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人教版20l9Book2Unit5 Music Reading for Writing
注释+词法句法+仿写练习+参考翻译
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参考翻译
Good morning,my name
①It's an honour to很荣幸
早上好,我叫莎拉·威廉
is Sarah Williams.It's an
能够能够…是我的荣幸
姆斯。很荣幸来到这里
honour to be here and to
与大家分享音乐是如何
②
have an impact on对.
share with you the story
影响我的人生的。
…有影响
of how music has had an
impact on my life'.
词法句法+仿写练习:
1.It's an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an
impact on my life'.
这是一个复合句,主句是:ts+名词短语+不定式并列结构。从句是:
介词of后how引导的宾语从句。
主要短语用法解析:
◆lt's an honour to..做某事是一种荣幸
结构:It(形式主语)+is+抽象名词(an honour/a privilege/a pleasure)+不
定式(真正主语)。
例句:It's a privilege to work with such talented colleagues..
◆share with you the story of..和你分享…的故事share sth with sb因为宾语
太长,所以后置。
例句:He explained to the audience the reasons behind his decision.
◆have an impact on.,对…产生影响
替换表达:have an influence/effect on sb:influence/affect sb.
例句:Social media has had a profound impact on communication.
仿写练习:
1.很荣幸能参加这场音乐会,并与大家分享音乐如何激发了我的创造力。
It's an honour to attend this concert and to share with you how music has ignited
my creativity.
2.很荣幸能加入这个读书会,并探讨书籍如何塑造了我的思维方式。
It's a privilege to join this book club and to discuss the ways in which literature has
shaped my thinking.
3.很荣幸能探索这片森林,并讲述大自然如何治愈了我的焦虑。
It's an honour to explore this forest and to tell the story of how nature has healed
my anxiety.
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1.
much longer
Have you ever faced a time
长得多:更长
你有没有过这样的经
when things looked dark and
2.
felt discouraged
历:事物看起来一片
you had no hope at all Two
感到沮丧:感到气馁
漆黑,而你感到毫无
years ago,I was told I had a
3.
go through a two-hour
希望?两年前,我得
serious disease which
was
medical treatment
知我患了严重疾病,
difficult to cure'.My body
经历两个小时的治疗
难以治愈。我的身体
ached all the time and thus I
4.much better
一直在疼痛,所以我
thought I didn't have much
好得多:更好
以为我活不了多久
longer to live.I was very
5.
from then on
了。我很害怕,我感
afraid and I felt so alone and
从那时起:从那以后
到如此的孤独和沮
6.
all the time
discouraged.Then one day,I
丧。后来有一天,我
一直:始终
had to go through a two-hour
不得不接受了两小时
1.
John A.Logan约翰·亚历
medical treatment.The doctor
的治疗。医生让我放
山大·洛根
wanted me to relax,so he had
松,所以他让我听了
8.
Music is the medicine of
me listen to some music,and
些音乐,其中一首
the mind.
one
of the
songs
was
音乐是心灵的良药
歌是《快乐》。这首
“Happy.The song made me
歌让我感觉好多了,
feel so much better that from
从那时起,我开始一
the n on I began to listen to
直听音乐。约翰·洛根
music all the time. John A
说:“音乐是心灵的
Logan said, “Music is the
良药。”的确如此,
medicine of the mind.”And
音乐帮助我康复了。
it's true. Music helped me
recover.
词法句法
仿写练习:
1.Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at
all'?
这是一个复合句, 包含主句+定语从句。主句:Have you (ever) faced a
time...?从句是关系副词when引导的定语从句, 修饰先行词time, 在从句中作时
间状语。定语从句中是两个由and连接的并列句。
原句框架:Have you ever faced a time when[负面描述1] and[负面描述2] ?
你是否经历过考试压得喘不过气,甚至怀疑自己能力的时期?
Have you ever faced a time when exams overwhelmed you and you doubted your
abilities?
你是否经历过朋友背叛、孤独吞噬内心的时刻?
Have you ever faced a time when friends betrayed you and loneliness consumed
you?
2.Two years ago, I was told I had a serious disease which was difficult to cure.
这是一个复合句, 主句I was told I had a serious disease, 从句是which引
导的定语从句,代指先行词,在从句中做主语。
结构:主句+which+be+adj.+to do
我遇到了一道很难解决的数学题。
I found a math problem which was hard to solve.
>许多学生为在截止日期前完成繁重的作业而苦恼。
Many students struggle with homework which is overwhelming to complete
before deadlines.
3.much longer
much:在这里是副词,用于加强比较级的语气,表示程度。类似用法还
有下文中的much better.
这样的词可以帮助更精确地表达比较级的程度。具有同样功能词还有:
>加强比较级的程度much:far;even:a great deal:alot
He is far more experienced than I am.
The situation is even worse than we thought.
>减弱比较级程度的abit;a little;slightly
This movie is a bit more interesting than that one.
The temperature is slightly higher today than yesterday.
4.go through用法总结归纳
①经历:经受(某种困难、痛苦或过程)
They went through a tough time during the economic crisis.
②穿过:通过表示从一个地方穿过或通过某个障碍。
The road goes through the forest.
③完成:处理(某件事情)
She had to go through a lot of paperwork to get the visa.
④仔细检查或搜查某物。
The security guard went through his bag at the airport.
相关短语拓展:
①
go over检查:复习:仔细查看
②go ahead继续:开始:前进
③go after追求;追赶:试图获得
④
go against违背:违反:与…作对
⑤go for努力争取:攻击:适用于
⑥go into进入:从事:详细讨论
⑦g0off离开:爆炸:变质:发出声音
⑧goon继续:发生:进行
go out出去:过时:熄灭:分发
⑩g0up上升:增加:被建造
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1.
give me strength给我力
Music gave me happiness.
量
音乐给了我幸福。当
When I listened to music,it
2.
bring me relief给我带
我听音乐时,我的精
made my spirits fly like a
来安慰/减轻我的痛苦
神像风中的风筝一样
kite in the wind'.Music gave
3.
lean on依靠:依赖
飞翔。音乐给了我力
me strength and brought me
4.
a sense of satisfaction
量,给我带来了解
relief.It was the rock I leant
满足感:成就感
脱。它是我所依靠的
on to become strong and to
5.
words of encouragement
岩石,它让我变得坚
get through
those hard
鼓励的话语
强,并度过了那些艰
times2.Moreover,
music
6.the deepest part of my
难的岁月。而且,音
gave me hope and a sense of
being我内心最深处
乐给了我希望和满足
satisfaction.It became my
感。它成为了我最好
best friend.It spoke words of
的朋友。它让我的内
encouragement
to the
心深受鼓舞。
deepest part of my being'.
词法句法+仿写练习:
1.When I listened to music,it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind'.
这是一个复合句。When引导时间状语从句。it made my spirits fly是主句,
描述心情飞扬的状态,像风筝在风中飞翔。
结构:when时间状语+it+make+宾语+宾语补足语
>当我听轻柔的钢琴旋律时,它让我的心像月光下的湖面般平静。
When I listened to the soft piano melody,it made my heart calm like a lake in the
moonlight.
>当我读一本好书时,它让我的思绪像蓝天上的云朵般飘荡。
When I read a good book,it makes my mind wander like a cloud in the blue sky.
>当我仰望星空时,它让我的想象力像有翅膀的鸟儿一样翱翔。
When I look at the starry sky,it sends my imagination soaring like a bird with wings.
2.It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard
times2.
这是一个复合句。主句是It was the rock。It代指前文提到的music。I
leant on是省略了关系词that的定语从句,修饰先行词rock。to become strong
and to get through those hard times目的状语。
=Music was the rock that I leant on to become strong and to get through
those hard times.=To become strong and to get through those hard times,
music was the rock that I leant on.
>它是那片我漫步其中的森林,让我平复心绪并重寻内心的宁静。
It was the forest I wandered through to calm my mind and to rediscover inner
peace.
>它是那本我沉浸其中的书,让我寻找答案并逃离现实的混乱。
It was the book I immersed myself in to find answers and to escape the chaos of
reality.
3.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being'.
这是一个单句。It主语,指代前文提到的music。speak sth to对…说
此句运用了拟人(personification)的修辞手法,将“it”所指代的事物
(音乐)赋予人的行为和情感,使抽象的事物具有了人的特性,增强了表达
的生动性和感染力,让读者更容易产生共鸣,感受到该事物对内心深处的积
极影响。
>这本鼓舞人心的书对我思想的深处诉说着智慧的话语。
The inspiring book spoke words of wisdom to the deepest of my thoughts.
>这幅美丽的画作对我内心的核心诉说着激励的话语。
The beautiful painting spoke words of inspiration to the core of my heart.
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L.suffering痛苦:苦难
Of course,I hope none of
当然,我希望大家都不
2.g0
through
various
you have to go through the
要经历和我一样的痛
same kind of suffering that
periods经历不同的时期
苦。同时,我们都会经
I did'.At the same time,
历各种悲伤或孤独的时
3.treasure music珍借音乐
we all go through various
期。在那些时候,音乐
periods when we feel sad
可以帮助你,就像它帮
or alone.During those
助我一样。我希望大家
times,music can help you
能以某种方式都能开始
in the same way that it
珍惜音乐,并让它融入
helped me'.I hope all of
到你们的生活。
you will somehow begin to
treasure music and make it
谢谢!
a part of your life.
Thank you!
词法句法+仿写练习:
1.Of course,I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering
that I did
2.During those times,music can help you in the same way that it helped me
这两个都是复合句,都含有that引导的定语从句。第一个句子中that在从
句中作宾语:第二个句子中that充当主语。
>当然,我希望你们没有人不得不面对我所面对的同样的挑战。
Of course,I hope none of you have to face the same kind of challenges that I did.
>在那些艰难的时刻,阅读可以以它曾支持我的方式帮助你。
During those tough moments,reading can assist you in the same way that it
supported me.