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Unit 4
Why don’t you talk to your parents?
Section B 3a-SC
Do you have some after-school classes to take?
What kind of classes do you have?
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English training class
Olympic math class
piano lesson
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dancing lesson
art lesson
singing lesson
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basketball practice
football training
ping-pong practice
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3a. A magazine interviewed some parents about after-school classes for children. Read the opinions below and make notes on your own opinions.
进入好的大学
successful adj. 成功的
success n. 成功
succeed v. 成功
start to do / doing sth. 开始做某事
从小
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Pros (赞成)
Cons (反对)
Debate
Are you for or against after-school classes?
3b. Write a letter to the magazine to express your opinions on after-school classes for children. Use the following expressions to help you.
in one’s opinion = in one’s view 在某人看来
相当于maybe;通常放句首
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写作策略:使用连接词让文章更有逻辑性
首先,表明自己的观点,支持还是不支持。
然后,列举你的原因。
缺少结论!
表达观点
论证观点
结论 - 重申观点
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Sample writing
These days, many parents send their kids to take many after-school classes. In my opinion, it’s necessary to keep a balance between after-school classes and free time!
From my point of view, there’s no need for students to take many after-school classes. If we consider study as meals, school classes are dinners while after-school classes are snacks. So it will be better for students if they can have more free time to develop some hobbies after school, like drawing or reading books. Most importantly, as long as we form good learning habits and listen to teachers carefully in class, we can also do well in study.
In short, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. It’s of great importance for students to grow up in a happier and healthier way.
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Writing task
本单元以“人际交往”为话题,要求能陈述自己的困难和麻烦,并向他人征求意见或描述他人的烦恼并给出合理的解决方法。
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假定你是李华。你的英国朋友 Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫,希望得到你的帮助。请你给他写封回信。
内容包括:
1. 表示理解和安慰;
2. 建议:正确认识自己的不足; 处理好和父母的关系; 处理好与同学、朋友之间的关系;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾己给出,不计人总词数。
Writing task
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Step 1 Examine the topic (审题)
审体裁:
审人称:
审时态:
说明文
第一人称
一般现在时
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Step 2 Make an outline (列纲)
Beginning
引出话题(联系开心;问题伤心;引出建议)
Thanks for your e-mail/letter. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now. Don’t worry. Let me give you some advice.
I am happy to receive (收到) your e-mail/letter and I am sorry to hear about your problem. I hope I can help you. / I am glad to help you. Here is some advice for you.
可以具体描述一下问题:have trouble/problems/difficulties (in) doing sth.
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Main body
Step 2 Make an outline (列纲)
连词(一条一条写):
Firstly, / First of all, / At First, / To begin with,
Secondly, / Next, / Then, / Also, / Besides, / What’s more, / Moreover,
Thirdly, / At last, / Finally, / Last but not least (最后但同样重要的是),
提建议句型:
Maybe sb. should/could…. / sb. can/must …. / 祈使句
It’s a good idea/important/necessary for sb. to… / Doing sth. is…for sb.
sb. had better(最好) do sth. /
Why don’t you do sth.?/Why not do sth.?
扩细节、例子、原因、结果、谚语
提出建议
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Step 2 Make an outline (列纲)
Ending
表示鼓励 (建议有用;你会解决;有问题再找我)
As the saying goes, sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So you are halfway to solving the problem.
I hope my advice can help you. / I hope my advice will be helpful to you. / Hope my advice can work well on your problems. / Hope your problems can be solved. / I hope everything will go well with you soon. / I hope things will be better for you soon.
Please write to me again if you need my help. / If you have other problems, please feel free to tell me at anytime. / If you have other problems, don’t hesitate (犹豫) to tell me at anytime.
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Step 3 Make a draft (起草)
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Step 4 Revise your writing (修改)
修饰:过于简单的句子要试着变化
改错:名词—冠词问题、单复数问题
动词—三单问题、时态问题
单词拼写问题
其他问题
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Step 5 Transcribe your writing (誊抄)
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Dear Mike,
How’s everything going? I can deeply feel your worries, because I used to have the similar experience with you. So I’d like to share some advice with you.
First of all, it’s of great importance to find your disadvantages, which helps you to better adjust yourself. Besides, you are supposed to deal with the relationship between your parents and you. After all, parents are the persons who love you most and always care for you. Last but not least, getting along well with your classmates and friends also contributes to your interpersonal communication. For example, you can invite them to go for a trip.
All in all, I hope my suggestions can be helpful. Just try my advice, and I’m sure you can deal with it properly.
Yours,
LiHua
Sample writing
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Writing task
How to get on well with parents/friends/classmates?
Beginning
It’s important/necessary for us to get on well with our parents/friends/classmates. But how can we do that? Here is some of my advice.
重要-引出建议
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Main body
提出建议
Writing task
How to get on well with parents/friends/classmates?
连词(一条一条写):
Firstly, / First of all, / At First, / To begin with,
Secondly, / Next, / Then, / Also, / Besides, / What’s more, / Moreover,
Thirdly, / At last, / Finally, / Last but not least (最后但同样重要的是),
提建议句型:
Maybe sb. should/could…. / sb. can/must …. / 祈使句
It’s a good idea/important/necessary for sb. to… / Doing sth. is…for sb.
sb. had better(最好) do sth. /
Why don’t you do sth.?/Why not do sth.?
扩细节、例子、原因、结果、谚语
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Ending
总结
Writing task
How to get on well with parents/friends/classmates?
In a word, we should try our best to get on well with our parents because they are the ones who love us most.
All in all, we should try our best to get on well with our friends/classmates because they are very important in our life.
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How to Get on Well with Our Parents?
As teenagers, it’s very important for us to get on well with our parents. But how can we do that? Here is some of my advice.
Firstly, we should communicate with our parents actively. It’s a good idea for us to share something about school, classmates and teachers with them. They will be glad to know our daily life. Secondly, when we are free, we can help them do chores, such as cleaning the room, washing the dishes so that our parents will be happy. At last, spending more time together with our parents is also a good way. We can ask our parents to do things we like. And we can discuss our problems with them when we are in trouble.
Let’s get on well with our parents because they are the ones who love us most.
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Dear Mike,
How is everything going? You asked me how to get along well with other students. Here are some ways that might help you.
Firstly, you should know that any good friendship needs understanding and trust. If you understand others, you will win their trust at the same time. Don’t think too much about what you can get from your friends. You should show your kindness first. Secondly, be ready to help others whenever they are in need. This will make you more welcome. And you will make more friends. When your classmates are in need, you should try your best to help them. Last but not least, you can share your happiness and sadness with them. In this way, they can know more about you. Just believe that your friends will also be ready to help you.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Self Check
1. Fill in the blanks using until, so that or although.
so that
so that
Although
until
Although
so that
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Self Check
2. For each problem, choose the advice you agree with more. Then write your own advice.
You should look for a chance to say sorry to her.
Why don’t you explain to your friends that you can’t go to the party?
Perhaps you could tell your brother to study with you.
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Thank you!
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