Unit4 大纲法描述病情并给出建议（专项训练）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

Unit4大纲法描述病情并给出建议 话 写作方法指引 Doctor: What's wrong with you? Su Hai: I have a headache. I feel cold.介绍病症 Doctor: Let me check. You have a fever.介绍病症 Su Hai: What should I do, Doctor? Doctor: You should have a rest at home. You should take some medicine and drink some warm water. 给出建议 01 写作方法指引 主题：描述病情并给出建议 开头：引入话题 介绍姓名年龄 介绍身体不健康状态 主体：介绍病症，感受 说明病人所患疾病​ 描述身体感受 结尾：给出建议 正面建议​ 负面建议​ 写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 Amy is eight years old. She is sick. 介绍基本信息She feels hot and sleepy. She tells her dad. Her dad takes her to the hospital. The doctor says she has a fever and a cough. 介绍病症She should take the pills. She should drink lots of water. She should stay in bed. She shouldn't run around. She shouldn't eat cold things. 给出建议 基础知识精讲 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.引入话题-介绍病人的年龄等基本信息 参考句型： 介绍年龄：_______ + 数字 + years old. 介绍是否生病： ________ is ill. 参考单词： 具体人名: David, Helen ，Sam, Amy, …years old（岁） 描述身体不健康状态的单词有：ill（生病的）sick（生病的，不适的） unwell（不舒服的，有病的） ailing（生病的，身体虚弱的） 2.介绍病症，感受 说明病人所患疾病​ 参考句型：_______ has a + 病症.​ 参考词汇：headache（头痛），toothache（牙痛）​stomachache（胃痛）fever（发烧）cough（咳嗽）sore throat（喉咙痛） 注意： has（have 的第三人称单数形式，有）I/ We/you/they-have ; He/She/It-has 介绍病症，感受 描述身体感受 参考句型： _______ feels + 形容词.​ 参考词汇： feel（感觉），cold（寒冷的；感冒），tired（疲倦的）tired（疲倦的）dizzy（头晕的）weak（虚弱的）nauseous（恶心的）itchy（痒的）​ 3.给出建议 正面建议​ 参考句型：__________ should + 动词原形 + 其他.​ 参考词汇： drink（喝）warm water（温水）have a good rest（好好休息）brush one's teeth（刷牙）​ warm water（温水）​have a good rest（好好休息）​brush one's teeth（刷牙）​take medicine（吃药）​stay in bed（卧床休息）​see a doctor regularly（定期看医生）​do some gentle exercise（做一些温和的运动）​eat healthy food（吃健康的食物） 负面建议​ 参考句型：Sb. should not/shouldn't + 动词原形 + 其他.​ 参考词汇：should not/shouldn't（不应该），eat（吃），too many（太多，修饰可数名词复数），sweets（糖果）​ too many（太多，修饰可数名词复数）​stay up late（熬夜）​go out in bad weather（在恶劣天气外出）​be stressed out（压力过大，精神紧张）​drink sugary drinks（喝含糖饮料）​skip meals（不吃饭， 漏餐） 02 基础知识精讲-语法 should 与 shouldn't 讲解​ should 的含义与用法​ 含义：“should” 是一个情态动词，意为 “应该”，表示建议、责任、义务或预期等。它没有人称和数的变化，后面直接跟动词原形。​ 用法示例：​ 表建议：You should wear warm clothes when it's cold.（天冷时你应该穿暖和的衣服。）此句是针对天气情况，对对方穿着给出建议。​ 表责任义务：We should help our parents with housework.（我们应该帮父母做家务。）这里体现了我们对父母应尽的责任和义务。​ shouldn't 的含义与用法​ 含义：“shouldn't” 是 “should not” 的缩写形式，意思是 “不应该”，同样作为情态动词，表达否定的建议、告诫或禁止等。其后也是接动词原形。​ 用法示例：​ 表否定建议：You shouldn't stay up late before an exam.（考试前你不应该熬夜。）这是对考试前行为的否定建议。​ 表告诫：He shouldn't play with fire. It's dangerous.（他不应该玩火。这很危险。）此句是对危险行为的告诫。 练一练 单项选择 1. You ______ eat so much candy. It's bad for your teeth. A. should B. shouldn’t C. must 2. We ______ respect our teachers. A. should B. shouldn’t C. can't 3. It's raining outside. You ______ take an umbrella. A. shouldn’t B. should C. mustn't 4. He ______ have arrived on time, but he didn't. A. should B. should to C. should have 参考解析： 答案：B。解析：根据后一句 “It's bad for your teeth.” 可知，吃太多糖对牙齿不好，所以是不应该吃太多糖，用 shouldn't。 答案：A。解析：尊重老师是学生应尽的责任和义务，所以用 should 表示 “应该” 。 答案：B。解析：外面在下雨，所以建议带上伞，用 should 表示建议。mustn't 表示 “禁止”，不符合语境。 答案：A。解析：“should have done” 表示过去本应该做某事但没做，这里表示他本应该按时到达但没做到 。should 后直接接 have done，不需要加 to。 三、模拟写作提升 模拟写作提升1 请你根据一下表格提供的信息，写一篇英语小短文，描述戴维和海伦身体不舒服的地方，以及医生给他们的建议。 要求： 语句通顺，语法正确。 书写工整。不少于五句话。 参考句型： David and Helen are ________. They go to ________together. David has a ________. He should ________and ________. Helen has a ________. She should ________. She should not ________. 参考词汇： ill（生病的）headache（头痛）toothache（牙痛）go to see the doctor（去看医生） should（应该）drink（喝）warm water（温水）have a good rest（好好休息）brush one's teeth（刷牙）should not/shouldn't（不应该）eat（吃） 范文1： David and Helen are ill. They go to see the doctor together. 介绍基本信息David has a headache. 介绍病症 He should drink some warm water and have a good rest. Helen has a toothache. She should brush her teeth. She should not eat too many sweets. 给出建议 模拟写作提升2 前情提要： 迈克生病了，请你根据迈克的病历卡，描述迈克的病情并给出一些合理的建议。 要求： 1.语句连贯通顺，条理清楚。 2.短文需包括所有信息提示，不少于5句话。 参考句型： Mike is ________ years old. He is _______. He feels __________. He goes to _________. He has a _________. He should _________ and _________ . He should _________ at home. He shouldn't _________ . He shouldn't _________ either. 参考词汇： ill （生病的）feel （感觉）cold （寒冷的；作名词时意为感冒 ）tired （疲倦的，劳累的）go to see the doctor （去看医生 ）have a cold （感冒）headache （头痛）should （应该）take some medicine （吃些药）drink （喝）warm water （温水）have a rest （休息）shouldn't （不应该）watch TV （看电视）too much （太多，修饰不可数名词 ）eat （吃）ice cream （冰淇淋）either （也，用于否定句） 范文2： Mike is twelve years old. He is ill. 介绍基本信息 He feels cold and tired. He goes to see the doctor. He has a cold and a headache. 介绍病症He should take some medicine and drink some warm water. He should have a rest at home. He shouldn't watch too much TV. He shouldn't eat ice cream either. 给出建议 四、真题写作练习-江苏无锡 下面是戴维(David)的病历,假如你是医生,请根据病历上的信息描述一下戴维的症状,并给他提一些合理的建议。 要求： 语句通顺，表达正确; 注意大小写和标点符号。 参考句型： David is __________. He's _________. He has __________of ________ and also has a ________. He should _________. He should _________. He should _________. He shouldn't _________. He should _________. 参考词汇： ill （生病的）fever （发烧）cough （咳嗽）temperature （体温）should （应该）shouldn't （不应该）stay in bed （卧床）rest （休息）drink （喝）bring down （降低 ）ease （减轻）take medicine （吃药）light food （清淡食物）porridge （粥）play outside （在外面玩耍）do exercise （做运动）keep warm （保暖） 范文3 David is ten years old. He's ill. 介绍基本信息He has a fever of 39.5°C and also has a bad cough. 介绍病症He should stay in bed and rest. He should drink lots of water. He should take some medicine. And he should eat some light food, like porridge. He shouldn't play outside or do exercise. He should keep warm. 给出建议 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$