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He fell face down onto the steps outside a store, which broke his mouth and left his face covered with blood. Passers⁃by helped him sit up and wanted to know how he was doing by asking him questions, but he made no response. Some suggested his losing consciousness might be caused by low blood sugar. A woman fetched a bowl of sugar water for the young man and helped him drink it. I bought a pack of paper tissue and a bottle of water to wash clean his face and hands. Some else called 911 for an ambulance. Two minutes after the kind⁃hearted passer⁃by called 911, a hospital called back, saying they would charge 200 dollars for sending out the ambulance and wanted to know who was going to pay the money. This added unexpected trouble to the caller. She just wanted to help, but she didn􀆳t want to end up paying for the poor man􀆳s treatment, so she hung up and quietly walked away. I was busy cleaning the young man􀆳s broken face the whole time. When I finished, I was surprised to hear that the ambulance was not coming. At this time, the young man had got better and was beginning to talk. I asked him if he had any family, relatives or friends who could take care of him, yet his answers were hard to make sense of. A search of his pockets merely revealed a packet of cigarettes and a broken cellphone which was impossible to make a phone call with. With his face getting cleaned up, the young man􀆳s consciousness and speech ability seemed to gradually return. He was able to give short answers to passers⁃by􀆳s inquiries, yet he didn􀆳t mention what caused his passing out on the street. He looked skinny and pale, like a cancer patient or a drug addict. His eyes shifted focus when he spoke as if he couldn􀆳t look at a person in the eye. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在以下的相应位置作答。 Suddenly he asked me if I could walk him back to his house to get his medicine. 　 　 　 The longer we walked in the alley (小巷), the more scared I got. 　 　 　 原文分析 作者看到一个年轻人突然晕倒,受了伤。作者帮助他清理了脸上的血,并被要求送他回家。 时间线:作者发现年轻人晕倒(I saw a young man passing out)——好心人打急救电话(two minutes after the kind⁃hearted passer⁃by called 911)——恢复意识(the young man􀆳s consciousness and speech ability seemed to gradually return)。 故事线:作者在学校旁边的桥上看到一个年轻人突然晕倒,嘴破了并且脸上都是血。一位善良的女士打电话为他叫救护车,但救护车要付费所以放弃了。作者帮助年轻人清理了他脸上的血,年轻人的家人、朋友都联系不上,过了一会儿年轻人清醒过来,请求作者送他回家。 情感线:原文的感情线比较简单,救助年轻人的过程体现了作者和路人的善良、对小伙子的担心和关切。 可能用到的词汇及段首句分析 1.续写可能用到的词汇 通过读原文我们可以推测续写中要用到的词汇有:I, the young man, the passers⁃by, his home等。由续写首句猜测,可能会有关于买药(the medicine)的情节、进到小巷子里(the valley)作者很害怕(scared)。 2.段首句分析 由第一段首句内容 “Suddenly he asked me if I could walk him back to his house to get his medicine.”(突然他问我是否可以陪他回家拿药。)可知,第一段可描写作者陪同年轻人回家拿药的过程。由第二段首句内容“The longer we walked in the alley, the more scared I got.”(我们在小巷子里走得越远,我越感到害怕。)可知,第二段可描写作者怀疑年轻人是坏人而感到害怕,最后发现事实不是这样而感到抱歉。 写作思路分析 续写思路可以是陪同年轻人回家——在黑暗的小巷里感到害怕——怀疑他是坏人——帮他买到药品——得知真相——为自己的偏见和猜疑感到抱歉。在发现真相前,作者的心理描写要占一定篇幅,应表现出作者以貌取人,胡乱猜测,吓坏自己也差点儿误会别人,让情节设计在意料之外、情理之中。 【范文】 Suddenly he asked me if I could walk him back to his house to get his medicine. I agreed without hesitation and waved down a taxi, but he said his house was in a small alley not accessible by car, so we had to go on foot. However, as we turned into a narrow alley far away from the noisy streets, I began to have bad feelings. It was easy to get suspicious about his skinny body and the dark alley. Was he a decent man? Was this a trick to rob me? Were there other people waiting at his house? The longer we walked in the alley, the more scared I got. The man was weak but I got the feeling that he was capable of doing great harm to me. I suddenly insisted on buying the drug for him in a nearby drugstore. When the clerk in the drugstore handed us what we wanted, I checked it and found to my amusement that it was actually medicine for a brain disease that makes the patients black out when they are stimulated. For obvious reasons, patients are usually too ashamed to talk about their condition. They have to try extra hard to live an ordinary life. Now it made total sense to me. I felt embarrassed at my overreaction and bias. I wanted to help a poor man, but was scared by my own wild imagination. I guess that􀆳s the price I had to pay for playing a hero. (一)续写词语积累 Ⅰ.词的积累——孤独 动词 isolate 名词 loneliness, solitude, forlornness 形容词 lonely, solitary, alone, neighborless, isolated, single 短语 all alone, in solitude, by oneself, feel lonely 　　Ⅱ.句的积累 1.He􀆳s a lonely old man who only has his dog to keep him company. 他是一个孤独的老人,只有他的狗陪伴着他。 2.A solitary hunched figure emerged from the house. 一个弯腰驼背的孤独身影从那个房子里出来了。 3.You could see the occasional solitary figure making a study of wild flowers and grass. 你偶尔可以看见那个研究野生花草的孤独身影。 4.Never in her life had she felt so lonely, and so abandoned. 她一辈子从没有感到过如此孤独、如此被抛弃。 5.They frequently get stuck in the depths of loneliness, humiliation, and despair. 他们常常陷入孤独、屈辱和绝望的深渊。 6.He trudged home feeling lonely and let down. 他步履艰难地往家走,孤独而沮丧。 【微练1】　补全句子 1.他脸朝下摔在一家商店外的台阶上,嘴破了,脸上都是血。(which引导非限制性定语从句) He fell face down onto the steps outside a store,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　. 2.派救护车要收费200美元,他们想知道谁会付这笔费用。(who引导宾语从句) They would charge 200 dollars for sending out the ambulance and wanted to know 　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　. 3.我做完这一切后,惊讶地听说救护车来不了了。(be+adj.+to do 结构) When I finished, 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　that the ambulance was not coming. 4.他的脸被清理干净了,同时年轻人的意识和语言能力似乎也逐渐恢复了。(with 复合结构) 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, the young man􀆳s consciousness and speech ability seemed to gradually return. 5.这个人很虚弱但我感觉他有能力对我造成很大的伤害。(that引导同位语从句) The man was weak but I got the feeling　 . 【微练2】　在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。 Suddenly he asked me if I could walk him back to his house to get his medicine.I agreed without 1.　　 　　 (hesitate) and waved down a taxi, but he said his house was in a small alley not 2.　　 　　(access) by car, so we had to go on foot. 3.　　 　　, as we turned into a narrow alley far away from the noisy streets, I began to have bad feelings. It was easy 4.　　 　　(get) suspicious about his skinny body and the dark alley. Was he a decent man? Was this a trick to rob me? Were there other people 5.　　 　 (wait) at his house? The 6.　　　　(long) we walked in the alley, the more scared I got. The man was weak but I got the feeling 7.　　　　 he was capable of doing great harm to me. I suddenly insisted on 8.　　　　(buy) the drug for him in a nearby drugstore. When the clerk in the drugstore handed us what we wanted, I checked it and found to my amusement that it was actually medicine for a brain disease that makes the patients black out when they are stimulated. For obvious reasons, patients are usually too 9.　　　　 (shame) to talk about their condition. They have to try extra hard to live an ordinary life. Now it made total sense 10.　　　　 me. I felt embarrassed at my overreaction and bias. I wanted to help a poor man, but was scared by my own wild imagination. I guess that􀆳s the price I had to pay for playing a hero. (二)原文词语积累 1.pass out　　　　　　　　　　 昏迷,失去知觉 2.fall face down 脸朝下摔倒 3.make no response 一言不答 4.low blood sugar 低血糖 5.send out the ambulance 派救护车来 6.make sense of 理解;弄明白 7.a packet of cigarettes 一包香烟 8.look at a person in the eye 直视某人的眼睛 【微练3】　单句语法填空 1.I had just passed the bridge on the left side of our school 　　　　I saw a young man passing out in front of me. 2.Passers⁃by helped him sit up and wanted to know how he was doing by 　　　　(ask) him questions, but he made no response. 3.Some suggested his losing consciousness might 　　　　(cause) by low blood sugar. 4.Two minutes after the kind⁃hearted passer⁃by called 911, a hospital called back, 　　　 (say) they would charge 200 dollars for sending out the ambulance. 5.She just wanted to help, but she didn􀆳t want to end up 　　 　　(pay) for the poor man􀆳s treatment, so she hung up and quietly walked away. 6.I was busy cleaning the young man􀆳s 　　 　　(break) face the whole time. 7.I asked him if he had any family, relatives or friends who could take care of him, yet his answers were hard to make sense 　　 　　. 8.He was able to give short answers to passers⁃by􀆳s inquiries, yet he didn􀆳t mention 　　 caused his passing out on the street. $$