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Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting grandparents again. The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents􀆳 eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about fun they had with grandparents. A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully. Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!” Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn􀆳t stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly(倔强地) “I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently. The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs... How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom! But now Grandpa couldn􀆳t get up. This made them worried. “We􀆳d think out a way to cheer him up.”Jack said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!” Jack shook his head. Then a bright idea came to Jack􀆳s mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!” 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在以下的相应位置作答。 Berlin thought it was a good idea. 　 　 　 Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.　 　 　 　 原文分析 Jack和Berlin兄弟俩暑假回到爷爷奶奶家,却发现爷爷因病无法站立。他俩想为爷爷制作一个拐杖,帮爷爷重新站起来。 时间线:原文叙述的是在暑假期间(Summer vacation was coming.)Jack和Berlin来到爷爷家后的故事。 故事线:暑假到了,Jack和Berlin兄弟俩一想到要再次去看望祖父母就兴奋不已。来到爷爷奶奶家后,亲人见面格外高兴。爷爷却无法像以前一样站起来和孩子们玩儿,他感到无助绝望。兄弟俩回想起与爷爷一起在森林中玩耍的甜蜜时光,因而更加为此感到担忧,于是想办法让爷爷高兴起来。最终两人决定做个拐杖,当作礼物送给爷爷。 情感线:故事围绕两兄弟和爷爷展开叙述,一开始见到爷爷奶奶的兄弟俩兴奋不已(shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!”),爷爷很是开心(Grandpa was wild with joy)却因不能站起来陪孩子们玩儿而感到无助(A helpless expression),爷爷的状况让兄弟俩很担心(worried)。 标题、可能用到的词汇及段首句分析 1.标题分析 根据文章的标题A GIFT FOR GRANDPA(给爷爷的礼物)推测本故事续写方向就是礼物,续写中应牢牢抓住这一线索,不应偏离主题。 2.续写可能用到的词汇 通过分析原文和段首句推断出续写可能用到的词汇有:Berlin, Jack, Grandpa, a cane, the gift等。 第一段可能会用到与制作拐杖有关的词汇,如到森林里(the forest)砍树(cut down the tree),砍掉树枝(remove the branches)等。第二段描写爷爷见到礼物后很开心(delighted/pleased),感谢(grateful)他们二人等。 3.段首句分析 由第一段首句内容“Berlin thought it was a good idea.”(Berlin认为这是一个好主意。)可知,第一段应描写二人制作拐杖的过程,适当加入一些具体的动作描写,如砍树、去树皮等细节。由第二段首句内容“Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.”(Jack和Berlin把拐杖递给爷爷。)可知,第二段要介绍爷爷见到礼物时的反应,适当加入动作和语言描写。 写作思路分析 兄弟俩Jack和Berlin来到森林砍树制作拐杖送给爷爷,爷爷惊喜万分,终于又能够和孩子们一起去森林中愉快地玩耍了。 【范文】 Berlin thought it was a good idea. They set about making a cane for Grandpa immediately. The moment they chose a young tree of moderate size, they cut it down and then removed the branches and skins with a knife. With a small wood fastened on the top as a handle, a fashionable cane came into being. To make the handle feel comfortable, they wrapped a soft cloth around it. Berlin, full of innovative ideas, carved words Gift To Grandpa on the cane. What a cool cane! Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. Staring at the fancy cane, Grandpa was so happy with smiles on his face shining like a diamond. He thanked his grandsons for the wonderful gift with affection, “You brothers are really great creators!”Supporting himself with the cane, Grandpa couldn􀆳t contain himself and went to the forest step by step. Watching the trees and grass around, he emotionally said he would forever cherish the fond moments they were together in the forest. (一)续写词语积累 Ⅰ.词的积累——生气 动词 annoy, offend, glare 名词 anger, annoyance, rage 形容词 annoyed, angry, furious 短语 be filled with anger, flush with anger(脸气得通红), in anger, be offended with, glare at 　　Ⅱ.句的积累 1.His anger boiled over. 他的愤怒爆发了。 2.He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage. 他几乎控制不住怒火。 3.His voice trembled with anger. 他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。 4.He glared at me with burning eyes. 他用炽热的目光怒视着我。 5.He risked a glance at her furious face. 他壮着胆子瞅了瞅她那张愤怒的脸。 6.This annoyed him, and he began to lose his head. 这使他很恼怒,他开始失去理智了。 7.Her face clouded over with anger. 她满脸怒容。 【微练1】　补全句子 1.Jack和他的兄弟Berlin一想到要再次去看望祖父母就兴奋不已。(as引导时间状语从句) Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　 　　　　　. 2.Jack和Berlin都给了奶奶一个大大的拥抱,然后冲到客厅,兴奋地喊道:“爷爷,我们回来了!”(现在分词短语作状语) Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, 　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　“Grandpa, we are back!” 3.终于出现了一座带白色烟囱的蓝色小房子。房子后面是森林,承载着他们和爷爷的美好回忆。(全部倒装) A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property　　　 　 carrying their good memories with Grandpa. 4.他们来到了家门前的车道上,在尽头,奶奶正高兴地等着他们。(which引导定语从句) They arrived at the driveway,　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　. 5.他们一选中一棵中等大小的小树就把树砍倒,用刀割下树枝和树皮。(the moment 引导时间状语从句) 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 of moderate size, they cut it down and then removed the branches and skins with a knife. 【微练2】　在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。 Berlin thought it was a good idea. They set about 1.　　　　 (make) a cane for Grandpa immediately. The moment they chose a young tree of moderate size, they cut it 2.　　　　 and then removed the branches and skins with a knife. With a small wood 3.　　　　(fasten) on the top as a handle, a 4.　 　　　(fashion)cane came into being. To make the handle feel 5.　　 　　(comfort), they wrapped a soft cloth around it. Berlin, full of innovative ideas, carved words Gift To Grandpa on the cane. What a cool cane! Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. 6. 　　 　　(stare)at the fancy cane, Grandpa was so happy with smiles on his face shining like a diamond. He thanked his grandsons 7. 　　 　　the wonderful gift with affection, “You brothers are really great creators!” Supporting himself with the cane, Grandpa couldn􀆳t contain 8.　 　　　(him) and went to the forest step 9.　　　　 step. Watching the trees and grass around, he 10.　 　　　 (emotional)said he would forever cherish the fond moments they were together in the forest. (二)原文词语积累 1.be filled with excitement　　　　 兴奋不已 2.set out for the grandparents􀆳 出发去祖父母家 3.arrive at the driveway 到达车道 4.give sb. a big hug 紧紧拥抱某人 5.be wild with joy 欣喜若狂 6.in vain 徒劳 7.full of wisdom 充满智慧 8.cheer sb. up 使某人高兴起来 【微练3】　单句语法填空 1.Jack and his brother Berlin were 　　 　　(fill) with excitement as they thought of visiting grandparents again. 2.On the way, the brothers were 　　 　　(excited)talking about fun they had with grandparents. 3.Behind the property was the forest carrying their good 　　 　　(memory) with Grandpa. 4.Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his 　　　 (strong) from the chair but in vain. 5.The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and 　　 　(wander) into the forest. 6.　　　　 many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom! $$