Unit3 Trees and us 单元话题（人与植物）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（沪教版2024）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，名师精选！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，名师精选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit3 Trees and us 单元话题（人与植物）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．随着社会的发展进步，环境保护越来越引起重视。我们认识到了树木在保护环境中的重要作用，知道树木可以美化环境，净化空气。树木对我们很重要。请根据以下提示，以“Why are trees important?” 为题写一篇英语短文，不少于70词。 提示：be home to, keep the air… provide, make the environment more… Why are trees important? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Why are trees important? Trees are important to us. They help us in many ways. First, they keep the air cool and clean. They take in harmful gases and produce oxygen. They are major fighters against air pollution. Second, trees are home to different animals, insects, birds and plants. Third, trees provide many things for us, such as paper, fruit, oil and tea. Fourth, trees can make the environment more beautiful. In many cities, people plant trees on both sides of the roads or streets to make the city more beautiful. Fifth, trees can stop soil from running away with rain. Trees are important and useful in our daily lives. We must protect them well. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明树很重要，引出下文树的作用； 第二步，详细说明树的作用，包括吸收有害气体和为人们提供许多东西等； 第三步，呼吁大家保护树木。 [亮点词汇] ①take in harmful gases吸收有害气体 ②are home to是……的家园 ③provide many things for us为我们提供许多东西 ④such as例如 ⑤stop soil from running away防止土壤流失 [高分句型] ① In many cities, people plant trees on both sides of the roads or streets to make the city more beautiful. (to do不定式作目的状语) 2．同学们，大家都知道植物对我们人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要，假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题，从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。 要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.词数：60左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 The Importance of Plants ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Importance of Plants As we all know, plants are very important to humans, animals and the environment. First, plants mean a lot to humans. We can get food, medicine and clothing from them. Second, they are also important to animals. They give animals somewhere to live and food to eat. Third, plants are good for environment. Trees and other plants help clean the air. And they can also stop the wind and water from carrying the soil away. In a word, plants are important to us. Without plants, the natural world would be very different! Let’s protect them and try our best to plant more trees and other plants. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应确保包含所有要点，同时使文章逻辑连贯、结构清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入主题，简要说明植物对人类、动物和环境的重要性； 第二步，从三个方面详细阐述植物的重要性； 第三步，呼吁大家爱护植物，并简要说明保护植物的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①stop...from doing...阻止……做…… ②carry away带走 ③in a word总而言之 ④try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事 [高分句型] They give animals somewhere to live and food to eat. (动词不定式作后置定语) 3．众所周知，树木对人类的生产和生活起着至关重要的作用，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,以“The importance of trees”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明树木对人类的重要性。 注意： (1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (3) 语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。 The importance of trees _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The importance of trees Trees play a crucial role in our lives and are essential for the health of our planet. First, they are vital for environmental protection. Trees absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen, which is necessary for life. They also help to reduce air pollution by trapping dust and other pollutants. Second, trees have numerous other uses. They provide us with wood, which is used for building homes, making furniture, and creating paper. Third, trees are a source of food and shelter for many animals, keeping the balance of our ecosystem. Let’s protect trees and make our earth more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总领全文，点明树的重要性； 第二步，说明树重要的原因，从功能、用途方面解释； 第三步，总结，呼吁大家保护树木。 [亮点词汇] ①play a crucial role in在……中起着至关重要的作用 ②absorb carbon dioxide吸收二氧化碳 ③release oxygen释放氧气 ④help to reduce air pollution帮助减少空气污染 ⑤provide us with给我们提供…… [高分句型] ①They provide us with wood, which is used for building homes, making furniture, and creating paper. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②Let’s protect trees and make our earth more beautiful. (祈使句) 4．树木对人类的生命具有相当重要的价值。树木给人类带来的不仅仅是食物、木材、住房和工作，而更重要的是它们对人类赖以生存的环境有着重大的生态效益。如果人类毁坏树木，那就是毁坏人类自己的家园。请你以“Trees are important”为题目，按照以下提示， 写一篇英语短文，谈谈保护树木的必要性。 提示：1.说明树木对人类生存的重要性； 2.谈谈树木日渐减少的现状及原因； 3.保护树木我们应该采取哪些措施。 Trees are important Trees are our friends and they are helpful to us. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope everyone can protect trees. In fact, protecting trees means protecting ourselves. 【答案】例文： Trees are important Trees are our friends and they are helpful to us. Trees provide us with a lot of useful things, such as fruits, wood, and even jobs. And they are very helpful to protect our living environment. People and animals depend on trees a lot. However, trees are getting fewer and fewer these days. People cut down a great number of trees for money and they don’t plant trees. What’s worse, some forests are losing because of wildfires. What a pity. Therefore, it is time to do something to protect trees. Firstly, we should call on people not to cut down so many trees and some laws should be carried out to stop people from cutting down trees. Secondly, we can hold some activities to plant trees on some special days, such as the Tree Planting Day. Thirdly, we should not drop any drink bottles or cigarettes in the wild, which may cause hill fires. I hope everyone can protect trees. In fact, protecting trees means protecting ourselves. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，所需要点已经给出，要围绕“树木”来展开； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并要适当发挥补充，注意使用正确的词汇和句型，注意行文连贯和逻辑。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，以“树木是人类的朋友并且很有帮助”来引出下文； 第二步，说明树木的重要性以及树木的现状和导致的原因，注意文章的连贯性，可用however，therefore之类的词语； 第三步，表述保护树木的措施，可用firstly，secondly，thirdly这样的词语使得文章更连贯，并注意总结文章，强调要保护树木。 [亮点词汇] ①provide sb with sth给某人提供某物 ②depend on依赖 ③a great number of大量的 ④stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It is time to do something to protect trees. （it is time to do sth表示“是时候做某事了”） ②Laws should be carried out to stop people from cutting down trees.（带有情态动词的被动语态） 5．树木带来许多便利，它对人们都有哪些作用呢？我们又该如何保护树木呢？请根据下列提示，写一篇不少于80词的文章。 Trees are so important that we can’t live without trees. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As we know, trees are so important that we can’t live without them. First of all, trees are good for our health. They produce oxygen for us to breathe and take in harmful gases. We can’t live without them. Secondly, we can use trees to make all kinds of furniture, such as desks, chairs and so on. Besides, some trees also provide us with fruit and other food. Even the paper we write on is also made from trees. As trees are so important, we must do our best to protect them. We must plant as many trees as possible. More importantly, we should stop cutting down trees. Last but not the least, we had better use both sides of a piece of paper. If we don’t want to live in a world without trees, we should start out small to protect them! 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时” 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中树的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍树”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“分布、环境、藏书等”几个方面重点介绍树的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“我们要从小处着手保护树”的号召。 [亮点词汇] ①as we know众所周知 ②be good for对……有好处 ③all kinds of各种各样的 [高分句型] ①As we know, trees are so important that we can’t live without them.（so…that引导结果状语从句） ②If we don’t want to live in a world without trees, we should start out small to protect them!（if引导的条件状语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．2022年以来，各地积极推进中小学劳动实践教育课程常态化，将种植树木、清扫卫生、整理家务等纳入中小学课程体系。为美化校园，提升学生的劳动实践能力，3月12日这天学校组织七年级学生正在校园内的空地上植树。请以“Tree Planting Day”根据内容提示信息，写一篇英语短文描述此次植树活动并呼吁同学们保护树木。 要点提示： 1.简单介绍树木的作用； 2.描述同学们植树过程中的2—3个画面(挖坑、挑水、栽树……)； 3.呼吁同学们保护树木。 要求：要点齐全、语言流畅、语句通顺。 Tree Planting Day ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Tree Planting Day We organized the environmental team to plant trees in our school playground on 12th, March-Tree Planting Day. As we all know, trees are important to us. We cannot live without trees since they provide us with wood. Additionally, many of the things in our daily lives come from trees such as paper and pencils. A lot of furniture is made of wood as well. Trees also help fight against pollution. They take in harmful gases and produce oxygen. As a result, they keep the air cool and clean. On The Tree Planting Day, we planted trees together. First of all, our teams carried the seedlings and saplings to an empty land. Then, we dug some holes and put the seeds in them. After that, we tied strings to fasten the saplings. Finally, we watered them as carefully as we can. It’s hard to imagine a world without trees. So let’s call on everyone around us to protect them! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容描述此次植树活动并呼吁同学们保护树木，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，并介绍树木的作用； 第二步，描述同学们植树过程中的2—3个画面； 第三步，呼吁同学们保护树木。 [亮点词汇] ①provide sb. with sth.为某人提供某物 ②as well也 ③take in吸收 ④as a result结果 [高分句型] ①We cannot live without trees since they provide us with wood. (since引导的原因状语从句) ②So let’s call on everyone around us to protect them! (祈使句) 7．假设你是“绿色家园”环保组织的成员李明，现在正在向初中学生介绍植物的重要性并倡导学生们保护它们。请根据下列要点写一篇关于植物的重要性 (The Importance of Plants) 的作文，可适当发挥。 提示： 1. What plants can you see in our daily life? 2. What do plants need to grow well? 3. Why are plants important? (至少三点) 提示词：environment环境 要求： 1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2. 不得出现真实人名、地名、校名. 3. 词数不少于70，开头已经给出，不计入总词数，书写规范整洁。 The Importance of Plants _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Importance of Plants My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants. Plants are very common in our daily life. There are many trees and flowers around us. Plants need sunlight and rain to grow well. They are very important to us. First, plants can provide us with fruit, medicine, wood and so on. Second, plants provide oxygen for human beings and beautify the environment. Finally, plants can also provide homes and enough food for animals and people. So we should protect the environment, and we should plant trees every year. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我想讲一些关于植物的事情”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——日常生活中看到的植物、植物生长所需的条件、植物重要性的原因等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“所以我们应该保护环境，每年都应该植树。”的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①provide sb. with sth.提供某人某物 ②and so on等等 ③be important to sb.对某人很重要 [高分句型] ①There are many trees and flowers around us. (there be句型） ②So we should protect the environment, and we should plant trees every year. (并列连词的使用) 8．每年的三月十二日是我国的植树节，很多人都在这天去参加植树活动。请你根据下面图示，写一篇英语短文来说明植树过程，并呼吁大家多植树来保护环境。 参考词汇: National Tree-Planting Day, dig ahole, step on the earth 要求： 1. 短文需包含所有图片内容； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数70左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 National Tree-Planting Day falls on March 12th in our country. Many people plant trees on that day. But how do we plant trees? Firstly, we should dig a hole big enough. Secondly, put the tree into the hole, and then put the earth back into the hole, and step on the earth to make it hard. Finally, we water the tree so that it can grow well. Trees are our friends and they help to improve the environment. We should plant more trees. Let’s pull together to make our environment better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“图片提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，简要介绍植树节； 第二步，具体阐述怎样植树； 第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家多多植树保护环境。 [亮点词汇] ①falls on发生 ②put...into...把……放入…… ③pull together齐心协力 [高分句型] ①Finally, we water the tree so that it can grow well. (so that引导目的状语从句) ②Let’s pull together to make our environment better and better. (祈使句) 9．假如你是李玉，春天来了，你想种植一些你最喜欢的植物。请你以“My Favourite Plant”为题用英语写一篇短文，向你的同学介绍一下这种植物。内容包括： 1．喜欢这种植物的原因（颜色、气味……）； 2．这种植物的特性或对我们的好处（可以作为装饰、药材……）； 3．你的看法。 注意： 1．词数为70左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4．标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：blossom (v. 开花)，lively (adj. 生机勃勃的) My Favourite Plant I’m Li Yu. Spring is coming. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favourite Plant I’m Li Yu. Spring is coming. I want to grow some flowers. Of all the plants, I like the roses best because they are beautiful and smell sweet. When they blossom, they can make our room colourful, and the house looks very lively. The roses stand for love. Our family is full of love and joy, too. It is also a kind of medicine. My mother likes collecting the petals and making tea with them. All of my family love roses. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：为“一般现在时”； ③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给出的开头，直入主题，表示自己想种花； 第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的花是玫瑰，并说明原因；介绍玫瑰的好处； 第三步，表达自己及家人对玫瑰的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ① stand for 代表，象征 ② be full of 充满 ③ all of 所有…… [高分句型] ① Of all the plants, I like the roses best because they are beautiful and smell sweet. (because引导原因状语从句) ② When they blossom, they can make our room colourful, and the house looks very lively. (when引导时间状语从句) 10．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。 某英文网站正在开展以“植物的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种植物，并说说你为什么喜欢它。 提示词语：tall, breathe, beautiful, food, joy 提示问题： · What is your favourite plant? Please describe (描述) it. · Why do you like it? The power of plants Plants are very important to us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The power of plants Plants are very important to us. People can breathe fresh air from plants. My favorite plants are trees. There are all kinds of trees. Some trees are tall and some are short. Some trees have beautiful flowers and bring joy to us. Some trees don’t have flowers, but they can provide fresh air for us. The trees are useful to us. Not only can they make food for animals and birds, but also they can protect the soil. Thanks to the plants around us, we can live on earth. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中自己喜欢的植物的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种植物，并说说你为什么喜欢它。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“植物的重要性、自己喜欢的植物、原因等”几个方面重点介绍自己喜欢的植物的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“多亏了我们周围的植物，我们才能生活在地球上。”感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的 ②provide sth for sb给某人提供某事 ③be useful to对……有用 ④thanks to幸亏，由于 [高分句型] ①There are all kinds of trees. (“there be”句型) ②Not only can they make food for animals and birds, but also they can protect the soil. (倒装句) 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Eric听说植物在中国传统文化中具有特殊意义，请你给他写一封信。介绍一种具有文化意义的植物——竹子。请根据导图和如下提示，完成这封信。 注意： 1.书信必须包括所有以下要点，并适当发挥。 2 .文中不得出现真实的人名和校名： 3.词数60左右：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, I'm glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Eric, I’m glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning. We always see bamboo as the symbol of persistence. Bamboo grows in the south of China. It can grow very tall. In spring, baby bamboo comes out of the earth, and we call it sun. We can cook dishes with it. It is very delicious. In summer and autumn, it grows taller and taller with green leaves. However, it isn’t like other trees. It’s hollow inside its body. People will cut bamboo down to make furniture when it is tall enough. People also like to draw bamboo to show its spirit and use bamboo to represent modesty and honesty. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点通过导图已给出，考生应根据写作要点，给艾瑞克写一封书信，给他介绍一种具有文化意义的植物——竹子。   [写作步骤]   第一步，承接给出的句子，介绍竹子的意义；   第二步，具体阐述竹子的生长环境、竹子的特点和用途； 第三步，介绍竹子的象征精神。   [亮点词汇]   ①introduce...to把……介绍给…… ②see...as把……视为 ③in the south of在……南部   [高分句型]   People will cut bamboo down to make furniture when it is tall enough. (when引导的时间状语从句) 12．植物对人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家爱护花草树木。 要求： (1)参考提示内容，可适当发挥； (2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； (3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； (4)词数不少于70。 The Importance of Plants We all know plants are very important for us humans, animals and the environment. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them. 【答案】参考范文 The Importance of Plants We all know plants are very important for us humans, animals and the environment. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you. First of all, for people, plants can meet our basic needs. We can get a lot of food from plants. Some plants can be made into medicine and clothing. They are also important for animals. Many animals live in the forest and they live on plants. Finally, trees and other plants help clean the air, so we can breathe the fresh air every day. They can also cover the soil to stop the wind and water from carrying the soil away. In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从人类的角度，谈论植物的重要性； 第二步，从动物的角度，谈论植物的重要性； 第三步，从环境的角度，谈论植物的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①be important for对……重要 ②stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事 ③try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事 [高分句型] ①We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them.（and连接两个并列成分） 13．地球是人类共同的家园，我们只有—个地球。“低碳、环保” 已成为当今时代主题。目前，我校准备开展以“Save our Earth” 为主题的英语征文活动。现请你根据以下的提示，写—篇短文投稿。 主题 Save our Earth 重要性 地球是我们唯—的家园。 建议 1. 善待动物，动物是我们的朋友。 2. 多种树木，树木在很多方面帮助我们。 3. 节约用电，离开课室时要关灯。 4. ……(补充至少1条建议) 注意：词数70个左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Save Our Earth The Earth is a beautiful place, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Save Our Earth The Earth is a beautiful place, it is our only home but it is in great danger now. So we must do something to save it. First, we should be good with animals because they are humans’ friends. Planting trees more is also important. Trees help us in many ways. What’s more, we must save electricity. For example, we need to remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms. Of course, saving water and walking or riding instead of driving are necessary as well. In a word, we everyone should take action to do what we can to save our earth. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“补充至少1条建议”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明地球是重要的且处于危险的，我们应该拯救它； 第二步，具体阐述拯救地球的建议； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受，升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ① is in great danger 处在极大的危险中 ② be good with 和……好好相处 ③ What’s more 而且 ④ instead of 代替 [高分句型] ① we should be good with animals because they are humans’ friends. (because引导原因状语从句) ② we everyone should take action to do what we can to save our earth. (what引导宾语从句) 14．阳春三月好风光，正逢植树好时节。今年你植树了吗？我们为什么要植树？如果地球上没有树木，会发生什么事情？请以“The Importance of Trees” 为题，用英语写一篇小短文，介绍树木森林对于人类生活的重要性以及如何保护树木。 提示：1. Are trees important for us? 2. How do trees help us? 3. How to protect trees? 要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息； 4. 词数：不少于40词。 The Importance of Trees __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Trees are very important to us. They help us in many ways. First, trees can provide us with many things, such as fruit, medicine and wood. What’s more, trees can produce oxygen for people to breathe, and keep air cool and clean. We can make our environment better by protecting trees. And trees are home to thousands of animals and birds and provide them with enough food. We can’t imagine a world without trees. But people cut down millions of trees every year. We must stop doing this if we don’t want a world without trees. We should try to protect and plant more trees for our better future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山阐明树木对我们来说是重要的； 第二步，具体阐述树木的作用； 第三步，阐述我们应该如何保护树木。 [亮点词汇] ①in many ways在许多方面 ②provide sb. with sth.提供给某人某物 ③What’s more而且 ④thousands of数以千计的 [高分句型] ①trees can produce oxygen for people to breathe. (动词不定式作后置定语) ②We must stop doing this if we don’t want a world without trees. (if引导的条件状语从句) 15．为了帮助学生们亲近大自然，认识和了解植物，某中学决定成立植物俱乐部。假如你是该俱乐部的负责人，请你根据下面的提示信息及写作要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这个植物俱乐部。 The plant club 时间 每周六上午八点半 活动 ◆参加关于植物的课堂 ◆去野外观察植物 ◆…… 益处 ●学到更多关于植物的知识 ●结交有相同爱好的朋友 写作要求： 1.文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Do you love plants? Do you want to learn more about plants? Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Do you love plants? Do you want to learn more about plants? Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you. We meet at 8:30 a. m. every Saturday morning. There are lots of different activities in the club. You can have classes about plants. You can go to the wild to watch different plants. You can even grow some plants yourself! In the club, you can learn more about plants and make new friends with the same hobby. You can also get close to nature and have a good time. Come and join us! Let’s share the joy of learning about plants together. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍植物俱乐部的时间和各项活动； 第二步，介绍参加植物俱乐部的益处； 第三步，对加入俱乐部表示欢迎。 [亮点词汇] ①get close to接近，靠近 ②have a good time玩得开心 ③the joy of ……的快乐 [高分句型] There are lots of different activities in the club. （there be句型） 22 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 23 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，名师精选！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，名师精选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit3 Trees and us 单元话题（人与植物）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．随着社会的发展进步，环境保护越来越引起重视。我们认识到了树木在保护环境中的重要作用，知道树木可以美化环境，净化空气。树木对我们很重要。请根据以下提示，以“Why are trees important?” 为题写一篇英语短文，不少于70词。 提示：be home to, keep the air… provide, make the environment more… Why are trees important? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．同学们，大家都知道植物对我们人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要，假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题，从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。 要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.词数：60左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 The Importance of Plants ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．众所周知，树木对人类的生产和生活起着至关重要的作用，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,以“The importance of trees”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明树木对人类的重要性。 注意： (1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (3) 语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。 The importance of trees _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．树木对人类的生命具有相当重要的价值。树木给人类带来的不仅仅是食物、木材、住房和工作，而更重要的是它们对人类赖以生存的环境有着重大的生态效益。如果人类毁坏树木，那就是毁坏人类自己的家园。请你以“Trees are important”为题目，按照以下提示， 写一篇英语短文，谈谈保护树木的必要性。 提示：1.说明树木对人类生存的重要性； 2.谈谈树木日渐减少的现状及原因； 3.保护树木我们应该采取哪些措施。 Trees are important Trees are our friends and they are helpful to us. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope everyone can protect trees. In fact, protecting trees means protecting ourselves. 5．树木带来许多便利，它对人们都有哪些作用呢？我们又该如何保护树木呢？请根据下列提示，写一篇不少于80词的文章。 Trees are so important that we can’t live without trees. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．2022年以来，各地积极推进中小学劳动实践教育课程常态化，将种植树木、清扫卫生、整理家务等纳入中小学课程体系。为美化校园，提升学生的劳动实践能力，3月12日这天学校组织七年级学生正在校园内的空地上植树。请以“Tree Planting Day”根据内容提示信息，写一篇英语短文描述此次植树活动并呼吁同学们保护树木。 要点提示： 1.简单介绍树木的作用； 2.描述同学们植树过程中的2—3个画面(挖坑、挑水、栽树……)； 3.呼吁同学们保护树木。 要求：要点齐全、语言流畅、语句通顺。 Tree Planting Day ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是“绿色家园”环保组织的成员李明，现在正在向初中学生介绍植物的重要性并倡导学生们保护它们。请根据下列要点写一篇关于植物的重要性 (The Importance of Plants) 的作文，可适当发挥。 提示： 1. What plants can you see in our daily life? 2. What do plants need to grow well? 3. Why are plants important? (至少三点) 提示词：environment环境 要求： 1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2. 不得出现真实人名、地名、校名. 3. 词数不少于70，开头已经给出，不计入总词数，书写规范整洁。 The Importance of Plants _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．每年的三月十二日是我国的植树节，很多人都在这天去参加植树活动。请你根据下面图示，写一篇英语短文来说明植树过程，并呼吁大家多植树来保护环境。 参考词汇: National Tree-Planting Day, dig ahole, step on the earth 要求： 1. 短文需包含所有图片内容； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数70左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你是李玉，春天来了，你想种植一些你最喜欢的植物。请你以“My Favourite Plant”为题用英语写一篇短文，向你的同学介绍一下这种植物。内容包括： 1．喜欢这种植物的原因（颜色、气味……）； 2．这种植物的特性或对我们的好处（可以作为装饰、药材……）； 3．你的看法。 注意： 1．词数为70左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4．标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：blossom (v. 开花)，lively (adj. 生机勃勃的) My Favourite Plant I’m Li Yu. Spring is coming. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。 某英文网站正在开展以“植物的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种植物，并说说你为什么喜欢它。 提示词语：tall, breathe, beautiful, food, joy 提示问题： · What is your favourite plant? Please describe (描述) it. · Why do you like it? The power of plants Plants are very important to us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Eric听说植物在中国传统文化中具有特殊意义，请你给他写一封信。介绍一种具有文化意义的植物——竹子。请根据导图和如下提示，完成这封信。 注意： 1.书信必须包括所有以下要点，并适当发挥。 2 .文中不得出现真实的人名和校名： 3.词数60左右：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, I'm glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 12．植物对人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家爱护花草树木。 要求： (1)参考提示内容，可适当发挥； (2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； (3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； (4)词数不少于70。 The Importance of Plants We all know plants are very important for us humans, animals and the environment. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them. 13．地球是人类共同的家园，我们只有—个地球。“低碳、环保” 已成为当今时代主题。目前，我校准备开展以“Save our Earth” 为主题的英语征文活动。现请你根据以下的提示，写—篇短文投稿。 主题 Save our Earth 重要性 地球是我们唯—的家园。 建议 1. 善待动物，动物是我们的朋友。 2. 多种树木，树木在很多方面帮助我们。 3. 节约用电，离开课室时要关灯。 4. ……(补充至少1条建议) 注意：词数70个左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Save Our Earth The Earth is a beautiful place, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．阳春三月好风光，正逢植树好时节。今年你植树了吗？我们为什么要植树？如果地球上没有树木，会发生什么事情？请以“The Importance of Trees” 为题，用英语写一篇小短文，介绍树木森林对于人类生活的重要性以及如何保护树木。 提示：1. Are trees important for us? 2. How do trees help us? 3. How to protect trees? 要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息； 4. 词数：不少于40词。 The Importance of Trees __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．为了帮助学生们亲近大自然，认识和了解植物，某中学决定成立植物俱乐部。假如你是该俱乐部的负责人，请你根据下面的提示信息及写作要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这个植物俱乐部。 The plant club 时间 每周六上午八点半 活动 ◆参加关于植物的课堂 ◆去野外观察植物 ◆…… 益处 ●学到更多关于植物的知识 ●结交有相同爱好的朋友 写作要求： 1.文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Do you love plants? Do you want to learn more about plants? Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$