Unit4 大纲法写道路安全（专项训练）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

Unit4大纲法写道路安全 话 1、 写作方法指引 There are many busy roads in the city. How can you cross them safely? 引入话题:介绍写作的主题First, you must look for a zebra crossing. Then, you must look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man. 介绍交通规则 Follow the rules and stay safe on the road! 总结遵守交通规则、安全出行的重要性 01 写作方法指引 主题：写道路安全 开头：引入话题 介绍姓名年龄 介绍身体不健康状态 主体：介绍病症，感受 说明病人所患疾病​ 描述身体感受 结尾：给出建议 正面建议​ 负面建议​ 写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 Keep Safe on the Road To be safe on the road, we should do some things. 引入话题:介绍写作的主题 When walking, use the sidewalk. If there isn't one, walk facing cars. When crossing, find a crosswalk. Don't cross without looking. Look at the traffic lights. Walk when it's green. Stop when it's red. Don't run on the road. It's dangerous. Cars can't stop quickly. Also, don't play on the road. It makes you not watch for cars. Follow these rules. 介绍交通规则Then we can stay safe on the road. Safety is important.总结遵守交通规则、安全出行的重要性 基础知识精讲 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.引入话题:介绍写作的主题 参考句型： In our daily life, traffic safety is of great importance. Today, let's talk about... When it comes to going out, traffic rules play a vital role. There are many busy roads in the city. How can you cross them safely? 2.介绍交通规则 参考句型： When we are walking on the road, we must... While riding a bike, we should always... If we are driving a car, we can't... Whether we are pedestrians or drivers, we mustn't.... 3.总结遵守交通规则、安全出行的重要性 参考句型： Follow the rules and stay safe on the road! To sum up, obeying traffic rules is essential for our safety. Without them, the roads would be... It is important to follow the traffic rules and stay safe. 参考词汇： 出行方式相关：vehicle（车辆）car（小汽车）bus（公交车）bike（自行车）motorcycle（摩托车）truck（卡车）pedestrian（行人） 交通设施相关：traffic lights（交通信号灯）zebra crossing（斑马线）pavement（人行道）sidewalk（人行道 美式）traffic sign（交通标志）crosswalk（人行横道） 状态和性质相关：safe（安全的）safely（安全地）dangerous（危险的）careful（小心的）carefully（小心地）important（重要的） 动作行为相关 cross（穿过）walk（步行）ride（骑行）drive（驾驶）stop（停下）wait（等待）look（看）turn（转弯） 情态动词相关 must（必须）mustn't（禁止）should（应该）shouldn't（不应该）can（可以）can't（不可以） 02 基础知识精讲-语法 must 的用法 表示必要性或义务 意为 “必须”，强调说话人认为有必要或有义务做某事。 例如：We must wear a mask when we go to the hospital. 在这种情况下，“must” 体现了一种规定或责任，戴口罩是在医院这个环境下必要的行为。 常用于肯定句中，结构为 “主语 + must + 动词原形”。 例如：Students must study hard to get good grades. 这里表明努力学习对于取得好成绩来说是必不可少的。 表示推测 用于肯定句中，意为 “一定，肯定”，表示非常有把握的推测。 例如：He must be at home because his car is in the driveway. 此时的 “must” 通常不用于否定句或疑问句中表示推测。 例如，不能说 “He mustn't be at home” 来表示推测，也不能说 “Must he be at home?” 来询问推测。 用于回答由 must 引导的一般疑问句 肯定回答用 “Yes, 主语 + must.” ，否定回答用 “No, 主语 + needn't.” 或 “No, 主语 + don't/doesn't have to.” 。 例如：“Must I finish the work today?” 肯定回答：Yes, you must. 否定回答：No, you needn't.或 No, you don't have to. 与其他表示禁止的词的区别 “mustn't” 比 “can't” 的语气更强烈。“can't” 也有 “不能” 的意思，但有时只是表示能力上的不可以或者客观条件的限制。 例如：I can't lift this heavy box. 这里是说因为力气不够等能力原因搬不动，而 “mustn't” 侧重于规则、规定等方面的禁止。 按要求完成句子 You must finish your homework first.（改为否定句） ___________________________________________ Must I take the book to school?（作否定回答） ___________________________________________ 你禁止在课堂上吃东西。（汉译英） ___________________________________________ 参考解析： 参考解析 1. You must finish your homework first.（改为否定句） “must” 是情态动词，它的否定形式是 “mustn't” ，表示 “禁止；不允许” 。在将含有 “must” 的肯定句改为否定句时，直接在 “must” 后加 “n't” ，后面的动词原形 “finish” 保持不变，所以答案是 You mustn't finish your homework first. 2. Must I take the book to school?（作否定回答） 以 “Must I...?” （我必须…… 吗？）开头的一般疑问句，其肯定回答是 “Yes, you must.” （是的，你必须。），否定回答是 “No, you needn't.” 或 “No, you don't have to.” 。这里 “needn't” 和 “don't have to” 都表示 “不必” ，所以答案是 No, you needn't. 或 No, you don't have to. 3. 你禁止在课堂上吃东西。（汉译英） “禁止” 用 “mustn't” 来表示 ，“吃东西” 是 “eat” ，“在课堂上” 是 “in class” 。按照英语的句子结构 “主语 + 情态动词 + 动词原形 + 其他” ，主语是 “你” 即 “you” ，所以翻译为 You mustn't eat in class. 三、模拟写作提升 模拟写作提升1 本单元介绍了交通规则以及与“must”相关的句型表达。作为一名学生，你知道过马路时必须注意什么和不能做什么吗?写一篇短文，介绍一下。 要求: 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 参考句型： To _________on the road, we should follow _________. We should __________on the right side of the road. If we want to __________, we should look for __________first. Then, look at __________. Before we cross the road, we must. That's not safe. We mustn’t ________ on the road. 参考词汇： keep safe（保持安全）road（道路）traffic rules（交通规则）walk（步行）drive（驾驶）right side（右边）cross the road（过马路）look for（寻找）zebra crossing（斑马线）traffic lights（交通信号灯）look left（向左看）look right（向右看）children（孩子们）run（跑）play football（踢足球）safe（安全的）mustn't（禁止） 范文1： To keep safe on the road, we should follow the traffic rules. 引入话题:介绍写作的主题 We should walk or drive on the right side of the road. If we want to cross the road, we should look for a zebra crossing first. Then, look at the traffic lights. Before we cross the road, we must first look left, then right and then left again, Some children run or play football on the road. That's not safe. We mustn't play or run on the road. 介绍交通规则It is important to follow the traffic rules and stay safe.总结遵守交通规则、安全出行的重要性 模拟写作提升2 根据提示，描述一下你在上学途中是怎样遵守交通规则的，不少于50词。 提示:我步行去上学。我很熟悉交通规则:红灯停，绿灯行，黄灯等一等。过马路时我会小心汽车和自行车。 要求:语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 参考句型： To cross _________safely, we must be _________. First, look for ________and then look at ________and wait for ________. Sometimes, we can ________ on the pavement. We must ________, then right and then look left again before we ________. We can also cross the road with ________. We mustn't ________on the road because there are ________. It is important to ________and ________. 参考词汇： road（道路）cross（穿过）zebra crossing（斑马线）traffic lights（交通信号灯）green man（绿灯）pavement（人行道）look for（寻找）look at（看）wait（等待）left（左边）right（右边）cross the road（过马路）with others（和其他人一起）run（跑）play（玩耍）car（汽车）bike（自行车）traffic rules（交通规则） 范文2： To cross a busy road safely, we must be very careful. 引入话题:介绍写作的主题 First, look for a zebra crossing and then look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man. Sometimes, we can wait on the pavement. We must first look left, then right and then look left again before we cross the road. We can also cross the road with others. We mustn't run or play on the road because there are many cars and bikes. 介绍交通规则It is important to follow the traffic rules and stay safe. 总结遵守交通规则、安全出行的重要性 四、真题写作练习-江苏无锡 同学们,道路安全非常重要,我们每个人都应该了解并遵守交通规则,提高安全意识你们知道哪些交通规则呢?请以“Traffic rules”为题,写一写你们所知道的交通规则。 要求: 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 参考句型： To cross _______ safely, we must be _______. First, we must _______ and _______. When there is a red man, we mustn't _______, When there is a green man, we can _______. Sometimes we cannot _______, we can _______ on the pavement. It is important to _______and _______on the road. 参考词汇： road（道路）zebra crossing（斑马线）pavement（人行道）traffic lights（交通信号灯）red man（红灯）green man（绿灯）cross（穿过）、look for（寻找）、look at（看）wait（等待）follow（遵守）busy（繁忙的） 范文3 How to cross the road safely To cross a busy road safely, we must be very careful. 引入话题:介绍写作的主题First, we must look for a zebra crossing and look at the traffic lights. When there is a red man, we mustn't cross the road. When there is a green man, we can cross the road. 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