进阶3-1-3 求助信(无答案)-【课堂快线】2025年新高考英语满分作文Word

第三讲　求助信 【佳句必备】 眼前一亮开头句 1.I􀆳m writing to seek help from you/ask you to do me a favor, as I meet with/come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign. 我写信请你帮忙,因为我在策划一个绿色校园运动时遇到了一些问题。 2.I am eager to get your timely help. /I􀆳m eager for your timely help. 我渴望得到你及时的帮助。 3.The reason why I am writing to you is that I wonder if you could do me a favor. 我写信给你是想知道你能否帮我。 4.Faced with/In face of so challenging a problem, I have no alternative but to turn to you for help. 面对这个难题,我只得向你求助。 亮点出彩篇中句 1.What bothers me is that I am at a loss/have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself at home. 困扰我的事情是我不知道如何在家里复习功课。 2.I have much trouble/bother in concentrating on online classes, making me really frustrated. 我很难专心上网课,这使我很苦恼。 3.I􀆳m stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have organized similar activities. 我被难住了,知道你组织过类似活动,所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。 4.I feel greatly stressed, so would you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to relieve stress? 我现在压力很大,你能给我一些减压的建议吗? 5.Learning you have rich experience in organizing opera performances, I was wondering if you could lend me a hand. 我知道你组织话剧演出经验丰富,因此我想知道你是否能帮我。 6.I find it difficult/challenging/tough for me to fit in with others in the new surroundings. 我发现在新的环境中我很难与他人融洽相处。 韵味无穷结尾句 1.I would be very grateful if you could take the trouble to help me deal with the problem. 如果你能费心帮我处理这个问题我将不胜感激。 2.Your timely help/assistance will be highly appreciated. 非常感谢你及时的帮助。 3.I􀆳d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance/instructions/help/assistance. 如果你能给我一些指导/帮助,我将不胜感激。 【黄金模板】 Dear 　　　　,  My name is 　　　　　　　　. I􀆳m writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.(说明自己身份,提出写信目的)  I have had much difficulty/trouble in 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(交代自己面临的困难). Besides, I􀆳m very upset that 　　　　　　　　(提出令自己苦恼的问题). What􀆳s more, I don􀆳t know 　　　　　　　　　　　　(进一步说明自己的困境). I􀆳m wondering if you could be so kind as to 　　　　　　　　　　　　so that 　　　　　　　　　　　　(请求对方帮助). In the meantime/At the same time, I beg you to 　　　　　　　　　　　　so that 　　　　　　　　　　 　　 (再次请求对方的帮助).  I􀆳d appreciate it if you could lend me a hand (表达对对方帮助的感激). I􀆳m looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【典型案例】 假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。你给外教Mr. Jenkins写信,请他帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。 注意: 1.词数80左右。 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【写作思路】 按照“总—分—总”的顺序展开: 1.开篇求助,直点主题——略写。 2.求助缘由,交代明细——详写。 3.早复为盼,勿忘感激——略写。 　巩 固 提 升　 请完成下面的求助信,然后背诵 假定你是李华,你要和父母一起外出进行一周的春节旅行,请你给在你市留学的英国朋友Peter写一封电子邮件,请他帮你照顾你的宠物鹦鹉。要点如下: 1.提出请求。 2.期待回复。 注意: 1.词数80左右。 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, How are you getting on these days? 1.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我写信问你是否能照顾我的鹦鹉) Andrew.  As the Spring Festival is approaching/ 2.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (用with复合结构升级加黑体部分), my parents and I have planned to have a one⁃week holiday. 3.　　　　　　　, no one can feed Andrew in our absence. Besides, I have been training it to speak English for weeks. So I really hope you could help me teach it English, in which case you can both help me and get great fun.  4.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (如果你能帮助,我将不胜感激). 5.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我渴望你及时回复).  Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$