是众所周知的 _____________________
②起着重要的作用 _________________________
③随着我们社会的发展 _________________________________
④更有意义地庆祝节日 ____________________________________
⑤保护环境 _________________________
it is known to all that
play an important role in
with the development of our society
celebrate the festival more meaningfully
protect the environment
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①我很高兴收到你的来信。在信中你询问我有关当前中国过春节的情况。
I'm more than happy to have received your letter.In the letter you asked me about the condition of _______________________________.
②春节在中国起着重要的作用。
The Spring Festival ______________________ in China.
the Spring Festival in current China
plays an important role
③随着社会的发展,人们开始意识到它是一个节日,是一笔宝贵的财富。
With the development of our society,people __________________ it is a festival and a valuable treasure.
④为了保护我们的环境,越来越多的人选择电子烟花而不是传统的烟花。
____________________________, more and more people choose electronic fireworks instead of traditional ones.
come to realize that
To protect our environment
(2)句式升级
⑤用非限制性定语从句改写句①。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑥用it is known to all that...改写句②。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm more than happy to have received your letter, in which you asked me about the condition of the Spring Festival in current China.
It is known to all that the Spring Festival plays an important role in China.
⑦用not only...but also改写句③。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑧用prefer...to...改写句④。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
With the development of our society,people come to realize that it is not only a festival but also a valuable treasure.
To protect our environment, more and more people prefer electronic fireworks to traditional ones.
[妙笔成篇]
Dear Jim,
How is everything? I'm more than happy to have received your letter, in which you asked me about the condition of the Spring Festival in current China.
It is known to all that the Spring Festival plays an important role in China.With the development of our society, people come to realize that it is not only a festival but also a valuable treasure.Therefore,people pay more attention to how to celebrate the festival more meaningfully as well as how to protect the environment.As you can see, to protect our environment, more and more people prefer electronic fireworks to traditional ones.What's more,an increasing number of families are trying to do some volunteer work to help people in need.
Look forward to learning something about your favorite festival.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
端午节是中国的传统节日。假定你是李华,请给你的网友Jimmy发一封邮件,邀请他来中国参加将在你的家乡举办的端午节庆祝活动。内容包括:
1.端午节的时间;
2.端午节的由来;
3.和端午节相关的一些传统活动等。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jimmy,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Jimmy,
In your last mail, you mentioned to me that you would have a holiday next month and you'd like to make a visit to China.It happens that it will be the Dragon Boat Festival then and I'd like to invite you to come to China and experience how we celebrate it.
The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most significant traditional Chinese festivals in China and we will have three days off for it.It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month.The festival is meant to be in honour of a famous ancient Chinese poet, Qu Yuan.All over China, there will be a variety of interesting activities, like dragon boat races, making and eating zongzi and salted duck eggs.
In my hometown this year, there will be a grand celebration during the festival.So do come to China and I'm sure you will have an unforgettable holiday.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Part 2 读后续写日积月累
读后续写专练之“有关季节描写的表达”
朗读·体会·积累
1.早先光秃秃的树枝已向灿烂的春光伸出它们长满绿芽的枝干。
The previously bare branches offered their wands of tight green buds to the brilliant rays of spring.
2.晴空万里,太阳像烙铁一样灼烧着我的背。
Blue skies stand tall and far, and the sun is like a branding iron searing my back.
朗读·体会·积累
3.叶子在中秋凉爽的空气中飘落,告别甜美的夏天,召唤着秋天。
Leaves fluttered down in the cool midautumn air, biding farewell to sweet summer and beckoning the autumn.
4.天气极其恶劣,冷得刺骨,天色阴郁,能见度极低。
The weather was at its worst, bitterly cold, with leaden skies that gave minimum visibility.
试做·补全·背诵
1.然后春天来了。像白色毯子一样的雪融化了。孩子们出去采野花,像鹿一样到处乱跑。
Then spring came. .Children were out for wild flowers, and raced around like deer.
2.在仲夏的烈日下,一切有生命的东西似乎都已用尽了它们的能量。
, all the living things seem to have worn out their energy.
The white blanket melted away
Under the burning sun of midsummer
试做·补全·背诵
3.在几乎光秃秃的树下是一层厚厚的落叶,背景里的绿色草地是对逝去的夏天的回忆。
A carpet of fallen leaves lay beneath nearly bare trees, ______________
________________________________________________________.
4.天开始下雪了,寒风呼啸,好像在寻找什么人。
It began to snow; as though it were seeking someone.
with green grass in the background serving as a memory of the passing summer
a cold wind blew and roared
增补素材——“季节描写”之多样表达
春天
1.It's spring but there's still a chill in the air.
已是春天但仍有寒意。
2.The blossom arrives like cake frosting on the trees in delicious cream and pink.
怡人的奶油色和粉色的花朵像蛋糕一样结在树上。
夏天
3.At times, the heat was barely tolerable.
有时天气炎热得几乎令人难以忍受。
4.The weather was hot, without a breath of wind.
天气炎热,连一丝风都没有。
秋天
5.Autumn is a very beautiful season with a carpet of golden fallen leaves.
秋天是一个非常美丽的季节,金黄的落叶铺满大地。
冬天
6.It's dark now and the snow is still falling, clumps of snowflakes drifting windlessly down.
现在天黑了,雪还在下,一片片的雪花无声地飘落。
7.The wind howled, piling up snow in drifts, blinding the night with ice-white dust.
风呼啸着,积雪成堆,雪白的粉末蒙蔽了黑夜。
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