内容正文:
第六讲 建议信
【佳句必备】
眼前一亮开头句
1.You have asked me for advice with regard to/regarding how to learn Chinese well, and Ill try to offer some practical suggestions here.
你向我征求关于如何学好汉语的建议,我会尽量提出一些实用的建议。
2.Learning you can not make up your mind about what kind of book to choose, Id like to offer my suggestions to you.
知道你无法决定选择哪一本书,我想向你提出我的建议。
3.Im delighted to receive your letter, in which you asked me advice on how to focus on online courses.
我很高兴收到你的来信,你在信中问我如何专心上网课的建议。
4.As for how to improve calligraphy, Id like to offer you some advice.
关于如何提高书法,我想给你一些建议。
5.Im willing to give you a hand and offer some practical suggestions at your request.
我愿意帮助你并按你的要求提一些实用的建议。
亮点出彩篇中句
1.Personally/As far as Im concerned,it would be a wise choice if you stay at home and avoid going outdoors unless necessary.
在我看来,除非必要,待在家里避免出门是明智的。
2.Why not join a volunteer club? If you do this, you can not only help others but make friends.
为什么不参加志愿者俱乐部?如果你这样做的话,你不仅能帮助他人也会交到朋友。
3.In addition,I strongly suggest/advise you arrive on time or a little earlier.
此外,我强烈建议你准时或早一点儿到。
4.Theres no need for you to be so worried and nervous, and its necessary for you to consult some books concerning the traditional Chinese culture.
你没有必要如此担心和紧张,你有必要查阅一些关于中国传统文化的书籍。
5.Another suggestion is that you should wear a protective mask to prevent yourself from getting infected if you go outdoors.
另一个建议是,戴上防护口罩,以防外出时被感染。
6.If I were you/Were I you, I would work out regularly in order to keep healthy.
如果我是你,我会经常锻炼以保持健康。
7.Youd better exercise regularly, which is the most important way to help you stay away from any infections.
你最好经常锻炼,这是帮你远离感染的最重要的方法。
韵味无穷结尾句
1.Hope my suggestions will be of some help/benefit to you.
希望我的建议对你有所帮助/有益。
2.Personally, it would be beneficial if you follow my advice and have faith in yourself.
我认为,如果你采纳我的建议并相信自己的话会有益处的。
【黄金模板】
Dear ,
Im delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to
(引出对方需要建议的主题). Id like to make some suggestions./Im writing to.../Here are a few suggestions (引出作者的建议).
To begin with, youd better/it is a good idea to . Then,it also helps to . Besides, doing is also a good choice, as .
(可以根据要求用不同句式提出建议,如下:)
As to , I suggest (具体到建议的某一方面). In addition, (其他的建议). Im sure (预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心).
I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【典型案例】
假如你是李华,你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件,她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语,请你给她写封回信。要点:
1.扩大阅读,做摘记。
2.借助手机应用练习听力。
注意:
1.词数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【写作思路】
按照“总—分—总”的顺序展开:
1.来函收悉,欣然建言——略写。
2.锦囊妙计,娓娓而谈——详写。
3.依计而行,事半功倍——略写。
巩 固 提 升
请完成下面的建议信,然后背诵
假定你是李华。你的留学生朋友Tom以前成绩很优秀。但由于骄傲和懒惰,最近他的成绩一落千丈。就此请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.进行安慰。
2.给出劝告(不要骄傲,不忘初心)。
3.具体建议(努力复习,制定学习计划)。
注意:
1.词数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I feel sorry to know your grades have been slipping down because of your pride and laziness. But its not time for you to feel desperate. I believe you can find yourself back by taking action.
In my opinion, you shouldnt be proud but just keep working hard. Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished. Now, 1. (我想给你提一些建议). 2. , you must review the content that you have missed studying recently. 3. , 4. (我建议你做一个合适的学习计划) which you can keep up.
I hope you could feel better and get higher grades.
Yours,
Li Hua
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
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