内容正文:
必修第二册
Unit 3 On the move
Period 5 Writing
内容索引
NEIRONGSUOYIN
单元写作 能力提升
单元写作 能力提升
单元写作任务:写一篇与体育运动有关的故事
本单元的写作任务是写一篇与体育运动有关的故事,属于记叙文文体。在写作过程中要把握住记叙文的六个要素,即时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)和过程(how)。写作时,要有一条线索贯穿全文,使整篇文章逻辑连贯。常见的写作步骤:
第一步:交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物;
第二步:介绍故事发生的原因及发展过程;
第三步:描述故事的发展结果并表达感受。
一、开头常用语句
1.The first time I took part in jogging, I fell in love with the sport.
2.The football game was held in our school gym last Friday when we played against the other team.
二、主体常用语句
1.In order to win the competition, I must get fully prepared and practice hard.
2.To perform well in the football game, I need to train in the school gym for two hours after school every day.
3.I like..., since it helps me to keep fit and calm myself.
4....is my favorite, since it is great fun and good exercise as well.
5.I never thought I could win first place in the running race.
三、结尾常用语句
1.It is the most exciting moment that I have experienced.
2.I really had a great day taking part in the running competition.
3.I was really proud when my team won the volleyball competition.
[写作要求]
有一家英文网站正在征集以“A Sports Story”为主题的故事,请按以下要点用英文写一篇关于你的运动故事:
1.几年前,你忙于学习,没有时间进行锻炼;
2.后来你意识到要保持学习和锻炼的平衡。在空闲时间,你喜欢有规律的锻炼,尤其是骑行;
3.骑行不仅能锻炼你的身体,还能减轻你的焦虑,开阔你的视野;
4.你希望能代表你们城市参加各种骑行比赛。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[审题谋篇]
体裁 记叙文
话题 运动故事
时态 一般过去时为主,一般现在时为辅
人称 第一人称
[词句推敲]
1.词汇
①n.紧张,焦虑 ________________
②adj.参加的,参与的 ________________
③n.平衡________________
④爱上________________
⑤尽情地_____________________
tension
involved
balance
fall in love with
to one's heart's content
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①几年前,由于忙于学习,我没有时间进行锻炼。
Several years ago, because I was ________________ my study, I had no time to ________________ exercising.
②后来,我意识到要保持学习和锻炼的平衡。
Later, I realized that I should ________________ between study and exercise.
occupied with
be involved in
keep a balance
③在我的空闲时间,我喜欢上了进行定期锻炼,尤其是骑行,这让我的生活更丰富多彩。
In my spare time, I ________________ taking regular exercise, especially cycling, and it ________________________.
④骑行不仅强健了我的身体,还减轻了我的焦虑。
Cycling not only ____________________,but also ____________________.
fell in love with
made my life more colorful
built up my body
reduced my tension
⑤此外,我到达过很多景点,这开阔了我的视野。
Besides, I reached many tourist attractions, which ________________
______________.
⑥我有机会接近大自然,尽情地欣赏美丽的景色。
I had chances to ________________________ and enjoy beautiful scenery ________________________.
broadened my
horizons
get close to nature
to my heart's content
⑦我希望代表我的城市参加各种各样的骑行比赛。
I hope to participate in varieties of cycling competitions ____________________.
on behalf of my city
(2)句式升级
⑧用含有非谓语动词的句子改写句①
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
⑨用含有非限制性定语从句的句子改写句③
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Several years ago, occupied with my study, I had no time to be involved in exercising.
In my spare time, I fell in love with taking regular exercise, especially cycling, which made my life more colorful.
⑩将句④转换成倒装句
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
⑪用含有现在分词短语作状语的句子改写句⑥
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Not only did cycling build up my body, but it also reduced my tension.
I had chances to get close to nature, enjoying beautiful scenery to my heart's content.
[妙笔成篇]
Several years ago, occupied with my study, I had no time to be involved in exercising.Later, I realized that I should keep a balance between study and exercise.In my spare time, I fell in love with taking regular exercise, especially cycling, which made my life more colorful.
I think cycling was of great benefit to me.Not only did it build up my body, but it also reduced my tension.Besides, I reached many tourist attractions, which broadened my horizons.What's more, I had chances to get close to nature, enjoying beautiful scenery to my heart's content.
I do hope to participate in varieties of cycling competitions on behalf of my city.
假定你是李华,上周参加了学校运动会。请你根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你此次参加学校运动会的经历。要点包括:
1.你的角色;
2.参与过程;
3.你的感受。
注意:词数80左右。
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[参考范文]
I have been actively involved in the sports events in my school.Last Friday, I entered a running race during the annual sports meet.
Faced with fifteen strong competitors, I felt nervous since I thought it hard to win first place.At the sound of the starting signal,all the runners went off.I did everything in my power to keep up with them.Minutes later, before I knew it,I became the second fastest runner.With a strong will, I was the first to reach the finish line.
Although I was tired and sweaty, I had never felt so proud and happy.
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