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A circle of audience had formed, nodding and moving slowly to the song. Lying at the feet of the street performer was his most adoring fan: One⁃Eyed, a white stray(流浪)dog with pieces of brown. Danny felt the name was suitable considering its physical disability. Usually, One⁃Eyed would bark loudly as Danny performed. Much to his annoyance, people often mistook the pair as owner and pet. At this time, Danny would reply, “My dog? No!”, eyes rolling at the idea. How he wished the dog would leave him alone instead! On a snowy night, while Danny was performing, a bird flew downward, landing into the midst of the crowd. It cooed happily as if to harmonize with Danny. Unfortunately, that did not sit well with One⁃Eyed, which immediately bounced at it and the bird flew away desperately. The unexpected chaos upturned Danny􀆳s hat, which could have been filled with notes and coins from his appreciative audience, leaving it ignored on the ground.“Argh! The hateful dog!” Danny broke down, thinking to himself, “Either the dog goes or I go!” On the next night, Danny tried to find a new place and chanced upon the park. For a while his earnings were good unsurprisingly as there was a steady flow of visitors. However, that didn􀆳t last long. One⁃Eyed came along and appointed itself as Danny􀆳s guardian.“Argh! Here comes the hateful dog again!” That night, Danny hadn􀆳t made enough money he should have, all thanks to the troublesome dog. Danny was almost mad with One⁃Eyed. “What should I do? Call an animal shelter?” Torn by this problem, he walked aimlessly by the lake of the park. With all his mind focused on how to get rid of the dog, Danny didn􀆳t watch his steps. Suddenly, he slipped and fell into the lake accidentally. Struggling in the icy water, he cried for help desperately, almost choking to death. Sensing the approach of death, Danny got into overwhelming panic. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在以下的相应位置作答。 Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance. 　 　 　 “My hero! Thank you for saving me.” Danny said gratefully with watery eyes.　 　 　 　 原文分析 本文由人物线索展开,讲述了一个街头艺人Danny和一只叫One⁃Eyed的流浪狗的故事。起初大家都误以为他们是一起的,但是Danny总想摆脱它。有一天,流浪狗又跟在Danny后面,Danny却意外落水。 时间线:通常Danny表演时流浪狗都陪伴左右——一个雪天晚上(On a snowy night)小狗制造了混乱——第二天晚上(On the next night)Danny心烦,意外落水。 故事线:街头艺人Danny的表演总能吸引很多观众,包括一只叫作One⁃Eyed的流浪狗,在Danny表演时小狗趴在他脚下,大声叫着,大家都以为小狗是他的宠物,其实他很想摆脱这只影响他挣钱的小狗。一天晚上,因为小狗,心烦意乱的Danny漫无目的地在湖边走着,失足落水。Danny感到死神在逼近,陷入了恐慌和绝望之中…… 情感线:全文情感走向很明了,处处体现了Danny对小狗的厌倦,急于想摆脱它的迫切的心情,如“Much to his annoyance”“How he wished the dog would leave him alone instead!”“‘Argh! The hateful dog!’ Danny broke down”“Danny was almost mad with One⁃Eyed.”等。 可能用到的词汇及段首句分析 1.续写可能用到的词汇 通过读原文我们可以推测续写中要用到的词汇有:Danny, One⁃Eyed, the lake, swim等。联系续写首句推测可能会用到描写One⁃Eyed营救(rescue)Danny的一系列动作,如jump into the lake, drag, move towards the shore等,获救的 Danny感谢(thank) One⁃Eyed,后悔(regret)之前没好好对待小狗。 2.段首句分析 由第一段首句内容“Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance.”(就在那时,在远处传来了熟悉的犬吠声。)可知,接下来要描述流浪狗营救Danny的过程。由第二段首句内容“‘My hero! Thank you for saving me.’Danny said gratefully with watery eyes.”(Danny流着眼泪感恩地说:“谢谢你救了我,我的英雄。”)可知,街头艺人Danny的内心发生了巨大的转变。本段应表现Danny的心理变化,以及他对待小狗态度的转变,要有相应的动作描写。 写作思路分析 续写的思路可以是:Danny落水惊恐绝望——流浪狗勇敢下水营救——获救的Danny感恩小狗——改变对小狗的态度——人与动物和谐相处。续写部分要呼应原文,与之前对小狗厌恶的态度形成对比,表现出Danny的心理变化,升华主题,体现Danny的成长,人与动物和谐相处。 【范文】 Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance. In a split second, a splash of brown, out of breath, quickly jumped into the lake. It was One⁃Eyed! It barked, swimming towards Danny with all its might. On spotting One⁃Eyed, Danny seemed to see a ray of hope, attempting to move towards it instantly. Instinctively, Danny grabbed the tail of One⁃Eyed. Ultimately, they managed to climb ashore, exhausted. Gazing at One⁃Eyed in disbelief, Danny patted it tenderly in return. One⁃Eyed was no longer troublesome; instead, it became a “hero” in his heart. “My hero! Thank you for saving me.” Danny said gratefully with watery eyes. “You􀆳re my brave guardian angel!” Since that night, “One⁃Eyed” was nonexistent while “Hero”, as the dog was re⁃named, became a part of Danny􀆳s performance. So attached were they to each other that they became genuine partners. Danny would include his pet as he engaged the audience. Hero also had its own place to lie on—the feet of Danny. While Danny played guitar, Hero would bark happily to harmonize with his owner. What a perfect match! (一)续写词语积累 Ⅰ.词的积累——焦虑 动词 worry, upset, annoy, bother 名词 anxiety, worry, suspense 形容词 worried, anxious, upset 副词 anxiously, worriedly 短语 be on thorns, be on pins and needles, be worried about, worry about, with anxiety, in suspense 　　Ⅱ.句的积累 1.Michael glanced anxiously down the corridor, but Wilfred was nowhere to be seen. Michael焦虑地顺着走廊扫视,但任何地方都没有Wilfred的身影。 2.Her master asked, knitting his brows anxiously. 她的主人焦急地皱着眉头问。 3.He was waiting for his brother􀆳s return with anxiety. 他正在焦虑地等待他哥哥回来。 4.They waited in great suspense for the doctor􀆳s arrival. 他们非常焦虑地等候医生的到来。 5.He glanced worriedly at his father. 他忧心忡忡地瞥了他父亲一眼。 6.The boy appeared anxious, had lost weight and was not sleeping well. 那个男孩显得很焦虑,体重减轻了,觉也睡不好。 7.He has exhibited symptoms of anxiety and overwhelming worry. 他已经表现出焦虑和忧心如焚的症状。 【微练1】　补全句子 1.观众围成一圈,点着头,随着歌曲慢慢移动。(现在分词作伴随状语) A circle of audience had formed, 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　. 2.躺在这位街头表演者脚下的是最崇拜他的粉丝:One⁃Eyed,一只掺杂着棕色狗毛的白色流浪狗。(全部倒装) Lying at the feet of the street performer 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　: One⁃Eyed, a white stray(流浪) dog with pieces of brown. 3.相反,他多么希望这只狗能离他远点儿!(wish后宾语从句使用虚拟语气) How he wished the dog　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 instead! 4.她被这个问题折磨着,漫无目的地在公园的湖边走着。(过去分词短语作状语) 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, he walked aimlessly by the lake of the park. 5.Danny的所有心思都集中在怎么摆脱这只狗上,没有注意脚下。(with复合结构) 　　　　　　　 　　　　　 how to get rid of the dog, Danny didn􀆳t watch his steps. 6.看到“One⁃Eyed”,Danny似乎看到了一线希望,立刻尝试向它游去。(现在分词作状语) On spotting One⁃Eyed, Danny seemed to see a ray of hope, 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　. 7.他们如此依恋彼此以至于他们成了真正的伙伴。(so...that...句式引起的部分倒装) 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 that they became genuine partners. 【微练2】　在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。 Just then, a familiar barking was heard in 1.　　　　 distance. In a split second, a splash of brown, out of breath, quickly jumped into the lake. It was One⁃Eyed! It barked, swimming towards Danny with all its might. On 2.　　　　(spot) One⁃Eyed, Danny seemed to see a ray of hope, attempting to move towards it instantly. Instinctively, Danny grabbed the tail of One⁃Eyed. 3.　 　　　 (ultimate), they managed 4.　　　　 (climb) ashore, 5.　 　　　(exhaust). 6.　　　　 (gaze) at One⁃Eyed in disbelief, Danny patted it tenderly 7.　　　 　 return. One⁃Eyed was no longer troublesome; instead, it became a “hero” in his heart. “My hero! Thank you for saving me.” Danny said gratefully with watery eyes. “You􀆳re my brave guardian angel!”Since that night, “One⁃Eyed”was nonexistent while “Hero”, as the dog was re⁃named, became a part of Danny􀆳s 8.　　 　　 (perform). So attached were they to each other 9.　　 　　 they became genuine partners. Danny would include his pet as he engaged the audience. Hero also had its own place to lie on—the feet of Danny. While Danny played guitar, Hero would bark happily to harmonize with his owner. 10.　　　 　 a perfect match! (二)原文词语积累 1.a slow and peaceful tune　　　　 一首缓慢而平和的曲子 2.mistake...as... 误把……当作…… 3.sit well with 与……相处得来 4.the unexpected chaos 意外的混乱 5.get into overwhelming panic 陷入极度恐慌 6.chance upon 偶然遇见 7.fall into the lake accidentally 意外落入湖中 8.get rid of 摆脱;除去 9.be mad with 对……生气 10.sense the approach of death 感到死亡的来临 【微练3】　单句语法填空 1.Danny sang while his fingers pressed and pulled 　　　 　(skillful) at the guitar strings, delivering a slow and peaceful tune. 2.Much to his 　　 　　(annoy), people often mistook the pair as owner and pet. 3.On a snowy night, while Danny was performing, a bird 　 　　　(fly) downward, landing into the midst of the crowd. 4.　　　 　 (fortunate), that did not sit well with One⁃Eyed, which immediately bounced at it and the bird flew away desperately. 5.“Argh! The hateful dog!” Danny, thinking to 　　 　　(him), “Either the dog goes or I go!” 6.One⁃Eyed came along and appointed itself 　　 　　Danny􀆳s guardian. 7.Struggling in the icy water, he cried for help desperately, almost choking to 　　　 (die). 8.For 　　　 　while his earnings were good unsurprisingly as there was a steady flow of visitors. 续写小贴士(六) 在续写中添加拟人 (1)把自然当作人来描写 The wind stood up and gave a shout.大风凛冽,发出怒吼。 The breeze gently kissed her cheeks.微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。 (2)把含蓄抽象的情感当作人来描写 Anger choked my words.我气得说不出话来。 Smile took hold of him.他笑容满面。 (3)把动物当作人来描写 Birds on the tree are singing a beautiful song.树上的小鸟唱着美妙的歌曲。 The frogs are giving a concert—mixed chorus.青蛙正在举办音乐会——混声大合唱。 $$