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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Callie was a high school student. Living in a quiet and warm community with her parents, Callie was keen (热衷的) on various volunteer activities in the community, and almost no one in the community didn’t know her. On a sunny afternoon, her favourite neighbour, Mrs. Baker, visited her. “I need your help, Callie,” Mrs. Baker said. “Do you know the empty lot (空地) down the street?” Callie nodded, smiling. The place is a mess, covered with rubbish. “The city is letting us use the lot for a community garden,” she explained. “We need help to clean up the lot on Saturday.” “Sure, Mrs. Baker! ” Callie said cheerfully. “I will be happy to help you!” Mrs. Baker looked pleased and said, “Thanks, Callie. We want to get the garden planted before summer. By then, adults and children in our community will have a good place to go.” At school the next morning, Callie’s best friend Tamara was waiting for her in their classroom. Tamara said excitedly, “My mum bought tickets to go to Fun World this Saturday. She has an extra one for you!” The girls had been waiting for months for the new amusement park to open. Callie sighed and worried about her problem for the rest of the day. Her mother noticed her mood when she arrived home. “Did something go wrong at school?” her mother asked. Callie explained her problem. “What should I do, Mum?” Callie asked. “I know you want to go with Tamara and also help Mrs. Baker. Think carefully about your choices, and you need to make your own decision. But I know you will do what is best,” her mother answered. 注意： 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ On Saturday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意​ Callie 是一名热衷于社区志愿活动的高中生，深受社区居民喜爱。一天，她最喜欢的邻居 Mrs. Baker 找她帮忙清理一块空地，以便将其改造成社区花园，周六就要行动。而第二天在学校，好友 Tamara 邀请 Callie 周六一起去新开的游乐园 Fun World，这是她们期待已久的。Callie 为此感到纠结，回家向妈妈寻求建议，妈妈让她自己思考并做出决定。​ 故事山分析​ . 开端：Callie 积极参与社区志愿活动，Mrs. Baker 找她帮忙清理空地用于社区花园项目。​ . 发展：Tamara 邀请 Callie 周六去 Fun World 游乐园，Callie 陷入两难。​ . 高潮：Callie 思考如何做出选择，最终确定自己的决定。​ . 结局：Callie 按照自己的决定行动，完成志愿工作或去游乐园，收获相应的感受和成长。​ 伏笔以及在续写中的回应​ . Callie 热衷社区志愿活动：续写中可回应她最终坚持选择参与志愿活动，体现她对社区活动的热爱和责任感。​ . Mrs. Baker 提到花园对社区的意义：续写可描述 Callie 在志愿活动中看到大家对花园的期待，更坚定自己的选择，突出花园对社区的重要性。​ . Callie 和 Tamara 期待游乐园已久：若 Callie 选择去游乐园，可在续写中描述她内心对错过志愿活动的一丝遗憾，以及在游乐园中偶尔会想起社区花园的事。​ . 妈妈让 Callie 自己做决定：续写可体现 Callie 思考过程中对妈妈话语的感悟，最终做出符合自己价值观的决定。​ . 空地脏乱差的现状：在志愿活动的续写部分，可描述清理过程的艰难，以及 Callie 如何克服困难，让空地逐渐改变。​ 续写要点​ . 第一段：详细描述 Callie 思考的过程，她内心的挣扎，权衡去游乐园和参加志愿活动的利弊，最终做出决定，并说明原因。​ . 第二段：若 Callie 选择参加志愿活动，描述她在空地上与 Mrs. Baker 及其他人一起清理的场景，遇到的困难及解决办法，看到空地逐渐变干净的感受；若选择去游乐园，描述她在游乐园的经历，以及对错过志愿活动的想法。​ 情感线​ . 起初 Callie 面临选择时充满纠结和焦虑，在思考过程中，她不断权衡利弊，内心挣扎。​ . 做出决定后，无论选择哪一个，她都带着坚定的信念。选择志愿活动，会因帮助他人而感到满足；选择游乐园，会因和朋友一起享受欢乐而开心，同时可能夹杂着对社区活动的牵挂。​ 故事线​ . Callie 思考决定：Callie 内心纠结，权衡志愿活动和游乐园，回忆 Mrs. Baker 的请求和花园的意义，想到和 Tamara 的期待，最终做出选择。​ . 志愿活动过程：Callie 到达空地，与 Mrs. Baker 会合，和其他人一起清理垃圾，遇到工具不足等困难，大家齐心协力解决，空地逐渐变干净。​ . 游乐园经历：Callie 和 Tamara 前往游乐园，玩各种游乐设施，玩的过程中 Callie 偶尔想起社区花园，结束后和 Tamara 交流感受。​ . Callie 的感受：参加志愿活动，Callie 因帮助社区而有成就感；去游乐园，Callie 享受欢乐但有一丝对社区的牵挂。​ . 他人反应：在志愿活动中，Mrs. Baker 和其他人对 Callie 的帮助表示感谢和赞扬；在游乐园，Tamara 因 Callie 的陪伴而开心。​ . 后续影响：志愿活动后，社区花园顺利推进，Callie 和社区居民关系更紧密；去游乐园后，Callie 和 Tamara 的友谊加深，同时 Callie 可能后续会更积极参与社区活动弥补遗憾。​ 主旨升华句​ . Sometimes, choosing to help others over personal desires can bring a greater sense of fulfillment and happiness. 有时候，选择帮助他人而非个人欲望能带来更大的满足感和幸福感。​ . True friendship understands and supports one's choices, even when those choices lead in different directions. 真正的友谊理解并支持一个人的选择，即使这些选择走向不同的方向。​ . Community spirit lies in everyone's willingness to contribute, and every small effort counts in building a better neighborhood. 社区精神在于每个人愿意贡献的精神，每一份微小的努力都对建设更好的社区有意义。​ . Making difficult decisions is a part of growing up, and it teaches us to value different aspects of life. 做出艰难的决定是成长的一部分，它教会我们重视生活的不同方面。​ . The joy of giving and the pleasure of receiving are two sides of the same coin, and both enrich our lives in unique ways. 给予的快乐和收获的愉悦是同一枚硬币的两面，它们都以独特的方式丰富了我们的生活。​ 写作示范​ 第一篇​ Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision. She tossed and turned in bed, her mind a jumble of thoughts. On one hand, the new amusement park was extremely appealing. She had been looking forward to it with Tamara for months. On the other hand, Mrs. Baker needed her help, and the community garden meant a lot to everyone. After much consideration, she realized that the community came first. She thought about how much she loved volunteering and making a difference. Finally, she decided to help Mrs. Baker clean the lot.​ On Saturday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot. She greeted Mrs. Baker with a big smile, despite a bit of regret about missing the amusement park. There were already many neighbors there. Callie immediately got to work, picking up rubbish and pulling out weeds. It was tough work, but seeing the lot gradually become cleaner made her feel proud. Everyone worked together happily. By the end of the day, the once - messy lot was transformed. Mrs. Baker thanked Callie sincerely, and Callie knew she had made the right choice.​ 第二篇​ Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision. She sat at her desk, looking at the calendar, torn between the two options. She thought about how disappointed Tamara would be if she declined the invitation, but also how important her help was for the community garden. After a long internal struggle, she decided that she couldn't let Mrs. Baker and the community down. The community garden project was too significant.​ On Saturday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot. As soon as she arrived, she rolled up her sleeves and started working. The rubbish was smelly and the sun was hot, but Callie didn't give up. She worked side by side with other volunteers, chatting and laughing while cleaning. When they took a break, Callie looked around at the half - cleaned lot and imagined how beautiful the garden would be in the future. She felt a sense of accomplishment that no amusement park could offer. By the end of the day, the lot was almost ready for planting. Callie left with a heart full of joy, knowing she had done something meaningful for her community.​ 【答案】One possible version: Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision. She wanted to go to Fun World, but in the end, she decided that her promise to her neighbour was more important. The next day at school, Callie apologized to Tamara and told her that she would not be able to go to Fun World. Tamara tried to understand, but Callie could tell that she was disappointed. The girls hardly spoke for the rest of the week. They kept silent with great care. On Saturday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot. “Hi, Callie,” her neighbour said, “thank you for helping us today.” “You’re welcome,” Callie said. Callie smiled as she walked across the lot with a large rubbish bag. “Do you need any help?” a voice behind her asked. Callie turned, surprised to see Tamara. “I want to help you. My mum said she would take us to Fun World next weekend.” With joint efforts, they finished the cleaning. Both Callie and Tamara have learnt that once a promise is made, it needs to be kept. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$