UNIT 1 Section 5 Writing&单元考点 美文全记(教用Word)-【赢在微点·轻松课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第二册（人教版2019）

Section 5　Writing an opinion essay about the scientific spirit 题型解读 谋篇思路 介绍科学家属于记叙文,应具体介绍科学家的人物事迹、突出成绩或贡献,并且还要有敬佩他的原因,从中了解了什么科学精神。 首段:总体介绍人物生平成就 主体段落:主要经历和成就,体现的科学精神 尾段:简要总结或发表感想 必背短语 　 1. graduate from从……毕业 2. speak highly of高度评价 3. major in主修 4. receive a doctor􀆳s degree获得博士学位 5. go abroad for further study出国深造 6. have a gift for有……天赋 7. be honored as被誉为…… 8. devote one􀆳s life to 致力于…… 9. set a good example to/for为……树立一个好的榜样 10. a great scientist一位伟大的科学家 11. with great determination and perseverance有极大的决心和毅力 12. make great contributions to为……做出巨大贡献 13. encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 14. make a breakthrough取得一项突破 满分佳句 　 ■ 夺人眼球开头句 1. The person I admire most is Yuan Longping, an outstanding agricultural scientist. 我最敬佩的人是杰出的农业科学家袁隆平。 2. Yuan Longping successfully developed the hybrid rice which dramatically increased rice production. 袁隆平成功研制出杂交水稻,大大地提高了水稻的产量。 ■ 亮点出彩篇中句 1. Qian Xuesen is an outstanding scientist in our country. 钱学森是我国杰出的科学家。 2. He studied in the United States in his early years. 他早年留学美国。 3. When he worked in America, the Americans gave him a good deal. 他在美国工作时,美国人给他优厚的待遇。 4. Qian Xuesen was determined to return home, but the Americans tried to stop him. 钱学森一心想回国,但是美国人却极力阻止他。 5. After five long years, under the care of Premier Zhou Enlai,on September 17,1955, Qian Xuesen finally embarked on the voyage home. 经过五年的漫长岁月,在周恩来总理的关怀下,1955年9月17日,钱学森终于踏上了归国的路。 6. He was not only patriotic, but also made great contributions to the motherland. 他不仅爱国,还为祖国做出了巨大的贡献。 7. Finally,the first missile exploded and the first rocket flew into the sky. 终于,第一颗导弹成功爆炸,第一枚火箭成功飞天。 8. He became successful because he dreamed of what others were afraid to dream about. 他的成功在于他梦想着别人不敢想的事。 9. On the way to becoming a great scientist, he never lost heart when faced with tough challenges. 在成为伟大的科学家的路上,他面对艰难的挑战时从不灰心丧气。 10. There is no doubt that his contribution is of great significance. 毫无疑问他的贡献是有重大意义的。 ■ 韵味无穷结尾句 1. He is an example for us teenagers to follow forever. 他是我们青少年永远学习的榜样。 2. His story motivates me to love science, and I would like to make contributions to science. 他的故事激励我爱科学,我想为科学做出贡献。 写作规范 　　假如你是李华,你校英语报正在举办“大国科技推动者”主题征文比赛,请你写一篇英语短文,介绍你最敬佩的科学家钱学森。 内容包括: 1. 人物简介; 2. 令人敬佩的原因。 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 第一步:认真审题　谋篇布局 体裁 人称 时态 要点结构图 首段 简要介绍钱学森 记叙文 第三人称 一般过去时 主体段落 陈述他的成就和令人敬佩的原因 尾段 简要总结,发表感想 第二步:核心词汇　想周全 1. 优厚的待遇　　　 generous treatment  2. 优越的条件 superior conditions  3. 在……关怀下 under the care of  4. 值得 worthy of  5. 航天之父 the father of aerospace  第三步:由词及句　雏形现 1. 钱学森是我国杰出的科学家,他早年留学美国。 Qian Xuesen is an outstanding scientist in our country. He studied in the United Statesin his early years.   2. 钱学森享受着优厚的待遇,有富裕的生活和优越的工作条件。 Qian Xuesen enjoyed generous treatment, a rich life and superior working conditions.  3. 钱学森一心想回国,但是美国人却极力阻止他。 Qian Xuesen was determined to return home, but the Americans tried to stop him.  4. 他一刻也没有忘记自己的祖国。 He didn􀆳t forget his country for a moment.  5. 经过五年的漫长岁月,在周恩来总理的关怀下,钱学森终于踏上了归国的路。 After five long years, under the care of Premier Zhou Enlai, Qian Xuesen finally embarked on the voyage home.  6. 他不仅爱国,还为祖国做出了巨大的贡献。 He was not only patriotic, but also made great contributions to the motherland.  7. 在他的组织领导下,我国创建了自己的火箭和导弹航天事业。 Under the leadership of his organization, our country established its own rocket and missile space business. 8. 在成为伟大的科学家的路上,他面对艰难的挑战时从不灰心丧气。 On the way to becoming a great scientist, he never lost heart when he was faced with tough challenges.  9. 毫无疑问他的贡献是有重大意义的。 There is no doubt that his contribution is of great significance.  10. 他是我们青少年永远学习的榜样。 He is an example for us teenagers to follow forever.  第四步:句式升级　造亮点 用状语从句的省略改写句8 On the way to becoming a great scientist, he never lost heart when faced with tough challenges.  第五步:合理过渡　完美卷面 答案　 　　The scientist I respect most is Qian Xuesen, an outstanding scientist in our country, who studied in the United States in his early years. When he was in the United States, Qian Xuesen enjoyed generous treatment, a rich life and superior working conditions. But he didn􀆳t forget his country for a moment. After five long years, under the care of Premier Zhou Enlai, Qian Xuesen finally embarked on the voyage home. Under the leadership of his organization, our country established its own rocket and missile space business. On the way to becoming a great scientist, he never lost heart when faced with tough challenges. There is no doubt that his contribution is of great significance. He is an example for us teenagers to follow forever. 单元考点 美文全记 根据汉语提示用本单元词汇的正确形式填空。 There were many great scientists in and out of home. They all ①made great contributions (做出了巨大的贡献) in their researching field, such as the British doctor John Snow. Through Snow􀆳s ②tireless efforts (不懈的努力), the threat of cholera, which can cause severe diarrhoea and dehydration, saw a ③substantial decrease (大幅度减少). And Stephen Hawking was another famous and ④gifted (有天赋的) scientist in England. Although he ⑤came down (患上) with a disease, he did not stop his study. He came up with the big bang theory which was soon proven. Apart from them, Chinese scientist Qian Xuesen was also honored by people. After ⑥overcoming (克服) many difficulties in the US, Qian returned to China. Under his ⑦leadership (领导), China developed the Dongfeng missiles. In 1970, China successfully ⑧launched (发射) its first man⁃made satellite. Because of his contributions in space, he ⑨was considered as (被认为是) “the father of China􀆳s ⑩aerospace (航空航天业)”.  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$