UNIT 1 FESTIVALS AND CELEBRATIONS 读后续写微讲堂-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册（人教版2024）

UNIT I FESTIVALS AND CELEBRATIONS 读后续写微讲堂 答案精解P5日 读后续写提升篇之塑造人物形象一通过动作描写塑造人物形象 要塑造一个逼真饱满的人物形象，可以从各 【典例1】用跳舞来表现。 个角度进行描写。细节描写是很重要的方式。 She danced with delight and passion,thinking 本阶段将从五个方面就怎样塑造人物形象进行 of nothing.in the achievement of her beauty and 剖析。分别是：通过动作描写、场景描写、外貌描 in the glory of her success..(节选自《项链》) 写，心理描写和语言描写塑造人物形象。 译：她欣喜若狂地跳着舞，什么也不想，只想着自 动作描写是指对人物的动作、行为和活动的 己的美丽带来的成就和成功的荣誉。 描写，是刻画人物的重要方法之一。成功的动作 【语篇解读】由danced with delight and passion 可知女主人公开心的样子，愉快地跳起舞来。同 描写，可以交代人物身份、地位，反映人物心情、 时，脑子里面什么都不想thinking of nothing,反 心理活动进程，表现人物性格特征和推动情节发 映出她跳舞时，沉浸在美貌带来的成就和成功的 展。人物是在言行中站起来的。学会了描写动 荣誉之中。 作，也就学会了“用事实说话”。 此外，描述开心的动作表达还有：dance with 一、动作描写的方法 pleasure,give a jump in the air,twirl以及其他 我们在描写动作的时候不能太笼统，而要细 类似表达，如be wild with joy(心花怒放)，burst 致地描写人物的行动，并且注意抓住动作特征， into laughter,burst out laughing(放声大笑)，be 准确运用动词。一是体现人物特点，二是符合生 in high spirits(兴高采烈)等。 活实际，三是关联主题。动作过程的展现需要一 (二)悲伤 定的顺序，既要把人物做事情的过程写清楚，又 人们在碰到一些不愉快的事情时，或者碰到 要把人物活动的步骤写具体，这样才能使人物形 十分伤心的事情时会有伤感的情绪。悲伤的时 象鲜明，文章层次清楚。 候人们会有多种不同的反应，有人声音会变得沙 哑哽咽，有人会泪流满面，还有人会沉默不语。 二、动作描写的实例 【典例2】用哭泣来表现 本篇我们选取了经典文学作品中的动作描 Dorothy began to sob at this,for she felt 写素材，进行分类解读赏析，分析写作手法。按 lonely among all these strange people.Her tears 照动作描写和情绪表达的关系，分为八大类：高 seemed to grieve the kind-hearted Munchkins, 兴、悲伤、惊恐、犹豫、无聊、好奇、愤怒与疲惫。 for they immediately took out their handkerchiefs (一)高兴 and began to weep also.(节选自《绿野仙踪》) 高兴是在发生令人愉悦的事情后的本能反 泽：多萝西开始啜泣起来，因为在这些陌生的人 应。人在高兴时，会不自觉地有一些身体反应， 群中，她感到很孤独。她的眼泪似乎使得好心的 如人在开心时会跳起来，会跳舞，会情绪外露，放 芒奇金人受到感染，他们也立即拿出手帕哭了 声大笑或尖叫。 起来。 ·23 英语必修第三册同步导学案 【语篇解读】sob,Her tears seemed to grieve,.weep (四)犹豫 等不同哭泣的词语描述了当时多萝西哭泣悲伤 犹豫是指迟疑，不果断，缺少主见，对事难以 的场景。 做决定，类似表现为徘徊，踟躇，左右为难，不知 此外，其他类似悲伤流眼泪的表达还有： 道怎么解决，不知做出什么决定，表现为来回踱 tears well up in one's eyes,eyes begin to water. 步，皱着眉头，陷入困境，不知所措。 face is wet with tears,burst into tears,tears 【典例4】用站着不说话来表现。 spring to one's eyes,be close to tears,tears At length,every idea seemed to fail him flow out of one's eyes,with tears beginning to and,after standing a few moments without saying a flow,with tears in one's eyes以及howl(嚎哭)， word,he suddenly recollected himself,and took blur(模糊泪眼)等。 leave.(节选自《哈克贝里费恩历险记》】 (三)惊恐 译：最后他好像已经无话可说，默默无言地站了 惊恐是指惊慌害怕，恐惧，在面对一些突发 几分钟，突然又定了一下心，告辞而去。 状况时所产生的惊讶与恐惧共同存在的状态 【语篇解读】作者通过seemed to fail him显示出 在遇到害怕的事情的时候，会不自觉地后退，或 主人公拿不定主意，standing,without saying a word显示出主人公不知所措，站在那里无话可 者跳起来，或者不敢动弹，或者缩起来，用手抱住 说，却还是犹豫着要不要走。 胸口等一系列反应。 此外，描述犹豫时的表达还有：step back and 【典例3】用猛跳着站起来表现。 forth,be stuck in the dilemma,linger(徘徊)等， I jumped to my feet,completely thunderstruck.I (五)无聊 blinked my eyes hard.I looked carefully all around 人们无聊的时候会感觉无所事事，会到处闲 me.And I saw a most extraordinary small person, 逛，会感觉枯燥无味，会漫无目的地来回走动。 who stood there examining me with great seriousness. 【典例5】用来回走动来表现。 (节选自《小王子》) Alone in the house,Mariam paced restlessly, 译：我直接跳了起来，完全惊呆了。我使劲揉了 from the kitchen to the living room,up the steps 揉眼睛，仔细瞧了瞧周围，发现一个很奇特的小 to her room and down again.She ended up back 家伙正在严肃地盯着我。 in her room,doing her prayers or sitting on the 【语篇解读】此处jumped to my feet,blinked my bed,missing her mother,feeling nauseated and eyes hard,looked carefully all around me表达了 homesick.(节选自《灿烂千阳》) 主人公的惊愕之情。“我”像是受到惊雷轰击一 译：玛利亚姆独自一人在屋子里，焦躁地走来走 般，一下子站立起来。“我”使劲地揉了揉眼晴， 去，从厨房走到客厅，爬上楼梯，走到她的卧室， 仔细地看了看。“我”看见一个十分奇怪的小家 然后又走下来。她最后回到自己的房间做起祷 伙严肃地朝“我”凝眸望着。跳着站起来，生动地 告，或者坐在床上想着她的母亲，心中充满眩晕 展现了主人公当时惊愕的样子。 和想回家的感觉。 此外，受惊吓时的动作描写还有：step back, 【语篇解读】描述玛丽亚姆一个人在家无聊的场 too frightened to move,be so startled by,press 景，动作描写包括pace restlessly不安地走动， one's hand upon one's heart,freeze when seeing/ end up back返回，do her prayers祈祷，sit on hearing sth等。 the bed坐在床上，miss her mother想念母亲， ·24 UNIT I FESTIVALS AND CELEBRATIONS feel nauseated and homesick想家，伴随动作描写 【语篇解读】作者通过stared so hard,.bit the ribbon 的是场景的不断变换：from the kitchen to the on her pigtail so fast体现主人公萨拉当时心里 living room从厨房到客厅：up the steps to her 的气愤，没有用具体的形容词描述，却通过动作 room and down again去楼上房间又下来。这些 描写让读者读出了其中的情绪。 并不是累贅的文字，这些文字让读者更加了解玛 此外，描述愤怒的表达还有murmur,howl 丽亚姆在家无所事事、百无聊赖的心情。 (大喊)，glare at sb,stare so hard at sb等等。 此外，描述无聊时，通常可用pace restlessly. (八)疲惫 aimlessly,wander about someplace aimlessly, 疲惫是指疲劳，疲劳的时候容易犯困，容易 pace back and forth,stroll(漫步，闲逛，溜达)等。 走神，做事注意力不集中，做事比较吃力。 (六)好奇 【典例8】用睡得很沉来表现 好奇是指对自己所不了解的事物觉得新奇 She did not know how long she slept.But 而感兴趣，充满新鲜感。在脑海中有各种想法， she had been tired enough to sleep deeply and 会有疑惑的感觉。 profoundly-too deeply and soundly to be 【典例6】用好奇困惑来表现。 disturbed by anything.(节选白《小公主》) Just at this moment Alice felt a very curious 译：她不知道自己睡了多久。但是她已经累极 了，以至于睡得又深又沉一沉得什么都无法打 sensation,which puzzled her a good deal until 扰到她。 she made out what it was..(节选自《爱丽丝梦游 【语篇解读】作者通过副词修饰动作来体现主人 仙境》》 公的疲惫，sleep deeply and profoundly,并用too 译：就在这时，爱丽丝有一种非常奇怪的感觉，让 deeply and soundly to be disturbed by anything 她百思不得其解，直到她弄明白了那是什么。 来进一步描写她的状态。 【语篇解读】这里felt a very curious sensation, 此外，表疲惫的动词还有drag,如He was puzzled描述了爱丽丝有一种奇怪的感觉，然后 barely able to drag his legs.他勉强拖着腿向前 加定语从句解释说明，凸显她的迷惑。 走。再如plod重步行走，如He was destined to (七)愤怒 plod the path of toil..他注定走艰辛的道路。 愤怒是指当愿望不能实现或达到目的的行 【即时训练】 动受到挫折时引起的一种紧张而不愉快的情绪， 1.请用动作细节描写修改一下句子，描写你体能 可能会低声咕哝，可能会放声大喊，可能会恶很 测试前的紧张形象。 狠地盯着某人看，可能会挥舞拳头等。 原句：I was nervous before the physical fitness 【典例7】用愤怒的动作来表现。 test. She stared so hard and bit the ribbon on her 修改： pigtail so fast that she attracted the attention of Miss Minchin,who feeling extremely cross at 2.请你运用以上所学技能，用动作描写来描述你 the moment,immediately pounced upon her. 某次考试考得不理想时的状态。（约50词） 选自《小公主》) 译：她瞪大了眼睛，死死地咬住辫子上的丝带，引 起了明钦小姐的注意。明钦小姐此时正气极了， 立刻扑了上去。 ·25of our paper-cuts to our neighbors.who were very happy to M:Maybe you should offer him some money. receive them.I felt proud when seeing their smiles. W:I don't know.Maybe if he seems nice,I'll offer to buy him Paper-cutting is a precious treasure of China so it should be lunch.I'm kind of hungry anyway. passed on. 二、，(-)l.kind2.friendly3.helpful4.honest 实战演练 5,warm-hearted 6,deeds 7.trust 8.regulation One possible version: 9.law 10.united 11.generous 12.courage Dear Linda. 13.respectful 14.just 15.diligent I am glad to know that you are interested in the Qixi 听力原文： Festival.It falls on July 7th in Chinese lunar calendar. 1.kind 2.friendly 3.helpful 4.honest 5.warm-hearted According to the legend,Niulang married Zhinv.a pretty 6.deeds 7.trust 8.regulation 9.law 10.united weaver girl who came secretly from heaven.They got married 11.generous 12.courage 13.respectful 14.just 15.diligent and had their children.However.Zhinv was forced to go back to ()1.be against the law 2.respect the human rights heaven later.Therefore,they were just allowed to meet on July 3.be willing to help others 4.serve the people heart and soul 7th once a year.Nowadays,this festival is for lovers to 5.hard-working and kind 6.look after the old celebrate their happy marriage or express their love for each 7.respect our parents and teachers 8.offer one's seat to sb other by giving nice presents and having a romantic dinner. 9.serve as a volunteer 10.love our country Yours, 听力原文： Li Hua 1.be against the law 2.respect the human rights 3.be willing to help others 4.serve the people heart and soul 读后续写微讲堂 5.hard-working and kind 6.look after the old 【即时训练】 7.respect our parents and teachers 8.offer one's seat to sb 1.As I approached the playground,my heart was beating 9.serve as a volunteer 10.love our country wildly.Breathing deeply,I tried to calm myself down,my ()1.set good examples to us students mind getting blank.I was so nervous that my knees became 2.such good qualities as kindness 3.ready to help others weak uncontrollably. 4.has been taking good care of an old man 2.Waiting anxiously for the teacher to announce the result of the 5.clean the room 6.recommend Li Lei as exam,I stared at the paper held in the teacher's hands.Upon 听力原文： hearing the result,my heart sank.Overwhelmed with Choosing the most beautiful student is a good activity. disappointment,I hid the paper and lowered my head. Through it we can publicize the truth,the good and the beautiful thinking what I should do next since I had already tried my and it can also set good examples to us students to follow. best.At that moment,I was seized by a sense of sadness and As far as I'm concerned,the most beautiful student should couldn't help erying bitterly. have such good qualities as kindness.honesty,selflessness, UNIT 2 MORALS AND VIRTUES fairness,bravery and so on.Li L.ei is such a person.Not only is Li Lei hard-working and honest but he is also ready to help Section I Listening and Speaking others.Since 2018,he has been taking good care of an old man in his spare time,helping him wash clothes and clean the room. 听说突破·技法指导训练 Therefore,I strongly recommend Li Lei as "the most beautiful 一、1~4CBAB student".He has every reason to become a model for us students. 听力原文： I'll be grateful if you could consider what I said. M:Hey,Carol.Where are you going in such a hurry? 语基输入·助力语言输出 W:Oh.hi.Sam.I'm sorry I can't stay and chat.I'm going to a (1)face the dilemma (2)in a dilemma (3)where cafe to meet the guy who found my phone. (4)that which (5)where they can gain experience for growth M:That's great news!I'm glad you are going to get it back. Section II Reading and Thinking W:Yeah.I was really upset when I couldn't find it.Luckily. the last number I called was my office.He used my phone to 课文研读·发展思维品质 call my office this morning.and told me that he found the Step One I.D phone in the movie theater. Il.1.introduction 2.belief 3.study 4.career 5.concerned M:In the movie theater? Step Two 1~4 CBBA W:Yeah.I went to see a late movie last night with some Step Three I,L.时间：同位语：定语八年后，林巧稚从北京 friends.I guess this guy went to the first movie today. 协和医学院毕业，并获得了该校毕业生的最高荣誉奖“文海”奖 M:What are you going to do when you meet the guy? 学金 W:Good question.I will thank him for giving my phone back to 2.同位语：定语不到六个月，她被任命为首席住院医师，晋升 me.Do you think that's enough? 这一职级通常需要四年时间。 ·175·