UNIT 1 Section Ⅳ Writing—Write a sci-fi short story-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册（人教版2024）

UNIT I SCIENCE FICTION Section IV Writing-Write a sci-fi short story 答案精解P 本单元的写作项目是写一篇科幻故事。科 跟课文学亮点表达 幻故事是开放式作文的一种，一般给出一段材 ●阅读文章第一、二自然段，习得以下素养 料，要求我们充分发挥想象力来拓展原材料内 ★学细节表达 容，运用逻辑推理的方法，沿着材料的纵横方向 第一段中在描写“我”的动作时，采用了动作 延伸，给故事添加开头、中间过程或结尾。想象 链的表达方式，如第二、三句中的gave,sat, 必须合理而且内容丰富，要抓住主题，运用恰当 pushed等。在描写动作时，要学会细化动作，把 的词汇、句型与语句间的连接成分使表达连贯， 动作过程分解成一连串细微的动作，形成动作 语言流畅，具有美感。 链，使动作具有连贯性，这样才能使描写具有画 面感，使人物更立体。这个方法在读后续写中经 以读促写 常使用。 )】跟课文学写作范式 [微写作1门一一补全句子 (一)课文范式提炼 (1)我走近父亲，骄傲地拿出我自己的钱并递给他。 第一 知课文第一股：讲递“我” Dad,proudly 部公 引入话题 第一次尝祝名动时园就器 其体描述 如深文第二至叫陵：介绍 my own money and it to him. 第一 部分 放方发展 “我”衣坐时间视器的过 的过程 程及感受 (2)他把梯子靠在墙上，爬上去往外看。 第. 如课文第五段：交代“我” his ladder against the wall,he 放业结局 终予整共了机器的运行， 钻采跨越千年，到达永来 and over. (二)写作要点指津 。阅读文章第三至五自然段，习得以下素养 科幻故事的基本写作步骤为： ★学修辞手法 1.确定主题，明确方向 第三段中采用了比喻的修辞手法，如第二句 认真领会题目所给的文字或图画信息，然 把“我”进行时间旅行的感觉比喻成在一条蜿蜒 后通过合理的想象确定写作的中心或文章主 曲折的路上开车：第四句把太阳和月亮的更替比 题，为下一步写作明确方向。 喻成它们被人抛着划过天空：第五句把周围的树 2.创设情景，勾勒形象 木的成长比喻成袅袅的烟雾升起等。修辞手法 确定主题后创设一种表现写作中心的情 的运用，有助于避免语言的枯燥，是高语言的表 景，并在具体的情景中通过其语言、行动、心理 达效果，使故事情节更为生动形象。 活动等手段达到预设的写作目的。 [微写作2]一英汉互译 3.叙述情节，连句成文 (1)这辆满载乘客的公交车就像蜗牛爬行一样缓 选定写作形象后根据要求在特定的情景 慢前行。 中具体展开故事情节或写作片段。在这一过 程中要列出写作素材，进行“精挑细选”继而组 句谋篇并注意时态、人称的合理使用。 ·15 英语选择性必修第四册同步导学案 (2)Life is an unexplored river,full of twists and turns. 8.When intelligent machines can do the thinking, will our brain get lazy and regress?当智能机器 可以思考时，我们的大脑会变得懒惰和退化吗？ 9.As a matter of fact,I believe the wide spread ★学写作手法 of Al actually acts as a motivation to force us 第五段采用了对话式结尾的方式，呼应了文 to become more intelligent. 章开头，对整篇文章的内容起到了概括的作用。 事实上，我相信人工智能的广泛传播实际上是 一种动力，迫使我们变得更聪明」 增分佳句 > 10.To sum up.every technology is a double 1.In the future,every family can have a robot. edged sword. and it can help people do many things. 综上所述，每一项科技都是一把双刃剑。 未来，每个家庭都会拥有一个机器人，它可以 佳作构建 >> 帮助人们做很多事情。 2.With the development of science and technology, 【写作要求】 our life will be surely more convenient and 你校校报英语角举办科幻故事征文比赛，请 comfortable.随着科学技术的发展，我们的生 你写一个关于外星人的故事参加比赛。内容包括： 活一定会更加方便和舒适。 L.时间、地点：2.主要情节：3.你的感受。 3.We can imagine everything will be done easily 注意：1.词数80左右； and automatically..我们可以想象每件事都会 2.故事题目已经给出，不计入总词数。 轻而易举地自动完成。 The Alien 4.Robots may be the most clever except humans in the future. 在未来，机器人可能是除人类以外最聪明的。 5.This is the life that I am looking forward to. 这就是我所期待的生活。 【四步成文】 6.No one can make sure whether another life 第一步：审题谋篇 exists in the universe. 明喻体裁话题写二不关芋外岸人的科划核 没有人能确定在字宙中是否存在另外的生命。 确定时态人称 二股过时：第二人称 7.Though the scientists never saw the real aliens.I 第段：枚半发牛的背景： still believe that besides human beings,life 们局义章架构 第二段：做半的主要情节： 第三段：你的感受 must exist in the universe. 虽然科学家们从未见过真正的外星人，但我仍然相 1.看见外星人的时刻： 列出核心要点 2.外星人的行为： 信除了人类之外，宇宙中一定存在另外的生命。 3.作者的内心新动 16 UNIT I SCIENCE FICTION 第二步：由词扩句 5.用so…that…句型升级第二步中的句5 1.那天晚上很热，我睡不着。（并列句） It was pretty hot that night and I 第四步：连句成篇 2.突然我的帐篷附近出现了一个圆形飞机模样 The Alien 的东西。（主谓结构） Suddenly something like a round plane 3.它看上去就像我在书中看到的那样。（定语从句） It in the book I had read. 4.然后我看到一个外星人通过一个圆形的门下 来了。（宾语从句） Then I saw that an alien 实战演练 >》 假如你是王华，每天看到母亲在厨房里忙碌 5.我对这件事感到困惑，因此不敢相信自己看到 的身影，你觉得她很辛苦。于是你想象如果你能 的。（并列句） 发明一个能做饭的机器人，并且送给母亲该多 I was puzzled, 好。请你给母亲写一封信，把你的想象告诉她。 6.如果遇到外星人，我要和他面对面谈一谈。（复 注意：1.词数80左右： 合句) 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 would have a face-to-face talk with him. 第三步：句式升级 1.用so…that…句型升级第二步中的句1 2.用倒装句升级第二步中的句2 3.用定语从句升级第二步中的句2和句3 友 完成P1w课时作业（三） 4.用“宾补结构”升级第二步中的句4 完成Pso UNIT1单元回扣 Then I saw an alien 示 完成P1 UNIT1单元验收评价 17同步导学案答案 UNIT 1 SCIENCE FICTION 跟踪检测 1,单句语法填空 Section I Reading and Thinking 1.were invited 2.has been changed 3.are removed 4.were used 5.is envied 6.have been made 7.to be done 课文研读·发展思维品质 8.pulling/to be pulled 9.washes 10.be delivered Step One I.D II.Parts 1-3 CAB Ⅱ.语法与写作（使用被动语态） Step Two 1~4 CCAC 1.which is being restored 2.this area was named Step Three I.L.时间状语：突语克莱尔并不想家里有个机 3.to be discussed 4.are difficult to remember 器人，尤其是在她丈夫要出差三周的时候，但是拉里劝她说机 5.homework hadn't been finished 器人不会伤害她，也不会让她受到伤害 6.their own house is being rebuilt 2.形式主语：真正的主语克菜尔认为她被机器人同情是荒谬 语基输入·助力语言输出 的，但她逐渐软佩他的智慧和正直，并且开始信任他。 1.(1)presumption (2)It is presumed that 3.宾语：非限制性定语她告诉他，她很不高兴，因为她的家对 2.(1)is based (2)basic (3)basis 拉里来说不够雅致，他想通过涨工资来提高自己的社会地位。 (4)On the basis of these facts'Based on these facts 4.时间状语当她转过身时，格拉迪丝·克拉芬就站在那里。 3.(1)on (2)calculation (3)is calculated to attract ll,1.called 2.alarmed 3.it 4.with 5.embarrassed (4)DScientists have calculated that 6.improve 7.To decorate 8.items 9.(should)invite It has been calculated by scientists that 10.What Section II Using Language 语基输入·助力语言输出 1.(1)to (2)on (3)a new way to test for 课文研读·发展思维品质 (4)testing out the whole experiment 1.1~5 CDBDB 2.(1)was dismissed (2)than Il.1.its 2.immediately 3.gripped 4.to explain (3)I would be more than delighted:There will be more than 5.was being driven 6.that:which 7.stopping 8.at 9.and ten friends;The party is more than for fun 10.has travelled 3.(1)to deal (2)appointed (3)make have an appointment with 语基输入·助力语言输出 4.(1)stands an ancient tower (2)lies the library 1.(1)to (2)is senior to me (3)is junior to:am junior to him (3)Lying on the bed was my deskmate (4)taking over:took in:took on:take off:take on (5)took up much of her time 5.(1)guilty (2)Feeling guilty about all the lies 2.(1)conflicting (2)are in conflict with (3)be guilty of theft (3)it conflicted with an important business meeting 6.(1)was suspended (2)from (3)suspended by ropes from the roof of the building 3.(1)that (2)that (3)It was his brave heart and strong faith that 4.(1)to say (2)had happened (3)they never existed 7.(1)was dismissed (2)from (3)Dismissing her fears (4)结果是(5)关掉(6)在场(7)turned off(8)turned to 8.(1)on (2)against 5.(1)To keep up with his pace/To keep pace with him (3)Hardly had we declared the ceremony open (2)paced up and down in the kitchen Section II Learning About Language (3)over down (4)off (5)behind (6)DAs confidence fell away 2With confidence falling away 语法慧学·提升语言能力 6.(1)urges:urgent:urgency (2)It's urgent for students themselves 探究发现 (3)Durge their children to take advantage of the opportunity 1,过去将来时的被动语态2.动词不定式的被动语态 to participate in outdoor activities 3.过去进行时的被动语态4，一般过去时的被动语态 urge that their children (should)take advantage of the 要义详析 opportunity to participate in outdoor activities [即时训练】 Section N Writing-Write a sci-fi short story 1.(1)was built (2)be done (3)had been forced 2.(1)be employed (2)be taken (3)swept (4)to read 以读促写 3.(1)seeing (2)to be preserved/preserving (3)feels [微写作] 4.(1)to be lifted (2)to understand (3)to announce 1.(1)approached;took out of:handed (4)to make (2)Putting:climbed:peered ·156· 2.(1)The bus full of passengers went slowly as a snail went. 3.形式主语：真正的主语据说现在近一半的澳大利亚公民要 (2)生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，充满了各种曲折。 么自己出生于海外，要么父母出生于海外。 佳作构建 ll.1.travelling 2.as 3.impressions 4.to 5.to learn 第二步：由词扩句 6.nature 7.really 8.found 9.biggest 10.that 1.couldn't fall asleep 2.appeared near my tent 语基输入·助力语言输出 3.looked like the one 4.came down through a round door 1.(1)foundation (2)founded (3)founders (4)that provides/lays 5.so I couldn't believe what I had seen a solid foundation for your future development 6.If I came across an alien 2.(1)Located (2)locations (3)Located in 第三步：句式升级 (4)reference (5)to (6)Referred to as 1.It was so hot that night that I couldn't fall asleep. (7)In/With reference to 2.Suddenly near my tent appeared something like a round plane. 3.(1)On (2)another 3.Suddenly near my tent appeared something like a round (3)on the other hand,we should protect the environment plane,which looked like the one in the book I had read. 4.(1)It is hoped that (2)It is believed that 4.come down through a round door (3)It was agreed that 5.I was so puzzled about it that I couldn't believe what I had seen. (4)DIt is said that carbon dioxide is heating 第四步：连句成篇 ②is said to be heating One possible version: Section I Learning About Language The Alien It was so hot that night that I couldn't fall asleep.so I 语法慧学·提升语言能力 walked out of the tent. 探究发现 Suddenly near my tent appeared something like a round 1.interested 2.found:called 3.contributed plane,which looked like the one in the book I had read.Then I 要义详析 saw an alien come down through a round door.He walked into [即时训练] my tent and came out with my iPad in his hand.The plane then 1.(1)designed (2)recognized (3)surrounded flew away. 2.(1)closed (2)promoted (3)cheated I was so puzzled about it that I couldn't believe what I had 3.(1)informed (2)lost (3)untouched seen.But I decided that if I came across an alien again,I would 4.(1)Moved by their speech (2)Built before the war have a face-to-face talk with him. (3)Asked who had broken the window 实战演练 (4)Seated at the back of the elassroom One possible version: 跟踪检测 Dear Mom, I.单句语法填空 Thank you for loving me so much.I often feel sorry when I 1.Worried 2.to be held 3.blocked 4.focused 5.educated see you cooking and doing other housework.How I wish I could 6.marked 7.disappointed 8.reminded 9.completed invent a cooking machine for you! 10.Raised This machine would cook all kinds of delicious food.All you Ⅱ.语法与写作（使用过去分词） would need to do is buy all of the things that are needed for the 1.Regardless of the risk of getting infected dish and then tell it how to cook the meal.In that way,cooking 2.Injured in the accident will be very easy and relaxing and you will never be tired again. 3.my classmates are becoming more and more excited Then you will have more time to be with us.Wouldn't that be 4.Worried about the coming exam great?I'm sure it will happen one day. 5.Determined to learn from him:I get punished for eating in the Yours. English class Wang Hua 语基输入·助力语言输出 1.(1)to be admitted (2)entitled (3)entitlement UNIT 2 ICONIC ATTRACTIONS (4)are entitled to an education Section I Reading and Thinking 2.(1)freedom (2)from,of (3)Dyou might/can have the freedom to decide your own future 课文研读·发展思维品质 you are free to decide your own future Step One I.B II.(1)~(4)BCDA Section Step Two 1~5 BBCAC Using Language Step Three I,L.目的为了在大洋中这片辽阔的土地上生 课文研读·发展思维品质 存，澳大利亚土著人得和大自然保持密切的联系 I.1~5 CBCAB 2.非限制性定语：定语他们的大多数乐器其实就是在地上找 Il.1.which 2.distribution 3.hanging 4.up 5.zoos 到的树枝，其中有一种叫作迪吉里杜管的神奇乐器。 6.frequency 7.a 8.nurses 9.to find 10.its 157·