U2 Period 5 Writing-【优化探究】2025-2026学年新教材高中英语必修第三册同步导学案配套PPT课件（外研版）

必修第三册 Unit 2　Making a difference Period 5　Writing 内容索引 NEIRONGSUOYIN 单元写作 能力提升 单元写作 能力提升 本单元的写作任务是写一篇人物传记，属于记叙文。传记是记载人物生平事迹的一种文体，大多按照时间、空间或逻辑顺序来写。传记写作多采用倒叙法，先对人物进行简单介绍，然后介绍其出生、成长过程、主要事件和成就、思想、品德和情操等，最后进行评论，表达作者的看法。传记一般不虚构，纪实性是传记的基本要求。 人物传记 [常用表达] 首段：介绍人物 1．He has made great contributions in the field of... 2．..., born in America, was a great scientist and inventor. 3．Helen Keller, one of my favourite writers, is an ordinary but great woman. 4．Born in 1930, Yuan Longping is recognized as one of China’s greatest scientists, a pioneer for all people. 5．Qian Xueshen is regarded as “the father of Chinese aerospace”． 中段：具体介绍(包括成长经历、工作经历、成就与贡献等) 1．She has been devoting all her time to researching into... 2．Thanks to her creative work, China is playing a leading role in... 3. After he graduated from university, he realized his dream of becoming a doctor. 4．He was devoted to this profession so much that he often worked until midnight. 5．Since 1958 he had been devoted to aerospace science and research and made great contributions to the cause of China’s aerospace. 6．Whatever difficulties he came across, he never gave up. 尾段：总体评价 1．Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he received respect and admiration from people. 2．From her, I realise that as long as we keep on trying, we will achieve our dreams. 3．His spirit always inspires me to rise to the challenges in life and make up my mind to become a person who can make a difference to the world. 4．Many of us regard him as our model, whose deeds encourage us to follow our passion and strive for our dreams. 5．Not only did she make great contributions to science but she was also considered as the greatest woman scientist throughout the world. [写作要求] 请根据教材P30的信息，写一篇英语作文对中国首位获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖的科学家屠呦呦作简单介绍。 [审题谋篇] 体裁 记叙文 话题 人物传记 时态 一般过去时 人称 第三人称 [词句推敲] 1．词汇 (1)第一次 ___________________ (2)治疗方法 ___________ (3)提取_________ (4)贡献 _____________ (5)被授予 __________________ for the first time treatment extract contribution be presented with (6)被提名为 ______________________ (7)证明了中草药的功效 ___________________________________ (8)把时间和精力贡献于……_______________________________ be nominated for prove the effectiveness of Chinese herbs devote one’s time and energy to... 2．句式 (1)完成句子 ①2015年，中国科学家首次获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 In 2015，for the first time，a Chinese scientist _________________ ________________________． ②她在1930年12月30日出生于浙江省宁波市。 She __________ Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930. won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine was born in ③1951年至1955年，屠呦呦就读于北京医学院。 Tu Youyou ______________________________ from 1951 to 1955. ④1955年起，她在中国中医科学院任终身兼首席研究员。 Since 1955，she __________________ at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences as a tenured and chief researcher. studied at Beijing Medical College has been working ⑤1969年，她担任一个研究小组的组长，该小组旨在发现疟疾的治疗方法。 In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team that aimed to ____________________ malaria. ⑥到1972年，她成功地从一种中草药中提取出了能有效对抗疟疾的青蒿素。 By 1972，she had managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb，__________________________ malaria. discover a treatment for which is effective in fighting ⑦由于她的巨大贡献，她在85岁时获得了诺贝尔奖。 Because of her great contribution，she ________________ the Nobel Prize at the age of 85. ⑧2019年，她还被提名为“20世纪最伟大人物”。 In 2019，she ______________________ “The Greatest Person of the 20th century”． was presented with was also nominated for ⑨她不仅拯救了许多疟疾患者，而且还证明了中草药的有效性。 She not only has saved many people from suffering from malaria，but also she _______________________________________． ⑩她之所以受人钦佩，还因为她把大部分时间和精力都用于医学研究。 She is also admired because she ______________________________ __________________． has proved the effectiveness of Chinese herbs devotes most of her time and energy to medical research (2)句式升级 ⑪将句②和句③合并成一句。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑫用分词作定语改写句⑤。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930，Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955. In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria. ⑬用倒装句改写句⑨。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Not only has she saved many people from suffering from malaria，but also she has proved the effectiveness of Chinese herbs. [妙笔成篇] In 2015，for the first time，a Chinese scientist won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.She is Tu Youyou. Born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930，Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955.Since 1955，she has been working at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences as a tenured and chief researcher.In 1969， she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria. By 1972，she had managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb，which is effective in fighting malaria. Because of her great contribution，she was presented with the Nobel Prize at the age of 85.In 2019，she was also nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th century”． Not only has she saved many people from suffering from malaria，but also she has proved the effectiveness of Chinese herbs. Furthermore，she is also admired because she devotes most of her time and energy to medical research. 某中学生英文报开设了“人物传记”栏目，请你根据以下内容，为该栏目写一篇关于钱学森的英文传记。 人物身份 杰出科学家，我国航天事业的先驱者 生平 *1911年12月11日出生于一个富裕之家，少时天资聪颖，被称为“神童”。 *1934年大学毕业，1935年前往美国深造。 *1955年回国，致力于中国航天事业，参与火箭研究，开启中国航天时代。 *2009年10月31日于北京逝世 评价 成绩斐然，被誉为“中国航天之父” 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [参考范文] Qian Xuesen is one of the most outstanding scientists in China and a pioneer of China’s aerospace industry. Born into a wealthy family on December 11，1911, Qian Xuesen was so clever that he was referred to as a “wonder child” in his childhood. Having graduated from university in 1934, he went to America for further studies in the following year and gained his doctorate. After he returned to China in 1955, he devoted himself to China’s aerospace programme. He played a major role in the development of rockets. On October 31，2009, he passed away in Beijing. It’s because of his outstanding achievements that Qian Xuesen is regarded as “the father of Chinese aerospace”． $$