Unit3 Traditional skills 单元话题（传统工艺）写作满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（沪教牛津版）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新课程精品系列资料，名师精选！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新课程精品系列资料，名师精选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit3 Traditional skills 单元话题（传统工艺）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．在今天的英语课上，你的老师请你们以三人为一个小组，分别介绍一种中国的传统技艺，请你写一篇英文短文，汇报你们小组分享的内容。 组员 Yihan Haoye You 传统技艺 Paper cuttings Dough toys （请你补充） 特点 1. 使用简单的工具； 2. 可剪成动物、植物、汉字图案； 3. 是春节和婚礼的装饰。 1. 可以做成不同的人物角色； 2. 可使用不同颜色的面粉； 3. 可爱有趣 （请你补充） 注意： （1）作文需包括以上所有要点，语言正确，连贯性好； （2）词数不少于80词； （3）不得透露任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 In today’s English class, we had a discussion on traditional Chinese skills. Here is what we have shared in our group. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In today’s English class, we had a discussion on traditional Chinese skills. Here is what we have shared in our group. Paper cuttings are decorations for Spring Festival and weddings. You can use simple tools like paper and scissors. You can cut animals, plants, Chinese characters and anything you like. Dough toys are made of dough. You can make them in different sizes and characters. You can also use different colors of dough. It is interesting and lovely. Chinese knots are made of a thin string. It can be in the shape of animals, flowers, Chinese characters and has a special meaning. People think that Chinese knots can bring them happiness and good luck. This is the result of our group’s discussion. I hope you like it. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍几项中国的传统技艺，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍剪纸、面塑和中国结这三项传统技艺及其特点；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2．有一批外国交换生要来中国进行参观学习，他们对我国的传统工艺品非常感兴趣并打算买一些回国送给朋友。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章，向他们介绍我国的传统手工艺品（bandicrafts）并且提出你对传统技艺的看法！ 面人Dough toy ● 颜色丰富 ● 不同尺寸 ● 通常是出名的人物或动物 剪纸Paper cutting ● 通常使用剪刀把纸剪成动物、花卉和汉字的形状 ● （请你补充至少1点） （1）词数80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数） （2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 China is a big country with all kinds of unique handicrafts. I would like to introduce two of them. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 China is a big country with all kinds of unique handicrafts. I would like to introduce two of them. The first one is Dough toy, which always be made into famous people or animals in different colors and sizes. Next is Paper cutting. It is usually in red and scissors are usually used to cut the paper into the shapes of animals, flowers and Chinese characters. Different shapes and each of them expressed different meanings. Here are the unique handicrafts in China. Each of them is beautiful and meaningful. I hope that you like them. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给的内容介绍2种我国的传统手工艺品。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。写作时对于两种传统手工艺品介绍可适当发挥，同时可以使用一些从句，如定语从句，使文章顺畅有亮点，最后确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误，逻辑清晰。 3．剪纸(Paper cutting) 是中国传统的技艺之一。关于剪纸这门艺术，你了解多少呢？ 请根据下面的中文提示写一篇英语作文。80词左右，可适当发挥。 提示： 1）剪纸取材简单，受到人们的喜爱； 2）剪纸有各种形状(in the shape of)，如人物、动物、花和吉祥的汉字(Chinese characters)等； 3）剪纸通常被贴在窗户、门或者墙上； 4）剪纸经常出现在节日或婚礼(wedding)上，因为人们认为它能带来幸福和好运。 5) 你的观点。 As we all know, paper cutting is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As we all know, paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese Arts. It’s easy to learn this art. People only need to use scissors and paper, so they enjoy doing it in their daily life. Paper cutting can be made in different shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings and so on. People often put them up on the windows, doors as well as walls. Paper cutting often appears at festivals or weddings because people think it can bring them happiness and good luck. We should try our best to protect this traditional skill. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇给材料的说明文写作，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中关于剪纸这门艺术的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头并直入主题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“剪纸的取材，剪纸的形状，使用场合等”几个方面重点介绍这门艺术； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ① enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事 ②in different shapes以不同的形状 ③put up张贴 ④ try our best to do sth尽力做某事 [高分句型] ①It’s easy to learn this art.（It固定句型，动词不定式是真正的主语） ②Paper cutting often appears at festivals or weddings because people think it can bring them happiness and good luck.（because引导的原因状语从句） 4．有一批外国交换生要来中国进行参观学习，他们对我国的传统技艺非常感兴趣并打算学习。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文向他们介绍4种中国传统技艺。 面人dough toy ●    颜色丰富 ●    通常是出名的人物或动物 水墨画Chinese ink-wash painting ●    通常为黑、白、灰色 ●    常画自然风景、动植物、人物等 糖画sugar painting ●    通常是黄色的 ●    既漂亮又好吃 剪纸paper cutting ? （请你补充至少2点） 注意： （1）词数80~100词左右； （2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文      China is a big country with all kinds of handicrafts. I would like to introduce some of them.      The first one is dough toy, which always be made into the famous people or animals in different colors. Next is the Chinese ink-wash painting, usually black, white, grey. It often paints natural scenery, animals, plants, figures and so on. Another one is sugar painting, which always be in yellow. And it is not only beautiful but also tasty. The last one is paper cutting in red which can be cut into different shapes and each of them expresses different meanings.      Here are the unique handicrafts in China. Each of them is beautiful and meaningful. I hope that you like them. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据所给提示内容介绍4种中国传统技艺； 第二步，简单做总结。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of 各种各样的 ②not only...but also...不但……而且…… ③cut into切入 [高分句型] The first one is dough toy, which always be made into the famous people or animals in different colors.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 5．糖画（sugar painting）是中国的传统技艺。假如你是李明，得知你的好朋友Jack对糖画很感兴趣，请根据提示，用英文给Jack写一封80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）的电子邮件，向他介绍糖画。要点包括： 起源：明代（Ming Dynasty） 制作：由糖制成，可以食用，也是艺术品 发展：最初，被制成动植物形状；后来被制成各种图案 你的观点：（请你补充） Dear Jack, Knowing that you are interested in sugar painting, I’m writing to introduce it to you. It is one of the most popular Chinese traditional skills. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文： Dear Jack, Knowing that you are interested in sugar painting, I’m writing to introduce it to you. It is one of the most popular Chinese traditional skills. Sugar painting starts in Ming Dynasty, and it has a really long history. As you know, it is made of sugar, so we can eat it. It is also a kind of artwork. At first, it was only in the shape of animals and plants. Later, we can see all kinds of patterns made by sugar painting, such as buildings, characters and so on. Sugar painting is so amazing that I love it so much. I even want to learn how to make it someday. Maybe we can learn this skill together. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出对糖画的介绍； 第二步，按照要点提示，介绍糖画的信息，包括起源、制作和发展，并适当补充发挥； 第三步，结尾总结，并补充自己对糖画的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of由……做成 ②a kind of一种 ③in the shape of……以……的形状 ④so...that...如此……，以至于…… [高分句型] ①Sugar painting is so amazing that I love it so much.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句） ②Later, we can see all kinds of patterns made by sugar painting, such as buildings, characters and so on.（过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰patterns） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．剪纸是中国传统的技艺之一。关于剪纸这门艺术，你了解多少呢？请根据下面的中文提示写一篇英语作文，80词左右，可适当发挥。 提示： 1．剪纸取材简单，受到人们的喜爱； 2．剪纸有各种形状，如人物、动物、花和吉祥的汉字等； 3．剪纸通常被贴在窗户、门或者墙上； 4．剪纸经常出现在节日或婚礼上，因为人们认为它能带来幸福和好运。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As we all know, paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts. It’s easy to learn this. People only need to use scissors and paper, so they enjoy doing it in their daily life. Paper cutting can be made in different shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings and so on. People often put them up on the windows, doors as well as walls. Paper cutting often appears at festivals or weddings because people think it can bring them happiness and good luck. We should try our best to protect this traditional skill. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章的写作要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇引出话题； 第二步，根据要点提示，具体阐述写作内容，从“剪纸的取材、形状、使用场合”等几个方面重点介绍这一传统艺术； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①as we all know众所周知 ②put sth up on把某物张贴在某处 ③as well as还有 ④bring sb happiness and good luck给某人带来幸福和好运 [高分句型] ①It’s easy to learn this.（it固定句型，it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语） ②Paper cutting often appears at festivals or weddings because people think it can bring them happiness and good luck.（because引导的原因状语从句） 7．保护和传承中国传统是每个中华儿女的责任，现在得到了越来越多人的重视和关注。最近你校准备举行“你最喜爱的传统技艺”为主题的英语演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的传统技艺，并号召大家来保护传统技艺。 注意： 1. 词数：80 词左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数）。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My favourite traditional Chinese skill What 介绍一种传统技艺（至少2点） Why 1. 是中国文化的重要部分 2.（请你补充1﹣2点） How （请你补充1﹣2点） As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese skills is our obligation. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s work together to protect this tradition skill and keep it alive. 【答案】例文 As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese skills is our obligation. My favourite traditional Chinese skill is paper cutting. Paper cutting can be made in different shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings and so on. Paper cutting is an important part of Chinese culture. People often put them up on the walls. Paper cutting often appears at festivals or weddings because people think it can bring them happiness and good luck. We should try our best to protect this traditional skill. I think paper cutting should be taught in schools so that students can learn this skill. Let’s work together to protect this tradition skill and keep it alive. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，保护和传承中国传统技艺是我们的义务； 第二步，结合表格提示，介绍自己最喜爱的传统技艺； 第三步，号召大家来保护传统技艺。 [亮点词汇] ①such as 例如 ②put up 张贴 ③try one’s best to do sth. 尽力做某事 [高分句型] ①Paper cutting can be made in different shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings and so on.（含情态动词can的被动语态） ②Paper cutting often appears at festivals or weddings because people think it can bring them happiness and good luck.（because引导的原因状语从句） ③I think paper cutting should be taught in schools so that students can learn this skill.（so that引导的目的状语从句） 8．假设你是李华，即将参加一项交换生活动并住在John家里，为表示友好和宣传中国文化，你提前寄送了三份具有中国传统特色的手工品作为礼物。请根据提示内容写一封E-mail，给John及其家人介绍一下这些礼物及其特色。 注意： 1. 字数：80词以上（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 2. 要对所写内容进行适当的拓展。 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear John and your family, I am very excited to be staying with you as an exchange student. To show you my thanks and share some Chinese culture with you, I have sent you three traditional Chinese handicrafts as gifts. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like these beautiful pieces of art. I am looking forward to meeting you soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear John and your family, I am very excited to be staying with you as an exchange student. To show you my thanks and share some Chinese culture with you, I have sent you three traditional Chinese handicrafts as gifts. The first gift is a kite. It is made of paper and some pieces of bamboo. It has different kinds of shapes. Some are animals, others are cartoon characters. The second gift is a beautiful Chinese knot which is made of red ropes. It means good luck, happiness and best wishes. The last are some paper cuts. Chinese paper cutting has a long history of over 1,500 years. They have different shapes, like animals, flowers and so on. People in China usually put them on doors and windows during the Spring Festival. I hope you will like these beautiful pieces of art. I am looking forward to meeting you soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，为表示友好和宣传中国文化，送了三份具有中国传统特色的礼物给他； 第二步，结合题干提示，具体介绍三份礼物； 第三步，书写结语，希望对方喜欢礼物，并期待见面。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of 由……制成 ②different kinds of 不同种类的 ③and so on 等等 [高分句型] ①The second gift is a beautiful Chinese knot which is made of red ropes.（which引导的定语从句） ②I hope you will like these beautiful pieces of art.（宾语从句） 9．假设你是学校剪纸社的成员，你的爷爷是你们家乡的民间剪纸老艺人。请根据下面的内容提示，用英语向社员们介绍你爷爷。 【内容提示】 1.爷爷70多岁，但很健康，喜欢剪纸； 2.能剪出各种形状。多次举办展览，作品很受欢迎，人们认为很美，能带来好运； 3.你的评价。 要求： 1.词数80个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息，否则不予评分。 My grandpa is a paper cutting artist. My grandpa is a paper cutting artist. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My grandpa is a paper cutting artist. My grandpa is a paper cutting artist. He is in his seventies, but he is very healthy. He likes paper cutting. Paper cutting is one of the traditional skills in China. Only paper and scissors are required in paper cutting, so people enjoy doing it in their daily lives. So today I will introduce him to you. He could cut out various shapes, such as people, animals, flowers. He held many exhibitions and his works were very popular. People often use paper cutting on weddings or festivals because they think paper cutting can bring them happiness and good luck. In my opinion, love of paper cutting techniques makes me deeply impressed. I love my grandpa and I am proud of him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的爷爷，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍爷爷的基本信息； 第二步，介绍爷爷对剪纸的喜爱以及他取得的成绩； 第三步，介绍自己的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②in my opinion以我来看 ③be proud of为……感到自豪 [高分句型] People often use paper cutting on weddings or festivals because they think paper cutting can bring them happiness and good luck. (because引导的原因状语从句) 10．假设你的学校要举办以“Traditional Skills Around Us”为主题的活动，目前正在征集相关稿件，请你根据以下表格中的提示内容，以“A Person with a Traditional Skill”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿，写出你眼中一位身怀传统技艺的人物。 Name Li Qiyi (65 years old) Appearance average height and a little thin, short hair and wearing glasses Specialty (特长) good at paper-cutting; learned paper-cutting when he was 4 years old; skillful (熟练的), cut paper into different kinds of shapes; … Your opinion (观点) … 要求： 1.可参考表格提示内容，亦可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） A Person with a Traditional Skill Li Qiyi is a 65-year-old man.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： A Person with a Traditional Skill Li Qiyi is a 65-year-old man. He is of average height and a little thin. He has short hair and he is wearing glasses. Li Qiyi is good at paper cutting. He began to learn paper cutting from his father when he was 4 years old. He works very hard. He has a pair of skillful hand. He uses color paper and scissors in his work. He can finish one piece of work in only a few minutes. His works are in all kinds of shapes, such as animals, plants and characters. I think Li Qiyi’s works are really fantastic. We should learn from him. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍身边一位身怀传统技艺人物的名字、年龄和外貌等； 第二步，结合表格内容具体介绍他的特长，例如擅长剪纸、技艺娴熟等； 第三步，总结性地评价这位人物，表达自己的观点，例如我们应该向他学习。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at 擅长 ②begin to do 开始做…… ③learn...from...向……学习 ④work hard 工作努力 ⑤a pair of 一双 ⑥all kinds of 各种各样的 ⑦fantastic 极好的 [高分句型] ①He began to learn paper cutting from his father when he was 4 years old. （when引导的时间状语从句） ②I think Li Qiyi’s works are really fantastic.（省略that宾语从句） 能力综合实践5篇 11．    如果你是李华，你的外国笔友 Mike 想了解中国的传统艺术形式，请你根据表格提示，给他写一封 e-mail，给他介绍至少两种中国传统文化，并且欢迎 Mike 来中国体验传统艺术。 中国传统艺术 材料 寓意或用途 剪刀、红纸 喜庆吉祥 …… ?   ?   注意： 1. 词数 80 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，逻辑合理； 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 Dear Mike, There are many different kinds of traditional arts in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Mike, There are many different kinds of traditional arts in China. Today I will introduce you paper-cutting and Chinese knot. Paper cutting is one of China’s most popular traditional folk arts. It has a long history. The paper, usually red, is folded before it is cut with scissors. The color of red is often used in paper-cutting, which symbolizes health and prosperity. During the Spring Festival and wedding celebrations, paper-cuttings are used to decorate doors, windows and rooms in order. Chinese knot is a special art of folk hand knitting in China. The most commonly used color is red because it symbolizes good luck and prosperity. The knots can be used as car or mobile phone decorations. Also, people hang the knots in rooms. I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon and experiencing Chinese traditional culture together. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①体裁：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：本文主要是 “一般现在时”； ③提示：根据表格内容提示介绍至少两种中国传统文化艺术，可适当增加细节，注意行文要连贯，逻辑要合理。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明要介绍的中国传统文化艺术； 第二步，详细介绍两种中国传统文化艺术的原材料、寓意和用途； 第三步，邀请Mike来中国体验传统艺术。 [亮点词汇] ①popular traditional folk arts 流行的传统民间艺术 ②cut with scissors 用剪刀剪 ③symbolizes health and prosperity 象征健康和繁荣 ④wedding celebrations 婚礼庆典 ⑤commonly 通常 [高分句型] ①The color of red is often used in paper-cutting, which symbolizes health and prosperity. (which引动非限制性定语从句) ②The most commonly used color is red because it symbolizes good luck and prosperity. (原因状语从句) 12．假设你是李明，你的外国网友Eric在网上看到几幅中国剪纸，他对此很感兴趣，并且给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请你给他回复邮件，至少从历史、材料、制作方法及文化意义等方面向他介绍中国剪纸艺术。 要求： 1. 涵盖所有要点，并做适当补充。 2. 不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, You wanted to know about Chinese paper cutting. Here I’m glad to tell you something about it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Eric, You wanted to know about the Chinese paper cutting. Here I’m glad to tell you something about it. Chinese paper cutting is one of the most popular Chinese traditional art forms. It has a long history of over 1,500 years. It is usually made of red paper. It sounds easy but difficult to do it. First, the red paper is usually folded several times. Then, it is cut into different shapes with scissors. It can be like birds, flowers, Chinese characters and so on. I think Chinese paper cutting is not only beautiful but also very useful. People usually put them on doors or windows to decorate houses. They are always seen as symbols of good wishes and a happy new year. More and more people are interested in it. I hope you’ll come to China to see Chinese paper cutting one day. Best wishes! Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出写作目的是为了讲述一些有关中国剪纸的信息； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“历史、材料、制作方法及文化意义”等方面向他介绍中国剪纸艺术； 第三步，书写结语。表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of由……制成 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③know about了解 [高分句型] ①People usually put them on doors or windows to decorate houses. (不定式作目的状语) ②I hope you’ll come to China to see Chinese paper cutting one day. (宾语从句) 13．竹编是中国一种传统技艺，但是随着时代的变迁，越来越少的人学习以及从事竹编工作，你的邻居李先生是一位竹编艺人，请根据下列提示，向同学们介绍李先生，描述传统艺人李先生以及他的工作。 要点： 传统艺人 李先生 工作 竹编 外貌 身材矮，微胖，脸圆，手非常粗糙 工作详情 需要竹子和刀；可以编织不同的东西：竹凉席，竹筐，竹筛等等 你对李先生和竹编的看法 …… 提示词： bamboo weaving竹编；bamboo mat竹凉席；bamboo basket竹筐；bamboo sieve竹筛 要求： 1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内。 2. 必须包含以上全部要点，可以适当发挥。 3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Hello, everybody. Today I want to talk about my neighbour, Mr. Li. He is a person with a traditional skill._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everybody. Today I want to talk about my neighbour, Mr. Li. He is a person with a traditional skill. Mr. Li makes bamboo weavings from bamboo. He is short and a little fat with a round face. His hands are very rough because he works with bamboo all the time. In Mr. Li’s work, only bamboo and knife are required. Mr. Li uses his hands to turn bamboo into different things, such as bamboo mats, bamboo baskets, bamboo sieves and so on. These bamboo weavings are all very useful in people’s daily life. I like Mr. Li’s bamboo weavings because I think his skill is amazing. I hope that one day I can learn to make bamboo weavings from Mr. Li. 【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据给出内容，介绍传统手工艺人李先生。内容包括李先生长相、工作以及对他工作的看法。 写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时。分成三段，第一段介绍李先生外貌，第二段介绍李先生的工作，第三段介绍自己的看法。注意条理清晰，上下文连贯。单词拼写正确。 14．同学们好，《中学生英语报》正在征集发扬中国传统文化的文章，请大家以Chinese Traditional Skill为题，向报社投稿。词数：80左右。 要求： 1. 围绕主题，进行叙述； 2. 鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分； 3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名； 4. 字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Chinese Traditional Skill Dear editors, Traditional Chinese culture plays an important role in the development of our society. We should learn about them. My favorite traditional Chinese skill is paper cutting. Paper cutting has been around for over 1,500 years. It sounds very easy but it can be difficult to do. The paper, usually red is folded before it is cut with scissors. The most common pictures are flowers, animals, and things about Chinese history. During the Spring Festival, they are put on windows, doors and walls as symbols of wishes and good luck and a happy new year. I like paper cutting because it shows the things that are important in life, such as love, beauty and family. I think paper cutting is very interesting, and I hope more and more people will learn it. Each of Chinese should feel proud about our national wealth inherited from our ancestors. Moreover, we should devote great efforts in protecting and developing them. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍中国传统文化的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍自己喜欢的中国传统技艺的一些情况； 第三步，最后表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① learn about了解 ② play an important role in在……中起重要作用 [高分句型] ① I think paper cutting is very interesting, and I hope more and more people will learn it.（宾语从句） ② I like paper cutting because it shows the things that are important in life（because引导的原因状语从句） 15．假如你是来自英国的交换生Jim，你已在广州木棉中学习两周。本周正在举办“中国传统文化周”。请根据下面的信息，给你在英国的朋友Tom写一封电子邮件，介绍一些有特色的中国传统技能，并邀请他一起观看直播节目Hello, China。 传统技能 1.鸬鹚捕鱼； 2.面人玩具； 3.……(自行补充1个中国传统技能并对其进行介绍) 节目预告 时间：下周六晚上20:00—21:00 内容：中国传统文化、节日以及传统技能等 观看方式：网络直播 注意： 1.词数不少于80词（文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）； 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 参考词汇：鸬鹚捕鱼 cormorant fishing     面人玩具 dough toys    网络直播 livestream Dear Tom, I’ve been on an exchange visit to Guangzhou Kapok School for two weeks. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you also have a chance to visit China! Write back to me soon, please! Best wishes! Yours, Jim 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, I’ve been on an exchange visit to Guangzhou Kapok School for two weeks. This week is Chinese Traditional Culture Week, and we have learned a lot about traditional Chinese skills. The first is Cormorant Fishing. Cormorants are big black birds with good swimming skills and are good at fishing. They cooperate with fishermen to help them catch fish. Another traditional Chinese skill is about dough toys, which is made of dough. The dough can be made into different characters, such as Monkey King. The last one is Paper Cuttings. People use scissors to cut paper into the shape of animals, flowers and so on. Then they stick them on walls and windows during festivals. These traditional skills are very attractive. If you are interested, you can watch our livestream program Hello China. It will introduce traditional Chinese culture, festivals, and traditional skills. The time is next Saturday evening from 8pm to 9pm. Looking forward to your participation. Hope you also have a chance to visit China! Write back to me soon, please! Best wishes! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏需要自行补充的内容，适当添加细节，使文章充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍“中国传统文化周”中了解到的中国传统技能； 第二步，邀请他一起观看直播节目来了解中国文化。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②be made of由……制成（能看出原材料） ③attractive吸引人的 [高分句型] ①Another traditional Chinese skill is about dough toys, which is made of dough.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②If you are interested, you can watch our livestream program Hello China.（if引导的条件状语从句） 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新课程精品系列资料，名师精选！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新课程精品系列资料，名师精选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit3 Traditional skills 单元话题（传统工艺）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．在今天的英语课上，你的老师请你们以三人为一个小组，分别介绍一种中国的传统技艺，请你写一篇英文短文，汇报你们小组分享的内容。 组员 Yihan Haoye You 传统技艺 Paper cuttings Dough toys （请你补充） 特点 1. 使用简单的工具； 2. 可剪成动物、植物、汉字图案； 3. 是春节和婚礼的装饰。 1. 可以做成不同的人物角色； 2. 可使用不同颜色的面粉； 3. 可爱有趣 （请你补充） 注意： （1）作文需包括以上所有要点，语言正确，连贯性好； （2）词数不少于80词； （3）不得透露任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 In today’s English class, we had a discussion on traditional Chinese skills. Here is what we have shared in our group. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．有一批外国交换生要来中国进行参观学习，他们对我国的传统工艺品非常感兴趣并打算买一些回国送给朋友。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章，向他们介绍我国的传统手工艺品（bandicrafts）并且提出你对传统技艺的看法！ 面人Dough toy ● 颜色丰富 ● 不同尺寸 ● 通常是出名的人物或动物 剪纸Paper cutting ● 通常使用剪刀把纸剪成动物、花卉和汉字的形状 ● （请你补充至少1点） （1）词数80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数） （2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 China is a big country with all kinds of unique handicrafts. I would like to introduce two of them. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．剪纸(Paper cutting) 是中国传统的技艺之一。关于剪纸这门艺术，你了解多少呢？ 请根据下面的中文提示写一篇英语作文。80词左右，可适当发挥。 提示： 1）剪纸取材简单，受到人们的喜爱； 2）剪纸有各种形状(in the shape of)，如人物、动物、花和吉祥的汉字(Chinese characters)等； 3）剪纸通常被贴在窗户、门或者墙上； 4）剪纸经常出现在节日或婚礼(wedding)上，因为人们认为它能带来幸福和好运。 5) 你的观点。 As we all know, paper cutting is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．有一批外国交换生要来中国进行参观学习，他们对我国的传统技艺非常感兴趣并打算学习。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文向他们介绍4种中国传统技艺。 面人dough toy ●    颜色丰富 ●    通常是出名的人物或动物 水墨画Chinese ink-wash painting ●    通常为黑、白、灰色 ●    常画自然风景、动植物、人物等 糖画sugar painting ●    通常是黄色的 ●    既漂亮又好吃 剪纸paper cutting ? （请你补充至少2点） 注意： （1）词数80~100词左右； （2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．糖画（sugar painting）是中国的传统技艺。假如你是李明，得知你的好朋友Jack对糖画很感兴趣，请根据提示，用英文给Jack写一封80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）的电子邮件，向他介绍糖画。要点包括： 起源：明代（Ming Dynasty） 制作：由糖制成，可以食用，也是艺术品 发展：最初，被制成动植物形状；后来被制成各种图案 你的观点：（请你补充） Dear Jack, Knowing that you are interested in sugar painting, I’m writing to introduce it to you. It is one of the most popular Chinese traditional skills. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．剪纸是中国传统的技艺之一。关于剪纸这门艺术，你了解多少呢？请根据下面的中文提示写一篇英语作文，80词左右，可适当发挥。 提示： 1．剪纸取材简单，受到人们的喜爱； 2．剪纸有各种形状，如人物、动物、花和吉祥的汉字等； 3．剪纸通常被贴在窗户、门或者墙上； 4．剪纸经常出现在节日或婚礼上，因为人们认为它能带来幸福和好运。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．保护和传承中国传统是每个中华儿女的责任，现在得到了越来越多人的重视和关注。最近你校准备举行“你最喜爱的传统技艺”为主题的英语演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的传统技艺，并号召大家来保护传统技艺。 注意： 1. 词数：80 词左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数）。 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My favourite traditional Chinese skill What 介绍一种传统技艺（至少2点） Why 1. 是中国文化的重要部分 2.（请你补充1﹣2点） How （请你补充1﹣2点） As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese skills is our obligation. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s work together to protect this tradition skill and keep it alive. 8．假设你是李华，即将参加一项交换生活动并住在John家里，为表示友好和宣传中国文化，你提前寄送了三份具有中国传统特色的手工品作为礼物。请根据提示内容写一封E-mail，给John及其家人介绍一下这些礼物及其特色。 注意： 1. 字数：80词以上（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 2. 要对所写内容进行适当的拓展。 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear John and your family, I am very excited to be staying with you as an exchange student. To show you my thanks and share some Chinese culture with you, I have sent you three traditional Chinese handicrafts as gifts. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like these beautiful pieces of art. I am looking forward to meeting you soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 9．假设你是学校剪纸社的成员，你的爷爷是你们家乡的民间剪纸老艺人。请根据下面的内容提示，用英语向社员们介绍你爷爷。 【内容提示】 1.爷爷70多岁，但很健康，喜欢剪纸； 2.能剪出各种形状。多次举办展览，作品很受欢迎，人们认为很美，能带来好运； 3.你的评价。 要求： 1.词数80个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息，否则不予评分。 My grandpa is a paper cutting artist. My grandpa is a paper cutting artist. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你的学校要举办以“Traditional Skills Around Us”为主题的活动，目前正在征集相关稿件，请你根据以下表格中的提示内容，以“A Person with a Traditional Skill”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿，写出你眼中一位身怀传统技艺的人物。 Name Li Qiyi (65 years old) Appearance average height and a little thin, short hair and wearing glasses Specialty (特长) good at paper-cutting; learned paper-cutting when he was 4 years old; skillful (熟练的), cut paper into different kinds of shapes; … Your opinion (观点) … 要求： 1.可参考表格提示内容，亦可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） A Person with a Traditional Skill Li Qiyi is a 65-year-old man.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．    如果你是李华，你的外国笔友 Mike 想了解中国的传统艺术形式，请你根据表格提示，给他写一封 e-mail，给他介绍至少两种中国传统文化，并且欢迎 Mike 来中国体验传统艺术。 中国传统艺术 材料 寓意或用途 剪刀、红纸 喜庆吉祥 …… ?   ?   注意： 1. 词数 80 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，逻辑合理； 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 Dear Mike, There are many different kinds of traditional arts in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 12．假设你是李明，你的外国网友Eric在网上看到几幅中国剪纸，他对此很感兴趣，并且给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请你给他回复邮件，至少从历史、材料、制作方法及文化意义等方面向他介绍中国剪纸艺术。 要求： 1. 涵盖所有要点，并做适当补充。 2. 不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, You wanted to know about Chinese paper cutting. Here I’m glad to tell you something about it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 13．竹编是中国一种传统技艺，但是随着时代的变迁，越来越少的人学习以及从事竹编工作，你的邻居李先生是一位竹编艺人，请根据下列提示，向同学们介绍李先生，描述传统艺人李先生以及他的工作。 要点： 传统艺人 李先生 工作 竹编 外貌 身材矮，微胖，脸圆，手非常粗糙 工作详情 需要竹子和刀；可以编织不同的东西：竹凉席，竹筐，竹筛等等 你对李先生和竹编的看法 …… 提示词： bamboo weaving竹编；bamboo mat竹凉席；bamboo basket竹筐；bamboo sieve竹筛 要求： 1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内。 2. 必须包含以上全部要点，可以适当发挥。 3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Hello, everybody. Today I want to talk about my neighbour, Mr. Li. He is a person with a traditional skill._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．同学们好，《中学生英语报》正在征集发扬中国传统文化的文章，请大家以Chinese Traditional Skill为题，向报社投稿。词数：80左右。 要求： 1. 围绕主题，进行叙述； 2. 鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分； 3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名； 4. 字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．假如你是来自英国的交换生Jim，你已在广州木棉中学习两周。本周正在举办“中国传统文化周”。请根据下面的信息，给你在英国的朋友Tom写一封电子邮件，介绍一些有特色的中国传统技能，并邀请他一起观看直播节目Hello, China。 传统技能 1.鸬鹚捕鱼； 2.面人玩具； 3.……(自行补充1个中国传统技能并对其进行介绍) 节目预告 时间：下周六晚上20:00—21:00 内容：中国传统文化、节日以及传统技能等 观看方式：网络直播 注意： 1.词数不少于80词（文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）； 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 参考词汇：鸬鹚捕鱼 cormorant fishing     面人玩具 dough toys    网络直播 livestream Dear Tom, I’ve been on an exchange visit to Guangzhou Kapok School for two weeks. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you also have a chance to visit China! Write back to me soon, please! Best wishes! Yours, Jim 12 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 11 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$