内容正文:
选择性必修第四册
Unit 3 The world meets
China
Period 5 Writing
内容索引
NEIRONGSUOYIN
单元写作 能力提升
单元写作 能力提升
本单元的写作任务是写一封推荐景点的信。其常见结构:
第一部分:推荐的景点;
第二部分:景点及其各项活动项目的功能或特点、地理位置、交通方式以及收费情况等;
第三部分:发出邀请。
文学作品的概要
[增分佳句]
首段:引入话题,指明推荐/介绍的对象
1.I'm very pleased to learn that you are going to...I'm writing this letter to offer my recommendation.
2.Knowing from your last email that you...so delighted am I that I have made a list of attractions deserving visiting for you.
3.It makes me delighted that you show great interest in...and that you want to know something about...
4.If you find it hard to...,the following tips may be of great help.
5.Glad to have received your letter and know that you are keen to travel to...,I'm writing to express my warm welcome and strongly recommend that you pay a visit to...
中段:说明推荐该城市的原因
1.Well known as a historic city in China,...is really an ideal destination.First of all,...is not only a city with a long history but also a place with many tourist attractions,among which...is what you can never miss.
2.People in...are friendly,kind and willing to assist anyone in need of help,which can really make your visit comfortable and pleasant.
3.Talking about the local food...enjoys a great reputation for its various snacks all over China.
尾段:表示期待或祝愿
1.Hope my recommendation will be of help.Wish you a good time/journey.
2.Hope one day you can come and experience it by yourself!
3.I hope you will take these suggestions into account and I'm looking forward to your early reply.
4.If you have any questions about...,please feel free to contact me.
[写作要求]
假定你是李华,你的英国网友 Eric 暑假想来中国旅行,但不知道该去哪里,所以发来邮件询问你的建议。请你给他回一封邮件,介绍你的家乡重庆。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
Thank you for your recommendations,which have definitely inspired me to include London in my trip list.I can't wait to see you there. __________________________________________________.
_______________________________________________________.
See you soon in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
[审题谋篇]
体裁 推荐信
话题 介绍家乡重庆
时态 一般现在时
人称 第三人称
[词句推敲]
1.词汇
(1)推荐 _________________________
(2)坐落在 ____________
(3)城市的 ______
(4)一座具有独特景观的山城 _______________________________
(5)错过 ____________
(6)带领某人参观 _______________
recommend/recommendation
be located in
urban
a hilly city with a unique landscape
miss out on
show sb. around
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①我听说你今年暑假要来中国。
I hear that .
②我很高兴向你推荐一些有趣的地方。
I am delighted to .
you're coming to China this summer vacation
recommend some interesting places to you
③重庆位于中国西南部,它将给你一种不同于其他中国城市的体验。
Chongqing and it will give you an experience different from that of any other Chinese city.
④重庆是一个山城,有着独特的景观,所以最好的旅游方式是乘坐轻轨。
Chongqing is ,so the best way to travel around is by light rail.
is located in the southwest of China
a hilly city with a unique landscape
⑤你决不应该错过重庆的美食,尤其是当地的火锅,毫无疑问你会迷上它的。
On no account ,particularly the local hot pot which you'll be hooked on without doubt.
should you miss out on Chongqing food
(2)句式升级
⑥请用现在分词短语作状语把句①和句②合并成一个句子
________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
⑦请用过去分词短语作状语升级句③
________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Hearing that you're coming to China this summer vacation,I am delighted to recommend some interesting places to you.
Located in the southwest of China,Chongqing will give you an experience different from that of any other Chinese city.
[妙笔成篇]
Dear Eric,
Thank you for your recommendations,which have definitely inspired me to include London in my trip list.I can't wait to see you there.
Hearing that you're coming to China this summer vacation,I am delighted to recommend some interesting places to you.First of all,I must recommend my own city,Chongqing.Located in the southwest of China,it will give you an experience different from that of any other Chinese city.Besides,Chongqing is a hilly city with a unique landscape,so the best way to travel around is by light rail.Last but not least,on no account should you miss out on Chongqing food,particularly the local hot pot which you'll be hooked on without doubt.There are numerous other things to see and I'd be very happy to show you around.
See you soon in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友 Jerry将到北京进行为期一周的旅游,发邮件向你咨询相关信息。请你回复邮件给出建议,内容包括:
1.推荐北京的景点 (至少两处);
2.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Jerry,
Knowing that you're going to Beijing for vacation,I'm more than pleased to give you some advice.
The first place I recommend you to go is the Great Wall.Known as a symbol of ancient Chinese civilization and one of the world's oldest and most magnificent manmade scenes,it is a mustgo place.The next place of interest you cannot miss is the Summer Palace—the largest and bestpreserved royal garden in China,where you can experience diverse Chinese cultures.
I sincerely hope that my recommendation can be of some help to you.May you have an unforgettable tourist experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
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