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Suddenly a clear whistle broke the peace.Before she could hide into the bushes, she was stopped by a young man, who carried a gun over his shoulder. “Hello, little girl. I am hunting for some birds but I have lost my way.” he said kindly. “Can I spend the night at your house?” Sylvia hesitated for a while and agreed to take him home at last. Sylvia􀆳s grandma was really kind. She cooked for the young man and chatted with him. “Sylvia is very shy but she is popular with birds.” Grandma said proudly. “Birds come and feed right out of her hands, and all sorts of birds.” “So Sylvia knows all about birds?” he asked excitedly. “I am making a collection of birds myself.” “Do you cage them up?” asked Grandma. “Oh no, they􀆳re stuffed (制作标本) and preserved.” said the young man. “I came here for a white heron (鹭), a tall white bird with long thin legs. It would have a nest perhaps in the top of a high tree.” He looked at Sylvia, hoping for some answers. Sylvia􀆳s heart gave a wild beat. She knew the bird, but she said nothing. “I would offer ten dollars to any helper.” the man added desperately. Ten dollars was really a big sum. Sylvia agreed with a nod. The next day they started early, the young man going first and Sylvia following. He proved to be really kind and told her many things about birds. She could not understand why he killed the very birds he seemed to like so much. In the evening, they returned, empty⁃handed. Lying in bed, Sylvia suddenly thought of a great pine⁃tree, which stood at the farther edge of the woods and towered far above the others. “If I climb it at daybreak, maybe I could easily discover from where the white heron flew, and mark the place, and find the hidden nest.”she thought. What a big secret! 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在以下的相应位置作答。 Sylvia stole out of the house before daybreak.　 　 　 　 Seeing Sylvia back in dust, Grandma and the young man were surprised.　　 　 　 原文分析 Sylvia在一个晚上遇到了一个来捕捉白鹭的年轻人,年轻人要把这种鸟制作成标本,他想让Sylvia帮他找到白鹭,并且提出给10美元报酬,Sylvia同意了。最后,找到白鹭的Sylvia犹豫了,没有泄露白鹭的秘密。 时间线:One June evening(遇到年轻人)——The next day(一同去寻鸟)——In the evening(空手而回)——before daybreak(溜出家门)。 故事线: 八岁的Sylvia一天放牛回家时遇到了一个来森林里捕捉白鹭的年轻人,他迷路了,留宿到Sylvia家。当他知道Sylvia受鸟类欢迎并且很了解各种鸟后,提出请 Sylvia帮忙找鸟,而且出了很高的酬劳。第二天,二人一起去找白鹭,晚上的时候却空手而回。睡觉前,Sylvia想到了找到白鹭的方法。接下来的一天,她天不亮就偷偷离开家去找白鹭。 情感线:Sylvia听到年轻人想留宿自己家时犹豫不决(hesitated) ,听到年轻人在找白鹭做标本时很激动,心跳得厉害(Sylvia􀆳s heart gave a wild beat.),犹豫着没告诉年轻人她认识这种鸟。当年轻人出十美元作为酬劳时,Sylvia心动了,她同意帮忙找鸟。第二天,去森林里面找鸟时,她很困惑(She could not understand),不知道年轻人为何非要把鸟杀死来制作标本。 可能用到的词汇及段首句分析 1.续写可能用到的词汇 通过读原文我们可以推测续写中要用到的词汇有:Sylvia, the young man, the grandmother, climb, a great pine⁃tree, the nest, look for等。根据段首句可推测,她爬到了树尖上(the top of the tree),找到了(find)白鹭,很开心(delighted),回到家中,当年轻人和祖母询问她时,她沉默着(keep silent),没有泄露白鹭的秘密(secret)。 2.段首句分析 由第一段首句内容“Sylvia stole out of the house before daybreak.(Sylvia在天亮前偷偷溜出了房子。)”可知,第一段可描写Sylvia如何找到白鹭,以及想到白鹭会因为自己找到了它而被制作成标本时的犹豫不决。由第二段首句内容“Seeing Sylvia back in dust, Grandma and the young man were surprised.(看到Sylvia灰头土脸回来,祖母和年轻人都很惊讶。)”可知,第二段可描写祖母和年轻人询问Sylvia缘由,Sylvia经过思想斗争后,最后没有泄露白鹭的秘密。 写作思路分析 该篇写作思路是:Sylvia天不亮就偷溜出门——Sylvia经过一番努力后找到了白鹭,开心过后想到白鹭会被制成标本Sylvia犹豫——浑身是土的 Sylvia回到家,年轻人问Sylvia有没有找到白鹭时,Sylvia最终没有泄露白鹭的秘密——Sylvia感悟到大自然中生命的宝贵,Sylvia她认为无论她得到多少钱,都没有什么比大自然中的生命更有价值。 【范文】 Sylvia stole out of the house before daybreak. She managed to reach the tall tree. Then she began mounting to the top of it with her bare feet and hands. Her coat got torn and dusty. When she ended up on the top of the pine tree, she felt dizzy and fearful, but suddenly she spotted a white heron resting on a nest close to the tall tree. Sylvia nearly burst into cries. She knew she would soon get rich. However, thinking that the beautiful bird would soon be stuffed, she hesitated on her way back home. Seeing Sylvia back in dust, Grandma and the young man were surprised. “Where have you gone?” The old grandmother scolded her in an annoyed voice. And the young man looked straight in her eyes eagerly, waiting for an answer. Yet, she bit her lip tightly. Though knowing he would keep his promise, she still kept silent. On the way back, she had made up her mind not to let out any secret about the white heron. However much she was paid, nothing was more valuable than the life in nature. (一)续写词语积累 Ⅰ.词的积累——后悔、遗憾 动词 regret 名词 regret, pity 形容词 regretful, sorry 副词 regretfully, unfortunately 短语 to one􀆳s regret, regret doing sth., it is a pity that, feel sorry to do sth. 　　Ⅱ.句的积累 1.She was sorry that she􀆳d lost contact with Mary. 她懊悔跟玛丽失去了联系。 2.I􀆳m sorry to have to tell you you􀆳ve failed. 我只能遗憾地告诉你,你不及格。 3.I regret that I am unable to accept your kind invitation. 很遗憾,我不能接受你的友好邀请。 4. It􀆳s a pity that you can􀆳t stay longer. 你不能再多停留些时间,真是遗憾。 5. What a pity that she didn􀆳t tell me earlier. 很遗憾,她没有早点儿告诉我。 6.Unfortunately, the entire evening was a total nonevent. 很遗憾,整个晚上完全让人大失所望。 7.Mr. Griffin gave a regretful smile. 格里芬先生遗憾地笑了笑。 【微练1】　补全句子 1.她还没来得及躲进树丛中就被一个肩上扛着一把枪的年轻人拦住了。(before引导状语从句) 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 , she was stopped by a young man, who carried a gun over his shoulder. 2.他看着Sylvia,希望得到一些答案。(现在分词短语作伴随状语) He looked at Sylvia, 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　. 3.她不明白他为什么杀了他看上去那么喜欢的鸟。(why引导宾语从句) She could not understand 　　　　　　 　　　　　　　he seemed to like so much. 4.当她最终爬到松树尖上时,她感到头晕和恐惧。(when引导状语从句) 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　 , she felt dizzy and fearful. 5.突然她发现一只白鹭,它栖息在这棵大树附近的鸟巢里。(现在分词短语做宾补) Suddenly she spotted a white heron 　　　　　　　　　　close to the tall tree. 6.无论她得到的酬劳有多少,没有什么比自然界的生命更有价值。(however引导让步状语从句) 　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　 , nothing was more valuable than the life in nature. 【微练2】　在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。 Sylvia stole out of the house before daybreak. She managed 1.　　 　　 (reach) the tall tree. Then she began mounting to the top of it 2.　 　　　 her bare feet and hands. Her coat got torn and dusty. When she ended up on the top of the pine tree, she felt dizzy and fearful, but suddenly she 3.　　　　 (spot) a white heron resting on a nest close to the tall tree. Sylvia nearly burst 4.　 　　　 cries. She knew she would soon get rich.5.　　　 　 , thinking that the beautiful bird would soon be stuffed, she hesitated on her way back home. Seeing Sylvia back in dust, Grandma and the young man were surprised. “Where have you gone?” The old grandmother scolded her 6.　　　 　 an annoyed voice. And the young man looked straight in her eyes 7.　　 　　 (eager), waiting for an answer. Yet, she bit her lip tightly. Though knowing he would keep his promise, she still kept 8.　　 　　(silence). On the way back, she had made up her mind not to let 9.　　　　 any secret about the white heron. However much she was paid, nothing was more valuable 10.　　 　　 the life in nature. (二)原文词语积累 1.搜寻,寻找　　 hunt for 2.迷路 lose one􀆳s way 3.犹豫了一会儿 hesitate for a while 4.受……欢迎 be popular with 5.一笔大数目 a big sum 6.各种各样的 all sorts of 7.点头同意 agree with a nod 8.证明是 prove to be 【微练3】　单句语法填空 1.She was stopped by a young man, 　　　　carried a gun over his shoulder. 2.Sylvia hesitated for a while and agreed to take him home 　　　　last. 3.“Sylvia is very shy 　　　　she is popular with birds.” Grandma said proudly. 4.Ten dollars 　　　　(be) really a big sum. Sylvia agreed with a nod. 5.　　　　 (lie) in bed, Sylvia suddenly thought of a great pine⁃tree, which stood at the farther edge of the woods. 6.If I climb it at daybreak, maybe I could easily discover from 　　　　the white heron flew. 续写小贴士(八) 加入各种成分扩写句子 (1)加介词短语 (表时间、地点、方式等) A young man in England got in touch with us last week. 一个在英国的年轻人上周跟我们取得了联系。 (2)加动词不定式短语 (表目的) A young man in England got in touch with us last week to inform us of the conference. 一个在英国的年轻人上周跟我们取得了联系通知我们会议的情况。 (3)加定语从句(丰富句子内容) A young man in England got in touch with us last week to inform us of the conference, which was about the environmental protection. 一个在英国的年轻人上周跟我们取得了联系,通知我们关于环保会议的情况。 (4)加时间状语从句 (丰富句子内容) The man didn􀆳t wake up until the clock struck twelve at noon. 这个人直到中午十二点才睡醒。 (5)加让步状语从句(丰富句子内容) Though the man had a meeting to attend in the morning, he didn􀆳t wake up until the clock struck twelve at noon. 虽然上午有会要开,这个人直到中午十二点才睡醒。 (6)加现在分词短语(丰富句子内容) Glancing at the papers on the floor, the man went back home. 看了一眼地上的报纸,这个人回家了。 (7)加并列谓语动词(丰富句子内容) The girl picked up the flowers and left in a hurry. 女孩捡起花匆匆离开了。 (8)加过去分词短语(丰富句子内容) He didn􀆳t attend the meeting held by one of his best friends. 他没有出席他最好的一个朋友举行的会议。 $$