Module 5 大纲法介绍新买的物品（课件）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（外研版三起）

Module 5 外研版三起五年级下册 大纲法介绍新买的物品 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 详细介绍物品特征 表达对物品的喜爱之情。 4 01 写作方法指引 主题：介绍新买的物品 开头：介绍买的物品是什么和谁买的 主体：详细介绍物品特征 结尾：表达对物品的喜爱之情。 介绍物品的大小 介绍物品的的形状、颜色 介绍物品的的优点 5 01 写作方法指引-示例 My New Dress My mum bought a new dress for me last week. It's a beautiful dress. It's pink and white. There are some lovely flowers on it. The dress is not too long or too short. It fits me well. I wore it to a party last Sunday. Everyone said I looked pretty in it. I like this new dress very much and I can't wait to wear it again. My New Dress My mum bought a new dress for me last week. It's a beautiful dress. It's pink and white. There are some lovely flowers on it. The dress is not too long or too short. It fits me well. I wore it to a party last Sunday. Everyone said I looked pretty in it. I like this new dress very much and I can't wait to wear it again. 介绍买的物品是什么和谁买的 详细介绍物品特征 表达对物品的喜爱之情。 My New Dress My mum bought a new dress for me last week. It's a beautiful dress. It's pink and white. There are some lovely flowers on it. The dress is not too long or too short. It fits me well. I wore it to a party last Sunday. Everyone said I looked pretty in it. I like this new dress very much and I can't wait to wear it again. My New Dress My mum bought a new dress for me last week. It's a beautiful dress. It's pink and white. There are some lovely flowers on it. The dress is not too long or too short. It fits me well. I wore it to a party last Sunday. Everyone said I looked pretty in it. I like this new dress very much and I can't wait to wear it again. 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.介绍买的物品是什么和谁买的 参考句型 I have... ... bought it for me. I got... ... bought it for me when... I have... ... gave it to me. 参考词汇 人物相关：dad（爸爸）mum（妈妈）grandpa（爷爷；外公）uncle（叔叔；舅舅）elder sister（姐姐）parents（父母） 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.介绍买的物品是什么和谁买的 参考词汇 物品相关：bike（自行车）toy car（玩具汽车）dress（连衣裙）pet cat（宠物猫）pencil box（铅笔盒）watch（手表）teddy bear（泰迪熊）skateboard（滑板） 事件相关：birthday（生日）gift（礼物）good grades（好成绩）as a reward for（作为对…… 的奖励） 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.详细介绍物品特征 参考句型 It's + 颜色. It's in the shape of... （它是…… 形状的。） eg: It's in the shape of a car, which makes it look very special. It has... （它有……） eg: It has a shiny bell and two big wheels. It has four small but strong wheels. It has two small ears and a short tail. 10 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.详细介绍物品特征 参考句型 There are... on it. （它上面有……） eg: There are some lovely flowers on it. There are some pictures of my favorite cartoon characters on it. It's + 描述词. （它是…… 的。） eg: It's so cute. It's really cool. It's very nice. 11 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.详细介绍物品特征 参考词汇 颜色类：blue（蓝色）red（红色）black（黑色）white（白色）pink（粉色）green（绿色）yellow（黄色） 形状类：round（圆形的）square（方形的）triangle（三角形的）、in the shape of （…… 形状） 部件类：wheel（轮子）bell（铃铛）strap（表带）face（表盘）ear（耳朵）tail（尾巴）fur（毛）surface（表面） 12 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.详细介绍物品特征 参考词汇 描述特征类：shiny（闪亮的）big（大的）small（小的）strong（强壮的）lovely（可爱的）soft（柔软的）smooth（平滑的）clear（清晰的）special（特别的）cute（可爱的）cool（酷的）nice（好看的）amazing（令人惊奇的） 13 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.表达对物品喜爱之情 参考句型 I love... and I... I like... a lot and I... I like... very much and I... I'm so proud of... It brings me... 参考词汇 love（爱）like（喜欢）proud（骄傲的）keep... clean（保持…… 干净）play with... carefully（小心地玩……）can't wait to... （迫不及待做……）be a good owner（成为一个好主人）bring... fun（带来…… 乐趣） 14 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 当你取得好成绩时，是不是会收到奖励呀？现在，请以 “My New Toy Car” 为题，描述一下你因为取得好成绩而得到的新玩具汽车。 要求: 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考句型： I got a __________. __________ bought it for me when I got __________. It's really _______. _______is _______. It looks like a _______. It has _______ wheels. It can _______when I push it. I often play with it in my room. It makes me very _______. I like _________ a lot and I will play with it carefully. 参考单词： toy car（玩具汽车）grandpa（爷爷外公）grades（成绩）amazing（令人惊奇的）race car（赛车）push（推）room（房间）carefully（小心地） 17 范文3： My New Toy Car I got a new toy car. My grandpa bought it for me when I got good grades. It's really amazing. The toy car is red and black. It looks like a real race car. It has four small but strong wheels. It can run very fast when I push it. I often play with it in my room. It makes me very happy. I like my new toy car a lot and I will play with it carefully. 介绍买的物品是什么和谁买的 详细介绍物品特征 表达对物品的喜爱之情。 18 模拟写作提升2 同学们，你们有没有收到过特别棒的礼物呢？今天请以 “My New Bike” 为题，写一篇小作文。 要求: 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 19 参考句型： I have a _________. _________bought it for me as _________. It's so ________! ________is ________, my favorite color. It has ________and ________. It's not ________for me. It's just right. I can ________. I go cycling with my friends on weekends. I love my ________and I always ________. 参考单词： bike（自行车）dad（爸爸）gift（礼物）cool（酷的）bell（铃铛）wheel（轮子）ride（骑）cycling（骑自行车运动）clean（干净的） 20 My New Bike I have a new bike. My dad bought it for me as a birthday gift. It's so cool! The bike is blue, my favorite color. It has a shiny bell and two big wheels. It's not too big or too small for me. It's just right. I can ride it very fast. I go cycling with my friends on weekends. I love my new bike and I always keep it clean. 范文2： 介绍买的物品是什么和谁买的 详细介绍物品特征 表达对物品的喜爱之情。 21 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 介绍一下你买的新书包。 参考词汇:blue, big, pockets 参考句型:It’s got...My new schoolbag… 要求: 1.句子通顺,思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于六句,开头已给出,不计入总句数。 真题写作练习-四川成都 My new schoolbag _________________________________________ 23 参考句型： I’ve got a _________. _________bought it for me. ________is really nice. ________is ________. It's ________. It's got ________. I can ________in it. It's got ________. It's easy for me to carry. I take it to school every day. I like it _______ and I'll _______ it. 参考单词： mum（妈妈）schoolbag（书包）pocket（口袋）wheel（轮子）nice（好看的）big（大的）light（轻的）red（红色）green（绿色）bought（buy 的过去式，买）put（放）carry（携带）take（拿；带）like（喜欢） 24 My new schoolbag I’ve got a new school bag. My mum bought it for me. The schoolbag is really nice. The bag is big and light. It's red and green. It's got four pockets. I can put many things in it. It's got four wheels. It's easy for me to carry. I take it to school every day. I like it very much and I'll take good care of it. 范文3： 介绍买的物品是什么和谁买的 详细介绍物品特征 表达对物品的喜爱之情。 25 Thank you! $$