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carrying a purse
whose driver was a man with a very ugly look
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Pointing at the man inside the car
what shocked Sam
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(2022·金太阳百校联考)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sam is a brave policeman who often comes across dangerous situations. However, when he was young, he experienced a funny story during his work.
That was a nice day, and Sam worked at the police station as usual.A rich and beautiful woman carrying a purse drove to work. She parked her car in the street outside her office. When she finished her work that afternoon, she got into her car quickly and started driving home as usual. Suddenly, she noticed a yellow car at her back, whose driver was a man with a very ugly look. To her surprise, when she turned left, the yellow car also turned left. When she turned right, the yellow car turned right, too. When she stopped at the traffic lights, the yellow car stopped behind her.
Gradually, fear came into her heart. What should she do? How could she get rid of this terrible man? To deal with this situation, she decided to drive quickly to the police station where Sam worked. However, she was even more surprised when she saw the car still followed her and stopped behind her. “How dare he follow me here?” she said to herself. She could feel her heart beating faster than ever. At that time, Sam was standing on duty outside the police station. Seeing Sam wearing a police uniform, she was more than delighted that she would be safe.
At once, she jumped out of her car and ran to Sam without any delay. Pointing at the man inside the car, she said a bad man was following her and asked Sam to arrest him. To find what was happening, Sam walked towards the man who had stopped his car near the womans.
But what shocked Sam was that the man didnt try to escape when he saw him. Instead, the man looked relieved. Seconds later, the man walked towards the woman and Sam.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在以下的相应位置作答。
The man just smiled and started to tell the truth.
Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.
原文分析
本文主要讲了这样一个故事:一个美丽的女人开车回家时,发现一个长相丑陋的男人尾随着她的车,内心充满恐惧。于是,她急中生智,把车开到警察局,告诉值班的警察Sam去逮捕该男子。但此人不但没有逃走,反而走向Sam与这个女人……
时间线:文章的时间线很简单,讲述的是Sam 年轻时当值的一天下午发生的故事,分为女子开车途中和到达警局后这两个时间段。
情节线: 文章是当警察的Sam的回忆:一天一位美丽的女士开车下班,途中惊讶地发现一个丑陋的男子驱车尾随;恐惧万分的女士把车开到警察局,看到身穿警服的Sam,奔向他请求逮捕男子,却发现这名可疑男子不但不逃跑反而如释重负地走向女子和Sam。接下来的续写要围绕男子为什么不逃跑展开。文章开头的女士手中的钱包是伏笔,续写中要有所体现。
情感线:故事以美丽的女士为核心展开。一开始,女士看到男子跟随很惊讶(to her surprise);逐渐地恐惧之感涌上她的心头(fear came into her heart),她心跳加速,于是决定到警察局去;她发现男子仍旧跟着,所以愈加惊讶(even more surprised),见到Sam后很开心(more than delighted);男子走向Sam和她的做法让Sam很震惊。
可能用到的词汇及段首句分析
1.续写可能用到的词汇
通过分析原文和段首句可推测我们续写可能用到的词汇有:Sam, the woman, the man, the car等。文章开头出现的purse是作者埋下的伏笔,续写第一段要出现purse,说明男子是为了归还钱包(return the purse)才尾随女子。第二段首句暗示Sam趁机教育女子,女子醒悟是自己错怪了(misunderstand)男子,向男子道歉(apologize)并表达感激之情(gratitude)。
2.段首句分析
续写的关键除了读懂原文还要理解段首句,在写作之前必须仔细读这两句。从第一段首句“The man just smiled and started to tell the truth.”(男子只是笑了笑,然后开始讲述原委。)可知,第一段要交代清楚男子开车尾随女子的原因,前文的purse及女子快速开车回家的细节暗示女子匆忙之中丢失的钱包被男子捡到,男子为了还钱包才一路跟着女子。从第二段首句“Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.”(然后Sam陷入了沉思,跟女子交谈起来。)可知,第二段要描写Sam由此事引发的感触,告诉女子她误会了男子,所以应该感谢这位男子。最后还要有关于女士对自己错误判断的反思和相应的动作描写。
写作思路分析
男子告知Sam和女子真相:捡到了女子的钱包,跟随其后,意欲归还。Sam听后,教育女子不该以貌取人,怀疑男子是坏人。女子惭愧不已,向男子道歉并感谢他拾金不昧。本文情节设计属于出乎意料却在情理之中的方法:伏笔隐藏,最后揭露,给人惊喜,感悟更深,更利于表现主题。
【范文】
The man just smiled and started to tell the truth. He explained that when he went to his car, parked next to the womans, he noticed a red purse slip off onto the ground just when the woman slammed the car door.Before he took action, she started her engine and left. In a split second, he picked up the purse, memorized her car plate and started his journey to pursue her in order to return her purse. “To my relief she must have noticed her loss and drove to you to report her case. Sir, could you do me a favor to recover her loss?” Hearing that, the woman lowered her head in shame.
Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman. “Young lady,” Sam addressed her sternly, “apparently he did a good deed and is a kind man who you should thank.” It now dawned on the woman that she had misunderstood him the whole time because of her wrong judgement. She laughed at her silly behavior inwardly and strode to him closer to shake his hand over and over again to express her gratitude. “Never judge a book by its cover.” she told herself.
(一)续写词语积累
Ⅰ.词的积累——失望,沮丧
动词
disappoint, discourage, frustrate
形容词
disappointed, disappointing, depressed, depressing,
downhearted, blue, gloomy, despairing
名词
disappointment, depression
短语
lose hope, be disappointed at, in despair, to ones disappointment
Ⅱ.句的积累
1.Her expression showed her disappointment.
从她的表情可以看出她很失望。
2.Jo gave a despairing groan and Meg laughed outright.
Jo失望地叹了一声,Meg却放声大笑。
3.The last, do not lose hope, trust yourself and make your target clear.
最后,不要失望,相信你自己,坚定你的目标。
4.Here and there, husbands sat in wordless despair.
丈夫们四下坐着,默默无语,非常绝望。
5.In spite of his disappointment, he managed a weak smile.
虽然很失望,他还是勉强露出一丝淡淡的微笑。
【微练1】 补全句子
1.一个有钱的漂亮女人拿着钱包开车上班。(现在分词短语作后置定语)
A rich and beautiful woman drove to work.
2.突然,她注意到一辆黄色的汽车跟在她后面,司机是一位非常丑陋的男子。(whose引导定语从句)
Suddenly, she noticed a yellow car at her back,
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3.为了应对这一情况,她决定迅速把车开到Sam工作的警察局。(不定式作目的状语)
, she decided to drive quickly to the police station where Sam worked.
4.指着车内的男子,她说一个坏人正在跟踪她,请求Sam逮捕他。(现在分词作伴随状语)
, she said a bad man was following her and asked Sam to arrest him.
5.但是让Sam震惊的是这名男子见到他并没有打算逃走。(what引导主语从句)
But was that the man didnt try to escape when he saw him.
6.他还没有来得及采取行动,她就发动引擎离开了。(before引导时间状语从句)
, she started her engine and left.
【微练2】 在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
The man just smiled and started to tell the 1. (true). He explained that when he went to his car, parked next to the womans, he noticed a red purse slip off onto the ground just when the woman slammed the car door. Before he took action, she started her engine and left. In a split second, he picked 2. the purse, memorized her car plate 3. started his journey to pursue her in order to return her purse. “4. my relief she must have noticed her loss and drove to you to report her case. Sir, could you do me 5. favor to recover her loss?”Hearing that, the woman lowered her head in shame.
Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman. “Young lady,” Sam addressed her sternly,“6. (apparent) he did a good deed and is a kind man 7. you should thank.” 8. now dawned on the woman that she 9. (misunderstand) him the whole time because of her wrong judgement. She laughed at her silly behavior inwardly and strode to him closer to shake his hand over and over again to express her gratitude. “Never judge a book by its cover.” she told 10. (her).
(二)原文词语积累
1.come across dangerous situations 遇到危险的情况
2.start driving home as usual 开始像往常一样开车回家
3.a man with a very ugly look 一个长相非常丑陋的男子
4.stop at the traffic lights 在红绿灯处停下
5.fear comes into her heart 恐惧袭上她的心头
6.get rid of this terrible man 摆脱这个可怕的人
7.wear a police uniform 穿着警服
8.without any delay 立即,立刻
【微练3】 单句语法填空
1.That was a nice day, and Sam worked at the police station usual.
2.What should she do? How could she get rid this terrible man?
3.To deal with this situation, she decided to drive quickly to the police station
Sam worked.
4.She could feel her heart (beat) faster than ever.
5.Seeing Sam wearing a police uniform, she was more than (delight) that she would be safe.
6.Instead, the man looked (relieve). Seconds later, the man walked towards the woman and Sam.
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